Rudhita AU Fanfic: Roopkothar Aalo Chhaya [PART SIX AND SEVEN UPDATED]

Hola people, this is a multichaptered AU Rudhita fic dedicated to @Home786, @--Lalz--, and @Prit_007...  Rotten eggs and tomatoes are welcome.

Part 1.

Aniruddh had to attend this show and he thought, "What the heck?" 

Kaka is always making him do things he wouldn't dream of wasting his time on. He might be the eldest prince of Tulsipur and in Chandra Mahal the most pampered child. He might be the Gold medalist Barrister "Aniruddh Roy Chowdhury", but for his Trilochan Kaka he was his 'Sonai baba'. The child he has brought up with so much love that he never even felt the curiosity to know more about his Maa, who had died after the birth of his youngest brother, Batuk.

Someone was telling a story.... A story teller's show. What was Kaka even thinking? Aniruddh rolled his eyes, irritated.

***

And then the voice said...

"BAANJH HOON MAIN!"

Baanjh Hoon Main...

Ek baar Ganga ke ghat pe ghanto tak baithi rahi. Koi nahi tha wahan siwaye ek pagal ke. Woh bar bar badbadata aur mere sukoon ka lamha mere haatho se phisal jata. Jaane kya soch ke uthi aur usse puch "Kya hai woh jo itni besookuni de raha hai tumhe?"

Bola meri Zubiya iss ghat pe aayi thi use hi dhoond raha hu.... Use kuchh kehna tha mujhse wohi sun raha hoon. Suno kya kehti hai.. Kehti hai Banjh hai woh!

JHOOTH BOLTI HAI... Woh jab paudho ko chhu leti hai toh phool jagne lagte hai... Woh jab muskurati hai toh duniya chamakne lagti hai...

Toh BANJH kaise hui?

Main pandrah saal mein har raat use dilasa deta raha ke banjh nahi hai woh... Aur pandrah saalo tak woh samjhati rahi mujhe ke mohabatton ke aakdo mein aurat sirf mohabatte hi ginti hai. Par hisab ki badi kachchi hai woh har jhele huye zulm ke badle maafi khud hi mangti hai. Kya Banjh aisi hoti hai? Lekin solwe saal tak aate aate khud hi apne mayar se gir gayi! Apni dus saal chhoti sautan se nazare mila hi na saki... Apni dusri shadi ki pehli raat pehli raat jab uske kamre mein gaya, soch raha tha ab kaise dilasa dunga use ke banjh nahi hai woh... Par dekha toh lalten ki roshni mein apni almari ke kono se humari shaadi ki tasveere, apna walime ka joda, meri sherwani aur woh chand jo maine uske mathe pe sajaya tha!  Unhe saaf kar rahi thi... Pucha toh boli purani fasal ka bacha hua charah jala rahi hu... Nayi fasal achhi ugegi phir... Aur tumhari filon ki parten ulat rahi hun, kahi koi badi zaruri baat reh na jaaye... Dimag bhi banjh ho chala hai mera... Maine socha mafi maang leta hu, Amma ne zabardasti ki thi, yeh bahana kar deta hu... Are mere ghar mein tumhari jagah koi nahi le sakta, yeh keh deta hu.

Thoda roke, phir khush ho jayegi, akhir mohabbat hai use, mujhse... Aur mohabbat mein hisab ki badi kachchi hai woh... Maine jeb se ek anguthi nikali aur use de di, aur kaha, "dekho tumhare liye bhi wohi laya hu, jo nayi dulhan ke liye laya hu, pehli raat ki muh dikhai mein..." Boli haan bohat mohabbat haina tumhe mujhse .... Isliye main khush tha. Subah jab aankh khuli phulo ki sej par, toh dhyan bhi nahi ayaa ke... Mere khilaye bagair jo khati nahi, mere kahe bagair jo dil ka har haal samajh jati hai, mujhse puche bagair jo saans bhi nahi leti, woh kali khokli si uss raat ke iss paar aayi ke nahi. Ik shor sa macha aur kuchh dhundla sa kano mein pada... Laash mili hai Zubiya ki Ganga ke ghat pe! Aur uske kamre mein jab pohoncha toh lohe ki karahi mein, purane adh - jale dastavezo mein likha tha "Asfandyar Miya Baap Nahi Ban Sakte"... Jise lal rang ki siyahi se kaat ke meri Zubiya ne likha tha.. Mere Asfand toh mukammal hai!

"BANJH MAIN HOON".... "BANJH HOON MAIN!!!"

***

The pin drop silence in the open theatre, actually remained silent.  Aniruddh's heart suddenly came to stand still, as if realizing the big pit and a sinking feeling. A story so ugly, a love so cursed and yet it had a truthful ring to it, a stark reality to face that more often than not it was the closest to heart relationships which makes you helpless and desperate.

Then the atmosphere rang with the applause, and the storyteller a young girl in her mid teens maybe, entered the stage and bowed to the standing ovation and then suddenly she turned and looked straight at him. And Aniruddh forgot to clap mid action...

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Face Claim:

Pravisht Mishra as Aniruddh Roy Chowdhury

Coloured by @spacebutterfly

Tripti Dimri as Bondita Sengupta

Coloured by Me

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INDEX

Part 1 - Page 1

Part 2 - Page 5

Part 3 - Page 6

Part 4 - Page 10

Part 5 - Page 14

Part 6 - Page 16

Part 7 - Page 16

Briti 🤗

First of all thank you so much for dedicating this starting piece of your write on Rudhita 

Means alot sista ❤️🤗

Introduction was impressive 😳

Beautifully penned the part 1...that small skit was so emotional and could feel the pain of being helpless 😭 you emoted it so well 😃

You are so good with your wordings Briti 🤗

Loved the way you stopped " Her just one straight look at him and he stood dumbstruck seeing her" 

Now can't wait to read the next part and their interaction 😳

Eagerly waiting ❤️ update soon Briti 

Hola people, this is a multichaptered AU Rudhita fic dedicated to @Home786, @--Lalz--, and @Prit_007...  Rotten eggs and tomatoes are welcome.

 First of all, thank you Britu for dedicating this piece of excellence to us. It's really happy to read such a great work. 

Part 1.

Aniruddh had to attend this show and he thought, "What the heck?" 

Kaka is always making him do things he wouldn't dream of wasting his time on. He might be the eldest prince of Tulsipur and in Chandra Mahal the most pampered child. He might be the Gold medalist Barrister "Aniruddh Roy Chowdhury", but for his Trilochan Kaka he was his 'Sonai baba'. The child he has brought up with so much love that he never even felt the curiosity to know more about his Maa, who had died after the birth of his youngest brother, Batuk.

Someone was telling a story.... A story teller's show. What was Kaka even thinking? Aniruddh rolled his eyes, irritated.

"Sonai Baba".... Yes ARC is really a gem to be addressed as so. And Kaka loves for Anirudh is really a valued gift than Gold. You have shown the pure and selfless relationship of Kaka and ARC... 

***

And then the voice said...

"BAANJH HOON MAIN!"

Baanjh Hoon Main...

Ek baar Ganga ke ghat pe ghanto tak baithi rahi. Koi nahi tha wahan siwaye ek pagal ke. Woh bar bar badbadata aur mere sukoon ka lamha mere haatho se phisal jata. Jane kya soch ke uthi aur usse puchha "kya hai woh jo itni besookuni de raha hai tumhe?"

Bola meri Zubiya iss ghat pe aayi thi use hi dhoond raha hu.... Use kuchh kehna tha mujhse wohi sun raha hoon. Suno kya kehti hai.. Kehti hai Banjh hai woh!

JHOOTH BOLTI HAI... Woh jab paudho ko chhu leti hai toh phool jagne lagte hai... Woh jab muskurati hai toh duniya chamakne lagti hai...

Toh BANJH kaise hui?

Main pandrah saal mein har raat use dilasa deta raha ke banjh nahi hai woh... Aur pandrah saalo tak woh samjhati rahi mujhe ke mohabatton ke aakdo mein aurat sirf mohabatte hi ginti hai. Par hisab ki badi kachchi hai woh har jhele huye zulm ke badle maafi khud hi mangti hai. Kya Banjh aisi hoti hai? Lekin solwe saal tak aate aate khud hi apne mayar se gir gayi! Apni dus saal chhoti sautan se nazare mila hi na saki... Apni dusri shadi ki pehli raat pehli raat jab uske kamre mein gaya, soch raha tha ab kaise dilasa dunga use ke banjh nahi hai woh... Par dekha toh lalten ki roshni mein apni almari ke kono se humari shaadi ki tasveere, apna walime ka joda, meri sherwani aur woh chand jo maine uske mathe pe sajaya tha!  Unhe saaf kar rahi thi... Pucha toh boli purani fasal ka bacha hua charah jala rahi hu... Nayi fasal achhi ugegi phir... Aur tumhari filon ki parten ulat rahi hun, kahi koi badi zaruri baat reh na jaaye... Dimag bhi banjh ho chala hai mera... Maine socha mafi maang leta hu, Amma ne zabardasti ki thi, yeh bahana kar deta hu... Are mere ghar mein tumhari jagah koi nahi le sakta, yeh keh deta hu.

Thoda roke, phir khush ho jayegi, akhir mohabbat hai use, mujhse... Aur mohabbat mein hisab ki badi kachchi hai woh... Maine jeb se ek anguthi nikali aur use de di, aur kaha, "dekho tumhare liye bhi wohi laya hu, jo nayi dulhan ke liye laya hu, pehli raat ki muh dikhai mein..." Boli haan bohat mohabbat haina tumhe mujhse .... Isliye main khush tha. Subah jab aankh khuli phulo ki sej par, toh dhyan bhi nahi ayaa ke... Mere khilaye bagair jo khati nahi, mere kahe bagair jo dil ka har haal samajh jati hai, mujhse puche bagair jo saans bhi nahi leti, woh kali khokli si uss raat ke iss paar aayi ke nahi. Ik shor sa macha aur kuchh dhundla sa kano mein pada... Laash mili hai Zubiya ki Ganga ke ghat pe! Aur uske kamre mein jab pohoncha toh lohe ki karahi mein, purane adh - jale dastavezo mein likha tha "Asfandyar Miya Baap Nahi Ban Sakte"... Jise lal rang ki siyahi se kaat ke meri Zubiya ne likha tha.. Mere Asfand toh mukammal hai!

"BANJH MAIN HOON".... "BANJH HOON MAIN!!!"

" This is such a gem to read. Loved your musings here Britu. The poetry has imbued enough accolation for a reader to imagine a beautiful journey of Rudhita. In the first para, the Bondita's wordings for mother and her mother's love for plantation, beautifully explained. Second para, mostly implied to ARC's feelings and longings to his little not so little wife. The wandering of ARC, you have picturized in a diligent way.. In the last para, Bondita's monologue through ARC's imagination, that sound really good to read. You have clearly potrayed their journey and emoted their emotions beautifully. Your musings is par out of excellence. Enjoyed reading it... Loved it❤️

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The pin drop silence in the open theatre, actually remained silent.  Aniruddh's heart suddenly came to stand still, as if realizing the big pit and a sinking feeling. A story so ugly, a love so cursed and yet it had a truthful ring to it, a stark reality to face that more often than not it was the closest to heart relationships which makes you helpless and desperate. 

" A selfless ARC and his story out of his words is a solace to read for any reader"... 

Then the atmosphere rang with the applause, and the storyteller a young girl in her mid teens maybe, entered the stage and bowed to the standing ovation and then suddenly she turned and looked straight at him. And Aniruddh forgot to clap mid action...

" This play is one of the best play I have ever come acrossed with your beautiful wordings and versatile way of explaining things... This is really superb. A reader's heart want to read more of it... Excellency with noble musings goes to you Britu...❤️

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Unresd..... 

Do write more baccha... Your work is such a masterpiece...👏 

Loved to read more...👍🏼

First of all thank you so much for dedicating this beautiful piece of writing for us.❤️

As I said I loved the title. The way you described Ani in the introduction scene was just like the prince of Roopkatha. 

Your choice of words and the sentence you used 👏 Some lines  like mere sukoon ka lamha mere haatho se phisal jata, pandrah saalo tak woh samjhati rahi mujhe ke mohabatton ke aakdo mein aurat sirf mohabatte hi ginti hai, story so ugly, a love so cursed and yet it had a truthful ring to it, a stark reality to face that more often than not it was the closest to heart relationships which makes you helpless and desperate, has all my heart. ❤️❤️❤️

The play part is amazingly penned down👏I can feel the emotions in that particular scene.  I got some hints what is in store for us in next update. I got idea about the plot. The plot is interesting. 

All in all it’s a splendid one. Don't make me wait long for the next part. 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Res

I'll bem back after some time.

Waise the Bong title is nice and I would like Sonai baba instead of Bukai Baba.😆

Okay I changed it for you. Now it is Sonai Baba, now happy? Once I get enough reviews I'll post the next part. I've completed writing it. 😆

Originally posted by: --Lalz--

Briti 🤗

First of all thank you so much for dedicating this starting piece of your write on Rudhita 

Awww Lalz, you're too sweet, just like Roshogolla.  I would like to correct you, this entire story is dedicated to you three not just the intro portion.

Means alot sista ❤️🤗

Your comments mean a lot to me too. ❤️🤗 BTW this is my first try at multichaptered fics. I only write one shots so wish me luck please. 😳

Introduction was impressive 😳

Thank you so much for your kind words. I tend to go overboard. 😳 So I'm glad that you liked this.

Beautifully penned the part 1...that small skit was so emotional and could feel the pain of being helpless 😭 you emoted it so well 😃

You are so good with your wordings Briti 🤗

It was my ode to another forever and ever favourite of mine, AsfiYa of Yakeen Ka Safar. Because yeah, my write-ups are incomplete without them. 🤪🤪

Loved the way you stopped " Her just one straight look at him and he stood dumbstruck seeing her" 

I thought the ending was very typical, but glad that you loved it. 😆

Now can't wait to read the next part and their interaction 😳

Eagerly waiting ❤️ update soon Briti 

My part 2 is saved in drafts. Once I get enough reviews, I'll post it too. But it can become irregular after that, because I am very lazy.🤣

Originally posted by: Briti1107

Awww Lalz, you're too sweet, just like Roshogolla.  I would like to correct you, this entire story is dedicated to you three not just the intro portion.

Aww ❤️ indeed sweet of you to dedicate entire story for usim being emotional now 😭

Your comments mean a lot to me too.  BTW this is my first try at multichaptered fics. I only write one shots so wish me luck please. 

Best of luck Briti 👍🏼 you gonna rock it 😳❤️🤗

I thought the ending was very typical, but glad that you loved it.

I loved it so much... making me eager to read the next part.! 

My part 2 is saved in drafts. Once I get enough reviews, I'll post it too. But it can become irregular after that, because I am very lazy.

Don't worry..I will be back at you still you give us a update 🤣

Originally posted by: --Lalz--

Ab sada hua bhi hoga toh bhi jhelna parega Behena. 😈

Originally posted by: Briti1107

Okay I changed it for you. Now it is Sonai Baba, now happy? Once I get enough reviews I'll post the next part. I've completed writing it. 😆

Thank you so much for this. I really didn't liked Bukai Babu 😆Sonai Babu is better one 👍🏼So sweet of you Britu for changing it for me . ❤️

Btw unresd it ❤️

Originally posted by: Prit_007

First of all thank you so much for dedicating this beautiful piece of writing for us.❤️

As I said I loved the title. The way you described Ani in the introduction scene was just like the prince of Roopkatha. 

Your choice of words and the sentence you used 👏 Some lines  like mere sukoon ka lamha mere haatho se phisal jata, pandrah saalo tak woh samjhati rahi mujhe ke mohabatton ke aakdo mein aurat sirf mohabatte hi ginti hai, story so ugly, a love so cursed and yet it had a truthful ring to it, a stark reality to face that more often than not it was the closest to heart relationships which makes you helpless and desperate, has all my heart. ❤️❤️❤️

The play part is amazingly penned down👏I can feel the emotions in that particular scene.  I got some hints what is in store for us in next update. I got idea about the plot. The plot is interesting. 

All in all it’s a splendid one. Don't make me wait long for the next part. 🤗❤️

Sweetheart this is one of the sweetest comment I received. You, Shaheen Di and Lalz have always been my constant support so I had to dedicate my first ever multichaptered fic to you three. ❤️🤗

Ani indeed is the prince from our childhood tales. 😊

Ahhh so you got a hint han? Let's see what direction this story takes. 😉

I'll post as soon as I get some satisfactory reviews.  Because this is my first ever venture at the multichaptered arena. Infact part 2 is saved in the drafts. But Quality >>>>>>> Quantity for me, always. 😆