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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Romance_addict


Ninad is an understanding father he was able to get that his boy is disturbed about something.But didn't probe much and give him his space.

Sai has started to feel a little with Virat not around. The song chosen is so so apt.It rightly summarizes how she is feeling. She is just not able to understand what is this feeling and then she also feels its not right.So basically she is fighting an internal battle and thus unable to acknowledge her feelings for Virat.

I am really sad now as you had said its a 10 chapter story and we are at chapter 8 already. 😔😒 I am so attached to the story now that I dnt want it to end. 


Romance_addict - I wanted to write the parents as parents, I wanted to write a story where the struggles are internal not from other people. The fathers should set examples for the next generation.  

I love that you got the song placement and Sai’s feelings.


Good news for you - it’s going to be more than 10 🤣🤣


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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: columbia


Total creative liberty baba!,, 😛😛 at time of writing. 

Most of the times I do little bit of research like population of Nagpur, I usually have Nagpur and Chandrapur ka map out while writing, I do lot of research on medical stuff becos getting that wrong is careless. This one I took liberty, I am neither in police nor in the medical field, so have to kind of do research.
But when I saw your message, I asked a colleague whose dad is retired policeman, and she told me, sometimes depending on the nature of the case, police have known to save documents in their personal folders in case something happens to them. But that is also hearsay, not that it is allowed or disallowed. Phew!,, 🤪🤪


so now you realize why I don’t get much time for anything else..when someone commented to make the formatting better, I was like hey ram!! Itne paise main itna hi milega!! 😂😂

Woww! The amount of efforts you take to deliver this story to us is just👏 from the medical details you add, I always thought you might be in that field but am quite surprised to know that you don't belong to that field😲 coz I never felt that 👏although I too don't belong there so can't exactly tell how much you are correct in that one, but your efforts are commendable👏and about the chapter, as usual a nice one👍🏼 good built up for their next meeting...Sai is now feeling ignored by him, missing him😳glad that she is slowly getting there😳 

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Posted: 3 years ago

I really really love Shivam after this update ❤❤❤. I'm pretty sure Shivam is going to be the cupid for our Sairat 😍😍😍. And Virat......🤭🤭🤭🤭 he is already getting irritated when Ai asked Shivam to check Sai out. He doesn't want anyone else to look at his girl even though he himself won't admit he is still in love with her🤣🤣🤣 Will our ACP punch Shivam in the face the same way he did to his brother if Shivam tries to get all chatty with Sai??? I hope it happens...not the punching part. But him making friends with Sai. Just to see our jealous boy's face....🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣


And Sai is playing cat and mouse with Virat!!! 🤣🤣🤣 She herself doesn't want to face Virat but slightly hurt that he gave rose's to all. I just don't know what to do with these two adorable idiots 🤩🤩🤩🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣. 


Annnnddddd....... Ai and Ninand stopping by at Chandrapur seems really suspicious to me. Since Ninand is already much impressed with Sai and Virat said the girl should be of Ninand's choice too......are they going to do what I think they gonna do??????🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 


An awsome update like usual dear author. After knowing about all the efforts you put into your writing, I just wanted to say that you are really admirable 🤩👍🏻. Putting your 100% to give us readers a perfect story. Eagerly waiting for the next update and the most awaited "weekend"...... Fingers crossed 🤞🏻🤞🏻🤞🏻


Happy Writing ❤

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: columbia

I had this part ready, so am posting it, may have another one for tonight, as long as I get comments on this one. The following is part 8A to show continuity into the weekend. I know I may get some major chappals for this part, but please be patient, just as you have all been so far. This is and will always remain a SAIRAT LOVE story and the good news is this will go beyond 10 parts - I hope that’s good news. I am missing @rekha_crn. 

Part 8A


Her father calls out, “Kaun hai? Arre ACP Virat, ya ya ..” she moves aside and lets him in and leaves them alone. Her father has opened his laptop and is showing Virat certain files and documents, she can’t really make out, but all she can see is Virat standing respectfully, having removed his cap and put it on the dining table. Sai shakes her head when she automatically imagines herself wearing the cap and poking her tongue out. She tells herself she is thinking these things because she is going to miss her father. She begins to get her suitcase to the living room when her phone rings, it’s Shilpa who is supposed to drop her at the bus station. She announces, “Shilpa ka hai” and she hits enter, “Hello..kaha hai tu? Pandhra minute mei nikalna hai..oh!!..it’s ok...Nahi nahi...all the best!” She hangs up, two pairs of eyes stare at her from the dining table. 


“Voh nahi aa sakti, Pune hospital ka phone hai uske liye, interview hai lagta hai”. Her father immediately says, “Arrr tu rukk main abhi ready hoke chodh deta hun” she makes a face, “Abba, please, aap Kuch kaam kar rahe ho na, aur aap puri raat soye bhi nahi thik se, bus stand hi toh hai, Mai chali jaungi” Virat pipes in, “constable bahar jeep ke saath hai, voh chodh sakta hai”. Before she can answer, her father says, “very good! Hamara kaam bhi baaki hai, tumhe drop karke vaapas aane ko bol dena.” Her father gets up from the table and comes and hugs her, she bends to touch his feet but he stops her and kisses her on her forehead, muttering, “savkaash” Virat leaves them alone and steps out to instruct the constable. She comes out and he helps her with the suitcase, she waves to her dad and Virat shuts the jeep door when she is seated inside and whispers “See you soon, Just Sai” she rolls her eyes and says “hum ek hi city mei hone vale hai, iska matlab yeh nahi ki we will see each other” and his response is his smirk which just irritates her to no end. 


She is seated on the bus, next to an elderly gentleman, right upfront, she wanted to actually sit in the first seat, but the driver stopped her saying it’s reserved. She looks around and realizes all the window seats were taken, better sit in front then behind. She sits next to the old uncle, calling him uncle twice while settling down so that he knows his place. Someone yells to start the bus, she is hoping the person in front seat is not going to turn up and she can sit there, the driver yells back that he is moving in five minutes. The bus starts to move, and she sighs in relief thinking she can move up, only for her to be able to see shoes running along the bus and Virat jump into the bus, in all his police finery and a satchel under his arm. The driver grins and says “Kya saheb, main darwaza band karne vaala thaa, mujhe lagaa ki aap miss karoge” Virat grins and turns and looks at Sai straight in the eye and says “Miss karne ka sawal hi paida nahi hota”. He starts to sit in front of her, his hand on the back of the seat, so close to her, she looks away and the driver pipes in, “Voh madam vaha baithna chahti thi, Maine kaha reserved hai” Virat looks at her with a serious face and says, “Aap baithna chahte ho, toh baith sakte ho” she tightens her jaw, looks straight at him and says, “No thank you” He has a huge grin and says plonking himself in between the two seater, “Thank you toh Vaise mujhe kehna chahiye” she glares at him through the seat gap and looks away. No way is she going to open her varan bhaat and share it with him. The uncle next to her also grins exposing his silver teeth, she shudders and curses her life.


It’s more than an hour later, she has been reading her book in the back seat, glancing at him through the front seat gaps once in a while, he has not turned at all to look at her. He is looking at his documents and keeps messaging and checking his phone. In some time, she herself nods off, the bus goes over a bump and the uncle next to her lands his face halfway down her shoulder and chest, she yelps and wakes up. She automatically stands up, looks around. It seems like the bus has made a pit stop, she realizes in her half sleep half disgusted state that Virat isn’t on his seat, she clutches her bag and her book and moves into his seat, leaning to the window. This is where he finds her, when he enters the bus, on his seat near the window fast asleep. He climbs into the bus and the old man in the back seat grunts loudly and he cleans his snort with his hand and wipes it down on the seat, Virat gags and immediately sits down next to her. 


With half an hour away from Nagpur, she wakes up to find herself half on his shoulder and his forehead on her head. The bus has made the last pit stop and she immediately shifts, he moves and puts his head on top of the seat, she gets up gingerly and makes her way to the bathrooms at the pit stop. As she washes her face, a lady from the bus is washing her hands, looks at her in the reflection and giggles, “Kitna handsome hai tujha navra” she is shocked, her hands shake under the water. She returns to the bus, he is awake and almost has a sigh of relief seeing her, and a small smile. He immediately moves his legs to make way for her, she instead walks and sits next to the uncle in her original seat. He shakes his head and exhales exasperated and sits back in his chair. They reach Nagpur within the next half hour, in fact she is surprised when he gets down the bus along with her in front of the medical camp. He waits at one end, while she fetches her suitcase and this bus drives away to the next stop before the final destination of Nagpur station. 


She rolls her suitcase on the road leading to inside the camp hq and registration, and he seems to be following her. She is irritated to no end, she suddenly turns and says “Aap kya kar rahe ho?” He looks at her in seriousness, “Chal raha hun” she rolls her eyes, “Mera matlab hai yahaa kyu mere peeche” he looks at her and before he can say anything, a young man with a doctor’s coat comes rushing to him, “ACP Virat Sir, hum aapko kal expect kar rahe the, Senior doctor ne phone karke bola tha ki police inspection hogi har hafte, kya yeh gang crime ka problem bahut serious hai kya?” Virat glances at Sai who is now visibly embarrassed at her outburst, and then looks at the young man and says, “Hi Dr.Aniket, haan mujhe kal aana thaa, but mujhe Bandhara se aate der ho gayi, aur phir aaj savere Chandrapur jaana thaa, so here I am. Hum baaki baatei andar jaake karei?” Dr. Aniket nods and then looks at her, “I am sorry Dr. Sai Joshi?” She smiles and nods, Aniket grins, “Aap ko bhi expect kar rahe the, welcome. Registration uss taraf hai, Mai just Sir ko milke aapko join karta hun, vahan ek madam hogi, head nurse, Ms. Abigail, voh sab Kuch samjha degi,” Sai nods and the three of them make their way into the heart of the camp. Sai, sheepishly walks way ahead of the men and Virat looks at her back while Aniket keeps chattering away.


“Aap pehli madam doctor hai iss camp mei” Abigail says, “baaki dono male doctors, senior doctor Pulkit, phir aapke jaisa Dr Aniket, Main head nurse aur do nurses hai jo shifts pe rehti hai, aapko mere saath room share karna padega, voh kya hai, sirf vohi room attached bath ke saath aata hai. Do bed hai aur ek sofa, kaafi comfortable hai. Single room chahiye toh bathroom Dr Aniket ke saath share karna padega, bolo kya mangtai?” . Sai without hesitation says, “Aapke saath share kar lungi, ladke ke saath bathroom share karne ke liye ...jitney bhi paise mil rahe hai, kaam hai” the ladies laugh. Just then Virat and Aniket join them, and Abigail announces to Sai, “Vaise aur Kuch chahiye toh, ACP saab ka ghar paas mei hi hai, aur unki family har Wednesday ko camp ke workers ke liye Khana bhejte hai, ACP aapka weekly check in late ho gaya, not good ACP!” Virat grins and says, “Sister Abigail, aap bataya punishment, Mai haste haste seh lunga” and there is that wink, which has Abigail completely overjoyed and Sai slightly uneasy. Abigail replies, “punishment yeh hai ki aap Dr. Sai Joshi ko mera kamra dikha dijiye, Dr. Aniket aap chaliye mere saath, voh rotavirus ka patient ka blood count dodgy hai” 


Sai’s uneasiness travels like a heat wave that can’t be missed, it quietens Virat who looks at her and walks ahead of her, she follows dragging her suitcase on its rollers, it’s a short walk to a 3 storey building which has a huge covered hall on the ground floors and storage rooms on the second floor. The third floor has four doors, Virat carries her suitcase which she doesn’t argue about and he points to the other three doors stating, “common bath, male dorm, nurses dorm” and pulls out the keys and opens the door closest to the stairs, “Yeh hai Sister Abigail ka kamra jo share karne vaali ho, voh hai attached bath aur ..baaki details unse puch sakti ho” . She comes forward looking at everything around her, neat and tidy. There is a sofa with some chairs and a small attached kitchenette. There are two tiny rooms which barely have space for a bed and one side table, the godrej cupboard in the rooms forces one to walk sideways in the room. He walks around in the sofa area and opens the curtains allowing the sun to fill up the room, she comes out and smiles at that, while he wants to tell her that she is the only sunshine he wants in his life.


He is about to say something, when she says “Mai aapse Kuch kehna chahti hun” he is taken aback, it’s not her words, it’s her tone and thank god for it, because there in the back of his mind, he knows exactly what is coming and the front where his heart is slowing down fears it too, “Kahiye” she is taken aback at him being respectful, almost like he is ready to put some distance, and funnily without his intention, it gives her strength albeit with some hesitation, to say, “Mai...Mai aapke family ko bahut respect karti hun aur Mai unko galat impression nahi dena chahti” she pauses, hoping he will get it, he is not letting her off so easy, he tilts his body slightly while putting his hands in his pockets and casually states, “Mai samjha nahi, unhe galat impression kyu hoga?” she stares back at him slightly peeved that he is acting like he doesn’t know what he is talking about, “ Aap jaante hai Mai kya kehna chahti hun” Virat shakes his head and says flatly, “Nahi Mai nahi jaanta” they stare at each other, he challenging her, she accepting it and replies flatly back, “I am not interested, Mai aap mei interested nahi hun, so please aap mujhe....” He stares at her, she is unable to complete her sentence, she looks down, and she can’t see the hurt in his eyes, he takes one of his hand out of his pocket, turns and keeps the keys on the small table, opens the door and walks out, shutting the door on her face, she sighs and plonks down on her sofa and finds her hands shaking, she puts them under her thighs over the sofa she is seated on to calm herself down, only to realize her legs are shaking, she bends and takes the varan bhat dabba from her bag and for the first time in her life, her favorite varan bhaat is tasteless.

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 Liked the dialogue miss nahi karunga😳

Ending was excellent. 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part - 8 B



Virat is confused with sai's reaction. I think sai don't want to complicate things between them. But virat should not have said yes to the marriage. He should have taken some time to make his mood better.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Sai was missing virat. But she is not admitting her feelings. 


Looking forward for further updates....

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Posted: 3 years ago

@linkushberey, @MSGayatri and @ninabarbie 

yaar tum log are such smarty pants, Gayatri has tots figured it out only, I think mujhe aage likhne ki zrurat hi nahi hai 🤷🏽‍♀️👩🏽‍💻😛😍. 

But this means I have some great readers and I am dropping hints too soon in the story!! 😱💗 but I love my hints, mujhe lagta hai uske bina mazaa nahi hai, but I should be more smart about them. Will try 😜😛💕💕


Thank you everyone for your comments - you know I read each of them. I love every point you make and especially your frustration and understanding for SAIRAT!! Next update in 15 mins 



Edited by columbia - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Diya_Abhilasha

Sai was missing virat. But she is not admitting her feelings. 


Looking forward for further updates....


Thank you for your comments. I love how you posted as soon as you thought of them. Mazaa aaya reading them. 

Sai is really struggling with her feelings, she is not the person who just acts half heartedly, she has to have conviction, but who knows how things make us change ourselves 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Blackwind

Woww! The amount of efforts you take to deliver this story to us is just👏 from the medical details you add, I always thought you might be in that field but am quite surprised to know that you don't belong to that field😲 coz I never felt that 👏although I too don't belong there so can't exactly tell how much you are correct in that one, but your efforts are commendable👏and about the chapter, as usual a nice one👍🏼 good built up for their next meeting...Sai is now feeling ignored by him, missing him😳glad that she is slowly getting there😳 


You are very sweet to say this. Actually in my previous SS - one reader was in the medical field so one of her comments actually helped me write a nice update.  I like researching- bada mazaa aata hai aur naye situations ko creative banata hai.  But I have taken lot of liberties also, half of the police valla stuff is made up for sure, I try with medical stuff, anyway now iss thread pe doctors ki dharna ho sakta hai 😁😁

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Posted: 3 years ago

You have killer one liners in this story..first the cab driver and now Shivam.. Tu aadmi hai ya pajama.kitna dheela hai tu 🤣🤣 killed it. Feels like Shivam is here to bring these two idiots close and closer ❤️

So yes this is Virat's first time in love so definitely the guy doesn't knows how to deal with it.

Sai is missing Virat and trying to avoid so that it doesn't spills out. 

With Shivam coming into picture and weekend plans I guess we are going to see Virat and Sai finally meeting after 2 months.

The pent up emotions are sure to make some sparks fly. 

Feels like Ninad is cooking something with these sudden Chandarpur plans.

Virat giving Shivam killer looks on his Aai asking to check out Sai 🤣.

You also put so much details in your writing it shows how much background research you do for your stories.Really commendable.We are really truly lucky to getting to read your work.

Much love. ❤️