Congratulations to all Winners
of Part 30
Very Well Done !!!!
Congratulations to all Winners
of Part 30
Very Well Done !!!!
Part 31
Fabulous Update
Love the fact that Maan realizes that its only
Geet that cares about him
I have to admit he is very alert and actually can see
and notice Geet each gesture like when she tried
to counsel him well she had no idea and he knew that
yet he was comfortable telling her to prepare first but for the
moment they can watch a movie
I like how Maan tells Geet to hold his hand its almost as if
teasing her on one side yet really wanting her to hold his hand
Maan also realizes that Geet is giving up everything for him
she trust him and he should not break that trust
Maan realizing this fact is a huge fact because now he will try
his very best to be honest with her in every way and he will
surely try and get himself clean to face the world once again
Congratulations to all the Winners
of Part 31
Part 32
Warm and Endearing Part
Maan did not say anything to Geet's confession
but why is it because when he thought he can have a serious
relation with Geet , she just avoided him
but I admire her that she did not get sad or cry just tells Maan
she responded to his confession
good that Geet tells Maan his friends are not really his friends
hope he sees it soon that they all just use him
Geet needs to make Maan busy with interesting activities not just relaxing
because at some point he will get over bored and try and escape
Gosh will they ever sit and talk openly 😋
Talking in riddles and we are playing guessing games 😅
Loved the updates and waiting for Maans answer 😁
Great part
Will maan be able to share his feelings with Geet
Also Geet heard maans confession
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
Star Commentor Award (Part 32)
Winner: Creampuff ⭐️
Runner-ups: Taahir004
Special Mention: khwaishfan
Early BirdAward (For readers having first 3 comments): sanum23,kkiran,NeenaDd
Congratulations to the winner and the runner-up’s 👏
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Part 33
M- Are you not upset that I didn’t respond to your love confession?
She shrugs
G- No. I just responded to your confession
He frowns
M- What?
She plays a recording where Maan's drunken voice is confessing his love to Geet
Maan is pale and embarrassed hearing it
M-Why did you record my call?
G-I wanted a proof, in case you forgot or just flip side
She answers smugly
M-Why don’t you become a criminal lawyer!
Maan says rolling his eyes
She is smiling gleefully
M-You didn’t even want to date me
He mutters
G-Concentrate on the movie!
She yells
G-Look straight! Don’t look at me
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Geet so gai movie dekhte- dekhte
Movie khatam hui toh Geet so rahi hai dekha Maan ne
Maan soch raha hai kya kare
Maan ne laptop utha ke apni jagah rakh diya
Geet bed pe tedhi hokar padi hai
Maan soch raha hai khud kahan lete?
Yaa, yeh mauka hai chala jaaye yahan se?
Is he even supposed to sleep on the same bed, he wonders?
Uske upar, Geet bed ke beechon beech tedhi hoke leti hui hai
Kuch der tak sochne ke baad aur Geet ko ghurne ke baad Maanlet jaata hai, ek pair bed ke bahar latkake, covering his eyes with his arm
She looks surreal while sleeping
He has an urge to touch her and pull away that rogue strand of hair falling on her face and obstructing his view
But he is afraid that if he touches Geet and she would wakeup
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He is struggling with insomnia (part of withdrawl)
Poori raat Maan kabhi karvat badalta
Kabhi room mein ghoomta
Kabhi book padne ki koshish karta toh Geet ki moti-moti bio & medical ki book
Kabhi terrace pe khada ho jaata
Aah agar ek cigarette mil jaye aise sleepless night par
How easier night will become
He wonders
+++++++++
Ab subah hui toh madam ki neend khuli
But Maan was used to it, Geet poori raat mein multiple baarankh kholti rahi, phir soti rahi
Now this doesn’t alarm him anymore
Geet uthke baith gai, khade khade baal leke
Phone dekha, time dekha...phir so gai
Then she notices Maan, who was sitting next to her working on the laptop
She gets up with a start gazing at his laptop screen
M-I am working
She gives a content toothy smile
Again, goes to sleep
Then again gets up
G-You didn’t sleep?
M-No
Maan hears her stomach growl
G-It’s me
She confesses
G-Make me some cornflakes & coffee please
She makes a puppy face
M-Should I go & get something from outside?
He asks
She sits up
G-Yes....No!
M-I won’t run away...
Geet is thinking what to do
Crazy them,them and their antics❤😍
Looking forward to further...
Originally posted by: Creampuff
Part 32
Stellar update !!!! 👏👏👏👏
These two never cease to amuse me . I especially love ❤️ their quick retorts to each other & the conversations that go on in their head !! 😆 Great job allowing us to read their minds 😆
Their chemistry is fantastic !!! 👍🏼
Their conversations & actions & even their quick retorts are definitely like a couple that have been together for a long time . They should stop denying the inevitable & spill their guts to each other so they can enjoy their crazy life together with each other’s company . Let’s face it , these two were made for each other ..... doesn’t everybody agree !!
So glad that maan turned off his phone when geet told him that his druggie acquaintances are not his friends.
But I am baffled by geet’s saying that she responded to his confession.... did maan confess ?? I don’t remember that part . I remember geet confessed . Maybe I should reread for fun 😆
Thank you so much for pm & updates
Double updates deserve double hugs 🤗🤗
Their conversations & actions & even their quick retorts are definitely like a couple that have been together for a long time .
Great observation dear. These were the points I based thier characters on ki both are intelligent witty and the whole charm & masala of their relationship is ki dono ek se badhkar ek hain. Hence surprise each other each time
Also they are so subconsciously comfy with each other, hence to bystander might seem like a married couple
Originally posted by: akkub.92
Both parts are awesome
Geet doing everything for maan hope maan also corporate with her and he get normal soon and there love story begin
Can't wait to see there response
Glad to read your comment after so long. Keep commenting dear
Originally posted by: coderlady
She responded to his confession? He will be raking his brains to figure that out.
heheheh surely
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