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Part 35

 

Geet jaan bujhke Maan ko nukkad wale grocery store mein le aayi thi, she wanted to see how he would react being in her standard of living

 

She has her own mindset that rich guys are fed in silverspoon, they don’t know struggles of life

 

That’s why she didn’t want to date Maan

 

She knew dono ka standard bohot different hai

 

Maan ko laga tha ki bole chalo drive pe chalte hain baharlunch kar lenge

 

Par ab ye bojha utha uthake uski khud ki jaan jaa rahi hai

 

Geet toh aaram se naachte naachte jaa rahi hai, with a smile on her face like what a lovely day

 

G- Bank bhi chal hi...

 

M-Nahi!

 

G-Par..mujhe

 

M-Jo bhi kaam hai online kar lena

 

She nods

 

Maan ka mann kia bole ki you look good in Indian wear (she was wearing a casual kurti & chudidaar)

 

But phir chup ho gaya ki, Geet phir ye wo bolegi, usko toh main villain hi lagta hoon

 

He looks at at

 

M-Why are you so self-satisfied & smug today? If I can ask

 

G-You are doing good!

 

She says, wrapping her arm around his shoulder

 

+++++

 

Maan rakhta hai samaan ghar pe

 

Aur jaake bed pe let jaata hai thak ke

 

More than 24 hours without sleep

 

He is pretty tired

 

Geet saaman rakhne lag gai, aur kitchen se cheekhne lag gai

 

G-Nahaa lo! Geyser chala dia hai! 5-minute mein nahaalo warna geyser phatt jayega

 

She wonders ki ye Maan nalayakon ki tarah answer kyun nahi kar raha hai

 

Geet aati hai room mein

 

G-Nahaalo…

 

She stops mid sentence seeing Maan dozed off on the bed

 

His legs are dangling out of the bed in sitting position, rest of the body is on the bed

 

Geet paas aake dekhti hai ki sahi mein so raha hai

 

Ab Geet toh Maan ko theek se leta nahi payegi toh rehne deti hai

 

She goes and draws the curtains

 

Kuch der baad sochti hai kya karu kya karu

 

Apni medical ki book leke baithti hai

 

Par dhyaan toh baar baar Maan ki aur jaa raha hai

 

She thinks, kitna innocent lag raha hai sote hue

 

zara paas se dekh loon

 

She walks a little closer to him

 

Oh he has a little stubble

 

Thoda paas aur aayi

 

Zara touch karlun?

 

Pata chalega kya?

 

Thoda paas aur aayi

 

Their noses are almost touching

 

Maan is in a deep slumber

 

She touches the tip of her fingers to his cheek

 

Ek side pe soft phir stubbly

 

She is gazing intently on his soft lips and then the stubbly upper lip & chin...wondering about the contrasting texture...going back to the times they kissed

 

That time he was without a stubble

 

How would be the Stubble experience?

 

Geet is in her thoughts while aimlessly gazing at his stubble & lips

 

Maan sleepily opens his eyes and finds himself surrounded by a veil of dark sweet-smelling tresses around him

 

She was in her world so could not react fast enough

 

Maan turns, moving his arm on her back pinning her to his chest and trapping her there again while going back to his slumber

 

Ab Geet chillaye to Maan uth jayega...and he will accuse her again

 

She thinks ki haan abhi thodi der mein nikalne ki koshish karegi, abhi acha sa soft & comfy hai...bass 5 min...kisko pata chalna hai

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi hope that you are well.

thanks for the pm

Congrats to the winners 


Part 33

Fascinating  update. Beautifully written

at least they conversed

wow Geet recorded Maan's drunken confession.

why was Maan embarrassed? well...coz drunk blabbering is embarrassing

glad that she knows that he loves her

adore his teasing.....

why didn't she respond when he said that she did not want to date him?

she is indeed bossy and smartly avoided the question

hope that they address this....

his dilemma is reasonable.

loved how he admires a sleeping Geet

oh no Maan suffering from insomnia

can understand Maan's restlessness

its indeed hard for him but admire his efforts

looks like Geet loves her sleep

great seeing Maan doing some work and keeping busy 

nice seeing how free they are with each other

well she tells Maan to make breakfast for her

so Maan wanted to go out 

will Geet trust Maan to return?


update soon

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Originally posted by: Alamelu

Aww. Is geet testing maan here. Taking him to small stores in inside gully. Hmm. She is surprised to see him eat comfortably in the small idli store. She thought it would be too beneath him to be there.  Reason for suggesting to pack. But then surprised by him 

so loved their comfort talking like maan having no shame in telling her that dgdvgid not pack his boxers. Haha


has it been just one day - or two since he has been with geet.  Feels like Many many more 


how long is geet going to keep him. How long does it take to get out of the drug effect?? 
csn she handle him and herself.  him. Can he handle himself 


thought of something when I was sleeping last night — is no one at work looking for maan. Is he not running an empire? Surprised he is sitting peacefully with her without thinking of work?   Hmm  Geet has his phone right. Or has she taken care of that too 



Thanks for the wonderful comment & thinking about my story during the night. That makes me feel really special

Coming to your questions: Its been around 3 days, day he came, day of his sleepless night & today


Well Geet is checking him for symptoms & all. She fairly knows whether he is clean or not


Yes, he has a business but due to his party & all he was missing out work & working from home & stuff so office people have become used to his physical absence. Else, he was on his laptop working from Geet's home even. Geet brought his phone when she took him with her, but she has handed over his phone to him since


Hope this clears your doubts

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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 34


He doesn't have any problem in accompanying her and also to eat at the tea shop,here her theories became wrong,and she is thinking,and also don't know what to do with all these,like whom to listen her heart or mind,it's so cutey update...

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Omg geet,she is such a rare one,her antics and monologue 😂,loving it more and more...

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35

geet is testing maan 

maan feel tired with carrying all bags n go to sleep in siting position not responding what geet asking him to do 

geet get trapped in maan's arm when  geet is observing sleeping maan. 

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 Geet is surprise when maan want to eat in small shop bz she thought every rich person like piyush status conscious and she's happy seeing him with her causally  but bechara maan get tired and slept after reaching home geet came close to see if he actually sleeping or pretending but she lost in him and now she get trap in his arms 

 Hope soon realise she loved him 

 Y not his bodyguard searching fr him is he instruct them

Edited by sanum23 - 3 years ago
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Nice update 👍

Maan geet shopping and breakfast outing was nice and geet judging maan hope she realised her love soon waiting to see what happens next how geet free from maan hold 


Update soon

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Geet indeed is chuppi rustom 😋

Maan bechara thak gaya 😅 and dozes off and Geet chance marring 😉

Khud so gaye 🤭

Maan ka reaction should be priceless now 

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Is she trying to get him better or learn that he can stay in an area that is not posh. He clearly is not having any trouble staying with her. OMG Geet u have no sense of distance....Creepy there u tracing his face while he is asleep like LOL These 2 are something else.