Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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Star Commentor Award (Part 18)

Winner:   Creampuff⭐️, Khwaishfan⭐️

Runner-ups:  taahir004, Alamelu,

SpecialMention:  UmaDevi97

EarlyBirdAward (For readers having first 3 comments): UmaDevi97,NeenaDd, akkub.92

 

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QnA with Maan & Geet:

 

NilzStorywriter: Welcome to the QnA session. We have our very special guests Maan & Geet


Both of them looking as if they have been kidnapped

 

NilzStorywriter: Honestly never expected you guys would come

 

Geet: I am your friend. I had to come. Why is he here?

 

Maan answers stoically while giving Geet a sideways glare

 

Maan: She is also my friend

 

Geet: Then Nilz, you need better friends

 

Nilz trying to suppress her laugh

 

Nilz: Anyways, our readers have some questions for you

 

Both of them nod

 

Nilz: So, first set of questions is by Creampuff. Actually, all her questions are for Geet

 

Geet smirks

 

Geet: Obviously

 

Maan: Obviously people with bad communications skill confuse people

 

Geet glares at Maan while Maan looks at her smugly

 

Nilz trying to normalize the situation

 

Nilz: Creampuff, please ask your question

 

Geet: Hey Creampuff!

 

Creampuff: Hey Geet! So my first question is: Do you have any feelings for Maan? 

 

Geet: Yes,of course. Contempt is a feeling, frustration is a feeling

 

Maan: Well, its mutual 


Geet: Nobodya sked you! Literally nobody asked you a question


She bursts out laughing at her own joke


Creampuff:Second question is: on a scale of 1 to 10 with 10 being the highest ...,, what would you rate Maan ? 


Geet: 100. He is 100% annoying


She says not looking at Maan while he is glaring at her


Maan: It was on scale of 1 to 10, you genius


Maan mutters sarcastically 


Nilz: Thank you Creampuff. Now we will take questions from Khwaishfan


Khwaishafan:Hey. My question is for Geet


Geet: I am ready 


Khwaishafan: How will you respond to your colleagues about the rumors?


Geet: What rumors?


Khwaishafan: About you and Maan being together


Maan suddenly interested


Maan: There are rumors?


Geet: Shhhh!


She shushes Maan


Geet: So, I don’t care what people do in idle time. They have too much time to create fairy tales


Khwaishafan: What do you feel for Maan?


Geet: Lots of things between contempt, frustration and annoyance


Maan: You meant contempt on content? You are contented with me


Maan says smugly 


She rolls her eyes


Khwaishafan: Now next question is for Maan


Maan: Yes please


Khwaishafan: Why are you so arrogant?


Geet bursts out laughing hysterically almost falling off the chair


Maan waits folding his arms around his chest waiting for Geet to stop laughing


He answers


Maan: I don’t think I am arrogant. I don’t know why it comes across like that. I am quite friendly


Nilz: Thank you guests and readers. Today’sQnA ends here. We will be back if readers would want more of the QnAs. Till then bye bye


Everybody waves bye while Geet is poking Maan calling him arrogant and Maan is trying to move away

 

 

Note

 

Let’s continue the guessing game & song game to double the fun

  

Guessing game: After reading the parts, please add a guess that what do you think will happen in the next part. Let’s see, who gets it most right 

 

Song game: So, for each part suggest a song you think goes with it. I base each part or story with a song on my mind. Let’s see part padhke sabke mann mein kaunsa song aata hai

 

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Part 19

 

 

Since aaj shift mein bhi Geet khoyi khoyi si thi toh rumors toh hospital mein aag ki tarah phail gaye

 

Geet ko dekh ke sabko yakeen ho gaya ki rumors sahi bhi hain

 

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Geet was annoyed the whole day at Maan

 

How could he think like that?

 

That jerk! Gadha!

 

I helped and he thought that….

 

Haan maana ki when he took out that gun, then I found it irresistibly hot but that doesn’t mean ki…ki….I mean that was just a thought….just a thought nothing else…and I have brushed it off

 

She was thinking to herself

 

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Next day

 

Maan thought ki maine wo Piyush wale kaand ke liye bhi sorry nahi kaha aur kal ke liye bhi thanks nahi kaha Geet ko

 

I should have thanked her aur sorry toh kehna hi chahiye tha

 

Sorry toh is long overdue

 

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Geet apne routine rounds se guzar rahi thi

 

Hospital ke beecho beech reception pe Maan khada hai bada sa bouquet le ke

 

She frowns seeing him

 

This guy never fails to surprise yet annoy her

 

Ab hospital ke log bhi sab reception pe aa gaye, including Geet’s friends

 

She walks to him

 

G- Why are you here?

 

She mutters to him

 

M- To give you this

 

He answers nonchalantly

 

G- Sabke saamne show karna zaruri hai? Please go and never come back

 

She felt offended by his reaction last morning

 

She thought they had something deeper

 

She doesn't care for just anybody by not sleeping the whole night...but Maan ruined it all

 

He is getting under her skin now

 

Geet jaldi se bouquet leke apne cabin mein chali jaati hai

 

Maan also goes back

 

Geet’s friend come to her cabin

 

‘Hi’

 

 G-Hi

 

‘So?’

 

G-So?

 

‘How was the hook up that day’

 

Geet rolls her eyes

 

G-I was with Maan

 

She states flatly

 

Ab toh friends ko confirm ho gaya ki Maan-Geet mein something serious is brewing

 

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Ab kai din ho gaye

 

No contact between the two

 

Actually, Geet was avoiding him more

 

She receives a video call from Maan’s number

 

She wonders isko kya hua

 

She picks up the call

 

M- Why have you not been picking up my calls or replying to my messages?

 

She is silent

 

M- What? Answer me?

 

G- How does it matter? See I don’t want to be part of this childish game anymore

 

M- What game?

 

G- I know what you are doing

 

M- What am I doing?

 

G-You know what you are doing. I know Piyush told you everything about the past and you are just making fun of it. …rubbing it on my face

 

She sniffles

 

G- I...didn’t...I...didn’t expect this from you

 

She is struggling to hold back her tears

 

Maan wasn’t expecting this at all

 

M- I….don’t know anything. Piyush didn’t tell me anything. I am not doing anything. What are you talking about?

 

She trying to gain back her composure

 

M- Geet, don’t cry


He says softly

 

G- Why are you hell bent on hurting me?

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Omg di you are absolutely hilarious!!! 

I read your comments for myself & kwaishfan in the parkade at work & I burst out laughing in front of a stranger who probably thinks I am crazy 😜..... b/c of the weird looks I was getting ........ but that’s ok maybe I will borrow geet’s chainsaw. 😂

thanks for the good laugh & the stress buster updates 🤗

Hahahahhaha thanks a lot for liking it. To be honest, you made my day with this comment for sure🤗

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Part 18 

Commitment!!!!???? 😳

So geet ‘s concern & her taking care of maan got warped in maan’s drunk mind 😆

He is positive she wanted to grope his ass .... ( do you blame her 😉)

...... he thinks she took advantage of him 🤣🤣

Maan is a gadha but he is geet’s gadha 😆

Geet on the other hand was speechless when she saw maan out of the shower 😳

......., 🥵woah it suddenly became hotter !!! 

So maan overactive imagination thinks geet finds him irresistible & is thinking about commitment b/c geet is not a hook up kind of gal 

I know maan is a gadha but I like where this is leading .... 

so here are my questions to geet : 

1)Do you have any feelings for maan? 

2)on a scale of 1 to 10 with 10 being the highest ...,, what would you rate maan ? 

Thank you so much di for such entertaining updates !!! You have such a good sense of humour 🤗


Awww Geet's gadha sounds so cute...he is GG. Thanks for liking and enjoying my style of writing

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Congratulations to All Winners of Part 17

Great Job !!!


Part 18 


Geet worried about Maan and not concentrating at her job

now that is bad , she's a doctor 

Maan on the other hand so typical him to only think

that Geet likes him and both were intimate with each other

poor boy having all these thoughts 

oh hell Geet will cut him up into pieces hahahhaha you bet

however I like the fact that he did something about the hotel manager

and this is only because the manager harassed Geet technically he harassed Maan. But Maan and his wrong remembering

I cannot imagine if someone tries harming Geet what will Maan do then any guesses?

another highlight for me was Maan thinking if he pursues Geet

then it would turn into a serious commitment 

now that tells me that he already knows and feels Geet to be different

from all other women and that he could spend his life with her Interesting


I guess , Geet and Maan will be fighting 

he believes one thing which did not happen 

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thank you for the pm

Congrats to all winners👏⭐️


Part 18

tremendous update.... eloquently written I loved the word eloquent so much

so she finds him cute while sleeping 😉can we blame her?

thoughtful of her to send Maan a video about what happened as if it helped Maan from remembering

well Geet is affected by Maan

great she goes to see Maan

gosh she did not expect to see Maan with just a bathrobe

not surprised that Maan teases Geet

this Maan is arrogant.... he should have thanked her

as expected Geet is furious

of cos Maan assumes she groped his ass and took advantage of him

Maan is confused about what happened....

glad that he is think about a serious relationship with Geet

Geet berates herself for caring about Maan

liked that Maan dealt with the manager for harassing Geet well technically manager harassed Maan, but Maan and his mins-remembering

oh no rumors are circulating at the hospital....

I guess Maan will have see the video and realise what actually happened.


Questions for Geet:

1. how will she respond to her colleagues about the rumors?

2. what does she feel for Maan?


Questions for Maan?

1. Why is he so arrogant?


update soon 

 

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Where did the Piyush chapter come in? Is she still thinking about that? He never did apologize and tell her he backed out of that.

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Nice update 

Rumors about maaneet but poor geet hurt by maan hope maan clarify everything soon

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Oh no as expected rumors galore at the hospital. Maan means well but somehow his sense of timing and location off and his communication skills negligible 

he could have said sorry long back and thanks properly instead of teasing her. No wonder she is upset 


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nice update

maan is doing or meeting casually with geet but geet thinking that maan is doing everything porously after knowing her past with piyush from piyush which hurting geet very much 

  

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Part 19

Wow Di I'm feeling terrible for Geet.🥺 She is deeply hurt with Maan's behavior. Wedding se leke woh room wali baat tak, why is Maan always hell bent on making Geet upset...? Is he still trying to take revenge on Geet...?😲 Aur woh ullu ka pathe Piyush usse toh me tandoor fry karke lion tiger aur cheetah ki dinner pe  bejungi. Stupid sab usski waja se ho rahi hai Geet ko usske muh pe ek mukka marna cahiye. Aur Maan yeh kabhi sudarega hai ki nahi...? Ab rula diya na hamari pyari Geet ko.....😔 Maan ko danda khani chiye woh bhi Geet ke haat se.... 😈Agar Maan aise hi behave karte rahe na ek na ek din Geet se chitter padengi..... 😡fabulous update Di... 🤗