This is not Love- MG (Part 59, Page 149) ||Thread I - Page 56

Posted: 3 years ago

He says he is not an addict. Now is he? The addicts never think they are and they will say they can stop anytime. But then they keep doing it. Can he stop?

Posted: 3 years ago

 Now geet have to answer his question they have to talk what bothering them and what they wants from each other

Posted: 3 years ago

29

very nice 

geet is not able to answer maan's question 

now geet is confuse what to do for week with maan

geet is fighting within 

Posted: 3 years ago

Haha geet stuck from answering his question. She justifies saying that person is a doctor. Ofcourae maan does not buy it

so glad maan is not an addict. But why is he hanging out with those losers 

How are they going to spend time being cooped up together?? And maan figured out that she has taken time off for him but she will not accept it


he can read her so well. 


Posted: 3 years ago

hi appreciate the update! 


Part 29

Stupendous update.....  terrifically written

sometimes the silence is needed

Maan's question was expected

of cos Geet was flabbergasted

well Maan did hear her confession.......

at least she was honest

not surprised that he knows she took leave cos of him

so she avoids the issue

liked that he confronted Geet about bringing him there

he seems to know her well

wish that they would talk

eager to know more about Maan

she tells him he was snogging that girl

Thank God she realised her bra was in the bathroom

its indeed going to be difficult for her

Geet's turmoil well portrayed

loved that he told that he is not an addict

hope they have a serious discussion 


update soon 

Posted: 3 years ago

Good to know he is not an addict so what the hell was he taking to begin with. I do not know how he is going to explain himself, but he should share his story. They only been in the apartment for a few hours and its already awkward lol. Geet clearly did not think this through.

Posted: 3 years ago

Great part 

Geet confessed her love biw waiting for maans 

Will maan be able to help Geet with her problem 

Cont soon 

Thanks for pm

Posted: 3 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 29)

Winner:   khwaishfan⭐️ Creampuff ⭐️Alamelu⭐️

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Part 30

 

Maan aata hai nahaake

 

Sits beside her

 

Both are aimlessly staring at the TV

 

Maan says after 15 min of watching a Bigg boss type tv show that both of them don’t follow

 

M- I am not an addict

 

Geet gazes at him without turning her head

 

M- You don’t believe me. Do you? Do you even trust me?

 

She turns her head

 

G- I trust you. But my profession doesn't trust drug user’s diagnosis. You shouldn't too

 

Kuch der ke liye phir dono chup

 

After a while Maan speaks up

 

M- I was disturbed... you were with that guy. You didn't even acknowledge my presence

 

G- Not a good enough reason for MMDA (drug name)

 

Again silence

 

M- Am I allowed to smoke?

 

G- We don’t have cigarettes here

 

M- I will get it

 

Geet gulps

 

G- Well...it’s better we stay in...a nice break

 

He frowns hard

 

M- I am prisoned here!

 

He gets up

 

She is alarmed

 

He frowns more

 

M- What? You are afraid of me?

 

He shakes his head in exasperation

 

M- F*ck! You think I am some beast!

 

G- No!

 

Geet retaliates

 

G-I am just being preventive of any relapse or withdrawal symptoms. I am not afraid of you

 

M- Liar

 

G- If I would have been afraid of you then you would have been in a rehab, not inside my house

 

She says firmly

 

Maan chup ho jaata hai

 

Geet comes closer and sits beside him placing her hand on his

 

He looks at her


+++++

 

Maan continuous gazing at the TV while Geet is in deep thoughts that what she should have done? Is she doing the right thing locking up Maan with her?

 

She can’t let him go out alone

 

She can’t lock him in here and get stuff for him

 

Geet doesn't want to treat him inhumanly or like a person who can’t make sane decisions

 

She knows that will blow off his self esteem and he could relapse

 

++++++

 

She starts to call her tiffin service to order 2 dabbas from today

 

M- Where's my phone?

 

He asks

 

M- or am I even not allowed that?

 

He adds

 

She passes him his phone

 

M- Are you sure? They even take away phones in rehabs

 

She doesn't reply and goes to order food

 

Faltu ke taunts sunne mein koi interest nahi hai Geet ko

 

She knows it’s his drug low speaking

 

Dusra time hota toh Maan ko eeth ka jawaab pathar se deti

 

Geet ke counseling doctor ne kaha hai ki 24 hours blood mein rahega drugs

 

She is even forcing him to drink more and more liquids to flush it out

 

She is noticing that his  grumpy mood is his withdrawal symptom that he himself isn't realizing

 

Geet ka phone bajta hai and she realizes it’s her landlord

 

She walks out to speak to the landlord so Maan cant hear her

 

G-wo...wo mera...

 

G- friend hai

 

G- Aapko kisne…?

 

G- Nahi main aisa nahi kar sakti

 

G- Haan 2 hafte ka notice hai naa.. tab tak ghar khali kardungi

 

She hangs up and comes back inside

 

M- Who was it?

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by UmaDevi97


Part 29

Wow Di they're really like a breakup couple living under a roof. And she's using silly excuse to avoid Maan's questions it really cracked me up... And lastly Maan told her that he's not addicted then woh kya tha when he's snogging that girl from the party..... 😡

Splendid update Di... 🤗


"like a breakup couple living under a roof' this is one interesting perspective

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Creampuff


Part 29 

Marvellous update !!! 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

Like the turn this story is taking 

Maan can read geet like a book , he can see right through her 🤓

& it is making geet uneasy  😕 Yes, Thats so unexpected. She thought nobody can understand her craziness and her whole personality and here is our hero reading her like an open book

He definitely does not sound like an addict , he sounds like the maan we all know that is on top of everything I loved this line

For maan’s every step forward , geet is taking one step back ....... where is our sherni now 😆 Geet sherni hai toh Maan bhi to sher hai. Sherbi kab tak sher ko ignore karegi

My absolute favourite part is geet’s self talks ...... I could totally picture it .... hilarious 🤣 hehhehe

But now that they are trapped together .... they seriously need to have a honest conversation with each other ..... they are getting to it. But its not easy naa....two attractive people who are drawn to each other locked in a room but still have to be civil...difficult task naa

thank you so much for pm & update 🤗


The comment was so wonderful that I read it multiple times❤️



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