hi thanks for the pm! hope you are fine!
Congrats to the winners! well deserved
Part 35
Phenomenal update! awesomely written
sad that Geet judges Maan without knowing him.
like how you portrayed their inner thoughts
wish they would voice out what they are feeling
nice seeing the comfortableness with each other
of cos Maan is exhausted and well asleep
at least she closed the curtains
Loved how she admires Maan and touches Maan
wow she is thinking about the times that they kissed
gosh I thought she would be caught by Maan
but he just traps in his arms
well she is unable to move
I guess she will fall asleep as well
Question to Maan
what is bothering you that lead to you taking drugs?
Question to Geet
will you date Maan?
update soon
Beautiful part
Geet trying hard to make maan avoid his drinks and all
Hope she gets successful
Also with both spending time she may be able to let go her hesitance
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
Chapter 35
Bewitching update !!! ๐๐๐๐๐
Geetโs nakhre are so adorable ..... .. she is pleased by the simplest things like maan carrying her heavy groceries.... like she won some sort of unattainable accomplishment..... ๐....... her world is small & she thinks that maan cannot survive in her simple world but she is totally wrong b/c when maan & geetโs worlds collide it will earth-shattering bliss.
I donโt think no one else could put up with either of their perplexing personalities ๐
& geet really doesnโt know how to social distance ...... inching closer & closer ๐but do you blame her when her handsome hunk is sleeping in her bed
Loved the ending where she slept in his arms ๐ happy dance time !!!!
Canโt wait to see their reactions when they wake up !!
Thank you for the bewitching update & pm
Edited by Creampuff - 3 years agoStar Commentor Award (Part 35)
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SpecialMention: Khwaishfan
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Part 36
Warning: Mature content
She thinks ki haan abhi thodi der mein nikalne ki koshish karegi, abhi acha sa soft & comfy hai...bass 5 min...kisko pata chalna hai
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She comes out of her comfortable slumber after few hours
She looks around
It all feels like a dream
She is wrapped in the bedsheet
She canโt believe what happened was real
They just got intimate!
She should be freaking out, but she is not
It was so beautiful, so pleasurable
The pleasures she had just read about in books
It felt indeed surreal
It was like fairytale
Maan introduced her to the experience that she never expected to have
She experienced an org*sm
She blushes thinking about those moments
Technically, she is still a v*rgin
But experienced couple of other firsts
First n*ked s*xy time with a guy
Feeling good instead of inadequate
Those kisses
And the org*sm
Maan introduced her to her new self
The side she hadnโt explored herself
First time she wants to have s*x real bad
It does not scare her
First time the experience was unexpectedly pleasurable
Maan wasnโt selfish at all
He didnโt ask Maan to do anything
She did try to reciprocate as much as she could, but she was too immersed in the experience of pleasure
She realizes she was so happy yet tired after it that she had dozed off
Maan, who had wanted to discuss about her experience remained staring at her
She looks around to find Maan
She realizes Maan is out of the bed and all dressed up
She wants to protest ki why did he dress up when she didn't
She wraps herself in the bedsheet
G-Donโt look!
Maan looks away...waise bhi wo dekh nahi raha tha...he was concerned kahin ye chaddar mein adh ke gir naa jaaye
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Geet comes dressed up
Maan ko dekh ke her cheeks automatically acquire color thinking about what happened
M- You are good?
G-Yeah. Perfect. You?
Geet apni book leke baith jaati hai, not looking at Maan
Maan ne sandwich banaya hai, he is eating.
He offers her too
M-Want some?
G-No, I am good
Maan bhi khaate khaate bed pe baith jaata hai
Kuch der baad she blurts out
G-Donโt take anything seriously
Maan glances at her
Kuch bolta nahi
She says after a while
G-emm...thank you
He nods
Then again silence
She again blurts out
G-Are you using me for s*x?
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years agoThem๐,she experience something she thought she will not, looking forward to further...
Geet is so confuse she like it but still insecure about something she should clear her mind they need talk
Part 36
Beautiful update. superbly written
wow what a twist.....
never expected this to happen
how did this happen....
so they got intimate
at least Geet is happy
her reaction and thoughts eloquently portrayed
it all does feel surreal and is is basking in the moment
great that it was Maan that introduced her to all this
glad that she feels good!
Piyush really made her feel low
its all new to her
Maan made sure that it was pleasurable
liked that it was about all about her
of cos Maan wants to know what she thinks
well she seemed shy around him
Loved his concern for her
hate that she tells him not to take things seriously
surprised with her question to him?
why would she assume that he is using her?
upset with Geet's thinking
update soon
Edited by khwaishfan - 3 years agoLoved the update. Geet ko split personality disorder hai kya ๐
Kabhi shola kabhi Shabnam.
She is very happy and content then sudden kya hogaya ๐
Bechara Maan getting mixed signals
36
superb update
geet is happy n being intimate with maan her fear left her
geet enjoy her new experience