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Sun saathiya maahiya PraYansh TS Last Part

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Sun saathiya maahiya... Listen up my beloved, my soulmate...Part 1

 Thanks to Shesha485 for giving me the idea to write a PraYaansh story on forced arranged marriage turning into love.

Reyaansh and Pranati got married.



They had an arranged marriage,in other words a forced marriage.As both were career oriented they did not want to get married now.But their parents forced them to get married.

Pranati wore a grand saree and ornaments which her mother in law  Suhasini gave her and entered the bedroom with tension.

Reyaansh came out of the bathroom in vest.Seeing him like this itself an unknown tension occupied her mind.

She thought:Will he try to cross his limits tonight?

Reyaansh noticed her sweating.

Reyaansh:I think like me you were also not prepared to get married.It’s ok.Don’t worry.I will not claim my rights as a husband on you as I myself is not interested in this marriage.

Pranati was relieved as well as stunned.

Pranati:It means you too…?

Reyaansh:So I am right.You are also not interested in this marriage.

Pranati:No.Just for my parents I did get married to you.

Reyaansh:Me too.Anyways….

He separated the two attached cots.

Reyaansh:Now we can sleep.

Pranati smiled:Yes.

They lay down to sleep.

 

Reyaansh-Pranati had a reception party.

There Reyaansh’s father Shamsher gave them honeymoon ticket.

“A gift from my side.You guys enjoy”.

Pranati was really disinterested.

Pranati:Sorry Daddyji..I am not interested in honeymoon.

All were shocked.The guests were also assuming many things.

Reyaansh got irritated and grabbed her hand.He walked to another room with her.

Pranati:Reyaansh,what is this?

Reyaansh:Why did you reject the honeymoon tickets?

Pranati:What is wrong in that?I don’t consider this as marriage.Then how can I think of going for honeymoon with you?

Reyaansh:But you could have rejected it privately.What was the need of reject it in public and humiliate my dad?Do you know what others are gossiping just because of what you said?I cannot tolerate if my dad gets insulted.Understand?

Pranati felt guilty.

They both walked to the party hall.

Pranati looked at Shamsher:I am sorry daddyji if I hurt you.I did’nt intend to hurt you.Actually my students are going tohave exams soon.As I am a college lecturer I cannot leave them and go for honeymoon.Right?

Shamsher and his wife Suhasini smiled.

Shamsher:I am proud of you Pranati.You value your profession putting your heart and soul into it.I really admire you.

Suhasini:You proved that you are a selfless teacher.



Pranati smiled.Reyaansh was relieved.

 

After the party…

Reyaansh went near Pranati.

Rey:I am sorry for getting angry with you.

Pranati:It’s ok.I did a mistake unknowingly. I did’nt think about it’s after effects.Sorry.

Reyaansh:But you corrected your mistake by your lie.

Pranati:It was not completely a lie.Even if I was happy about this marriage I could not have been gone for honeymoon now.Because my students are going to have exams.Some of them really need my help now.

Reyaansh smiled:That’s really good.By the way,even though we can’t be a good couple,can’t we be friends?

Pranati smiled:Yes.Let us be friends.

They shook their hands.

Pranati was continuously taking tuition classes for some of the students.

Reyansh came there with a glass of juice.

Reyaansh:I think you are tired.You drink this.You will feel fresh.

Pranati was surprised.

Pranati:Thank you so much.I wished to drink juice now.

Reyaansh:So I read your mind?

Pranati smiled.He also smiled.

She took the juice from him and sipped it.

She finished drinking the juice and kept the glass in the kitchen after washing it.

While walking back,suddenly she slipped.Suddenly Reyaansh caught.

Unknowingly they both got lost in each others eyes.

sun saathiya maahiya
barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan
rang jaaun rang rang jaaun ri, haari main
tujhpe main jhar jhar jhar jaaun
hoon piya bas teri main
ho chhoo le to khari main

Reyaansh:Are you fine?

Pranati:Yes.Thank you Reyaansh.

He smiled:It’s ok.

 

Pranati was preparing notes at late night too for her students.

Reyaansh:I am surprised about your dedication Pranati.

Pranati:When we become a teacher we need to do all this.It’s normal.

He smiled.

While preparing notes she fell asleep keeping her head on the table due to tiresome.

Reyaansh lifted her up and carried her in his arms.Then he walked to the bed.

In the drowsy state she rested her head on his shoulder.Unknowingly he smiled.



He placed her on the bed.

Suddenly Pranati opened her eyes and stared at Reyaansh.

Reyaansh:You fell asleep.So I placed you on the bed.

Pranati:Oh no.I need more work to do.

Reyaansh:Now you need sleep.After sleeping for some time you do your remaining work.Otherwise your sleep won’t allow you to concentrate on your work properly.

Pranati nodded.

Reyaansh:Good night.

Pranati:Good night.

After 2 months…

Pranati got ready to go to college.Reyaansh was sleeping.She realized that her watch was lying on the table close to Reyaansh’s bed.She moved towards the table to take that watch.Suddenly she slipped and fell over Reyaansh.Reyaansh opened his eyes and was stunned to see Pranati over him.He looked at her intensely.

ho.. sun saathiya maahiya
barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan

main ret si, boond ka zariya tu
paa ke tujhe bheeg jaaun re..

(ABCD2)

Suddenly Pranati got up.She wore the watch.Reyaansh too got up from the bed.

Both were feeling embarrassed to face each other.

He covered his face with his hand in shyness.

Pranati:I am sorry.I was trying to take the watch and by mistake I tripped and fell over you.

Reyaansh:It’s ok Pranati.Sometimes it happens.

The embarrassed Pranati said ‘bye’ and walked out of the room quickly.

 

Reyaansh got ready to go to office.

He saw Pranati waving hands at him:Bye Rey..

Ishq hai....(Pavitra bhagya BGM for Reyaansh-Pranati).


Reyaansh:How come you are here Pranati?You had gone to college.Right?

Suddenly she disappeared.

Shamsher and Suhansini were standing before him.

Shamsher:Pranati?It’s me..are you blind?

Suhasini:Shamsher...

Reyaansh was embarrassed.

Suhasini:Shamsher..you did’nt understand?Our son was imagining his lovely wife Pranati.

Shamsher:What?

Suhasini smiled:Yes.

Shamsher smiled.

Reyaansh became shy.

Shamsher and Suhasini giggled.

Reyaansh walked away.

Reyaansh:Why I am hallucinating Pranati?I was not interested to marry Pranati.But now am I getting attracted towards her?

 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Prayansh had a forced arranged marriage. I loved their understanding. Sad that Reyansh got angry at Pranati for rejecting the honeymoon tickets.  I loved Shamsher appreciating Pranati for her dedication. Reyansh apologizing Pranati was sweet. Glad that Reyansh and Pranati became friends.

I guess Reyansh has started falling for Pranati because of his halucinations.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Ohh... it is on Pavitra Bhagya's story? 

A well written TS. 🤗 The concept and story movement were really good. 

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Posted: 3 years ago

thanks for commenting.

It's not based on Pavitra bhagya.it's a fresh story on PB  leads PraYansh


Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Ohh... it is on Pavitra Bhagya's story? 

A well written TS. 🤗 The concept and story movement were really good. 

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Posted: 3 years ago

thanks for the pm

Congrats on the TS

terrific update 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 1 


Fascinating Start

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Thank u very much friends.

This TS is ending here.Plz write ur favourite character n why u liked that character.Plz write ur favourite scene.


The edits credit goes to the unknown editors


Sun saathiya maahiya... Listen up my beloved, my soulmate...Part 2

 After a few days…

 

Pranati was struggling hard to tie the thread of her suit behind.

Reyaansh tried to help her by trying it.

She felt a strong sensation passing through her body.Reyaansh too felt something different when his fingers rubbed her skin by mistake.

tar jaaun tar tar jaaun
dariya ye tar jaaun jee
ishq ye paake main tera
nikhar jaaun ri…
(ABCD2)

Reyaansh finished tying it and tried to go out.

Pranati:Rey!Can I tell you something?I did not know that you were so nice when I married you.Now I can proudly say that my friend is a very nice person also.

Ishq hai....(Pavitra bhagya BGM for Reyaansh-Pranati).

Reyaansh became happy and emotional.

At the same time he was sad that she called him her friend.

Reyaansh thought:I wish you had addressed me as your husband instead of your friend.

 

Reyaansh and Pranati were in the garden watering plants together.Suddenly it started raining.So they came inside the house and sat down.

The water drops on her face were shining like pearls.Reyaansh felt that Pranati was glowing.Unknowingly he moved towards her.They both looked at each other passionately

 and came closer.

Their lips were about to touch each others.

piya bas teri main
ho.. chhu le to khari main
toh khari main khari main...
(ABCD2)

Suddenly they came back to senses and walked different ways.

Reyaansh:Oh no…what would Pranati be thinking about me?

Pranati:What was I going to do?Even Reyaansh too?Does he have feelings for me?

Pranati was confused.

 

After some time Reyaansh went near Pranati.Both did not look at each other.

Slowly Reyaansh looked at her.

Reyaansh:I am sorry Pranati.I did a big mistake to you by coming closer to you.Please forgive me.

Pranati looked at him emotionally.

Pranati:Was it really a mistake for you Reyaansh?

Reyaansh did not open his mouth.

Pranati:I don’t consider it a mistake as you are my husband.

Reyaansh was stunned:Means?

Pranati:I guess I have started loving you Reyaansh.

Reyaansh was surprised and his happiness had no bounds.

Ishq hai....(Pavitra bhagya BGM for Reyaansh-Pranati).


Reyaansh:I also love you Pranati.

Pranati was very happy.But she hid it and asked him:Really?Then why did you call our intimate moment a mistake?

Reyaansh:I thought you don’t love me and hate me for doing that.

Pranati smiled slowly.He also smiled.

Pranati:But I love you.

Reyaansh:I love you.

They embraced each other.

ho.. sun saathiya maahiya
barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan

Reyaansh:Can I give you something?

Pranati:Yes.

He gave her an envelope.

She opened it and I found a brochure of a honeymoon destination.She was surprised.

Reyaansh:What about considering our pending honeymoon?

Pranati blushed.

Pranati:Yes.

He embraced her again.

 sun saathiya maahiya

barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan
rang jaaun rang rang jaaun ri, haari main
tujhpe main jhar jhar jhar jaaun
hoon piya bas teri main
ho chhoo le to khari main

Reyaansh-Pranati went to a beautiful place for honeymoon.

They were more interested to look at each other passionately than to view the place they went.

 ho.. sun saathiya maahiya

barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan



main ret si, boond ka zariya tu
paa ke tujhe bheeg jaaun re..

Both were viewing the moon lit sky.

The romantic atmosphere evoked romantic desires in them.Reyaansh kept his hand on her shoulder.

Without taking a second she fell in his arms where she found heavenly happiness.

tar jaaun tar tar jaaun
dariya ye tar jaaun jee
ishq ye paake main tera
nikhar jaaun ri…

 

They danced the whole night with full of passion in the honeymoon destination.

piya bas teri main
ho.. chhu le to khari main
toh khari main khari main...


ho.. sun saathiya maahiya


barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan

He pulled her closer romantically:You look beautiful my wife..you are my Princess.

She blushed:You are my handsome Prince Rey.

They smiled.

He rubbed her cheek romantically with his nose making her blush.

 sun saathiya maahiya

barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan
rang jaaun rang rang jaaun ri, haari main
tujhpe main jhar jhar jhar jaaun
hoon piya bas teri main
ho chhoo le to khari main(ABCD2)

Years passed….

 

Reyaansh was lying on Pranati’s lap.They both were chatting.

A little girl came.

“You both did not get ready yet?It’s time for the party.Get ready fast.Understand?”.

Reyaansh-Pranati smiled:Ok Madam.

That was their bossy daughter Jugnu.

 

Reyaansh-Pranati got ready and came for the party.

There Jugnu played their photo collage on the screen.

They were surprised.

Reyaansh:We loved your surprise Jugnu.

Pranati:It was lovely.

Jugnu smiled:Thank you.Happy wedding anniversary Papa…Maa…I love you both.

Reyaansh-Pranati  hugged and kissed Jugnu cheerfully.

The parents of Reyaansh and Pranati smiled seeing the happy family.

The end


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Posted: 3 years ago

Reyansh helping Pranati to tie the thread was romantic. I liked the way their love confession to each other. The song scenes are romantic. Loved Jugnu's bonding with Prayansh.

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Posted: 3 years ago

thanks for the pm

nice update

great end

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 2 


Fabulous Update