Forgiveness-Ss ( Chapter 10 updated on page 18 ) 10/02/2020 - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago

Update next soon please it's amazingπŸ’•πŸ˜

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update 

Waiting for next part

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Posted: 4 years ago

Superb 

Update Soon 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Are bahut jyada mazedar tha main raat ko iska wait krte krte hi so gyi thiπŸ˜†

Isliye uth kr hi parhne lagi 

Mjhe to bhaut maza aya bt bs next part ka wait nhi ho rha plz jaldi krdena update πŸ˜›

Lekin guddiya itni jaldi Aj ko maaf na kre bahut mehnat krwana jindal sahab se😈

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice story

Wating for next part

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrihika

Awesome one ❀

Jindal parivaar deserves this 

Itni jaldi gaddan maaf nhi karegi sabko 

Durga saru ko abhi bhi akkal nhi aayi 😠😠

And it's not a torture u really write so well πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

U penned every emotions very well 

He he Thankyou! glad u liked it.

hi-fi

let's see as I wanna keep this story to minimalistic parts.

Kutte ki pooch tedhi ki tedhi.

Really,but it is as we all had to bear all this in show and here too,hence I said.

Which emotions and whose?

I mean which part you liked?

Sorry but uttawli me

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Akshananju

Chudial ke band baje diya Guddan ne🀣

HayπŸ˜”?

And now payback time Mr Akshat Jindal πŸ‘

So obviously jo boya wahi kaatna padta hai

Guddan sahi ke leaving Jindal house πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘  I don't want her to forgive anyone so easily espdvjk Akshat he should have tough time getting her back πŸ₯³

Let's see I hope it will be worth of your expectations.

Durga dayan ka band bajede AJ πŸ€ͺ

Let's keep Durga away from this story

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Posted: 4 years ago

No yahaan itna drama nahi hoga,sorry but itna drama yahaan likha toh this story will get stretched too long.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Minisanjukta

Update next soon please it's amazingπŸ’•πŸ˜

Hey! thankyou!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

He he Thankyou! glad u liked it.

hi-fi

let's see as I wanna keep this story to minimalistic parts.

Kutte ki pooch tedhi ki tedhi.

Really,but it is as we all had to bear all this in show and here too,hence I said.

Which emotions and whose?

I mean which part you liked?

Sorry but uttawli me

No sorry πŸ€—πŸ€—

Guddan's emotions 

I really liked the last part where guddan was leaving the jindal bhawan 

I really want ki guddan aise coldly behave krke jindal bhawan chod kr jaye