Star Commentor Award (Part 18)
Winner: Creampuff⭐️, Khwaishfan⭐️
Runner-ups: taahir004, Alamelu,
SpecialMention: UmaDevi97
EarlyBirdAward (For readers having first 3 comments): UmaDevi97,NeenaDd, akkub.92
Congratulations to the winner and the runner-up’s 👏
QnA with Maan & Geet:
NilzStorywriter: Welcome to the QnA session. We have our very special guests Maan & Geet
Both of them looking as if they have been kidnapped
NilzStorywriter: Honestly never expected you guys would come
Geet: I am your friend. I had to come. Why is he here?
Maan answers stoically while giving Geet a sideways glare
Maan: She is also my friend
Geet: Then Nilz, you need better friends
Nilz trying to suppress her laugh
Nilz: Anyways, our readers have some questions for you
Both of them nod
Nilz: So, first set of questions is by Creampuff. Actually, all her questions are for Geet
Geet smirks
Geet: Obviously
Maan: Obviously people with bad communications skill confuse people
Geet glares at Maan while Maan looks at her smugly
Nilz trying to normalize the situation
Nilz: Creampuff, please ask your question
Geet: Hey Creampuff!
Creampuff: Hey Geet! So my first question is: Do you have any feelings for Maan?
Geet: Yes,of course. Contempt is a feeling, frustration is a feeling
Maan: Well, its mutual
Geet: Nobodya sked you! Literally nobody asked you a question
She bursts out laughing at her own joke
Creampuff:Second question is: on a scale of 1 to 10 with 10 being the highest ...,, what would you rate Maan ?
Geet: 100. He is 100% annoying
She says not looking at Maan while he is glaring at her
Maan: It was on scale of 1 to 10, you genius
Maan mutters sarcastically
Nilz: Thank you Creampuff. Now we will take questions from Khwaishfan
Khwaishafan:Hey. My question is for Geet
Geet: I am ready
Khwaishafan: How will you respond to your colleagues about the rumors?
Geet: What rumors?
Khwaishafan: About you and Maan being together
Maan suddenly interested
Maan: There are rumors?
Geet: Shhhh!
She shushes Maan
Geet: So, I don’t care what people do in idle time. They have too much time to create fairy tales
Khwaishafan: What do you feel for Maan?
Geet: Lots of things between contempt, frustration and annoyance
Maan: You meant contempt on content? You are contented with me
Maan says smugly
She rolls her eyes
Khwaishafan: Now next question is for Maan
Maan: Yes please
Khwaishafan: Why are you so arrogant?
Geet bursts out laughing hysterically almost falling off the chair
Maan waits folding his arms around his chest waiting for Geet to stop laughing
He answers
Maan: I don’t think I am arrogant. I don’t know why it comes across like that. I am quite friendly
Nilz: Thank you guests and readers. Today’sQnA ends here. We will be back if readers would want more of the QnAs. Till then bye bye
Everybody waves bye while Geet is poking Maan calling him arrogant and Maan is trying to move away
Note:
Let’s continue the guessing game & song game to double the fun
Guessing game: After reading the parts, please add a guess that what do you think will happen in the next part. Let’s see, who gets it most right
Song game: So, for each part suggest a song you think goes with it. I base each part or story with a song on my mind. Let’s see part padhke sabke mann mein kaunsa song aata hai
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Part 19
Since aaj shift mein bhi Geet khoyi khoyi si thi toh rumors toh hospital mein aag ki tarah phail gaye
Geet ko dekh ke sabko yakeen ho gaya ki rumors sahi bhi hain
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Geet was annoyed the whole day at Maan
How could he think like that?
That jerk! Gadha!
I helped and he thought that….
Haan maana ki when he took out that gun, then I found it irresistibly hot but that doesn’t mean ki…ki….I mean that was just a thought….just a thought nothing else…and I have brushed it off
She was thinking to herself
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Next day
Maan thought ki maine wo Piyush wale kaand ke liye bhi sorry nahi kaha aur kal ke liye bhi thanks nahi kaha Geet ko
I should have thanked her aur sorry toh kehna hi chahiye tha
Sorry toh is long overdue
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Geet apne routine rounds se guzar rahi thi
Hospital ke beecho beech reception pe Maan khada hai bada sa bouquet le ke
She frowns seeing him
This guy never fails to surprise yet annoy her
Ab hospital ke log bhi sab reception pe aa gaye, including Geet’s friends
She walks to him
G- Why are you here?
She mutters to him
M- To give you this
He answers nonchalantly
G- Sabke saamne show karna zaruri hai? Please go and never come back
She felt offended by his reaction last morning
She thought they had something deeper
She doesn't care for just anybody by not sleeping the whole night...but Maan ruined it all
He is getting under her skin now
Geet jaldi se bouquet leke apne cabin mein chali jaati hai
Maan also goes back
Geet’s friend come to her cabin
‘Hi’
G-Hi
‘So?’
G-So?
‘How was the hook up that day’
Geet rolls her eyes
G-I was with Maan
She states flatly
Ab toh friends ko confirm ho gaya ki Maan-Geet mein something serious is brewing
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Ab kai din ho gaye
No contact between the two
Actually, Geet was avoiding him more
She receives a video call from Maan’s number
She wonders isko kya hua
She picks up the call
M- Why have you not been picking up my calls or replying to my messages?
She is silent
M- What? Answer me?
G- How does it matter? See I don’t want to be part of this childish game anymore
M- What game?
G- I know what you are doing
M- What am I doing?
G-You know what you are doing. I know Piyush told you everything about the past and you are just making fun of it. …rubbing it on my face
She sniffles
G- I...didn’t...I...didn’t expect this from you
She is struggling to hold back her tears
Maan wasn’t expecting this at all
M- I….don’t know anything. Piyush didn’t tell me anything. I am not doing anything. What are you talking about?
She trying to gain back her composure
M- Geet, don’t cry
He says softly
G- Why are you hell bent on hurting me?
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