MayRa TS: For An Eternity (Complete: Epilogue pg-12) - Page 12

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Posted: 4 years ago

You made me cry...


Thank you Tiara...  the epilogue gave a positive feeling after the way that you finished the last part of the story.


I also will always remember this whatever the way Beyhadh 2 ends.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: tournesol

Thank you so much guys 🤗 I am sorry I am not able to reply individually right now, as I am out on a family outing. I'll reply as soon as I am back. ❤️

plz keep writing on mayra🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: katheriene

Beautiful epilogue❤️

It was very emotional😭

The kids were adorable, Manvi & Rishi😊

Rudra is not in touch with his family only Rajeev & Nandini are his family

The last part was emotional😭

Waiting for more such write ups

Thank you Katheriene 🤗 It means a lot!

Sorry for making you too emotional. I felt very bad for MayRa myself when I separated them in the story. 💔 Hope we get a happy ending in the show at least.

Sure, would continue writing. 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hi there! I am Mandy and I enjoyed reading ur TS ⭐️ it was tragic but probably the kind of ending I would imagine for the show! Loved how u kept Rudra’s character intact. Would look forward to reading more from u 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteariya

I just couldn’t stop my tears😭

Mayra have twins but maya wasn’t there to take care of their kids😭

Maya always dreamed abt loving husband & their little families

she got adorable kids but couldn’t rise them🥺

I’m glad rudra didn’t keep touch with his monster families👏

Awe little manvi & rishi we’re so cute & rudra love their antics😃

Rudra & kids really miss maya so much😭

It was really emotional ending😭

Thank you for your lovely comment, Ariya. 🤗 and sorry for making you cry.

MayRa deserve a happy ending, but somehow Rishi dying at her hands made me too sad to write one.

Glad you enjoyed reading my story. 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: kuhelidebbarma

Brilliant👏

Such a tragic ending😭😭

I really got emotional at the end😭😭

I can already imagine Rudra's reaction when he said "Please don't go" 

😭😭😭

You should write a book👍🏼👏🥳

Thank you Richie 🤗

Sorry for making you emotional and sad. I secretly wish the show has a happy ending. ❤️

@last line: I better keep my sapne within my aukat 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: tournesol

Thank you so much guys 🤗 I am sorry I am not able to reply individually right now, as I am out on a family outing. I'll reply as soon as I am back. ❤️

We will only accept a steamy hot OS as apology 😳😆🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Milalal27

😭👏thank you for this. ❤️


Sad ending but lovely

Thank you Milalal 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: tournesol

Thank you Richie 🤗

Sorry for making you emotional and sad. I secretly wish the show has a happy ending. ❤️

@last line: I better keep my sapne within my aukat 😆

Why sorry

No I love tragic endings😆😆

Next time keep writing emotional stories😆😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Rara22


Beautifully written! The reality is bitter but not every story has a happy ending. And that is something we have to learn to make peace with......because death is the only reality in life.....everything else is merely a Maya, an illusion. 


I watched Jalebi the other day and the story also did not have a happy ending but a realistic one.....which was good. 

Thank you Rara🤗

Glad you liked it! Death seems a major theme of BH2, and ever since Rishi's death, the hopes of happy ending seem dimmer. It was difficult for me to separate MayRa between life and death. 💔