Star Commentor Award (Part 19)
Winner: Khwaishfan
Runner-ups: Creampuff
Special Mention: UmaDevi97,Alamelu,
Early BirdAward (For readers having first 3 comments): coderlady,akkub.92,Alamelu
Congratulations to the winner and the runner-up’s 👏
QnA- Episode 2
Nilz: Hello all, welcome to the second episode ofQnA with Maan & Geet. This episode is specially for Khwaishfan. So Khwaish please start with your questions
Khwaishfan: Question for Geet: Do you trust Maan?
Geet: [Takes a deep breath] ---stoic silence---(looks at Maan once then looks down)
Maan looks at Geet concerned
Khwaishfan: Emmm…next question for Maan: what do you feel for Geet?
Maan: (Looks at Khwaishfan with surprise then looks down fiddling with his car keys) I…(doesn’t complete the sentence and goes into some deep indecisive thought)
After a while Geet gets up and goes, Maan follows her
Part 20
**Mature Content**
M- I….don’t know anything. Piyush didn’t tell me anything. I am not doing anything. What are you talking about?
She trying to gain back her composure
M- Geet, don’t cry
G- Why are you hell bent on hurting me?
Maan couldn't imagine Geet like strong woman crying
She was sassy and even rude but not this
He feels that initially he wanted her to cry…. that was his motive of the revenge
But now when she is crying why doesn't it feel good at all
He feels complete opposite of good
He thinks its good thing that he had given up on taking revenge long ago, else he would have felt miserable
M- Geet, I seriously don’t know anything what you are talking about
G- You know very well…that's why your backhanded comments about s*x…coz Piyush told you that...I..I....you just want to tease me
Geet ne call kaat diya
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Geet padi hui thi bed pe
Tabhi bell baji door ki
Geet ne socha iss time kaun hoga
Jaake door khola
Saamne Maan khada hai
He barges in
She moves away
(Geet lives alone on a rooftop studio apartment)
M-I wanna talk, Geet
G-What is it now? Aur tumhe mera ghar kahan se mila?
M-I asked around
G-What?
She thinks, ye aur izzat ki dhajjiyan udayega
Geet ko kya pata ki log toh abhi se baatein kar rahe hain:
“Doctorni ka character kharab hai”
“Ladke aate hain ghar pe badi badi gaadiyan leke”
Geet toh free mein badnaam ho rahi hai
G-Why do you do everything to ruin my reputation?
M-What? I did not...what did I do now?
G-Bahar niklo tum, jo baat karni hai ghar ke bahar karenge
M-What do you think I will gonna do, Geet? what different can I do, than you did…
He smiles smugly
Geet ko toh wo smile dekh ke hi lagta hai ki mooh tod doon
G-Maan!!! That's why I hate you...you are just bullying me....because Piyush told you that I can’t have s*x and that's why I am virgin
Maan is like kya...what? I mean...kya...ismein controversial kya hai
Geet is unable to hide her tears
‘Can't have s*x se kya matlab?”
‘You are virgin coz you didn’t have s*x’
‘Once you have you won't be’
‘Koi psychological problem hai kya Geet ko?’
These are the questions Maan is having in his mind, but puchne ki himmat nahi ho rahi
He puts his arm around her to soothe her
M-Hey Geet…Geet, I didn't know anything...Piyush didn’t tell me anything and it’s no big deal...its ok to have s*x or not have s*x….it’s your decision...why would anybody be judgmental about it...if anybody is then that person is an a-hole
G-It is not...I can’t...that's why Piyush dumped me
She sniffles
G- I have vaginismus
Maan is like Huh?
Geet ki nazre bachake, starts googling on his phone
He reads quickly that: V*ginismus is a condition involving a muscle spasm in the pelvic floor muscles. It can make it painful, difficult, or impossible to have s*xual intercourse, to undergo a gynecological exam, and to insert a tampon.
He finishes reading and exclaims
M- Piyush is an a-hole!
He mutters clenching his jaw
M-Geet.
He squares her shoulders and looks at her sincerely
M-It’s no big deal. You don’t have to feel less than anyone because of this, and even if Piyush would have told me then that would just prove he is a jerk and not make you look bad. You just need a partner who has patience, and you will find one. Relationship is not just about s*x. Also, there are other ways...
She wipes her tears and looks up at him
G-What do you mean?
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
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