MG STORY BAWRA MAN THREAD 2 PART 29 PAGE3

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Here's long update please ignore mistakes

PART28

Next day,

As her habit Geet went to visit Mandir, She performed  Pooja. She was about leave saw dadi and Maan, Dadi said

Dadi: Good morning beta

Geet: Good morning Dadi maa

Dadi: Agar hame pata hota to apko Mandir sath le aate 

Geet: Nahi dadi maa aaj office jaldi Jana hai.

Dadi: Jao beta Maan ke saath. Mujhe yaha drop karne ke bad maan office Jane wale the.

Geet: Dadi wo Maine Romeo Ko bola tha mujhe lene. Abhi aata hi hoga.

Maan felt jealous.  He sent one message.

After that Geet received call

Romeo: Geet ji mujhe office ke Kam se bahar Jana pad Raha hai urgently. Aap adjust kar lijiye

Geet: Thik hai Romeo

Maan felt happy inside

Maan : kya hua Geet?

Geet: wo Romeo Ko kuchh Kam aa gaya hai isliye wo nahi aa payega

Dadi: Jao beta Maan ke saath

Geet: Dadi main Chali jaungi

Dadi: Jao beta mere liye

Geet: Ji Dadi

Main driver Ko bhej deta hun dadi maa

Dadi: Haa. 

Maan and Geet left

Maan opened car door for her.

Maan started driving.

Maan: Geet. I am sorry for yesterday. Mujhe tumhare saath aise behave nahi karna tha.

Geet: Sir bhul jaiye jo bhi hua hai. It's just a mistake. I am also responsible.

Maan stopped car

Maan: Mistake mat kaho Geet. I mean it really. I love you. You know it well.

Geet felt pain 

Geet: I know you love me. Par main nahi karti aapse pyar. 

Maan: Janta hun. 

Geet: please stop talking about this. Nahi to main khud hi Chali jaungi office.

Maan: Ok am sorry

Maan started driving. 

Geet: Sir yahi rok dijiye

Maan stopped car. 

Maan: Why Geet?

Geet: Yaha se office pas hai. Main nahi chahti ki office ke log hame ek sath dekhe.

Maan knew it's useless to argue with her. She is stubborn with him

Maan: ok Geet.

Geet: Thank you sir.

Maan: Bhej diya bahar Romeo Ko. Kya fayda hua. Jitna pas jata hun utna dur jaa rahi hai Snow-white

In office,

Maan entered, everyone greet him 

In his cabin, Geet was present there

Geet: Maine files arrange kar diye. 15 minutes bad meeting hai. Clients aate hi honge

Maan: Ok Geet.

In meeting room

Geet: Are Romeo tum wapas kab aate

Romeo: Bas 5 minute pehle.

Geet: Tumhara Kam Ho Gaya?

Looking at Maan 

Romeo: Ji Geet ji

Meeting was about home construction in budget of middle class family.

After meeting Maan gave break 

Geet left with Romeo to canteen

Maan thought, " har waqt meri snow-white se chipka rehta hai. Ye Brij dost nahi Dushman lag Raha hai mujhe, Is Romeo Ko Geet ke saath rehne Ko bol diya." 

Maan left for canteen.

Maan occupied table with back facing to them pretending checking mobile . Geet and Romeo engrossed in their talk that they didn't notice him.

Romeo: Geet ji ek baat puchu

Geet: Sabse pehli baat mujhe ye Geet ji bolna chhod do.  Sirf Geet bolo. We are friends

Maan's grip tightned on mobile. " Mujhse Sidhe baat nahi karti aur Uske sath itna comfortable"

Romeo: Ok Geet.

They smiled

Geet: Ab thik hai 

Romeo: Ek baat puchhu Geet.

Geet: Haa Kahi

Romeo: Tumhe kis tarah ka ghar pasand hai

Maan started listening carefully.

Geet: Small and beautiful. Jyada bada nahi. Bas ghar ke samne aangan ho. Jaha main har subah Rangoli bana saku. Small garden jaha sare mere pasand ke flowers ho. Tulsi Vrindavan jiski har subah Pooja Karu. Kitchen me Natural Roshni aaye. Drawing hall jise main sajaungi. Ek Chhota sa zula hall me. Aur....

Romeo: Aur Geet 

Geet: Kuchh nahi

Romeo: Bolo na we are friends

Geet: Aur ek Kamra bacho ke liye. Pata hai Romeo ye sab bate Maine Rajvir se Kahi thi. Mera ye sapna adhura hi reh Gaya.

Romeo: Phir pura hoga Tumhara Sapna Geet.

Geet: Mujhe meri zindagi se koi umeed nahi. Chalo break khatm ho gaya hai

Romeo: Tum jao. I need to use washroom.

Geet: Ok

Geet get up. She was about to leave. felt dizzy and fell.

Maan saw her while leaving. He ran to her. 

Maan: Geet utho

Maan took her in arms and ran to lift. Went to car and placed her. He took her to hospital.

Doctor checked her 

Maan: Kya hua doctor?

Doctor: Inka haemoglobin kam ho gaya hai. Inhe khane pine ka dhya rakhna hoga.

Maan: Ok doctor.

Main unhe saline Laga di hai. Ap nurse se prescription le lijiyega wo maternity ward hai. Actually dusre ward main bed nahi the. Sorry for inconvenience. 

Maan: It's ok doctor.

Brij Ko call nahi karta wo pareshan ho jayega aa jayega tab Bata Dunga.

Maan sat near her. 

Geet wake up. 

Maan: Haa thik lag Raha hai

Just then they listened noise in ward 

Geet: Kya ho Raha hai nurse. Itna shor.

Nurse: Ek lady hai usne Abhi  tin din pehle baby born hui hai. Uski tabiyat main koi sudhar nahi hai. Dekh kar Aisa lagta hai jaise beti me jaan atki hai uski.

Geet felt sad

Geet: main unse mil Sakti hun. Mera Dil keh Raha hai ki main milu unse

Nurse: Haa

Geet went near her bed. She saw her and shocked. 

Geet: Gauri tum.

Gauri: Geet tum. 

Geet: Kya hua tumhe tumhare husband kaha hai. 

Gauri: Robbery case ka operation tha usme unhe goli lag gayi. Chhod kar chale Gaye mujhe hamesha ke liye

Geet: Sorry

Gauri: Tab main 3 months pregnant thi.

Geet: Tumhare ghar wale kaha hai. 

Gauri: Agustin ke Jane ke bad main akele hi Rehti thi. Uski pension ka sahara hai. Apna koi nahi.

Geet: Main tumhara khayal rakhungi. 

Gauri: Thank you Geet. 

Geet: Main tumhe sham Ko Milne aaungi. Nurse inka khayal rakhna aap mera number rakhiye inhe kisi bhi chij ki jarurat ho to mujhe kahiyega

Maan and Geet left.

Maan: Who is she?

Geet: First year classmate thi. Par Baad me usne college change kar Liya tha. Last year hi mujhe market me Mili thi. Love marriage thi uski Hindu Christian wedding. Na hi Gauri ke aur na hi Augustin ke kisi ne bhi accept nahi Kiya. Delhi Police colony me rehte the. 

Maan felt sad listening her.

Geet: Pyar ka yahi anjam hota hai happy ending nahi Hoti sache pyar ki.

Maan: Hoti hain Geet. Mere mummy Papa Ko dekhlo

Geet: Anwar Papa aur Mohini maa ko dekh lo.

Maan: Geet wo Shahid hue the.

Geet: Mere Janam Lene ke Baad.

Maan: Aisa nahi hai Geet.

Geet: Sir mujhe aapse behas nahi karni aap mujhe ghar chhod do. Aaj sham mujhe Gauri se Milne aana hai.

Maan: Ok Geet.

In outhouse

Rano: Maan Geet tum dono office nahi hai

Maan: Geet Ko weakness ki wajah se chakkar as Gaya.

Geet: Thik hun main

Rani: Kuchh thik nahi hai. Subah kuchh kha kar nahi gayi. Keh Rahi thi office Jane me late nahi hona chahiye. Ek bar Brij as jaye to kuchh ho Sakta hai.

Maan: ye rahe reports aur medicine. Main aaj hi Brij se baat karta hun. Main chalta hun

Rano: Thik hai beta apna Dhyan rakhna.

Geet: Main aram kar leti hun. Mujhe sham Ko hospital Jana hai

Rano: Kyun?

Geet told everything to her

Rano: Thik hai beta. Main khana bana dungi. Tum bhi uske sath kha Lena

Rano to herself " Mohini dekho hamari beti Ko, khud itni dukh se Gujar Rahi hai. Ubhar nahi paa Rahi thi. Gauri ke liye wo bhi bhul gayi. Main to hamesha Bhagwan se yahi mangti hun use sari khushiya mile. Darwaje par khadi hai khushiya par andar aane hi nahi deti. Tum to Bhagwan ke pas ho na kuchh karo na hamari Geet ke liye"

Maan went to office.

He called Romeo

Romeo: Yes sir.

Maan: Tumhe ek jimmedari de Raha hun

Romeo: Ji sir

Maan: Aaj canteen mein Geet Ko chakkar aa Gaya tha

Romeo: Geet thik hai na. 

Maan: Wo thik hain. Par wo apne khane pine ka dhyan nahi rakh Rahi. To dhyan rakhna wo apna khana miss na kare

Romeo: Ok sir. 

Maan: Adi aur Pinki kab Laut rahe hai conference se?

Romeo: Kal aane wale hai.

Maan: ok then Get back to work.

Romeo: Good day sir.

Maan: You too.

Maan then called Brij 

Maan: Brij tum kab Laut rahe ho? Sakshi do din bad laut Rahi hai London se

Brij: Tum ye mujhe Kyun Bata rahe ho.

Maan: Thik hai ye sun lo. Ho sake to jaldi wapas aa jana. Geet khane pine ka dhyan nahi rakh Rahi.

Maan disconnected call

Brij: Ye bhi bohot ajib hai, mera call cut kar diya. Geet to is se bhi jyada jiddi hai. Meri gudiya.

In evening,

At hospital

Geet: Hi Gauri.

Gauri: Hi Geet,

Geet: Kaisa lag Raha hai?

Gauri: Thik hun.

Nurse: Kuchh thik nahi hai.

Geet: Kya hua?

Nurse: Please aap mere saath doctor ke pas chaliye.

On the way

Nurse told Geet

Nurse: Aap Ko kaise batau. Baby to weak hai. Uski halat to phir bhi thik ho jayega. Unko lungs  cancer hai. Aap doctor se baat kar lijiye.

Doctor: Aap Mrs. Gauri D'souza ki friend hai. Nurse ne bataya. Main Aap Ko saaf saaf Bata deta hun unke pas jyada waqt nahi hai. Unhone boht jyada der kar di.  Aap unke gharwalo se contact kariye.Ilaj me boht kharcha ho jayega. Uske bad bhi kuchh keh nahi sakte

Geet went to Gauri 

Gauri was playing with her daughter.

Gauri smiled and asked 

Gauri: Doctor ne kya kaha

Geet: Gauri tum Apne ya Agustin ke gharwalo se baat Kyun nahi karti.

Gauri: Maine koshish ki Geet. Unhone to keh diya ki main unke liye mar chuki hun. Mere sasural wale wo to mujhe Augustin ki maut ki wajah samajhte hai.

Geet felt sad listening

Gauri: Sach sach batao Geet mujhe kya hua hai.

Geet: Kuchh nahi 

Gauri:  batao. Mujhe aise lagne lga hai ki mere pas jyada waqt nahi bacha. Tabiyat mai koi sudhar hi nahi.

Geet: Kya mai ise le lu thodi der ke liye. Kitni pyari hai

Gauri: Haa. Jao beta Masi ke pas

Geet took her in arms.

Gauri: Geet batao na meri beti ki Kasam hai tumhe.

Geet: Kuchh nahi

Gauri: Please bolo na

Geet: Tumhe lungs cancer hai. Tumhe boht der kar di. 

Gauri started crying

Gauri: Meri beti. Iska kya hoga

Geet: Main Maan sir se baat karungi. Wo tumhare liye kuchh na kuchh jarur karenge. Tum aaram karo. Main hun iske saath.

Nurse came gave her injection. She drifted to sleep.

Geet called Maan,  Maan felt surprised he received

Maan: kya hua Geet tum thik to ho. Mai thik hun par Gauri thik nahi hai. Aap Abhi hospital aa jaiye.

Maan left office immediately,

In hospital,

Maan saw Geet with Gauri's baby. 

Maan was about to say something.

Geet signalled him not to talk.

Geet kept her in Cradle 

Geet: Boht mushkil se soyi hain. Nurse ne Abhi injection diya hain Gauri Ko.

Geet told Maan whole thing.

Geet: Kya aap kuchh nahi kar sakte. 

Baby started crying again. Geet took her in arms. Trying to make her silent.

Maan: Main Abhi doctor se baat karta hun.

Geet: Main bhi chalti hun. Ye na bohot badmash hai niche rakho to rone lag jati hai. 

Maan smiled looking at Geet.

Maan : Geet tum bahar hi ruko.

Just then nurse came.

Nurse: Aap apni friend ke pas jaiye unki halat bigadti jaa Rahi hai. Main doctor Ko sath leke aati hun.

Geet went to Gauri. When they were talking Maan and Doctor came.

Gauri: Geet mere pas jyada waqt nahi bacha. Tum batao na meri bachi ka Nam kya rakhe.

Geet: Tum ye kaisi baate kar Rahi ho. Doctor please check kariye.

Gauri: Nahi Geet pehle meri baat puri hone do. Kya Naam rakhe.

Geet felt history is repeating itself.

Geet took her locket from neck. And tied it around baby's neck.

Said "Seher"

Gauri: Wada karo Geet agar mujhe kuchh ho Gaya to iska dhyan tum rakhogi. Ise kabhi bhi mat batana main iski maa hun.

Geet: Kuchh bhi nahi hoga. Doctor aaye hai

Gauri: Wada karo Geet. 

She was unable to breath properly.

Geet: Wada karti hun Mai dhyan rakhungi iska. Doctor please aaiye na check kariye

Doctor told nurse  to shift her to operation theatre.

Doctor said to Maan

Doctor: phir bhi main nahi keh Sakta ki unki jaan bachegi ya nahi

In operation theatre.

Doctor prepared injection. Gauri held his hand.

Gauri: Don't doctor. Main nahi seh paungi ye sab.

Gauri breathed her last.

Doctor came out,

Maan: Kya hua?

Doctor: She is no more.

Maan saw Geet. 

Maan: Tum chaho to gharwalo se contact karta hun. Ek bar baat kar lete hai.

Maan told Romeo to find contact of Gauri's parents

Maan tried to convince he got Harsh reply

Father( Gauri's): Achha hua mar gayi. Waise bhi nak katwa di. 

Brij called Maan

Maan: Main hospital me hun. Tu aa gaya

 told Brij everything.

Brij went to hospital. They performed formalities.

Since no reply from Gauri's home. Brij and Maan decided to perform last rituals

Geet was crying. 

Brij: Rona band karo Geet. Tum filhal ghar jao.

Maan: Haa Geet main driver Ko bol deta hun.

Geet: Main bhi saath aaungi.

Geet told nurse to take care of Seher.

They performed last rituals. 

On way back to home. Nurse called Geet

Nurse: Ye boht ro Rahi hai.

Geet told Maan and Brij to go back to hospital.

They went back to hospital

Geet: Kya hua?

Nurse: Everything is good with her health. Doctor ne check kiya.

Geet: Seher mere pas aao.

She became quite. 

Nurse: Aapke pas aate hi chup ho gayi.

Geet: Main doctor se mil leti hun.

Brij: Hum bhi saath chalte hai.

Doctor: Aap  baby ko ghar le jaa sakte hai. She is fine. Ghar me care kariye iski. Main iske papers ready karwata hun.  Tab tak ye record form aap bhar dijiye.

Doctor gave form to her.

Brij : Do Gudiya main details bhar deta hun.

Geet: Nahi Veer ji.

Geet started filling form.

Geet wrote her name as mother's name. And filled other detail.

Brij: Gudiya ye tum.

Geet: Please Veer ji aap hamesha chahte the na ki mujhe Apne Dil ki sunani chahiye. Ye mere dil ki awaz hai

Maan was looking at her and thought, " Sach me Snow-white you are brave."

Doctor: Father's name madam

Geet: Jaha tak mujhe pata hai maa ka Naam hi Kafi  hai

Doctor: Ji main samajh Gaya. Don't worry Apko birth certificate milega 

Ye sirf aapki beti hai. 

Geet: Thank you.

Trio went from there. Nurse gave her baby. 

Nurse: Ye Aapke pas aate hi hasne lagti hai.

Geet: Iski kahani bhi meri tarah hi hai.

Nurse: Ji kuchh kaha

Geet: Kuchh nahi. Aap check up ka mujhe yaad karate rahiyega. Main pura Dhyan dungi.

Nurse: Thik hai.

Geet Brij Maan left from hospital. 

Maan: Tum ruko main car leke aata hun parking se.

In car, Geet was looking at her continuously. And Maan was stealing glances at her through mirror.

Rano called Brij

Brij: Haa maa hum aa rahe hai.  Papa Hoshiarpur se aa Gaye?

Rano: Ha beta wo aa gaye.

They all reached home.

Rano saw Geet with baby. 

Geet: Maa wo

Rano: Maan ne sab bata diya hame

Mohinder: Geet aaj tumne ye sabit kar diya tum Anwar ki beti ho.

Nidar uski tarah. I am proud of you. Bas hamesha khush Rehna

Seher started crying

Geet: Thodi thodi der me rone lagti hai.

Rano: Main hoon Naa. Milkar Dhyan rakhenge.

Maan: Good night. Boht der ho gayi hai.

Mohinder: Ha beta. Jao aram karo boht Kiya tumne.

Maan: Please uncle aise bolke paraya mat kariye.

Rano smiled.

Rano: Good night beta.

Brij: Good night Maan. Aram karo. Waise bhi kal Sunday hai. 

Maan went

Geet: Aaj pata chala aap Ko Kaisa Laga ho jab Mohini maa ne mujhe aap ko diya hoga. Aap ne mujhe kabhi pata hi nahi chalne diya.kya main ye kar paungi. Aur dadi lautegi to main unko kaise samjhaungi.

Brij: Ye sab tu mat soch.

Mohinder : Haa beta. Tum aram karo. Main Sambhal lunga.

Next day,

In morning, 

Geet took Seher in garden, 

Maan was already there, he knew her habit of spending sometime in garden on Sunday

Maan: Good morning Geet

Geet : Good morning Sir 

Maan: Thodi der ke liye main le lu ise. 

Geet : Ji. Dhyan se

Geet gave Seher to Maan

Maan felt amazed holding her. 

Just then Brij came. 

Brij: Jao Geet ready ho jao.

Geet took Seher from Maan.

Maan: Kahi jaa rahe ho

Brij: Seher ke liye shopping karne. Tum chaloge sath. 

Maan: Haa why not?

Brij: Dekho seher Ko dekh kar lagta hai. Yahi sab hua hoga na Geet ke saath.

Màan: Tabhi to Geet ne ek pal me faisla Liya na.

Brij: Khud ke liye faisla nahi Liya. Maan tum sochte Kyun nahi. Shaadi ke bare me aunty to kab se tumhare shadi ke Sapne dekh Rahi hai. Tum kab tak aise raho ge. 

Maan: Tum kyun nahi karte shaadi?

Brij: Hum dono ki baat alag alag hai. Abhi tak main settle nahi hun. Ab baat alag hai. Mujhe khud ka ghar lena hai.

Maan: Tum hamesha outhouse chodne ki baat Kyun karte ho. Pehle hi Geet se dur hota ja Raha hun. Us Romeo ki wajah se

Brij: Kyun

Maan: Wo bhi Geet Ko like karta hai.

Brij: Par Geet to nahi karti na. 

Maan: Par wo uske sath comfortable hai. 

Brij: Ek baat batao Sakshi kiske sath jyada comfortable thi ?

Maan: Mere saath hi thi aur aaj bhi hai. Tumhara behaviour  hi sadu type hai uske sath.

Brij: Haa main maanta hun. Phir bhi

Maan: Ye main kaise bhul Sakta hun. Pyar to wo tumse karti thi.

Geet: Kaun Veer ji

Brij: Kuchh nahi

Geet:  Maan sir aap bataiye

Maan: Yahi Brij tumse boht pyar karta tha.aaj bhi karta hai. 

Geet: Haa wo to hai

Brij: Seher kaha hai?

Geet: Wo maa ke saath hai . Waise hum jaldi aayenge. Veer ji kal Gauri ka asthi visarjan karna hai.

Brij: Haa Geet main sab arrangements kar lunga. Tum Seher par Dhyan do.

In store,

They reached and Brij got call 

Brij: Tum jao main call receive kar ke ata hun.

Geet started looking clothes for her. She liked one frock for her. It was beautiful. 

Salesperson: Ye boht achi hai. Apki baby kitne months hi hai.

Maan: One week old

Salesperson:You can buy for her.

Geet: kya price hain?

Salesperson: 1200 rs

Geet: Kuchh aur dikhaiye. 

Geet bought simple cloths and other things needed for her.

Brij: Geet tumne shopping khatm kar ki

Geet: Ji maa ne Jo bola wo sab le Liya.

Brij: To phir chale.

Geet: ji

Other side Maan paid for frock and told salesperson to deliver it to KM

Brij: Kya kar rahe ho.

Maan: Chije dekh Raha tha. Tere bache ke liye bhi main aunga. Means tumhare aur Sakshi ke baby ke liye.

Brij: Gudiya yahi hai.

Geet: Veer ji chale.

Brij: Haa chalo. 

They reached Outhouse saw all gathered there.

Dadi Amar Anjali rano Mohinder were busy with baby. 

Amar: Geet beta tum sach me itni badi kab ho gayi pata hi nahi chala. Kept his hand on her head.

Anjali: Maan se to koi umeed nahi hai. Iske sath hi man behla lenge

Maan: Please mom.

Geet felt awkward. She took  Seher in her arms.

Maan: Main chalta hun. I need to do some work.

Brij: Main bhi chalta hun.

They went to KM

Brij: Maan sun kyu nahi lete. Geet ki rah dekhkar koi fayda nahi. Meri Gudiya boht jiddi hai.

Maan: Dil nahi manta. Don't worry Devdas nhi banunga. Pura KC mujhpe dependent hai. KC ke employees ki family mujhpe dependent hai. I know my responsibility.

Brij: Teri khud ki zindagi 

Maan: Meri zindagi to mere samne hain meri Geet.

Brij: Ye rishta expectation bhi rakhta hai. 

Just then servant came with parcel.

Maan: Geet Ko de Dena. Ye mat bolna Maine Liya hai kuchh bhi bahana Bana Dena

Brij: Kya hai?

Maan: Seher ke liye frock hai. Geet Ko boht pasand aaya.

Brij: Filhal ise tu hi rakh. Main jarur Seher ki namkaran ki puja rakhunga us din gift kar Dena. dadi Ko bol dena unki baat wo nahi talti.

Chalta hun

Maan: Hey Brij listen.

Brij: Bolo

Maan: Is bar tum mere side ho tum bhi chahte ho na ki Geet mujhe accept kare.

Brij: Haa Maan. Mujhe to lagta hai maine der kar di tumhe samjhne me. Na hi wo Rajvir Geet ki zindagi me aata. Naa hi gudiya ki zindagi bikhrti. Mere family ke Baad agar Geet kisi ke saath khush reh Sakti hai to wo tum ho aur tumhara Parivar

Maan: Thanks yar.

Brij: No need. 

At night after dinner time

Maan saw Geet with Seher in Garden through window. 

Maan himself" tumhe koshish karni hogi, jab se Seher aayi hai Geet ka baat karne ka tarika thoda Badal Gaya hai 

In garden: 

Maan : Hi Geet

Geet: Hello Sir

Maan: Ab tak jag rahi ho. 

Geet: Kyunki iska sone ka man nahi hai. Kitni koshish kar Rahi hun.

Maan: To Lori Suna  do. Tumhari awaz itni achi hai.

Geet : Thanks for suggestion . Good night sir. 

Geet went inside.

Maan: Kam se Kam mere samne gaa deti.

Maan went back  to KM

Brij saw Geet 

Geet in her room. Brij listened her singing. He recorded her song in Mobile

Brij: Kitni achi Lori gati ho. Seher so gayi tum bhi so jao

Geet: Ji veer ji Good night.

Brij went to his room and sent recording to Maan

In text chat

Maan: Thanks.

Brij: Bas meri behen jid chhod de

Maan: Main puri koshish karunga.

Brij: I am with you.

Maan: Bas wo Romeo ka Kuchh karo.

Brij: Oh jealous

Maan: Haa dar lagta hai.

Brij: Maan Singh Khurana Ko dar lagta hai.

Maan: Haa Lagta hai. Geet Ko khone ka dar

Brij: Don't worry. Sakshi ke Papa Ko bolkar uska transfer kar dete hai.

Maan: Haa tumhare sasur ji tumhe mana nahi karenge

Brij called him

Brij: Tu kuchh jyada nahi soch Raha. Maine bas help ki Jo main sabki karta hun. Sakshi ne apni padhai puri kar li. Usko enjoy karna tha wo bhi kar Liya. Ek bar aa jaye. Phir main free ho jaunga. Sambhal le apni company. Waise bhi KC ka employee hun. Wo to tumne aur Amar uncle ne convince Kiya isliye. Jyada dur ki mat soch.

Maan: ok ok bye then main phone rakh Raha hun

Maan to himself " Dono ke Dono jiddi hai"

Maan opened closet holder earrings in his hands 

Abhi bhi aas hai ye main tumhe Apne hatho se pehnaunga.

Kept back in closet.

Precap: Geet Maan and Seher

Edited by priyal12 - 1 years ago
Posted: 1 years ago

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very emotional update

geet adopt gauri's daughter 

maan is trying his best to convince geet 

brij is on maan's side so maan is having little hope 



thanks for update after this long gap

Posted: 1 years ago

thanks for the pm

Part 28

Beautiful update.... well written

Maan loves Geet so much.....

can understand his jealousy when he sees her with Romeo

Liked his care for Geet

nice that Geet met her friends

sad what happened to Gauri

oh no she dies....

not surprised that Geet decided to take care of Gauri's daughter

glad that everyone supported her decision

Maan is always there for her

finally Brij realises how wrong he was about Maan for Geet

of cos Maan is willing to wait for Geet

will she ever realise her love for him?

great that Brij will now try and help Maan

Maan and Brij share an awesome bond


awesome precap

update soon 


can you update your other stories as well?

the threads of Cute love story, Geet and the OS have been closed due to inactivity

Edited by khwaishfan - 1 years ago
Posted: 1 years ago

Very lovely and emotional update dear

Geet adopted Gauri daughter 

Brij is sported maan to win geet love

Thanks for pm

Watting for update

Posted: 1 years ago

Congratulations for the new thread.. 


Geet is stubborn.. But it's due to her past experience... 


She doesn't want to go through more pain.. 


Maan is trying .. He doesn't want to lose hope. 


Geet adopted seher as her own daughter.. It's definitely a very big n brave thing to do. Especially when she is unmarried. 


Everyone accepted seher wholeheartedly. 

Posted: 1 years ago

Part 28 


Fabulous Update


Maan still just wants Geet around him 

oh and wow seeing him in jealous mode is awesome 

but Geet still restricts herself in talking to Maan

hope that soon she can become comfortable and more friendly

with Maan

I admire Geet for taking Seher 

I'm sure Maan has no objections about Seher been in his life 


precap is Interesting


looking forward to the next update

Posted: 1 years ago

 Geet adoped guri daugter bz no one from her family willing to listen anything about her not even her death melt their anger 

 Maan told brij everything he now with maan side but she behaving stubbornly after rajvir incident don't want to go through again with same pain of rejection   

 Maan too loving sehar and trying to convince geet

Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by khwaishfan


thanks for the pm

Part 28

Beautiful update.... well written

Maan loves Geet so much.....

can understand his jealousy when he sees her with Romeo

Liked his care for Geet

nice that Geet met her friends

sad what happened to Gauri

oh no she dies....

not surprised that Geet decided to take care of Gauri's daughter

glad that everyone supported her decision

Maan is always there for her

finally Brij realises how wrong he was about Maan for Geet

of cos Maan is willing to wait for Geet

will she ever realise her love for him?

great that Brij will now try and help Maan

Maan and Brij share an awesome bond


awesome precap

update soon 


can you update your other stories as well?

the threads of Cute love story, Geet and the OS have been closed due to inactivity

I am trying to continue story but busy with my studies and work I hope I will update soon

Sorry for making all of you to wait longer for update


Geet Hui Sabse Parayi 


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