Great part
Geet’s landlord got to know
But will maaneet’s come close
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
Great part
Geet’s landlord got to know
But will maaneet’s come close
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
Part 30
Arre baapre.... yeh kya hua ab...? Geet ki toh musibat khatam hi nahi horaha hai pehle Maan ki tension aur uper se uske har baat pe thaane suna... Ab landlord ki problem... Woh ek doctor hai why can't she just have a nice house.... Ab pata nahi kya hoga.... Geet is really stuck now... Piche kua aur Agey kai... Ab kya hoga....
Fantabulous update Di... 🤗
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Part 31
She walks out to speak to the landlord so Maan cant hear her
G-wo...wo mera...
G- friend hai
G- Aapko kisne…?
G- Nahi main aisa nahi kar sakti
G- Haan 2 hafte ka notice hai naa.. tab tak ghar khali kardungi
She hangs up and comes back inside
M- Who was it?
G-Nobody
M- Your landlord is chucking you out because of me. I can move out to a rehab
G- No need. I am anyways moving out of the city
M- What? Why?
G- Work
M- Where?
G- I don’t need to tell you everything
He stares at her intently and smiles while shaking his head
M- You are taking it all this upon yourself because of me. Why?
G- Even if I am. I can’t accomplish anything without your help, Maan
Tabhi doorbell bajti hai ki khaana aa gaya
Dono chup chap lunch kar lete hain
Geet lunch ke baad, Maan ko medicine deti hai
M-What is this?
G-This will help
M-With what?
G- I am a doctor, trust me
Maan stares at the medicine
Geet is staring back at Maan
He looks at her then gulps it down with some water
She sits near him
G-Do you wanna talk?
M- About?
G-Anything
M- So you are trying to counsel me
Maan burst out laughing
M- You suck at it so much!
Geet scowls
M- Okay let's try. Come on. You should make me feel comfortable
G-Yes. Be comfortable
M- Hold my hand
G-What?
M- I feel comfortable that way
She holds his hand
M- Start. What do you wanna know?
She wants to know that why he turned to self-destruction
Table ke neeche she is referring to her phone on what to do as a therapist or counselor
Maan looks ki kya kar rahi hai
He gets up ki lets watch a movie
G- But...
M- You prepare first...next time
He says patting her head
Dono bed pe baith jaate hain movie chalake
G- Horror movie dekhte hai. I can never watch them coz I am alone...puhleaze
He nods
Maan turns off the lights
He thinks to himself.
Why isn't he leaving, he can leave anytime
Geet can’t possibly stop him
He wonders why he is not going.
He was doing all this coz he felt kisi ko farak nahi padta whatever happens to him
But here he knows Geet ko farak padta hai, she is risking everything just for him.....she trusts him
He can’t just ruthlessly break her trust
Then he will prove himself to be that what the world thinks of him
He comes out of his thoughts when he notices his mobile pinging incessantly
It’s his party group that is expecting him
G- Who is it?
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very nice
maan thinks that he can leave geet's place any time then why not leaving, further he find that he dint want to brake geet's trust who is the only one person who care for him
He knows that she is risking many things by helping him,let's see now wt will he do with the party group,is he going to continue or not...
Maan please don’t answer your so called friends. After everything geetbis doing for you don’t please.
Maan realizes geet is going beyond Whatvis required because she cares truly cares. Especially after hearing about the landlord. Also will maan let geet go that easily hmmmHe has not had that probably ever
let’s see what happens
Maan knows geet care fr her she risking everything only fr him so he thought not to leave her
Hi Nilanjana, how are you?
thanks for updating
Part 31
Brilliant update..... wonderfully written
not surprised that Maan knew what was happening
of cos Maan is shocked that she will be moving out of the city
she loves him so much.....
why can't they just talk?
Maan's question is justified.
he knows her so well.
like her care for Maan
admire her efforts to help him...
at least he was ready to talk
so what made him self destruct?
well its all new to Geet.....
great that they watched a movie
Maan's thoughts are well portrayed
glad that he knows Geet cares and trusts him
loved that he does not want to break her trust
hope he gets better soon
oh no did his so call friends have to message him?
can understand that Geet wants to know who messaged!
will he be honest with her?
I am sure he will not attend the party
update soon
His party friends are calling. Lets see what he will do. The moment of truth.
Chapter 31
Impeccable update !!! 👏👏👏
Geet & maan have such a unique relationship
I like how they are awkward at times when talking but still are so comfortable in silence in each other’s presence like an old married couple 😃
Maan is blown away that geet is actually getting evicted due to helping him but she still wants to help him
He even ponders why he is still staying when he could leave but he knows that geet is doing a lot of him, so he should hold his end of the bargain
Geet’s counselling session was hilarious 🤣🤣, looking at her phone under the table for what to say 🤣
Horror movie sounds exciting but his addict friends are calling
I hope maan makes the correct decision now that he knows someone cares 😃
Thank you so much for the update ♥️
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