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Posted: 3 years ago

Congratulations to all Winners 


of Part 30 


Very Well Done !!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 31 


Fabulous Update 


Love the fact that Maan realizes that its only 

Geet that cares about him 

I have to admit he is very alert and actually can see

and notice Geet each gesture like when she tried 

to counsel him well she had no idea and he knew that

yet he was comfortable telling her to prepare first but for the 

moment they can watch a movie 

I like how Maan tells Geet to hold his hand its almost as if 

teasing her on one side yet really wanting her to hold his hand 

Maan also realizes that Geet is giving up everything for him

she trust him and he should not break that trust 

Maan realizing this fact is a huge fact because now he will try

his very best to be honest with her in every way and he will

surely try and get himself clean to face the world once again 

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Posted: 3 years ago

 Congratulations to all the Winners 


of Part 31 


 Part 32 


Warm and Endearing Part 


Maan did not say anything to Geet's confession

but why is it because when he thought he can have a serious 

relation with Geet , she just avoided him 

but I admire her that she did not get sad or cry just tells Maan

she responded to his confession

good that Geet tells Maan his friends are not really his friends 

hope he sees it soon that they all just use him 

Geet needs to make Maan busy with interesting activities not just relaxing

 because at some point he will get over bored and try and escape 


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Posted: 3 years ago

Gosh will they ever sit and talk openly 😋

Talking in riddles and we are playing guessing games 😅

Loved the updates and waiting for Maans answer 😁

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Posted: 3 years ago

Great part 

Will maan be able to share his feelings with Geet 

Also Geet heard maans confession 

Cont soon 

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 3 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 32)

Winner:   Creampuff ⭐️

Runner-ups: Taahir004

Special Mention: khwaishfan

Early BirdAward (For readers having first 3 comments):  sanum23,kkiran,NeenaDd

 

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Also, sorry if you are feeling pacing is getting slow. But enjoy the good times till they last to the fullest

 

 

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Part 33

 

M- Are you not upset that I didn’t respond to your love confession?

 

She shrugs

 

G- No. I just responded to your confession

 

He frowns

 

M- What?

 

She plays a recording where Maan's drunken voice is confessing his love to Geet

 

Maan is pale and embarrassed hearing it

 

M-Why did you record my call?

 

G-I wanted a proof, in case you forgot or just flip side

 

She answers smugly

 

M-Why don’t you become a criminal lawyer!

 

Maan says rolling his eyes

 

She is smiling gleefully

 

M-You didn’t even want to date me

 

He mutters

 

G-Concentrate on the movie!

 

She yells

 

G-Look straight! Don’t look at me

 

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Geet so gai movie dekhte- dekhte

 

Movie khatam hui toh Geet so rahi hai dekha Maan ne

 

Maan soch raha hai kya kare

 

Maan ne laptop utha ke apni jagah rakh diya

 

Geet bed pe tedhi hokar padi hai

 

Maan soch raha hai khud kahan lete?

 

Yaa, yeh mauka hai chala jaaye yahan se?

 

Is he even supposed to sleep on the same bed, he wonders?

 

Uske upar, Geet bed ke beechon beech tedhi hoke leti hui hai

 

Kuch der tak sochne ke baad aur Geet ko ghurne ke baad Maanlet jaata hai, ek pair bed ke bahar latkake, covering his eyes with his arm

 

She looks surreal while sleeping

 

He has an urge to touch her and pull away that rogue strand of hair falling on her face and obstructing his view

 

But he is afraid that if he touches Geet and she would wakeup

 

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He is struggling with insomnia (part of withdrawl)

 

Poori raat Maan kabhi karvat badalta

 

Kabhi room mein ghoomta

 

Kabhi book padne ki koshish karta toh Geet ki moti-moti bio & medical ki book

 

Kabhi terrace pe khada ho jaata

 

Aah agar ek cigarette mil jaye aise sleepless night par

 

How easier night will become

 

He wonders

 

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Ab subah hui toh madam ki neend khuli

 

But Maan was used to it, Geet poori raat mein multiple baarankh kholti rahi, phir soti rahi

 

Now this doesn’t alarm him anymore

 

Geet uthke baith gai, khade khade baal leke

 

Phone dekha, time dekha...phir so gai

 

Then she notices Maan, who was sitting next to her working on the laptop

 

She gets up with a start gazing at his laptop screen

 

M-I am working

 

She gives a content toothy smile

 

Again, goes to sleep

 

Then again gets up

 

G-You didn’t sleep?

 

M-No

 

Maan hears her stomach growl

 

G-It’s me

 

She confesses

 

G-Make me some cornflakes & coffee please

 

She makes a puppy face

 

M-Should I go & get something from outside?

 

He asks

 

She sits up

 

G-Yes....No!

 

M-I won’t run away...

 

Geet is thinking what to do

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Crazy them,them and their antics❤😍

Looking forward to further...

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Creampuff

Part 32 

Stellar update !!!! 👏👏👏👏

These two never cease to amuse me . I especially love ❤️ their quick retorts to each other & the conversations that go on in their head !! 😆 Great job allowing us to read their minds 😆

Their chemistry is fantastic !!! 👍🏼

Their conversations & actions & even their quick retorts  are definitely like a couple that have been together for a long time . They should stop denying the inevitable & spill their guts to each other so they can enjoy their crazy life together with each other’s company . Let’s face it , these two were made for each other ..... doesn’t everybody agree !! 

So glad that maan turned off his phone when geet told him that his druggie acquaintances are not his friends. 

But I am baffled by geet’s saying that she responded to his confession.... did maan confess ?? I don’t remember that part . I remember geet confessed . Maybe I should reread for fun 😆

Thank you so much for pm & updates 

Double updates deserve double hugs 🤗🤗




Their conversations & actions & even their quick retorts  are definitely like a couple that have been together for a long time . 


Great observation dear. These were the points I based thier characters on ki both are intelligent witty and the whole charm & masala of their relationship is ki dono ek se badhkar ek hain. Hence surprise each other each time

Also they are so subconsciously comfy with each other, hence to bystander might seem like a married couple

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: akkub.92

Both parts are awesome


Geet doing everything for maan hope maan also corporate with her and he get normal soon and there love story begin 

Can't wait to see there response


Glad to read your comment after so long. Keep commenting dear

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

She responded to his confession? He will be raking his brains to figure that out.


heheheh surely