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😅 Painful but will be worth bearing it😉🤭

Thankyou buddy 💚

Yes😛

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Waiting for your reply on other parts as well..😉

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PART 9 


Jalal sleeping peacefully on his bed when al littlefinger touches his cheeks..Yes it was Ahan..!

Ahan while passing from jalal's room saw his angel sleeping and went near his bed and after few unsuccessful attempts he finally climbed ont thebed with his little legs, touches jalal's cheek and reminiscencess something.


Flashback:

Ahan while playing was about to fall when Priya caught him.

Priya:- Ahan baby are you ok??

Ahan:- yeshh Mumma. (Nodding head )

Priya:- sweetie if you run like this ,you would have fallen.

Ahan:- Solly Mumma.

Priya:-  next time be careful .OK?

Ahan:- yeshh

Sunny:- yes Ahan if Priya di will not be there who will save you??(teasingly)

Ahan:- Mumma.. (Shocked hearing that if his Mumma will not be there to save him)

Priya:- shutup sunny. Don't tease him.!

Ahan he is just teasing you..

Ahan:- but if you are not there then (with tears in his eyes)

Priya:- Then..umm[thinks]🤔

Then Angel will save Ahan when Mumma is not with him.

Ahan:-  Angel?? Mumma who is angel?

Priya:- angel is a good person. He will save Ahan & always protect him and be a good friend of him.

Ahan:-Ooo .how will he look.? And when will he come??

Priya:- he will be innocent and cute just like my  Ahan. And tickles him


flashback ends



 Ahan:- Angle. My Angel and my new friend. (Smiling)

Due to ahan's continuous touch on all over face jalal's sleep gets disturb and seeing jalal waking up Ahan runs out of the room

Jalal:- I felt as if someone was here talking to me..(thinking)  maybe i was dreaming.

Jalal smile remembering previous night event how he and Ahan got close and became friends



 Flashback

Jalal:- what happen uncle you look tensed?

Raj:- Priya said Ahan that she will be back in night but just now I received a message from her that one of her employee got sick so had to postpone the meeting .And she cannot come till the meeting is done.!

Jalal:- ohh! But what's the problem?

Raj:- Ahan! He doesn't know about this and if he knows about it he will take entire mansion on his head.He cannot  Live without her,how will I

explain him ,he will get very upset.

Jalal:- Hmm..

Nilam who came to call them for dinner.

Nilam:- Raj, akbar(Jalal) come for dinner.

Raj:- nilu I have to tell you something.

Nilam:- what is it?

Raj:- Woh. Priya won't be able to come today, she ..   .. (Raj got interrupted hearing ahan's cry)

Ahan:- Mumma...

Little ahan ran into his room, closes the door, leans on it and cries profoundly.

Raj, Nilam and jalal came there.

Raj:- Ahan beta listen to us.

Ahan:- NO

Nilam:- Ahan dear listen to us, I will tell you why Mumma cannot come.

Ahan:- NO..Mumma lie..(with hiccups) Mumma  promised ..she come. Quickly.. But she ..no come ?and start crying)

Hearing the voice rest members of family also join them

Sanjay:- what happen mom ,dad ??

Raj and Nilam explain them what all happened

Sunny:- let's push the door and get Ahan out.

Sanjay:- are you crazy sunny? Ahan is leaning on the door ,if we push it he will be hurt

jalal in barely audible voice :- Uncle ,aunty is there any other door or window to enter in this room?

Nilam;- yes we have a balcony attach to this room. You can enter into room from garden ..

Jalal:- that's great. And leaves


jalal climbs the pipe and somehow manages

to enter room from balcony where he sees Ahan crying profoundly and goes near him  and sits beside him.

Jalal:- Ahan., see your angel is here. you can complain to me.

Ahan:- Mumma no come.. Mumma lie.

Jalal:- Hmmm.Mumma lie.This is very very wrong. Lying is bad , So Mumma is bad.

Ahan innocently :- Mumma bad??

Jalal:- yes, she lied Na ,so she is bad.!

And notices that Ahan is looking at him angrily when he said this.

Jalal:- do you know why your  Mumma didn't come??

Ahan:- No. (With nodding head)

Jalal:- when Ahan gets sick Mumma takes care of Ahan??

Ahan:- yes .Mumma good.

Jalal:- Mumma friend is also sick .so Mumma takes care of her. That's why she could not come!

Ahan after listening to it with attention

Ahan:- my  Mumma good! (With proud)

Jalal:-  no she is not.

Ahan:-  why?? (With raised eyebrow)

Jalal:- she lied Na! She is Bad.!!

Ahan:- Mumma help other, Mumma good.. no bad..NO SAY MUMMA BAD..OK ANGEL??

jalal:- ok.. so now can we be friends??

Ahan:- friends.. And hugs jalal.

Jalal:- then let's go have dinnu together?

And the duo had dinner, spent some quality time with each other. .


flashback ends




Meanwhile in hall Abrar, Abdul were

searching members of the family and didn't find them in the mansion

Jalal:- what are you both looking for?

Abdul:- good morning jalal..

Jalal:- good morning. What are...(was interrupted by Abrar)

Abrar:- good morning jalal.

Jalal:- good morning Abdul , good morning Abrar.!

Abrar:- but it was me  who wished you not Abdul.

Both Abrar and Abdul giggle seeing irritated jalal.

Jalal:-  Will you people answer me or shall we play morning morning. ??(both nod their heads in yes) thanks.I will repeat my question.What are you both looking for?

Abdul:- we are looking for sunny but we got to knw that everyone enjoying  in garden, so we were going there

Jalal:- I'll also join ..

Upon Reaching Jalal n gang sees everyone trying to cheer up little ahan

 

(Rhyme)

Old MACDONALD had a farm

E-I-E-I-O

And on his farm he had a cow( Raj is all dressed like cow and a cow

mask on his face)

E-I-E-I-O

With a moo moo here

And a moo moo there

Here a moo, there a moo

Everywhere a moo moo

(Raj picks Ahan and dance with him)

Old MacDonald had a farm

E-I-E-I-O

 Old MACDONALD had a farm

E-I-E-I-O

And on his farm he had a duck

E-I-E-I-O(Nilam all dressed like duck and face covered with duck mass)

With a quack quack here

And a quack quack there

Here a quack, there a quack

Everywhere a quack quack(Nilam kisses Ahan and dances along with him)

Old MacDonald had a farm

E-I-E-I-O

Old MACDONALD had a farm


E-I-E-I-O

And on his farm he had a horse

E-I-E-I-O(Sanjay all dressed as horse and a horse face mask)

With a neigh neigh here


And a neigh neigh there

Here a neigh, there a neigh

Everywhere a neigh neigh

Old MacDonald had a farm

E-I-E-I-O(keeps Ahan on his back and ride himself like a horse)

Old MACDONALD had a farm

E-I-E-I-O

And on his farm he had a lamb

E-I-E-I-O(sunny all dressed like lamb and a lamb face mask)

With a baa baa here

And a baa baa there

Here a baa, there a baa

Everywhere a baa baa

Old MacDonald had a farm

E-I-E-I-O(keeps Ahan on his shoulder and dances)

: Old MACDONALD had a farm

E-I-E-I-O

And on his farm he had some

chickens

E-I-E-I-O(billo -maid also dressed as chicken)

With a cluck cluck here

And a cluck cluck there

Here a cluck, there a cluck(everyone dances together)

Everywhere a cluck cluck

: With a baa baa here

And a baa baa there

Here a baa, there a baa

Everywhere a baa baa

With a neigh neigh here

And a neigh neigh there

Here a neigh, there a neigh

Everywhere a neigh neigh

With a quack quack here

And a quack quack there

Here a quack, there a quack

Everywhere a quack quack

: With a moo moo here

And a moo moo there

Here a moo, there a moo

Everywhere a moo moo

Old MacDonald had a farm

E-I-E-I-OOO...


 Ahan started jumping happily ,running & dancing around the garden

Abrar:- What a happy ,lovely and cool family.

Ahan to jalal:- angel you come with me to school?

Raj:- sorry but teachers don't know who angel is . so they won't allow him..sorry akbar (jalal as he changed his name) ..

Ahan:- don't be sad angel when Mumma will come we will go "together".

Jalal reminiscences his and Jo's conversation when he used to ask about how she would they take care of  their kid and her answer would always be "together". Together they would grow up their kid, send him school and their long  plans.

Seeing jalal's sad face

Ahan:- sad u ??

Abdul:- only one person can make him happy but she is not here.

Ahan:-  Oo. I will pray to god you meet her soon!

Abdul and Abrar :- Ameen

Jalal with tears in his eyes:- thank you so much..  you have pray for me now I will get her very soon

Ahan gives a quick kiss to his angel and leaves with Raj

Abdul:- So cute..any one can fall for this little kid.

Sanjay:-  what are you guys planning to do today??

Abrar:- not yet  decided. By the way Where are you going?

Sanjay:- I am going to office and sunny to college. If you don't have any plans then you can go to college with sunny and enjoy students life once more

Jalal:- college. Yes we can go their right guys?

Abrar:- yes , we will also get to see college of Malaysia.

 Sunny:- you can come but be careful of Rohit and his gang.They are devils .He never spare a new student.

Abdul:- is it so?

Jalal:- will see.


_____________________________


 Priya after completing meeting of an hour

Priya:- Phew! Done with meeting and now I shall meet my sweetie .umm .. let's surprise them.

Priya boards a flight to Malaysia..

After reaching Malaysia

Priya : Let's see what Ahan is doing 

( text  Sanjay who informs her that Ahan went to school.)

Priya:- ohh. I forgot its ahan's school time. And 2 hrs to wait so what shall I do??  Ummm...yeah I will meet my Friends and have a visit to college .

Priya hires a taxi to college and on the way texted her family about the same.

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PART 10


********ST.XAVIER COLLEGE******


A greeny campus with a well spacious,equipped with best technology's, a  well organized sports area, clean canteen with hygiene food,excellent staff and faculty.

There is a lot of hustle- bustle in the campus as it is the second day of college for fresher's .

Group of students discussions  in corridor, near parking area, library, canteen, class rooms etc.

A group of Senior's sitting near football court entrance


ROHIT'S GANG: (gang 1)


1. {vivan bhatena as Rohit agarwal

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2.Chetan hansraj as dinesh mehra

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3. Vatsel seth as DDL . He is known as DDL ,no one in the colleges knows the fullform of DDL.

DDL[  dhruv devi lal]

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4. Tanya Sharma as BDL , Sister of DDl..

Same like her brother no one knows her real name..

She is very arrogant and showoff her richness.. [BDL = babita devi lal]

Tanya Sharma to feature in upcoming episode of Laal Ishq


5. Jasmine avasia as sam aka samaira

Her real name is  reshma desai

Like DDL and BDL even she has hide her real name.. }

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 Dinesh to one of junior girl :- Hey baby, are you free tonight? I can come at your hostel to pick you

tonight.. and winks to her.

Hearing such cheap words from her senior the girl gets scared and runs away .seeing her running  Dinesh laughs evilly

Dinesh:- how far will you run little chicken with your tiny legs? Try your luck  dear because  tonight no one will be able to save you from

me..Hahaha

Rohit:-  leave her Dinesh, look at these

new chickens. I like the blue and Red one.

Dhruv/DDL :- mine is black one. she is so hot. I will enjoy with her and both of them laughs

Dinesh:- first I will enjoy my little chicken and then these colorful chicks

Babita/BDL comes there:- Hey boys what's up?

Rohit:- nothing sweetheart . we were discussing about dinner

Dinesh:- there's nothing in market and laughs

BDL doesn't understand the real meaning of their talks and brushes their words to a side. BDL is Rohit's gf and is not aware that he is cheating on her. DDL is not aware that his sister is in relationship with Rohit. She goes and sits beside Rohit and whispers in his ears

BDL:- Mr.Rohit yesterday night you forgot something important in my room.

Rohit in flirting way:- Don't worry I will take it tonight

Samaira/Sam :- hi guys.

BDL:- hi Sam

DDL:- hi Sam. hey Sam look he is the one who proposed you yesterday?

Pointing to one boy.

Sam:- yes( blushing at first then her expression changes to attitude)

He is the one who got rejected ( a hi-fi between Sam and BDL)

Sam to herself :- I  am waiting to become Mrs.Khurana..( smirks)

Dinesh:- Guys let's go to canteen.

Rohit and his gang move to canteen.


(Jalal, Abdul, Abrar, sunny reach college)

After reaching college

Sunny:-  I shall leave for my class ,I am getting late.

Abrar:- you may leave we will see the college..

Sunny:- OK then. Shall see you guys at home..Driver will pick you after college.

Abdul:- bye

(Sunny leaves)

Abdul:- let's first go to canteen , m little hungry.

Abrar:- I agree to this.

Jalal felt someone's presence and look to every direction but didn't find any known person.

Abrar:- jalal ...shall we go to canteen??

Jalal:- Aa ..yes come

(Glanced back once again and moved to canteen)


RAHUL'S GANG: ( gang 2)



1. Parth samthaan as rahul khurrana {Priya's bestie}

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2. Paridhi Sharma as priya malhotra.

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3. pankit thakker as atul joshi



4. Sudeep sahir as  ajay deewan

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5. Shivangi joshi as kaira singhania

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6. Dhristi dhami as   disha patel}

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Priya on reaching college  doesn't find any

of her friends and was about to go inside when a hand closed her eyes and few people surrounded her.

Priya:-  Rahul ??

Rahul:- absolutely correct and gave a friendly hug and so her all friends (this was the time when jalal felt someone's presence and look

around but because of Rahul and her friends jalal could not see her)

Disha:- m so happy that you are back.

Atul:- we missed you alot Priya.

Priya:-  even I missed you people.

Ajay:- did you get the gift which I asked you to get?

Priya:- yes

Kaira:-  and my lip gloss?

Rahul:- guys she went there for meeting not for shopping.

Accidentally Priya's mobile falls and she bend to pick it (the sometime jalal look once again back before going to canteen)

Atul:- let's go to canteen, m hungry.

Priya:- Me too.

And the gang moves to canteen..


: ~  In canteen ~

Rohit and his gang after having their breakfast & teasing people moved out when suddenly Rohit got push by jalal (near the garden area) who was

holding a payal of his Jo and was in his Jo land..


Jalal POV

After moving from parking Abdul and Abrar were busy in their talks while jalal was missing his Jo . jalal gets Jo's payal from his pocket and remember her..

Jalal:- I wish that god at least listen ahan's prayers


In his Jo land he didn't realise that he pushed Rohit slightly.

Jalal's thought of chain got broke hearing Rohit's voice

Rohit:- Hey you Stupid can't you see and walk or are you blind??(angrily)

Abdul and Abrar gets angry hearing this

Abdul:- it was just an accident.

When jalal interrupt to end the convo

Jalal:- I am sorry.

Rohit notices anklet in jalal's hand and snatches it from him

Rohit:- Anklet Haan? (smirks)

Dinesh:- Guess what , he likes wearing anklet (laughing)

DDL coming near jalal:- Are you a gay???😏

And the trio laughs..while Abdul and Abrar's blood was boiling in anger but jalal least cared about what he said , he was only bothered about The anklet which is the last memory of his Jo left with him & is now in hands of Rohit..

Abdul:- dare you speak a word about my friend ,then it will be your head and my hand

Abrar:- I will kill you

 Sensing jalal's silence and his all concentration on anklet made Rohit realize that it must be very important for him so he got an idea

BDL:- Are you guys new here??

Jalal:-  yes

Sam:- Oh juniors..that's what I thought because I have never seen  you people here..

Rohit:- Well well my little junior try to push his Senior and his friends try to argue with us ..

So they should be punished..ryt guys??

Sam & BDL :- yes Rohit.

Dinesh:- umm..u three should sit on your knees, hold your hands,bend your head and say sorry.

Abrar:- what??

Abdul:- I'll show him his right place.

And was about to move forward

Rohit:- do as we say or else you won't get your ankles back

Knowing jalal's feelings for anklet Abdul and Abrar kept quite and agreed to do as told (you know friends can do anything for you when needed)

 Dinesh:- do it quickly kids..

Having no choice left jalal, Abdul and Abrar bend their heads and was about to kneel down when a pair of hand stop them from doing so.

Abdul was stopped by Atul

Abrar was stopped by Ajay

And jalal felt a known touch on his shoulders when he raised his heads, his tears knew no boundaries and started to fall seeing the person who stopped him from being insulted...


 Priya's POV

Priya and her friends were in canteen when they heard few boys talking

Boy 1:- did u heard that Rohit  was pushed by a person

Boy2:- OMG.

Boy1:- and he is new here

Boy2:- now he is dead. Rohit won't spare him

Boy1:- come let's see this

Disha:- oh god . Now  that person will be torched by Rohit n gang 

Kaira:- we will see what he does with them. come guys

On reaching the spot Priya and her friends view the whole drama created by Rohit.. But when he asked them to bend and say sorry it irritated Priya to the core. seeing jalal and his friends bending Priya couldn't hold herself. She immediately goes and stop jalal from bending ..

Looking straight into his eyes she felt loneliness, hurt, depressed and what not..he was so helpless that he even got ready to bow and say sorry for a

Anklet??

Making jalal stand straight , looks into his eyes with a smile unknowingly.

Priya turned to Rohit with angry eyes

Priya:-  give him back his Anklet right now , right away..

Rohit :- oh my my look who is here ..the saviour..

Sweetheart you want me to return the anklet?

OK I will do as you say but you should be my for a night .what say??

Hearing this jalal's blood was boiling with anger ,before jalal could do anything Rohit received a punch on his face such that blood started oozingfrom his mouth.

.

Well you thought it was jalal who punched ????

No (Hehehe)

Its Rahul.!

 (Every girls dream. The most hottest boy in the college,

Bestie of Priya ,the son of owner of Khurana industry and the brother

of college's  trustee..yes St.Xavier college trustee is Arjun Khurana

the elder brother of Rahul..)

 Rahul punched Rohit such hard that he even

fall on the ground

Rahul:- Don't you ever repeat this or else I will chop your body into several pieces and will give to dogs as there breakfast!!

Priya:- I guess someone wants to say sorry. :(

Rahul makes Rohit stand holding his collar and indicates him to say sorry.

Dinesh:- behave yourself.

Atul:- look who is saying us to behave properly and laughs

DDL:- how dare you. And was about to go  near Priya when ajay stopped him

Ajay:- Do you want to get expel from college??

Knowing the consequences Rohit goes near Priya and says sorry.

Rohit:- Sorry

Priya:- not to me , to them and points finger at jalal, Abdul, Abrar.

Priya takes Rohit towards jalal and indicates him to say sorry.

Rohit:- m sorry

Priya snatches anklet from Rohit , takes jalal's hand and slowly keeps Anklet in his hand and closed it.

Priya:- never let your self respect down for little things..

Seeing Priya concerns jalal's one more tear fall to which Priya unknowingly wipe it off and smile to him

Priya to Rohit:- never tease others or else you will be expelled..

Muskan Kicks Rohit and goes from there with her friends..


Jalal after a very long had a touch of his Jo was so immensed that heforgot to stop her .

Abdul and Abrar were pale in shock as if they had seen a ghost.. They couldn't believe it..

Abdul:- who was she??

Jalal:- Jodha my Jodha.!

Abrar:- she is back..

Jalal with happy tears : yes..

Then they realized that she already left..

Jalal to himself :- no..I won't let you go again.

Abdul and Abrar:-  yes..

And trio started searching Priya

DONE..!!

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PART  11



Those longings ,waitings seems to be very difficult but when you get to see someone you wished and they disappear in just a bink feels like old wounds got freshed.

same here is the condition of jalal when he saw his jo after years and

 she disappeared like always but the fact is that it is truth that she is alive and not only him but even abdul and abrar saw her.


jalal couldnot hold himself and started searching for jo ...wait   HIS jo.


and after searching for about an hour he felt on his knees again devasted and defeated in his aim to get her back.


only he himself knows  how defeated he is  feeling right now.


knowing his condition both abdul and abrar assured him that this time they will get her back.


 jalal: No No No Not again..she cannot leave me again.i wont let her go this time.


she is mine and only mine and she should come ,come for me !


Abdul: jalal control yourself she is here that means we can find her soon.


abrar: yes jalal abdul is right.we saw her here  in college that means she is student .


abdul: yes and if she is student then she will come here tomorrow also, that means we can meet her tomorow.


jalal: if she doesnt come??


abdul: she will come..have faith.


abrar:come lets go home..


after so much of hesitation jalal left for home hoping to meet her as soon as possible.


(Song)

Pardesi pardesi jaana nahin


Pardesi pardesi jaana nahin


Mujhe chhod ke.. mujhe chhod ke (Repeat once) (Female)


Pardesi mere yaara.. vaada nibhana


Mujhe yaad rakhna kahin bhool .. na jaana (Female)



Pardesi pardesi jaana nahin


Pardesi pardesi jaana nahin


Mujhe chhod ke.. mujhe chhod ke


Pardesi mere yaara.. vaada nibhana


Tum yaad rakhna kahin bhool .. na jaana (Male)



Pardesi pardesi jaana nahin


Pardesi pardesi jaana nahin


Mujhe chhod ke.. mujhe chhod ke (Female)



Maine tum ko chaaha tumse pyaar kiya


Sub kuch tum pe yaar apna vaar diya (Repeat once) (Female)




Ban gayi jogan main ne preet ka jog liya


Na socha na samjha dil ka rog liya (Female)



Pardesi mere yaara.. laut ke aana


Tum yaad rakhna.. kahin bhool .. na jaana (Male)



Pardesi pardesi jaana nahin (Tu jaana nahin)


Pardesi pardesi jaana nahin (Re jaana nahin)


Mujhe chhod ke.. mujhe chhod ke


Mujhe chhod ke.. mujhe chhod ke (Female)



Bhul.. naa.. jaana..a..


Bhul.. naa.. jaana..a.. (Female)


Bhul naa jaana..o..ho.. (Male)



Har phal meri yaad tumhe tadpayegi


Main jaagoonga neend tumhe na aayegi (Repeat once) (Male)



Chhod ke aise haal mein jo tum jaaoge (Tum jaaoge)


Sach kehta hoon jaan bahut pachhtaaoge (Male)



Pardesi mere yaara.. mujhe na rulaana


Tum yaad rakhna kahin bhool .. na jaana (Female)



Pardesi pardesi jaana nahin


Pardesi pardesi jaana nahin


Mujhe chhod ke.. mujhe chhod ke


Pardesi mere yaara.. vaada nibhana


Mujhe yaad rakhna.. kahin bhool .. na jaana (Male)



Pardesi pardesi jaana.. nahin (Female)


Mujhe chhod ke.. mujhe chhod ke (Male)


(song from movie Raja Hindustani staring Amair khan and karishma kapoor)


link for video:- https://youtu.be/dkTReezvODM


Priya's POV:

who was HE?? why HIS insult was bothering me??


why HIS helplessness was making me  emotional?


why HIS tears were burning my heart?


why HIS every feeling was felt by me?


His condition was clearly felt and sensed by her but why? 


why  she feels so connected towards him?


why his tears and defeated eyes were flashing infront of him since she left that place.


why her heart longed to see him again ?why it wants to assure about his condition??


These questions will remain questions untill she  meet him again.


 priya's chain of thoughts were broken with her friends  push.


muskan: priya what happen dear?


priya: ahh,nothing yaar.


rahul: really pri?? because as far as i know you, you dont get so easily disturb except for ahan. but now it seems like you are worried for something. so now tell me and dont dare to hide a thing from me.


priya: actually am worried for that guy we saved from rohit and his gang.


kaira: do you know him?


priya: no kayu but still i want to know if he is ok .


atul: what ? this doesnot make any sense because you said you dont know him but want to assure if he is safe or not.


ajay: well well this happens only in few cases like  


 no 1.love at first sight.


no 2. crush.


no 3. may be you know him but dont remember.


rahul: my dear bro i know my bestie very well and i dont think its love at first sight or crush .


muskan: then only one option is left..


kaira: and that is you know him but dont remember .


priya: may be ..hmm..now leave it we came here to buy our textbooks so lets make it fast or else the shopkeeper will throw us out for just rooming .


And they get busy with their work


 atul to ajay : Do these books eat pizza,burger,fries??


ajay: what? 


ajay: look at these book bro they look so fat.how will i store this huge amount of information when my memory is only 1Gb and these books may be of 1zb.


ajay: dont worry as usual priya and rahul are there to help us in test(winks)


ahem ahemm..


 kaira: i wont let you people take advantage of priya's kindness.you better study or get ready for Vrial sir's punishment.


ajay: we will see.


rahul: guys we have purchased books so lets leave 


priya: yea its already late and i didnt meet ahan and i am dieing to meet my lifeline so lets go fast..


muskan: even me ..i will also meet ahan.


all others except rahul: we too


rahul: no guys..we have test so all of you go and study for tomorrow and

let  priya spend her time with ahan ,we will meet him tomorrow after college.


muskan:ok.


ajay: if that sadoo's(pet name kept by them for vrial sir) test was not there i would met ahan,but ok we will meet him tomorrow.


kaira: ok then lets leave..


and all the friends left for their respective homes.



on the way priya was so excited to meet ahan ,listen his voice, seeing his cute face kiss him and hug him ..


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jalal and his friends reached malhotra mansion and jalal went directly to his room not knowing what to do .


pacing from right to left and left to right  abdul and abrar thinking about how to find Jodha in such a big college.


they too like jalal have doubt whether she will come their again or not but to make


jalal feel ok they said it but now even they are tensed that it should not be a lie and a  false hope..


abrar: i think we should see jalal if he is ok.


abdul: what do you think?


abrar: we know that..


..



jalal while walking in his room slips off due to some creamy substance on the floor


and noticed that it is a piece of choclate cake.


and then he hears a silent chewing voice behind his bed and follows the voice.


and sees the most loving and heart melting view infront of his eyes..




ahan's  mouth covered with choclate and hands holding piece of cake ..


Image

for a moment he forget his tears ,tension and everything .not able to hold himself


jalal picked ahan in his arms.


ahan who was busy eating cake felt like lifted and saw his angel.


Ahan: angel you back..i miss you..you miss me??


jalal: yes i missed you cutie pie.(and kiss ahan's cheeks)


even jalal's face got  covered with choclates when ahan touched his cheeks with his cutie little choclate filled hands.


keeping ahan near him,his hug makes jalal feel like his wounds are getting heal.


this different kind of feeling can only be felt not said.


jalal and ahan's moments were disturbed by tap on his shoulder..


abdul: can i take ahan? 


jalal: yea.. (and gives it to abdul)


abdul: how are you champ?


ahan: good.


abrar: seems like both of you took choclate bath.hahaha..


hearing this both jalal and ahan look themself and smile sheeplessly..


abrar in mind: how lovely these two look together.


abdul in mind: after jodha's departure ahan is only one who was able to get a real 


smile on jalal's face.hope this smile never leaves.Ameen.


.voice:  ahan ahan...where are you?


ahan: nillu maa i here.


neelam: what is this ahan ,now i should change your dress again.


jalal:dont worry aunty,i will change his clothes.


neelam: ok..ahan did you pray today?


ahan: ohh..i forgot,i no pray means mumma no talk.


jalal: dont worry we will pray together and your mumma will not get angry.



jalal went to priya's room ,got ahan's dress but unfortunately  didnt see the photo frame of priya and ahan on the side table near their bed.


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the duo enjoyed their company splashing water ,jalal running behind ahan to get


hold of him and finally after sometime he finally managed to get ahan dressed.


jalal: so lets go to  pray.


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jalal and his friends offered his prayer and ahan too.jalal notice that ahan prayer was like them.


jalal to neelam: aunty he was praying like muslim i mean you people are hindu's na?


neelam: son we all came from same god and will go to same god.we have same rules ,restrictions , human nature and same blood but our way of  worship is different thats it and ahan like to do it so he  prays like you .


abdul: really? ahan likes it.


neelum: yes and he do even visit masjid ,and you know we even go to dargah , church,gurudwara  all such  places .


abrar: thats great..( neelam leaves as she need to prepare for dinner)


ahan who just now completed his prayer greeted everyone.


jalal: so my dear little one what did you ask from god?


ahan: two wishes.


abrar: and what are those two wishes?


abdul: let me guess umm choclates and cakes??


abrar: shutup up fatto.he doesnt always think about food like you..


jalal: guys quiet. so ahan what did you pray?


ahan( counting on his little fingers): number 1. mumma come fast to ahan.


number 2. angel  meet his  friend fast.


jalal confused with ahan's words ask him 


jalal: ahan who is my friend?


ahan: jooaaa.



jalal shocked with his answer ask ahan and came to know that his two devil


friends already said ahan that he misses  his friend jodha urf jooaaa as


 ahan couldnt spell name correctly .


jalal in his heart prayed to god if not his but alteast listen to ahan's prayer.



Not to make jalal  remember morning


 incident abrar and abdul diverted the topic asking silly questions to ahan and


that is when they hear sound of car and hearing it ahan shouted.


Ahan: mumma came mumma came..


and ran to hall ,jalal,abdul,abrar followed ahan to hall.

hearing sound of car all the members of family gathered in hall to meet their laadli


 priya.


priya who entered the mansion was taken into a quick hug by her bro sanjay who was


at entrance and then meet sunny both share a sister brother hug,and then she ran towards raj and neelam who missed her alot . and atlast she called ahan 


priya:Ahan baby where are you?look mumma is back.


ahan came running into his mothers arms and  both shared a long hug,


priya kissed ahan all over his face and even ahan kissed his mom.


priya:how are baby?


ahan: good.


priya: i hope you were a good boy and didnt trouble anyone.


ahan: no. i good boy. mumma you know i got angel.


priya: is it?(ahan nods in yes)


priya: where is your angel?can mumma meet  angel?


ahan nodding in yes and points his finger towards jalal...


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jalal who couldnt see priya's face as her back was facing him .


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priya turns to jalal...and they came face to face after a long time..


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silenced previled between them...it was as if everything was paused and no movements only stares between them..


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one was happy to she her again and the other was happy to see him safe.


one was lost in her and the other was confused with her same questions of why,what


how etc.


realisation hit both..jalal realised that ahan is his son,his blood.


priya realised that he is ahan's angel.


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breaking the silence ahan introduce his mumma to jalal and his angel to his mumma.


ahan: mumma (pointing to jalal) angel.


ahan: angel (pointing to priya) mumma.


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priya: you are the same person i have met in college right?


raj:do you know them?


priya narrates him the morning incident.raj who decided to not expand the topic asked her about her  journey.and priya explained him how she managed meeting and reached back.


 priya left to get fresh so that she can have dinner with her family..



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Awesome updates didu

Finally joja ka milan ho hi gya😃

Ahan is sooo cuteeeee❤️

Now see wht happens next

Bt how jo lost her memory❓

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Only one chapter left...

perhaps we then come to know about some mysteries 

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