Originally posted by: shirin04
wowowo the sheer brilliance makes me wanna cry 🙈🙈🙈🙈it's beautiful
Thank you so much dear Shirin. Here's the tissue box for you incase you cry and sending loads of Roshogollas and Sandesh your way to cheer you up. Stay tuned for more updates. 😒
Thank you so much luv, how should I address you? 🤗
I'll update soon.
Call me Priya/ pri/ Parul what ever suits u😆
Parul thank you so much for taking out your time and commenting on my FF. It really means a lot to me. Thank you. 🤗
Hola people, this is a multichaptered AU Rudhita fic dedicated to @Home786, @--Lalz--, and @Prit_007... Rotten eggs and tomatoes are welcome.
First of all, thank you Britu for dedicating this piece of excellence to us. It's really happy to read such a great work.
Part 1.
Aniruddh had to attend this show and he thought, "What the heck?"
Kaka is always making him do things he wouldn't dream of wasting his time on. He might be the eldest prince of Tulsipur and in Chandra Mahal the most pampered child. He might be the Gold medalist Barrister "Aniruddh Roy Chowdhury", but for his Trilochan Kaka he was his 'Sonai baba'. The child he has brought up with so much love that he never even felt the curiosity to know more about his Maa, who had died after the birth of his youngest brother, Batuk.
Someone was telling a story.... A story teller's show. What was Kaka even thinking? Aniruddh rolled his eyes, irritated.
"Sonai Baba".... Yes ARC is really a gem to be addressed as so. And Kaka loves for Anirudh is really a valued gift than Gold. You have shown the pure and selfless relationship of Kaka and ARC...
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And then the voice said...
"BAANJH HOON MAIN!"
Baanjh Hoon Main...
Ek baar Ganga ke ghat pe ghanto tak baithi rahi. Koi nahi tha wahan siwaye ek pagal ke. Woh bar bar badbadata aur mere sukoon ka lamha mere haatho se phisal jata. Jane kya soch ke uthi aur usse puchha "kya hai woh jo itni besookuni de raha hai tumhe?"
Bola meri Zubiya iss ghat pe aayi thi use hi dhoond raha hu.... Use kuchh kehna tha mujhse wohi sun raha hoon. Suno kya kehti hai.. Kehti hai Banjh hai woh!
JHOOTH BOLTI HAI... Woh jab paudho ko chhu leti hai toh phool jagne lagte hai... Woh jab muskurati hai toh duniya chamakne lagti hai...
Toh BANJH kaise hui?
Main pandrah saal mein har raat use dilasa deta raha ke banjh nahi hai woh... Aur pandrah saalo tak woh samjhati rahi mujhe ke mohabatton ke aakdo mein aurat sirf mohabatte hi ginti hai. Par hisab ki badi kachchi hai woh har jhele huye zulm ke badle maafi khud hi mangti hai. Kya Banjh aisi hoti hai? Lekin solwe saal tak aate aate khud hi apne mayar se gir gayi! Apni dus saal chhoti sautan se nazare mila hi na saki... Apni dusri shadi ki pehli raat pehli raat jab uske kamre mein gaya, soch raha tha ab kaise dilasa dunga use ke banjh nahi hai woh... Par dekha toh lalten ki roshni mein apni almari ke kono se humari shaadi ki tasveere, apna walime ka joda, meri sherwani aur woh chand jo maine uske mathe pe sajaya tha! Unhe saaf kar rahi thi... Pucha toh boli purani fasal ka bacha hua charah jala rahi hu... Nayi fasal achhi ugegi phir... Aur tumhari filon ki parten ulat rahi hun, kahi koi badi zaruri baat reh na jaaye... Dimag bhi banjh ho chala hai mera... Maine socha mafi maang leta hu, Amma ne zabardasti ki thi, yeh bahana kar deta hu... Are mere ghar mein tumhari jagah koi nahi le sakta, yeh keh deta hu.
Thoda roke, phir khush ho jayegi, akhir mohabbat hai use, mujhse... Aur mohabbat mein hisab ki badi kachchi hai woh... Maine jeb se ek anguthi nikali aur use de di, aur kaha, "dekho tumhare liye bhi wohi laya hu, jo nayi dulhan ke liye laya hu, pehli raat ki muh dikhai mein..." Boli haan bohat mohabbat haina tumhe mujhse .... Isliye main khush tha. Subah jab aankh khuli phulo ki sej par, toh dhyan bhi nahi ayaa ke... Mere khilaye bagair jo khati nahi, mere kahe bagair jo dil ka har haal samajh jati hai, mujhse puche bagair jo saans bhi nahi leti, woh kali khokli si uss raat ke iss paar aayi ke nahi. Ik shor sa macha aur kuchh dhundla sa kano mein pada... Laash mili hai Zubiya ki Ganga ke ghat pe! Aur uske kamre mein jab pohoncha toh lohe ki karahi mein, purane adh - jale dastavezo mein likha tha "Asfandyar Miya Baap Nahi Ban Sakte"... Jise lal rang ki siyahi se kaat ke meri Zubiya ne likha tha.. Mere Asfand toh mukammal hai!
"BANJH MAIN HOON".... "BANJH HOON MAIN!!!"
" This is such a gem to read. Loved your musings here Britu. The poetry has imbued enough accolation for a reader to imagine a beautiful journey of Rudhita. In the first para, the Bondita's wordings for mother and her mother's love for plantation, beautifully explained. Second para, mostly implied to ARC's feelings and longings to his little not so little wife. The wandering of ARC, you have picturized in a diligent way.. In the last para, Bondita's monologue through ARC's imagination, that sound really good to read. You have clearly potrayed their journey and emoted their emotions beautifully. Your musings is par out of excellence. Enjoyed reading it... Loved it❤️
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The pin drop silence in the open theatre, actually remained silent. Aniruddh's heart suddenly came to stand still, as if realizing the big pit and a sinking feeling. A story so ugly, a love so cursed and yet it had a truthful ring to it, a stark reality to face that more often than not it was the closest to heart relationships which makes you helpless and desperate.
" A selfless ARC and his story out of his words is a solace to read for any reader"...
Then the atmosphere rang with the applause, and the storyteller a young girl in her mid teens maybe, entered the stage and bowed to the standing ovation and then suddenly she turned and looked straight at him. And Aniruddh forgot to clap mid action...
" This play is one of the best play I have ever come acrossed with your beautiful wordings and versatile way of explaining things... This is really superb. A reader's heart want to read more of it... Excellency with noble musings goes to you Britu...❤️
Unresd.....
Do write more baccha... Your work is such a masterpiece...👏
Loved to read more...👍🏼
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Thank you so much Shaheen Di. 😳 The first meet up of hero and heroine done. Let's see aage kya hoga...
So when we will get the next update?
You have me hooked to the story, I am too intrigued and you left us a cliff hanger. Their eyes met and then what....
Shit I tend to push people to update their work.. I am quite irritating at times like that please don't mind me😆
Originally posted by: blackhole
So when we will get the next update?
You have me hooked to the story, I am too intrigued and you left us a cliff hanger. Their eyes met and then what....
Shit I tend to push people to update their work.. I am quite irritating at times like that please don't mind me😆
I don't mind it at all. Infact I push people to leave reviews, because I wanna know the thoughts and interpretation of my readers. 🤪 I've just completed my school projects. I'll update in awhile. But can you tell me why CLASS XII is such a pain on the 🤬 and then douse it in COVID-19 situation and make it even more pathetic. 😡
Originally posted by: Briti1107
I don't mind it at all. Infact I push people to leave reviews, because I wanna know the thoughts and interpretation of my readers. 🤪 I've just completed my school projects. I'll update in awhile. But can you tell me why CLASS XII is such a pain on the 🤬 and then douse it in COVID-19 situation and make it even more pathetic. 😡
Oh my! Girl you are talented👏
I remember when I was in school. Well did had many issues beside the the study part which was the major. I miss my school days. Life is so beautiful even with exams and lots of nagging from parents.
U know what, take your time, and give priority to your studies, it is best time to make up your future brighter.
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