Yea it was brilliantly written. Itβs a fresh start for both of them. I especially liked the fact that she didnβt have to go back to Chavan niwas.
Yea it was brilliantly written. Itβs a fresh start for both of them. I especially liked the fact that she didnβt have to go back to Chavan niwas.
Echo what Neeraj said above. This is everything I wanted to see on-screen. Chalo koi baat nahi, kyuki tumne yeh eecha puri kare di.
Very well though out and penned. This goes to show that in an hour time they covered many of their issues. Without the crazy house they both are going to do just fine. I wonder if Virat will move to police quarter so Sai can come on the weekends and during vacation time. He does get staff so Sai will not have to worry about the daily chore. Plus the Chavan needs to learns their lesson that their action will have consequences.
beautiful update dear
just loved it
so sai just tore that divorce paper
and the time both spend together i just can see it before my eyes while reading it
well wanna read more of ur updates , but u take ur own time nikki wish u good luck π€
Originally posted by: neeraja91
LOVED it! Sai tore the papers. Yay! Virat bringing her ghar ka khana and eating together. Sai feeding him. β₯οΈ Virat realizing that she deserves to enjoy her college life rather than be a bahu. These golden years will never come back. It was so sweet that he said "agar tum ghumne jao toh jao but mujhe bata kar" . He is so understanding yet protective! And his reaction on hearing that Sai likes to dance and on hearing about aniket is so cute. Your version of this scene is so much better! His concern for usha maushi is so genuine And him saying "Meri Sai" . Haaye!
Kaash show mein uska aisa koi slip of tongue hojaaaye! And finally him telling her "tum mujhe kabhi bhi phone karsakti ho"
You wrote this chapter SO well. Brilliant! Thank you for this treat! Eagerly look forward to reading more!!!
Thank you so muchβ€
Yes.. Virat was determined to manaofy his Sai, and didn't want to take any chances, so he took her favorite homemade food ππ
Sai is selfless, so how could she let him stay hungry while she ate so she fed him πIt was high time he realized that she is just a 18-19 year old girl who deserves a normal student life... And he must let her go out with friends, but as a husband he cannot be careless π
Thank you dear... I tried to not make him too jealous, and use his jealousy to express his emotions somewhat that she should dance on his song if he sings βΊ
Of course, a perfect SIL should be concerned not only for his wife but for her family too... π
I had not written that "meri Sai" slip from him at firstπ³.... It was an afterthought so I added it.
Vaise to wo phone wali baat batane ki jarurat nahi hai, it's her haq.. But humari Sai pagli hai na, use har baat seedhe seedhe batana padta hai isliye Virat ne bata diya uska haq ππ
Thank you so much dear for such lovely comment ππ
Readers like you inspire me to write more
So should I continue this story?
Originally posted by: notaquitter
Yea it was brilliantly written. Itβs a fresh start for both of them. I especially liked the fact that she didnβt have to go back to Chavan niwas.
Thank youπ
No one of us would want her to go back to Chavan niwas π
Echo what Neeraj said above. This is everything I wanted to see on-screen. Chalo koi baat nahi, kyuki tumne yeh eecha puri kare di.
Very well though out and penned. This goes to show that in an hour time they covered many of their issues. Without the crazy house they both are going to do just fine. I wonder if Virat will move to police quarter so Sai can come on the weekends and during vacation time. He does get staff so Sai will not have to worry about the daily chore. Plus the Chavan needs to learns their lesson that their action will have consequences.
Thank you dear π
I am glad you liked my version π€
Yes they are definitely better off without the shallow Chavan family
Well I haven't really thought about how Virat will keep Sai close on weekends and vacation timeβΊοΈ... I am still thinking on the issue
Ohh the Chavans will definitely learn their lessonπ
Originally posted by: linakusharberry
beautiful update dear
just loved it
so sai just tore that divorce paper
and the time both spend together i just can see it before my eyes while reading it
well wanna read more of ur updates , but u take ur own time nikki wish u good luck π€
Thank you so much dear π
I am really happy to know that you loved it βΊ
Thank you π€
Well then I will continue this if I have readers like you... I will try to update as much regularly as I can
Loved it. Glad that they are now on to a fresh start. Please, update soon!
Originally posted by: luvzindagi
Thank you so muchβ€
Yes.. Virat was determined to manaofy his Sai, and didn't want to take any chances, so he took her favorite homemade food ππ
Sai is selfless, so how could she let him stay hungry while she ate so she fed him πIt was high time he realized that she is just a 18-19 year old girl who deserves a normal student life... And he must let her go out with friends, but as a husband he cannot be careless π
Thank you dear... I tried to not make him too jealous, and use his jealousy to express his emotions somewhat that she should dance on his song if he sings βΊ
Of course, a perfect SIL should be concerned not only for his wife but for her family too... π
I had not written that "meri Sai" slip from him at firstπ³.... It was an afterthought so I added it.
Vaise to wo phone wali baat batane ki jarurat nahi hai, it's her haq.. But humari Sai pagli hai na, use har baat seedhe seedhe batana padta hai isliye Virat ne bata diya uska haq ππ
Thank you so much dear for such lovely comment ππ
Readers like you inspire me to write more
So should I continue this story?
100% you need to continue it!!! I loved this ff and i want to read more. Abhi toh sirf issues sort hue hai but i want to read how Sairat grow closer to live each other! β₯οΈβ₯οΈ Please please keep writing!
Okayyy!!! I have missed out on a lot! π
This is such a beautiful story. The hostel thing should happen in the show. Virat needs to understand the importance of his wife. π
Hoping that SaiRat keep on meeting as husband and wife and not as zimedaari shit. π
I would love to read how their relationship develops!β€οΈ
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