SaiRat OS : Khamosh Nazrein *COMPLETED* Updt - Pg 1 - Page 3

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Ambii

            ~~~ A SaiRat OS : Khamosh Nazrein ~~~


Prologue

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Sai was sitting at her stable trying to concentrate. Focus Sai , Focus ! She constantly reminded herself. But her mind was buzzing .


Sai , tumhe sirf Tamasha karna aata hai 

Tum ho ..Kaun !!

Agar batameez insaan ki batameez keh diya toh kya galat keh diya 

Tum ho ..Kaun !!

Tum mujh par apna hukam nhi chala sakti, Sai

Tum ho ..Kaun !! 

Tum mujhe nahi sikhaugi ki mujhe apni Aai se kaise baat karni hai 

Tum ho ..Kaun !!


The waves of these harsh words kept hitting her. The more she thought , the more distressed she felt.Every word of his  had pierced her heart.The only man who always stood by  her , suddenly stood against  her. He shouted at her thrice in the past two days.

Thrice !! 

Why was she so hurt ? The elders of the family always mistreated her but she never felt this kind of stinging pain.She never pondered so much over their nasty comments. Then why was it that only Virat's words were affecting her so much ! Why Why ?? 

She slammed her spiral notebook and rammed her book. A throbbing migraine headache along with some dizziness accompanied her.

She couldn't stand this pain anymore.

With all the agony in her heart and head , she quietly layed down her head on the study table and bemoaned the loss of her once carefree heart. 


Virat entered his room and a series of events flashed before his eyes. The past two nights had been terrible. He was hurt right from the moment something in him, compelled him to shout on Sai. He still couldn't fathom the divergent emotions he felt. 

He regretted losing his calm. He regretted his harsh yells . He regretted going against her . He regretted everything. But he was so muddle- headed then. 

He felt so vulnerable then .

He felt so vulnerable now .

And this regret mirrored in his eyes.

He was on the verge of a breakdown but somehow mustered the courage to gather himself. He led out a long breath and walked into his room . 

To be Continued ..


So guys , we know that a SaiRat patchup scene is approaching . So I thought about writing on it. 

This was a super impromptu one. Well I hope you guys liked it . 

And thanks for your time you lovely people ! 

Love & Peace 

Ambii ❤️


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Posted: 3 years ago

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You portrayed Virat s feelings amazingly 👏

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Posted: 3 years ago

Update soon 👍🏼

I loved the prologue already ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

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You portrayed Virat s feelings amazingly 👏

thank you so much ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: AK_2010

Update soon 👍🏼

I loved the prologue already ❤️

  Thank you dear ❤️ 

The next part is up ! 

Happy Reading 

Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful! ❤️ please write more. 

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Posted: 3 years ago

such a lovely OS here.
LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT! ❤️
YOU PORTRAYED THE EMOTIONS OS WELL. I LOVED EVERYTHING IN IT. ALSO THE VERY TRUE QUOTE
"WITHOUT THE STORM, THERE WOULD BE NO RAINBOW"
wish ki show mein bhi aisa patch up karaye but lessee kaisa kerte sairat patch up.
PLEASE WRITE MORE AND SERVE US.
MUCH LOVE ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: neeraja91

Beautiful! ❤️ please write more. 

Thank you ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Of please don't say completed ... I can read hours and hours for Sairat and this is actually needed to be show tomorrow but we know its gonna be fight again

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: lezcrasile

such a lovely OS here.
LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT! ❤️
YOU PORTRAYED THE EMOTIONS OS WELL. I LOVED EVERYTHING IN IT. ALSO THE VERY TRUE QUOTE
"WITHOUT THE STORM, THERE WOULD BE NO RAINBOW"
wish ki show mein bhi aisa patch up karaye but lessee kaisa kerte sairat patch up.
PLEASE WRITE MORE AND SERVE US.
MUCH LOVE ❤️

Can I just say that my day is made !!❤️

U guys are such beautiful souls. This space radiates so much love .

Thank You so much ! 

Sending you a virtual hug🤗