Star Commentor Award (Part 31)
Winner: Creampuff ⭐️
Runner-ups: khwaishfan
Special Mention: Alamelu
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Part 32
He comes out of his thoughts when he notices his mobile pinging incessantly
It’s his party group that is expecting him
G- Who is it?
M-My friends
G-Which friends?
M-The ones from the party
G-They are not your friends. Concentrate on the movie
Maan phone silent kar deta hai
He murmurs "so dominating"
G-I heard you!
M-Good
“God knows what sort of therapy this is”
He mutters under his breath
A failed one
She answers in her mind
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Geet pauses the movie Nth time
G-Ruko mujhe bathroom jaana hai
M-Tum sirf paani piiti rehti ho phir bathroom jaati rehti ho
G-Tumhe kya? Light jalao!
M- Yaaaaaar
He grunts
M-Ye lo light
He switches on the mobile flashlight
M-Use this. Baar- baar light nahi jala raha
Geet huffs & puffs and goes to the bathroom
Maan ignores her agitations
She comes back
G-Chalao chalao
The movie ke aise thrilling part mein Geet subconsciously holds his hand….that was the only warm thing around
Just lightly her hand his placed on his
Maan also doesn’t make a hue & cry about it
G- Maan
G-hmm
G-Can I ask you something?
He nods
G- Why did you get drunk that day?
He asks referring to the day the hotel
M- I was disturbed
She is looking at him to tell more. But he doesn't
He is stoic and stone faced
M- Geet
G-Hmm
M- Are you not upset that I didn’t respond to your love confession?
She shrugs
G- No. I just responded to your confession
He frowns
M- What?
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