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Posted: 3 years ago

True. He will not run away. He sees Geet putting in so much effort and a part of him appreciates that.

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Posted: 3 years ago

hi hope that you are well.

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Congrats to the winners 


Part 33

Fascinating  update. Beautifully written

at least they conversed

wow Geet recorded Maan's drunken confession.

why was Maan embarrassed?

glad that she knows that he loves her

adore his teasing.....

why didn't she respond when he said that she did not want to date him?

she is indeed bossy and smartly avoided the question

hope that they address this....

his dilemma is reasonable.

loved how he admires a sleeping Geet

oh no Maan suffering from insomnia

can understand Maan's restlessness

its indeed hard for him but admire his efforts

looks like Geet loves her sleep

great seeing Maan doing some work and keeping busy 

nice seeing how free they are with each other

well she tells Maan to make breakfast for her

so Maan wanted to go out 

will Geet trust Maan to return?


update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Ah. Smart geet. She is one up in maan she recorded him. Maan should be happy that she replied to his confession so why feel embarrassed?  Hmm


He really could have left in the night but why did he not ?  Probably because he realises she is doing so much for him


loved u how she kinda ordered him to make her breakfast.  Yes he could run away but he would have plenty of times if he really wanted to 

hope they start conversing more openly. Right now it’s all subtle and diverting topics without answering really. But love their comebacks 


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Part 34

 

M-Should I go & get something from outside?

 

He asks

 

She sits up

 

G-Yes....No!

 

M-I won’t run away...

 

Geet is thinking what to do

 

G- You don’t know around here. I will come with you

 

M- ok. Get ready

 

Geet jaldi se uthke ready hone lagti hai

 

She couldn’t believe she was able to sleep with a bra on

 

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Dono ek chotti se idli sambar & tea shop mein jaate hain

 

G- Bhaiya, pack kar do

 

M-Kyun? Yahin khaa lete hain...le jaane mein thanda ho jayega

 

Geet thinks he is so hi-fy phir bhi iss chotti si shop mein khaane ko ready ho gaya, wo toh uske comfort ke liye hi bol rahi  thi

 

Dono wahin breakfast kar lete hain

 

She ki Piyush toh kabhi uske standard ke neeche ki jagah pe nahi jaata tha

 

She thought every rich people are like him

 

She gazes at Maan, jo ki bohot hi comfortably uss chotte se stool be baithke aaram se idly sambhar khaa raha hai

 

She cant help but smile

 

Bohot bhook lagi hogi bechaare ko

 

She thinks to herself

 

She pulls herself out of Maan’s thought arguing with herself ki ‘ye toh bass infatuation hai’

 

Chalne nahi wala...practically not possible

 

She knows she is giving mixed signals to Maan

 

She practically confessed to him

 

But wo bhi kya kare, she is confused naa....dil ki sune ki dimaag ki

 

Haan! Maan ki hi galti hai. Mian kabhi Maan ko kuch kabhibolti hi nahi, agar Maan ne aise kaand naa kiye hote

 

She reasons with herself ki situation hi aisi thi

 

M-Kya hua?

 

She comes back to reality with his voice

 

M-Tum kuch khaa kyun nahi raho ho? Main khaa lunga, phir roti mat rehna

 

She shakes her head and continuous to eat

 

She asks after a while

 

G-Tum poori raat thoda sa bhi nahi so paaye?

 

M-Nahi

 

G-Kyun?  Medicine toh di thi

 

Maan looks at up and looks straight ahead at her

 

M- Coz you didn’t pack my boxers

 

Her eyes widen hearing him

 

Her cheeks acquire a color

 

She is stupefied hearing him

 

Maan is enjoying her reaction with a slight smirk

 

Isiliye she feels ki ye banda bharose ke layak nahi hai....jab dekho bakwas karta rahega

 

G-Toh jaao jaake kharid lo!

 

She replies after a while

 

M-How? You didn’t even pack my wallet

 

Geet doesn’t want to continue the discussion anymore toh chup rehti hai

 

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Geet ne kaha ki mujhe kuch groceries karni hai tum ghar jao

 

M-No, it’s ok, I can accompany you

 

Maan ko laga 2-4 cheezein leni hogi.

 

Geet ne toh mauke ka fayda uthake bohot saara samaan le liya

 

Pehle toh Geet bada natak kar rahi thi ki ‘ohh itna saaman ho gaya pata hi nahi chala’

 

She goes & struggles to pick it up

 

M-Acting karna band karo

 

He picks the things & starts walking

 

She smiles shameless,  happily matching his pace

 

Geet jaan bujhke Maan ko nukkad wale grocery store mein le aayi thi, she wanted to see how he would react being in her standard of living

 

She has her own mindset that rich guys are fed in silverspoon, they don’t know struggles of life

 

That’s why she didn’t want to date Maan

 

She knew dono ka standard bohot different hai

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Aww. Is geet testing maan here. Taking him to small stores in inside gully. Hmm. She is surprised to see him eat comfortably in the small idli store. She thought it would be too beneath him to be there.  Reason for suggesting to pack. But then surprised by him 

so loved their comfort talking like maan having no shame in telling her that dgdvgid not pack his boxers. Haha


has it been just one day - or two since he has been with geet.  Feels like Many many more 


how long is geet going to keep him. How long does it take to get out of the drug effect?? 
csn she handle him and herself.  him. Can he handle himself 


thought of something when I was sleeping last night — is no one at work looking for maan. Is he not running an empire? Surprised he is sitting peacefully with her without thinking of work?   Hmm  Geet has his phone right. Or has she taken care of that too 


Edited by Alamelu - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 34

Absolutely Beautiful update !!!! 👏👏👏

Loved♥️❤️💕💗maneet spending beautiful moments together

So maan suprised geet by eating in the little shop whereas geet thought he wouldn’t b/c being rich he would think it is beneath him ........ interesting how she compared him to piyush ....... & of course piyush would never slum down 

So cute how geet gets caught lost staring at maan ....... her internal dialogues are hilarious 🤣. I can picture geet with two mini geet’s on either shoulder talking to her ..... her brain vs her heart 😆

Super funny how she blames her mixed signals to maan his fault 😆😆...... if only maan knew what transpired in her pretty little head 😆

The grocery shopping spree was funny how she took advantage of her muscle maan 😆 carrying everything for her 

But I like how admist the comical relief you show glimpses of geet’s concern over maan not sleeping 

However I am suprised that geet is judging maan due to being rich ...... is it b/c piyush was like that .?...... she should know better than to judge a book by its cover & she should try to get to know the real maan b/c I think there is a really nice guy lurking behind all the facades . 

Now maybe if they could work out their undergarment situations ie boxers , bras etc ....,,, maybe they could all get a good nite sleep 😴 😆

Thank you so much for the update 

🤗

Edited by Creampuff - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

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maan is teasing geet n enjoying her reaction with little smirk.

seein n hearing maan geet think she is right in thinking that maan is not man of bharosa 

geet checking maan's comfort level by taking him to normal shops near by 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Haww Yeh Geet bhi na 😋

Khud confused hai and giving mixed signals to Maan. 

Bandi smart hai testing him if he can adjust in any situation. 

Let's see if Maan passes her expectations 😅

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Posted: 3 years ago

thanks for updating so soon


Part 34

Amazing update..... terrifically written

Geet cleverly handled the situation 

great that she accompanied him

glad that Maan decided to eat at the small shop

of cos Geet was pleasantly surprised with this

well thank God she is not with Piyush

its natural for Geet to compare Maan and Piyush

Geet assumed Maan would find it below his standard

liked that she admires Maan

her turmoil well portrayed.....

why is she giving him mixed signals?

Ha ha she blames Maan.......

loved her concern for Maan

Ha ha loved him teasing her

adore her reaction.........

he knows how to make her speechless

at least she got him to carry the parcels

so she does not want to date Maan cos of the standards

Maan was unperturbed going to the grocery shop or that small shop for food

hope that seeing this Geet will change her mind! 

Maan maybe rich but he seems simple

update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Great part 

Maaneet spending time together but not yet fully

Cont soon