This is not Love- MG (Part 59, Page 149) ||Thread I - Page 66

Posted: 3 years ago

hi thanks for the pm! hope you are fine! 

Congrats to the winners! well deserved


Part 35

Phenomenal update! awesomely written

sad that Geet judges Maan without knowing him.

like how you portrayed their inner thoughts

wish they would voice out what they are feeling

nice seeing the comfortableness with each other

of cos Maan is exhausted and well asleep

at least she closed the curtains

Loved how she admires Maan and touches Maan

wow she is thinking about the times that they kissed

gosh I thought she would be caught by Maan 

but he just traps in his arms

well she is unable to move

I guess she will fall asleep as well


Question to Maan 

what is bothering you that lead to you taking drugs?


Question to Geet

will you date Maan?


update soon

Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful part 

Geet trying hard to make maan avoid his drinks and all 

Hope she gets successful 

Also with both spending time she may be able to let go her hesitance 

Cont soon 

Thanks for pm

Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 35 

Bewitching update !!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Geetโ€™s nakhre are so adorable ..... .. she is pleased by the simplest things like maan carrying her heavy groceries....   like she won some sort of unattainable accomplishment..... ๐Ÿ˜†....... her world is small & she thinks that maan cannot survive in her simple world but she is totally wrong b/c when maan & geetโ€™s worlds collide it will earth-shattering bliss. 

I donโ€™t think no one else could put up with either of their perplexing personalities ๐Ÿ˜†

& geet really doesnโ€™t know how to social distance ...... inching closer & closer ๐Ÿ˜†but do you blame her when her handsome hunk is sleeping in her bed 

Loved the ending where she slept in his arms ๐Ÿ˜ƒ happy dance time !!!! 

Canโ€™t wait to see their reactions when they wake up !! 

Thank you for the bewitching update & pm 

Edited by Creampuff - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 35)

Winner:   Creampuff โญ๏ธ

Runner-ups:  NeenaDd,kkiran

SpecialMention: Khwaishfan

EarlyBird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): crazyfriends007,NeenaDd, aparna3011

 

Congratulations to the winner and the runner-upโ€™s ๐Ÿ‘smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32

 

Special Announcements:

1.   The guessing game, the song game & the QnA is still on so please feel free participate in any or all of them. Letโ€™s have fun together! You can also suggest any game or anything for more interaction and fun

2.   Thanks to the silent readers who have become active and started to comment. Really appreciate it. Those who are still silent readers, I request you to at least write a one-word comment. This would mean a world to me

3.   Please share the story with your friends on IF or any groups to popularize it. The reader base is getting really low. Please help me out

 

Special Thanks to readers for reading the story and commenting on it even when I couldnโ€™t find time to PM you guys

 

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Part 36

 

Warning: Mature content

 

She thinks ki haan abhi thodi der mein nikalne ki koshish karegi, abhi acha sa soft & comfy hai...bass 5 min...kisko pata chalna hai

 

+++++++++

 

She comes out of her comfortable slumber after few hours

 

She looks around

 

It all feels like a dream

 

She is wrapped in the bedsheet

 

She canโ€™t believe what happened was real

 

They just got intimate!

 

She should be freaking out, but she is not

 

It was so beautiful, so pleasurable

 

The pleasures she had just read about in books

 

It felt indeed surreal

 

It was like fairytale

 

Maan introduced her to the experience that she never expected to have

 

She experienced an org*sm

 

She blushes thinking about those moments

 

Technically, she is still a v*rgin

 

But experienced couple of other firsts

 

First n*ked s*xy time with a guy

 

Feeling good instead of inadequate

Those kisses

 

And the org*sm

 

Maan introduced her to her new self

 

The side she hadnโ€™t explored herself

 

First time she wants to have s*x real bad

 

It does not scare her

 

First time the experience was unexpectedly pleasurable

 

Maan wasnโ€™t selfish at all

 

He didnโ€™t ask Maan to do anything

 

She did try to reciprocate as much as she could, but she was too immersed in the experience of pleasure

 

She realizes  she was so happy yet tired after it that she had dozed off

 

Maan, who had wanted to discuss about her experience remained staring at her

 

She looks around to find Maan

 

She realizes Maan is out of the bed and all dressed up

 

She wants to protest ki why did he dress up when she didn't

 

She wraps herself in the bedsheet

 

G-Donโ€™t look!

 

Maan looks away...waise bhi wo dekh nahi raha tha...he was concerned kahin ye chaddar mein adh ke gir naa jaaye

 

+++++++

 

Geet comes dressed up

 

Maan ko dekh ke her cheeks automatically acquire color thinking about what happened

 

M- You are good?

 

G-Yeah. Perfect. You?

 

Geet apni book leke baith jaati hai, not looking at Maan

 

Maan ne sandwich banaya hai, he is eating.

 

He offers her too

 

M-Want some?

 

G-No, I am good

 

Maan bhi khaate khaate bed pe baith jaata hai

 

Kuch der baad she blurts out

 

G-Donโ€™t take anything seriously

 

Maan glances at her

 

Kuch bolta nahi

 

She says after a while

 

G-emm...thank you

 

He nods

 

Then again silence

 

She again blurts out

 

G-Are you using me for s*x?

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

Them๐Ÿ˜,she experience something she thought she will not, looking forward to further...

Posted: 3 years ago

 Geet is so confuse she like it but still insecure about something she should clear her mind they need talk 

Posted: 3 years ago

Part 36

Beautiful update. superbly written

wow what a twist.....

never expected this to happen

how did this happen....

so they got intimate

at least Geet is happy

her reaction and thoughts eloquently portrayed

it all does feel surreal and is is basking in the moment

great that it was Maan that introduced her to all this

glad that she feels good! 

Piyush really made her feel low

its all new to her

Maan made sure that it was pleasurable

liked that it was about all about her

of cos Maan wants to know what she thinks

well she seemed shy around him

Loved his concern for her

hate that she tells him not to take things seriously 

surprised with her question to him?

why would she assume that he is using her?

upset with Geet's thinking


update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

Loved the update. Geet ko split personality disorder hai kya ๐Ÿ˜…

Kabhi shola kabhi Shabnam. 

She is very happy and content then sudden kya hogaya ๐Ÿ˜‹

Bechara Maan getting mixed signals 

Posted: 3 years ago

36

superb update

geet is happy n being intimate with maan her fear left her 

geet enjoy her new experience 



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