Star Commentor Award (Part 29)
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Part 30
Maan aata hai nahaake
Sits beside her
Both are aimlessly staring at the TV
Maan says after 15 min of watching a Bigg boss type tv show that both of them don’t follow
M- I am not an addict
Geet gazes at him without turning her head
M- You don’t believe me. Do you? Do you even trust me?
She turns her head
G- I trust you. But my profession doesn't trust drug user’s diagnosis. You shouldn't too
Kuch der ke liye phir dono chup
After a while Maan speaks up
M- I was disturbed... you were with that guy. You didn't even acknowledge my presence
G- Not a good enough reason for MMDA (drug name)
Again silence
M- Am I allowed to smoke?
G- We don’t have cigarettes here
M- I will get it
Geet gulps
G- Well...it’s better we stay in...a nice break
He frowns hard
M- I am prisoned here!
He gets up
She is alarmed
He frowns more
M- What? You are afraid of me?
He shakes his head in exasperation
M- F*ck! You think I am some beast!
G- No!
Geet retaliates
G-I am just being preventive of any relapse or withdrawal symptoms. I am not afraid of you
M- Liar
G- If I would have been afraid of you then you would have been in a rehab, not inside my house
She says firmly
Maan chup ho jaata hai
Geet comes closer and sits beside him placing her hand on his
He looks at her
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Maan continuous gazing at the TV while Geet is in deep thoughts that what she should have done? Is she doing the right thing locking up Maan with her?
She can’t let him go out alone
She can’t lock him in here and get stuff for him
Geet doesn't want to treat him inhumanly or like a person who can’t make sane decisions
She knows that will blow off his self esteem and he could relapse
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She starts to call her tiffin service to order 2 dabbas from today
M- Where's my phone?
He asks
M- or am I even not allowed that?
He adds
She passes him his phone
M- Are you sure? They even take away phones in rehabs
She doesn't reply and goes to order food
Faltu ke taunts sunne mein koi interest nahi hai Geet ko
She knows it’s his drug low speaking
Dusra time hota toh Maan ko eeth ka jawaab pathar se deti
Geet ke counseling doctor ne kaha hai ki 24 hours blood mein rahega drugs
She is even forcing him to drink more and more liquids to flush it out
She is noticing that his grumpy mood is his withdrawal symptom that he himself isn't realizing
Geet ka phone bajta hai and she realizes it’s her landlord
She walks out to speak to the landlord so Maan cant hear her
G-wo...wo mera...
G- friend hai
G- Aapko kisne…?
G- Nahi main aisa nahi kar sakti
G- Haan 2 hafte ka notice hai naa.. tab tak ghar khali kardungi
She hangs up and comes back inside
M- Who was it?
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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