One Shot (OS): Mini's Mission Manofying Arya - Page 2

Originally posted by: zalima

Pehle toh ...

You deserve🌹🥀🌷🌷💐🌸🌸🌺🌺 and not 🍅🥚😆

Because it's just beautiful 👏

Typical MiYa moments

I could imagine the scene plus unke voices ke saath 👏

You have kept their mannerisms, style in each and ever frame .  i liked how you explained about shaadi and convo there was 👏 

Haye pyaare MiYa❤️

And beech beech mein  Miya ka comic , nautanki 😆 🤣perfect .

ArNe scene 

The way Neil explained🤣 

Bechari Arya 🤣  kuch samajhi nahi hogai🤣

Yet again you kept the style👏

I could imagine them 

And the last scene 

beautiful closure . typical MiYa 

Neil neeharna 

You should keep writing more 🤗

This was very good .

Beautiful

Aisa laga maine epiode dekh liya

aww. thank u so much for this beautiful comment..   

i tried to write in that way only ki actual pure scenes unn k voice k imagine kr ske..  nd original onscreen dekhne wala feel aaye.. puri feelings k sath.. 😆 yahan post krne se pahle mene 5-6 bar khud hi read nd imagine kia..

well this was my 1st tym seriously..! 😉 nd i glad u all lyk it..

thank uh.😃

Originally posted by: Sushdvj

Wow first os of season 2🤗

I still remember we both join  pb forum on same day

sorry i don't remember that (short term memory 😆)

You asked others to write os for season 2 also 

yeah that i asked bcz i actually want it.. 😳

But beautiful thing is that 

First os is written by you only 🤗

it just happened, even i was shocked when i started writing it.. 

And wow it's amazing

thank uh.. 🤗

Dialogues of everyone written so beautiful 

I am feeling like waching original episode 

You should keep  writing more 

Lol.. Let c.. MiNeil ka nasha sir chadh k bol raha hai, kya pata nxt romantic os try kru mai.. 🤣

Neil ka explanation  about marriage 🤣

bahut struggle kia uss dialogue k liy🤔

Our  chutanki and  veerbalika ❤️❤️

❤️

Thank uh for the lovely comments 😃

Originally posted by: Sushdvj

Even I feel same thing as you mentioned 

🌷🌹 flowers from my side also🤗

Typical miya moments 

Even I could imagine the scene with their  voices 

About marriage 👏

MiYa ka ruthna manana 

Closure me balcony scene 👏

Everything just amazing ❤️

Thank uh dear for the comments 

😃🤗

Originally posted by: Rishrabh

Wow its awesome 😳⭐️ I can imagine all the scenes, u right it beautifully!! But what happened after Neil came upstairs!! Is their a second part?? 

i think uh missed reading this last line..

"Both the sisters happily enjoying their moment, Neil admired both of them standing near the stairs then went to sleep. "

Ri8 now I've not planned for the second part of this os. I stopped dere as a happy note.

ANd thank uh for likes the and comment

😃

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

It's very good .All the 3 characters were well written .You had kept the essence of the original characters .We could connect to it very easily.

thank uh so much for the lovely compliment... 

😃

Originally posted by: SRJKiShraddha

Loved yours one shot , you kept essence of all the ckt and loved your detailing.

Keep writing more 👏

thank uh so much dear.. 

will try to write next on MiNeil 😉

Originally posted by: Sakshi2104

This os is fan--freaking--tastic

Keep writing please!!

thank uh so much .. 😃

Thank uh so much all of uh for the likes and lovely comments.. 😃 🤗

 wow it wasn't only beautiful but simply awesome 👏

First one shot😲 and you done incredible job in it 👏

But not done you didn't PM me 😒 

I wasn't coming to PB forum as I was busy with my own work but you 😭

Anyway I can let it slid cause you made my day by such a outstanding heart warming OS 😃

Arya Neil And Mini the trio was awesome now I get idea how I should write the Epilogue of my own story 😆

Nevertheless just say you penned down the dilouges and kept the simplicity of plot very nicely 😎

Neil is chef a passionate chef hence his explanation included Food 😆 that was funny but cool forget Arya first I got confused 🤣 what he meant by all this but at end I did understood 😊 

Haw Mini slap Arya 😲the little bundle not done she made her cry 😭 Arya is so little hence it was easy to pacify her 😳 and she's so adorable her antics are very intriguing 😆

you wrote so nicely that you don't deserve 🍅🍅🥚🥚 but you deserve 👌👌👌👏👏👏👏👏💕💕💕💯💯 

Write more and more 😳

But don't forget to PM me 😊

Take care all the best for upcoming work👍🏼

Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

 wow it wasn't only beautiful but simply awesome 👏

First one shot😲 and you done incredible job in it 👏

But not done you didn't PM me 😒 

I wasn't coming to PB forum as I was busy with my own work but you 😭

Anyway I can let it slid cause you made my day by such a outstanding heart warming OS 😃

Arya Neil And Mini the trio was awesome now I get idea how I should write the Epilogue of my own story 😆

Nevertheless just say you penned down the dilouges and kept the simplicity of plot very nicely 😎

Neil is chef a passionate chef hence his explanation included Food 😆 that was funny but cool forget Arya first I got confused 🤣 what he meant by all this but at end I did understood 😊 

Haw Mini slap Arya 😲the little bundle not done she made her cry 😭 Arya is so little hence it was easy to pacify her 😳 and she's so adorable her antics are very intriguing 😆

you wrote so nicely that you don't deserve 🍅🍅🥚🥚 but you deserve 👌👌👌👏👏👏👏👏💕💕💕💯💯 

Write more and more 😳

But don't forget to PM me 😊

Take care all the best for upcoming work👍🏼

Thank uh thank uh 😃

Sorry dear, I didn't PM it to anyone, as I was not sure people will like it or not, bcz some members r not liking PB2,  so that's y I didn't send the PMs to anyone. I don't want -ve or bashing comments in my 1st os only.. Hope u understand that. 😊

nd I'm happy that, i can make ur day a good 1. 😃

Although, i've already given u the idea for ur epilogue, u can add Neil to in it, Arya ka jiju bana hi do i'll b super happy to read it.. excited for the epilogue, hope u'll update it soon.

nd thanku for the best wishes.. will surely PM uh if by chance i write any next OS.

After writing this OS, I get to knw, how much effort nd lyf experience it required. Writing is also not an easy task.  I've completed in 2 days nd night, continuously on the thinking mode.

😃☺️