True. He will not run away. He sees Geet putting in so much effort and a part of him appreciates that.
True. He will not run away. He sees Geet putting in so much effort and a part of him appreciates that.
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Part 33
Fascinating update. Beautifully written
at least they conversed
wow Geet recorded Maan's drunken confession.
why was Maan embarrassed?
glad that she knows that he loves her
adore his teasing.....
why didn't she respond when he said that she did not want to date him?
she is indeed bossy and smartly avoided the question
hope that they address this....
his dilemma is reasonable.
loved how he admires a sleeping Geet
oh no Maan suffering from insomnia
can understand Maan's restlessness
its indeed hard for him but admire his efforts
looks like Geet loves her sleep
great seeing Maan doing some work and keeping busy
nice seeing how free they are with each other
well she tells Maan to make breakfast for her
so Maan wanted to go out
will Geet trust Maan to return?
update soon
Ah. Smart geet. She is one up in maan she recorded him. Maan should be happy that she replied to his confession so why feel embarrassed? Hmm
He really could have left in the night but why did he not ? Probably because he realises she is doing so much for him
loved u how she kinda ordered him to make her breakfast. Yes he could run away but he would have plenty of times if he really wanted to
hope they start conversing more openly. Right now it’s all subtle and diverting topics without answering really. But love their comebacks
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Part 34
M-Should I go & get something from outside?
He asks
She sits up
G-Yes....No!
M-I won’t run away...
Geet is thinking what to do
G- You don’t know around here. I will come with you
M- ok. Get ready
Geet jaldi se uthke ready hone lagti hai
She couldn’t believe she was able to sleep with a bra on
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Dono ek chotti se idli sambar & tea shop mein jaate hain
G- Bhaiya, pack kar do
M-Kyun? Yahin khaa lete hain...le jaane mein thanda ho jayega
Geet thinks he is so hi-fy phir bhi iss chotti si shop mein khaane ko ready ho gaya, wo toh uske comfort ke liye hi bol rahi thi
Dono wahin breakfast kar lete hain
She ki Piyush toh kabhi uske standard ke neeche ki jagah pe nahi jaata tha
She thought every rich people are like him
She gazes at Maan, jo ki bohot hi comfortably uss chotte se stool be baithke aaram se idly sambhar khaa raha hai
She cant help but smile
Bohot bhook lagi hogi bechaare ko
She thinks to herself
She pulls herself out of Maan’s thought arguing with herself ki ‘ye toh bass infatuation hai’
Chalne nahi wala...practically not possible
She knows she is giving mixed signals to Maan
She practically confessed to him
But wo bhi kya kare, she is confused naa....dil ki sune ki dimaag ki
Haan! Maan ki hi galti hai. Mian kabhi Maan ko kuch kabhibolti hi nahi, agar Maan ne aise kaand naa kiye hote
She reasons with herself ki situation hi aisi thi
M-Kya hua?
She comes back to reality with his voice
M-Tum kuch khaa kyun nahi raho ho? Main khaa lunga, phir roti mat rehna
She shakes her head and continuous to eat
She asks after a while
G-Tum poori raat thoda sa bhi nahi so paaye?
M-Nahi
G-Kyun? Medicine toh di thi
Maan looks at up and looks straight ahead at her
M- Coz you didn’t pack my boxers
Her eyes widen hearing him
Her cheeks acquire a color
She is stupefied hearing him
Maan is enjoying her reaction with a slight smirk
Isiliye she feels ki ye banda bharose ke layak nahi hai....jab dekho bakwas karta rahega
G-Toh jaao jaake kharid lo!
She replies after a while
M-How? You didn’t even pack my wallet
Geet doesn’t want to continue the discussion anymore toh chup rehti hai
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Geet ne kaha ki mujhe kuch groceries karni hai tum ghar jao
M-No, it’s ok, I can accompany you
Maan ko laga 2-4 cheezein leni hogi.
Geet ne toh mauke ka fayda uthake bohot saara samaan le liya
Pehle toh Geet bada natak kar rahi thi ki ‘ohh itna saaman ho gaya pata hi nahi chala’
She goes & struggles to pick it up
M-Acting karna band karo
He picks the things & starts walking
She smiles shameless, happily matching his pace
Geet jaan bujhke Maan ko nukkad wale grocery store mein le aayi thi, she wanted to see how he would react being in her standard of living
She has her own mindset that rich guys are fed in silverspoon, they don’t know struggles of life
That’s why she didn’t want to date Maan
She knew dono ka standard bohot different hai
Aww. Is geet testing maan here. Taking him to small stores in inside gully. Hmm. She is surprised to see him eat comfortably in the small idli store. She thought it would be too beneath him to be there. Reason for suggesting to pack. But then surprised by him
so loved their comfort talking like maan having no shame in telling her that dgdvgid not pack his boxers. Haha
has it been just one day - or two since he has been with geet. Feels like Many many more
how long is geet going to keep him. How long does it take to get out of the drug effect??
csn she handle him and herself. him. Can he handle himself
thought of something when I was sleeping last night — is no one at work looking for maan. Is he not running an empire? Surprised he is sitting peacefully with her without thinking of work? Hmm Geet has his phone right. Or has she taken care of that too
Chapter 34
Absolutely Beautiful update !!!! 👏👏👏
Loved♥️❤️💕💗maneet spending beautiful moments together
So maan suprised geet by eating in the little shop whereas geet thought he wouldn’t b/c being rich he would think it is beneath him ........ interesting how she compared him to piyush ....... & of course piyush would never slum down
So cute how geet gets caught lost staring at maan ....... her internal dialogues are hilarious 🤣. I can picture geet with two mini geet’s on either shoulder talking to her ..... her brain vs her heart 😆
Super funny how she blames her mixed signals to maan his fault 😆😆...... if only maan knew what transpired in her pretty little head 😆
The grocery shopping spree was funny how she took advantage of her muscle maan 😆 carrying everything for her
But I like how admist the comical relief you show glimpses of geet’s concern over maan not sleeping
However I am suprised that geet is judging maan due to being rich ...... is it b/c piyush was like that .?...... she should know better than to judge a book by its cover & she should try to get to know the real maan b/c I think there is a really nice guy lurking behind all the facades .
Now maybe if they could work out their undergarment situations ie boxers , bras etc ....,,, maybe they could all get a good nite sleep 😴 😆
Thank you so much for the update
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maan is teasing geet n enjoying her reaction with little smirk.
seein n hearing maan geet think she is right in thinking that maan is not man of bharosa
geet checking maan's comfort level by taking him to normal shops near by
Haww Yeh Geet bhi na 😋
Khud confused hai and giving mixed signals to Maan.
Bandi smart hai testing him if he can adjust in any situation.
Let's see if Maan passes her expectations 😅
thanks for updating so soon
Part 34
Amazing update..... terrifically written
Geet cleverly handled the situation
great that she accompanied him
glad that Maan decided to eat at the small shop
of cos Geet was pleasantly surprised with this
well thank God she is not with Piyush
its natural for Geet to compare Maan and Piyush
Geet assumed Maan would find it below his standard
liked that she admires Maan
her turmoil well portrayed.....
why is she giving him mixed signals?
Ha ha she blames Maan.......
loved her concern for Maan
Ha ha loved him teasing her
adore her reaction.........
he knows how to make her speechless
at least she got him to carry the parcels
so she does not want to date Maan cos of the standards
Maan was unperturbed going to the grocery shop or that small shop for food
hope that seeing this Geet will change her mind!
Maan maybe rich but he seems simple
update soon
Great part
Maaneet spending time together but not yet fully
Cont soon
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