mere behana : A NEW STORY ff name given to ff story from the begining

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Posted: 6 months ago

Im with a  new story

It is arnav and khushi but in a differentway

It isa brother and sister relationship

Where a brother is a mother and fatherof a his little sister and he will do everything for her happiness

He build a empire for her  and heis a rich.and powerful he protects his sister from all the evils and hardship

Let us see tehbeautiful bonding betweena humble yet strong brother with naughty sister.and her life

A new story looking for name...

 

A distant place a boy is sitting there holding a little girl inhis lap

Why  it happens to us

Whose is that person

Why he killed his father  and why his mother begged...

and why the person killed both

and then he looked at the girl in his lap she is sleeping peacefully...

she didn't know that right know theyu are at ...funeral placeand she did not know that .

he feared when she open her eyes and asks for their mother howcan he bring their dead mother and father.

At that time a hand on his shoulder

Aditya beta...

He turned and said...

Maasaji aap...

Yeha...

Haa beta tume yeha se lejane aya huu.tum akel e pari ko kaisesambalogi...

Masaji aap, hamere papa ke ache dost hay auyr aap ke parivaar nehumko bahut madad koi...

Ab muje apni zimmedarie ko samjanee hay

Ab mere pari ke liye mein hi maa huu aur papa bhi

Mein pari keliye who parents banuuni

Aur haa...mere pari ko koi takleef nahii aungi...

And he took his sister and stand upon...

Shasi mehra looked back at a boy who is at the age of 8 and yetready to take ther esponbility to take care of 1 yr old hisbaby kid sister.

He looked at the sky and said

God why u had done...

 

On the other side of a place

A place named lucknow...

Look what have u done how can u do these cheep act

Ur mistake destroyed a happy family

U never understand emotions u want money u married me for moneyright

Ok im giving all this to u but cannot be a with us as im goingto live with my mother and my family

U live with this property and with ur mistress...

Good bye mr...arvind mallik

That day ratna malilk took his 6 yr old daughter anjali and 4 yrold son.

And the boy turned his eyes to the person who is seeing them inmoist eyes...

 

The story started

With a lady with her daughter and son.

Where as a 8 old boy with his sister...

The unique journey of two families

But the destiny planned for the four people

And theone person who is happy with the papers...

The property for which the story started...

The property where the story started

The property where the best friends ar eturned to be enemies.

Where the entire story started...

The place named sheersha mehel...

The placewhere the existent,will be stared

The placed...

Shoudlb e right full belongs to...

Aditya gupta/////////////////////////////////////

And his life and his breath

His little sister and his beloved daughter of ...mr sujal guptaand kashish gupta...

Miss khushi kumari gupta where she is pariof his brother...

Aand the other part belongs to arnav mallik now he is arnavsingh raizada...

How come love cross the boundaries

How come love struck.the threads.

Let us see how the life goes on

 

 

Her e guys sri is coming with new ff...

I didn't' decide the title yet...

But haa

 

Ok now

As it is ff

So

Aditya Gupta...owner sole properties head of  guptahotels,industries and most important gupta textiles...

A t athe age of 28 he is heart throb of every one...but he livesfor only person in his life that is his sister...

Actor:of courser my fav gurmeet chowdari...

Khushi kumara gupta:sanya irani...

Anjali singh raizada ...she is arrthi of punar vivah

Where as arnav singh raizada the same

But ratna singh raizada...she is...priya of bade ache lagthehoo...

And Aryan singania...best friend well wisher and best freidn tokhushi he will do every thing for khushi he always treats as...his kid sisterand best friend business partner to aditya...botha re very close friends...

And khushi calles him jaadu ghar

Where Aryan calls her as princess...

And naina triwedi best friend and well wisher for khushi worksat aditya s pa and pro...

Guys Aryan asmohammand iqbal khan

And naina as...paaki from tumari paaki...

Where raizada family contains

The same old

Akkash singh raizada...

Nanda kishore singh raizada

Devyani singh raizada...

All these are same as ippknd...

Payal mehra doctor by profession...and she is humble and kindhearted girl...

And garima and sashi mehra their parents always try to levelbest to help their best friends children...

But failed...

See howlife is going to uphold...



part 1-6: pg 3

part 7-14 pg 4

part 15-20 pg 5


part 21 contd



Next day all are preparing for thefashion show alla re very much exited

Not more then the butterfly...nextday morning butterfly woke up tofind the lion whose room is beside her doingexercise and catching lot of attention but forget his world on seeing themorning beauty because of the dress she is wearing she is wearing traditionalred dress adbn bangles...

And a smile asking someone theaddress of mandir...

Asr shocked she always wear longskirt s and tops or else tops with leggings and look very much young where asshe is wearing the tradional dress how many faces did she have she came backafter sometime...s

She is truly indian in everysense...

After that they prepared for theshow where as the dress is deviating the mind and heart of ASR.after shanayasdrama he really feel tired he know shanaysd type girls but he know he ne vercrossed his limits but still

After sometime

He got the call and everyone isfor lunch.

He ordered food and he saw apacket for khushi on seeing that she screamed and took and eat the jelaibis all.he surprised that who is the person on the line knows each an every details ofthe girl...

His doubts increased...

Bbut he know s he couldn't get theanswers

Beczuse butterflty is still angryon him.a

But when he listened to thetalk  he felt happy

 

Edited by srilu_123 - 6 months ago
Posted: 6 months ago

Thread:1 1-20



part 21

Aditya quitehappy as his project is doing well

But in mindhe is thinking of anjali why im thinking of her is certain things in her whichattracts me a lot what is it gudiya will anlayse things very easily but Idon;'t what to do...

On the otherhand arnav is like out of world

He don'tknow what to do

At thatnight party started for first time khushi is notinthe mood to enjoy the party

She is missingin the party...

She isroaming around in the party

Alonesuddenly she felt someone is following him indeed some was there

She lookedand find herself at the door when a hand closed her mouth and the  personabout to touch

Why don'tyou suit yourself for someone of ur personality a sound came the guy turned tofind angry ASR  looking at him as he is going to kill the person with hishands

The same hedid he kicked the person so hard that the person fell on the ground backwards

Khushi don'tknow what to do

She couldsay sir ,,,,,,,,,,,are u ok the lion asked her but the sudden dazzle eyes areshocked and surprised...yes..

He broughther down and made her drink water and the phone started...

He got angryat the time

But theangel turned sweet to the number

Jiibhayyu...

The voiceshocke  d the person is her brother ASR inside danced...

Haa bhayuuim fine toh tere awaz ko kya huwa bhayya...

Kuch nahiigudiya im fine...

Edited by srilu_123 - 6 months ago
Posted: 6 months ago

part 22

Why isbhayyaso worried im so tensed something is his mind I need tofind itout

Then she remembered what hadhappened the befor e week

The week started as she and sanjanapreparing for the designs and checking for last minute preparation but suddenlyall office got alert and somegirls whispered on seeing the Nikhil ahuja...thewomanizer of the world

He is business partner and holdshipin AR shimla companies he is one of the vend or

So he has some politicalbackground...

Khushi is unaware ofthese as theperson laid eyes onher

But sanjana did warned her but shedidn't notice as she wanted to finish her project and leave the india the ASRbehavour did a lot of changes in her she don't wan t to get problem,s

To her brother because she knows herbrother well...he will get worried as she don't want that'

Nikhil try to misbehave with herwhere she gave her level of dose with him in her style but the person take itanother way he thought shemay be acting but as soon as he tried another timeshe slapped him

That day he taken the revenge as shedragged to the other side and try to misbehave with his friend where ASR takenthe things

He had made him to hospitalll

He don't know what is fate going todo

But his mind is saying that ASR isnot going to leave him...

He is scaring to the heights...

Posted: 6 months ago

part 23

ASR istalking to someone on the phone he is saying very angry I want him and I wantto see him on the roads take every amount for him,...

He need to suffer and buy all the shares of the company

Turning back to find angry Khushi looking at him,,,,,,,,,,

He said ...khushi are ok

How could you mr raizada do u know how it would will be when oneday every thing of ur world change

How u experience when every thing lost for one person's mistakeand everything lost and no one is there for u and no one to take care

It is very difficult to start from the beginning mr raizada.itis very hard

How could u punish anyone s family of only one person donemistake

Mr ahuja done a mistake then u already punished by sending tothe hospital then why are u takingthe revenge on the family no one even knewabout it...

Why should his family suffer why...

The question face strikes ASR not for the beauty...

He thought is she is real..how can be so pure ...

The person tried to destroy her but she is thinking of thefamily

How strange/////

Ok I will sure I will not harm the family

Ok mr goel he may bankrupt make sure his family will get whatthey deserves...

Give the job or some amount to his wife on behalf of AR...

With that he cut the phone

Thanking u sir

One more things sir

I don't want media to know.she is little but hestating how canbe so beautiful in small things

He is completely lost in her

Sir.

What s wrongwith him every time he sees me like a aliennstraight from mars...

Ohj come on.

On eproblem is solved let sconcentrate onanother...

With that she stromed outside

Leaving ASR in his thoughts...

Posted: 6 months ago

part 24

She is lookingat the sky she knows she is rude to him she did not want it

But what to doone day pain broke out

Due to oneperson mistake they losed their loved ones...

That day herbrother confessed his life story infron t of sunaina mana,...as she is consoledhim.

That dayaccidently their mother and father death anniversy where he do the pooja onbehalf of his sister...

Where khushiwant to giv e surprise to his brother so as a habbit she hide herself inbrother s room...but surprised to see sunaina mam...in brother s room andbrother was in traditional dress they both are in white...she wanted to knowthe reason for the dress code.but later on the entire truth revealed and shegot hurt why his brother never shared the story to her but later on realizedthe life of her brother and the pain anguished inside him.it is very hard.butstill she have him,...so she decided that she will wait until her brother goingto share...so she kept silent but bear her pain inside her

But today someother family of her fate no she never let it happen...

On the otherhand...aditya felt something change in his gudiya .she always hides herpain,.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Is it somethingwhich gudiya happened to be hiding something... he will find it out...

 

On the otherhand.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

ASR findsomething...the number details...but it must be a private number..and privateinternational number only few people can afford.but he used his power to getthe contact and shocked to find the name of the person where the number isregistered the mighty aditya gupta...one more shock.and the number isequallysecured that means...is any link...the n one day he remembered theaudi...it is new...he then enquired about the audi.and also aditya hoteldetails and the second room adjoining is khushu.

By that time hereceived a call from aditya.

Hello mrASRsorry to disturb.u.

Surprised ASR.thebrother is so soft and sister is dyanamic...no sooner she loves her brothervery much...everyone will love such a soft charcter...

It is like weneed to post pone our meeting I had an work pending upon.and ucan say aboutbusiness ethics.but for me the work is more than my life...and I assure u imgoing to finish the target or any other compliances from u with outany.problem.

Mr gupta...letme say...u r going be in delhi or outer place...

No mr ASR imflying to simla.

Simla...sourwork is in  simla.but  ...then  I had a solution for urproblem

Means ...meansmr gupta im in simla for some work.so we can have the meeting here...

With that hecut the phone.

But little ASRknow that for his mistake...

His angel isnot going to spare him...

What happensnext u need to wait for next update...

Posted: 6 months ago

part 25

Finally hegot the details after giving a dead threat to aman he gave theinformation,.,,,,,,,,,

Then he smiled and open the laptop find his beautiful butterfly smilingpicture ...

Then adityawith smiling face...and simple suit...

And thenanother photograph hot and handsome person smiling at his butterfly he felt ajelous pang in his heart the n he got information of aditya along with Aryansingania...

And thecloseness...then he open the file to find the information of Aryan...and hisbutterfly...

He smiledwho will not like his butterfly...howcan he forget the first day when she isdanci ng in rain...whirling around...her skirt flowing...

Then how hemade his office like heaven.with her smile.

He is busyin his laptop not seeing the other things...as he cam eout from the washroom...without shirt.water dripping from his air...and he is busy in laptop.

And he sawthe person at the door step whose eyes is down.

Then helooked at her she never let her eyes down what s the...he gave a complete look

The yellowsunshine skirt of her with twinkle top on it...hair flowing ...beautiful...

But why sheis at the door...andthen he saw one more girlthe house keeper gaping at him.

Then herealized and look himself...then he smirked...that ...

The angelwhich he want to look at him...looking down...where as someother enjoying theview...

With a shothe drew his butterfly to his room and shut the door...

Khushishocked.

She came tothe room to discuss about the client specifications...as it is last minuitepreparation

She knockedthe door but somehowthe lio n is in his world...she tapped the door but noresponse so she pushed.to fin d the shirtless position...

She alwayslistened to the comments of her colleagues the hotness of mr raizada...but shedidn't care...even after every girl employee eyes on him...

Buttoday..in live...yes no doubt he is hot...but.

She isconfused now he drag her to the room...

Whereasarnav enjoying the confuse look on that sweet face...the angelin his hands...

He want theworld to stop at the moment...

Not knowingthere is s asuprise.waiting for him.

His dicall...

He want tostop.

But khushiseeing the number

Sir ur di...

He lefther...

Posted: 6 months ago

part 26

Aditya is in thoughts.heodon't know why some weird feeling that something is going to happen but hedon't want to hurt his pari as she is the sole reason for his life.and on the

other hand he dont know what is hisfeelings towards anjali

but he cannot accept anyone in his life ashe don't want 

relation which creates any kind of riftbetween his and his gudiya s relation...with  the thoughts he get down...to the sihmla

lavanya reached sihmla he want to insultkhusthi but not knowing the background of the khushi/

so she planned something dirty...

and she had already made the arrangement...

on the other hand ASR in his dreams...andhe open the window to see khushi checking on last minute preparations...

she is very happy as first project she isgoing to handle

she love to design...it creates some sortof satisfaction to her..

on the other hand t o ASR disappoint thathis di is also coming to simhla

he don;t know what to do

he didn;t hate her but he closed the eyesshe is week and emotionally week...so he always want her to be secure.but shealways want to be alone ...

he really don;t understand her...

on the other hand gupta princess isworried...as her brother didn;t called/

and this never happens every day her startswith his waking call and good night call...where he sings their mothers lori tomake her sleep...any where...he will do the same...

she is the apple of his eye...

Posted: 6 months ago

part 27

Next daymorning...ASR woke up  to find the room is very neat and look at hissister first time

She h lookedhappy...and some sort of confidence as all the pains washed...

And helooked at his mother and also nani.they all happy...unknowingly he huggedthem..

And arrthisurprised after many years he did this...

She smiledunknowingly...

On the otherhand.aditya reached the hotel...

He taken theinformation and he reached to the room which is

Adjacent tothe room... ...

The managerquickly called ASR...

He saidok...

On the otherhand khushi is walking straight don't know some unwanted feeling...then she seeher hand the bruise by the tight gripping ion that weird person who try tomisbehave the incident changed her behaviour she cannot afford to say to hisbhai right she knows him he will be hell r worried...

Last timeshe remembers when she got hurt in trekking...even though it was a small falland she hardly injured he immediately fled to the place ofcourse Bandar is alsothere...he surrounded by the doctors team to see...he didn't move ainch...untill she opens her eyes...

His brotheris everything...

And for himshe is everything...

She want agirl in his brother life to took care of him not in viceversa...because hisbrother live for her...he doesn't care of himself...

She wants agirl...who love him for his open heart and kindness not the gupta empire...

Many timesmany families ...ty...freinds to sunaina maa..thrown their daughters tohim...some try to fix him also/

Mainly thatragini...khanna...she is daughter of mohini khanna friend of suniana maa

Literallythrown to her bhayyu...knowing the soft nature and innocent on his ownways...polite nature...he didn't say anything...ut she find.very first...itselfwhen she tried to feed the negitives regarding her ...she and Bandar showed thedoor...they done enough drama for the... entire life...

She didn'tsee suddenly bump with an elderly lady...

She mutteredsorry..s

Then aarthilooked the gods beautiful creation...the hazzle brown eyes...the girl is modernbut her   screaming to be traditional and cultural.

Its ok...ialso didn't see u.

She gaven one of the most gorgeous smile...and cute...

Then khushilooked at the lady.

Her eyes arechocolate brown remembering.someone ...the intense and angry filled...nowlittle bit

Differenteyes are in different world...

Nevermind...but then she observed her...

She is notwearing any signs of manglasutra or vermilion on her head but she is beautiful

Arrthi aapyeha hooo.

There is aolder lady of 60 s appeared and gave a smile to her daughter and also thechirpy girl...who resembles a butterfly...

She smiledand khushi gave a Namaste...

At that timeher phone rangs

Haa sanju...

Haa yaarcoming

What ASRalready at the place

ohmy godthis lion sure going to have me as break fast no lunch...m

what he eatsif he continuously eating human beings...

anywherekhushi no need to worry just  be e strong...ok...now take a deep breathand count the numbers 1 -10 and remember your cute sweet and lovely handsomebhayyu u will forget everything...

ok

not lookingat the terrific and yet smily faces of the two...

waise whathappens to his favouvrite punch bag...aman...

she reachedthe venue...where ASR is talking to aman is really busy.she started doing thework,,

at the sametime anjali along with arrthi and Devyani...all enter the office...

at the timea car enter the premises ...as the greek god attire came down taking the modelsthey forgot to breathe.

They cantstand the ASR handsome is one striking they couldn't help but stare.but thehandsome...is just unbelievable.

Anjalishocked to find the female starring ofcourse.who else...

He enter theaura...

Wherekhushi...talking to sanjana...

And allsurprised...

Where ASRturned to find the female attention.even aman also...jawdropped...

As theperson quietly stand and tapped the shoulder

And saidsuprise...

Then khushiturned and he hugged and said miss u emy gudiya

Where khushisaid...bhayyu aap...yeha...

Everybodyshocked to find aditya gupta hugged khushi...aa

Kyaa baathai gudiya app pareshanu lag rahe hay

Aap nebreakfast nahii kiya.

Then he ranso fast...

And broughta plate of food.

Pata haygudiya it sis bad...u should take care of urself

Yehi wajahhay                                      ...

Ki mein apkoekpal se bhi apne aap se door nahi i kartha.kyonki aap kabhikabhi naa socareless...ho apni cheeso mein...

But khushispeechless...

Then shechecked his face and forehead/

She screamedbhayyyu apko bukaar hay.

Then adityalooked around...

Nahi.woh.

Kya apkosardi suit nahii karthe...aap late night flight liya hay na...aur sure...

Aap ne kuchnahii khaya because late night kuch nahii kayaa.

Aur yeha anekeliye aur muje dekh ne ke khayal mein aap ne subha subha coffee bhi nayeepiya..hoga..

She draggedhim to the cafeteria...sherdered a one middle coffee with two sugar blocks...

Gudiya.chup...ek dam chup mein careless hoo yeh kyat ha...

Mein tumemiss kar ha tha/////tere chinta ho rahii thi...

Aur apko isshalat mein dekh kar merea kya halat ho rahe hay.aur woh kya tha/////////

She said intears...

That s it...no tears.im sorry apni bewakoof bhayyu maaf karo...usne phir se apna wadatoda..amma aur bauji ko wada kiya that ki mein unki pari ko chotnahiipachunga...lekin.

Kabaddar ekaur baat bole to...

Shehugged...

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