Star Commentor Award (Part 34)
Winner: Creampuff ⭐️
Runner-ups: Alamelu, khwaishfan
Special Mention: Ferdouz
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Part 35
Geet jaan bujhke Maan ko nukkad wale grocery store mein le aayi thi, she wanted to see how he would react being in her standard of living
She has her own mindset that rich guys are fed in silverspoon, they don’t know struggles of life
That’s why she didn’t want to date Maan
She knew dono ka standard bohot different hai
Maan ko laga tha ki bole chalo drive pe chalte hain baharlunch kar lenge
Par ab ye bojha utha uthake uski khud ki jaan jaa rahi hai
Geet toh aaram se naachte naachte jaa rahi hai, with a smile on her face like what a lovely day
G- Bank bhi chal hi...
M-Nahi!
G-Par..mujhe
M-Jo bhi kaam hai online kar lena
She nods
Maan ka mann kia bole ki you look good in Indian wear (she was wearing a casual kurti & chudidaar)
But phir chup ho gaya ki, Geet phir ye wo bolegi, usko toh main villain hi lagta hoon
He looks at at
M-Why are you so self-satisfied & smug today? If I can ask
G-You are doing good!
She says, wrapping her arm around his shoulder
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Maan rakhta hai samaan ghar pe
Aur jaake bed pe let jaata hai thak ke
More than 24 hours without sleep
He is pretty tired
Geet saaman rakhne lag gai, aur kitchen se cheekhne lag gai
G-Nahaa lo! Geyser chala dia hai! 5-minute mein nahaalo warna geyser phatt jayega
She wonders ki ye Maan nalayakon ki tarah answer kyun nahi kar raha hai
Geet aati hai room mein
G-Nahaalo…
She stops mid sentence seeing Maan dozed off on the bed
His legs are dangling out of the bed in sitting position, rest of the body is on the bed
Geet paas aake dekhti hai ki sahi mein so raha hai
Ab Geet toh Maan ko theek se leta nahi payegi toh rehne deti hai
She goes and draws the curtains
Kuch der baad sochti hai kya karu kya karu
Apni medical ki book leke baithti hai
Par dhyaan toh baar baar Maan ki aur jaa raha hai
She thinks, kitna innocent lag raha hai sote hue
zara paas se dekh loon
She walks a little closer to him
Oh he has a little stubble
Thoda paas aur aayi
Zara touch karlun?
Pata chalega kya?
Thoda paas aur aayi
Their noses are almost touching
Maan is in a deep slumber
She touches the tip of her fingers to his cheek
Ek side pe soft phir stubbly
She is gazing intently on his soft lips and then the stubbly upper lip & chin...wondering about the contrasting texture...going back to the times they kissed
That time he was without a stubble
How would be the Stubble experience?
Geet is in her thoughts while aimlessly gazing at his stubble & lips
Maan sleepily opens his eyes and finds himself surrounded by a veil of dark sweet-smelling tresses around him
She was in her world so could not react fast enough
Maan turns, moving his arm on her back pinning her to his chest and trapping her there again while going back to his slumber
Ab Geet chillaye to Maan uth jayega...and he will accuse her again
She thinks ki haan abhi thodi der mein nikalne ki koshish karegi, abhi acha sa soft & comfy hai...bass 5 min...kisko pata chalna hai
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