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Posted: 5 years ago
#51
Thanks Ayur that you liked it.
I am happy that you could visualise Meejay  

Am happy i could bring some bliss 
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Posted: 5 years ago
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@ Uma you always make my post so lively and lovely .
You picked it right 👏 yes the hurt of words are sharper than the weapons 

Thanks so much dear  . 

You made my bonus into a damaka by those gifs and loving the kid awwwhhh such a cute kiss...  😳

Happy i could bring that smile and solace  

Loads of love 
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thank so much Smita Sharma for your lovely words in Twitter
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Just finished the post leap story(decade but not decayed). Great story amazing writing. You should send the link to meejay & the makers. Don't know about the show writers,as they don't care about our feelings. But I'm sure meejay will like & appreciate it as I think they wanted too a happy& beautiful ending rather than the screwed ending after working for so long in the show.     
 
Start was good, the jailmate called Chakor lucky as she released before time without knowing how unlucky she is as she was imprisoned for 10 long yrs without doing any crime, lost everything. 
       
 Part 1: I had no doubt that the 40 yrs old handsome man was actually Raghav bt I shocked to read about two boys  How it possible that he got married to someone else? But I knew you will not let it happen, when the man encouraged the kids to run and looked at the picture with tears I realized the pic must be Chakor's, mother of the kids (they are adorable), so he is waiting for Chakor, his love, the reason of his breathing. Loved Chakor rememberd Suraj on the way to Delhi (it reminded me too the sukor's Ishk ka safar). 

Part 2: How Chakor got the job of an event coordinator it was quite realistic.Good to see Raghav became a businessman & his working with the labours make him different from the others, the name of the caretaker Shyam lal reminds me the famous bolly movie sholey's Ramlal Jokes apart . 

Part 3 : It makes me cry the fb story(seems like I was watching an old Bollywood movie) of Raghav is so excellent & you make it so realistic. Felt sorry for the kids who lost their parents bt happy to see Raghav took their responsibility. He is such a nice person. Loved how he went back to AZ & freed from bhanu & Co, handed over to the villagers. Good to see that truth is revealed in front of Anjor & she realized that how wrong she was. Get teary eyes to see mother daughter Milan. You've always focused on every little things. I wish Anjor's foster parents should be punished as love for child made Kabita selfish & Alok's love for his wife made him helpless, but both of them made Chakor's life more miserable. 
     
  Part 4 : The way you show the reconciliation between Chakor & Anjor it's quite realistic & emotional moment. I like she doesn't want Chakor to forgive her as she isn't worthy of her forgiveness and decided to stay alone as her punishment (actually it's a punishment for kavita too) Most of the time they stayed away from each other, so their relationship hasn't been strong enough from Anjor side , I think this is the reason she always misunderstood Chakor. You make me feel some sympathy for Anjor though I could never connected with her. Liked the Raghav - Anjor convo. 

In part 5 : I liked how destiny brought Chakor to her cockshot, so happy to see Rag-kor reconciliation,their conversation, me too was so much emotional, teary eyed but a happy one. The dialogues were so perfectly apt for them specially that one after so many questions of Chakor, Raghav's heart touching reply "I've just started to live,  my heart has started to beat after seeing you". Just . Then filling her maang,the grand wedding in front of all, everything was . 
I can visualize meejay in the scene. How I wish Vj come back and we can see the moment actually on the screen. The cherry on top is another twin. Indeed not foursome but awesome. 

It's not possible to implement the previous sukor or Rag -kor story at the present situation as the leap already happened but they can at least follow this story if they want to. Thank you for giving us the pleasure. There can't be a better end of the story.

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Overwhelmed . Thanks a lot 
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Posted: 5 years ago
#54
Thanks Sumi, a sweet update. The reaction of Raghav and the boys was so cute.
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Originally posted by: meshmesh

Thanks Sumi, a sweet update. The reaction of Raghav and the boys was so cute.


Thanks so much Mai😊

Happy you liked the cute musketeers. 


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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thanks Smita for your comment on Twitter
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Wow the bonus indeed a lovely one. How do you think these things? The ears piercing of the little angels, and the whole drama make me all smiling. Raghav is so cute and softhearted  who can't bear the pain of his angels. Nobody will believe that this person has endured how much pain in his body, in heart. The twin brother are also very adorable. You have created such a sweet moment of Rag-kor happy family. These small sweet moments give happiness in our life.

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Thanks so much 
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thanks Girls for always encouraging
And to answer Smita, how I think, Well I dont... 

I visualise and imagine MeeJay in it and just pen down my feelings.


Its the obsession and the feeling for them be it Sukor or Ragkor which ebbs us 
right??


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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumsukor

Sorry for late reply
In my culture rituals are lengthy streching many days
After exhaustive traveling of 2 days I am at my house & setting the things
Beautiful update
Loved the route you took for Anjor,  good decision of  punishing herself
The mother daughter reunion was painful😭
Finally Chakor saw Raghav
Ayansh saw Chakor as well😊

PART IV

 

The kids packed their bags to set off for the trip...the trip which will bring a major turn of events.

They were excited but were given so many instructions by daddy to which they were nodding their heads.  They were to leave by noon to reach by night stay behind in the dormitory in the College campus and start the day with the culturals and games to be followed by the cleanliness drive.

Raaghav instructed the school van driver to drive safe and also gave his number to be called and said that he will pick his sons after the cleanliness drive.  Though he wanted to go with them he could not due to business meetings and parents were not allowed too.

With heavy heart he waved and kissed the boys good bye and waited till the van left his eyesight.  He was feeling very very weird and could not sleep that night though the boys called him after reaching Delhi from the van driver's mobile.  

Chakor looked over with her other staff to check the kids and as they were tired and sleepy ensured they were taken care off.  The boys were sleeping as they were being lifted by the college hostel students.  She told the staff that she will see them during the games session as she was not into the cultural side.

The boys were thrilled at the arrangements, Aayansh participated in the debate about how parents love is important to children's growth.  He stood in the debate.  Arjun was ready to go for his games session.

Chakor was in her tracks with her goggles and cap as it was hot and the children were given caps.

The children were made to stand in line in the auditorium after the culturals...their names were read out... When Chakor walked in she greeted the children and said that she is their event co-ordinator and said you all can call me mam and my name is Ch...by the time there was an announcement over the loudspeaker for the children to walk to the play ground.  While Arjun and other eight kids were in the running race, Aayansh was sitting far away in the tent where the rest of the children were made to sit.  Aayansh asked the one sitting beside him what was mam's name while the other said he couldnot hear as the loudspeaker was on. He was then busy cheering his bro...

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She held the paper with shock looking down just then Alok looked up and saw Anjor standing there totally shocked...

He too froze...

He walked in and tried to explain her but Anjor was totally shaken and she called the driver, asked him to handover the cover to her friend in the hostel and told that she will  be coming late to the program tomorrow and to go ahead without her and to excuse the cultural while she will join the cleanliness drive...

She went shaking to her study room locked herself in while Alok was trying to talk to her.  She asked him to leave her alone... She was numb, totally frozen...

The form was flashing in front of her... Husband ... Late Suraj Rajvanshi... the lawyers words were reverberating in her ears... Chakor was behind bars for ten years. Her foster parents kept her away though they took care of her like a princess... but...

What has she done...

She grew hating her own mother...

That soul who saved her when she was carried away by the goons, who fought for her even prior to knowing she was her daughter.

That soul who drowned herself to save her from the lake from the evil even prior to knowing she was her daughter.

That soul who was ready to take the false charge of kidnapping her parents on the threat of the evil even prior to knowing she was his daughter.

That soul who rose to kill those evils to save her daughter from the catastrophe and always thought about her welfare...

She sat in the corner unable to come to terms...

She hated her mother, she cant call her mother too, as what sort of daughter she is..

I saw Raaghav going to fill her maang... Yes going to but I did not wait to see if he filled her maang... God, I was young at that time, but as I grew why I could not try to analyse but instead watered and grew my hatred.

Raaghav, he came to act, save my life, but he never made me unhappy, I never looked at that, I tried to hurt him with those words...

They have not been together, where is he? So she was rotting in the jail, ten long years and I was happily living, breeding the hatred... and even when I came to face to face  I did not have that thought to ask her why she left me???

Her head was pounding... She felt dry, ashamed, disgusted of herself.  She walked out of the study room... She spoke to Alok... he was shocked hearing her words... She walked past Kavitha who was still on sedatives... She went into her room and locked herself with a decision for the dawn.

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Mr. Rathod was presiding the events and Chakor was with her other staff but was enquiring about Anika as she was nowhere to be seen. 

The running session was to start but as the tracks were dusty with chalk laid tracks, the children and the organisers were made to wear masks. 

Arjun was very smart and was helping others in tying the masks.  He saw a boy hiding away another participants water bottle.  He quickly went told the boy to give back the bottle.  The boy was arrogant to him and lied that he did not take the bottle.  Chakor was notified and she went to the boys and told the one that it is not good to hide and lie and that he must be friendly with all .  She appreciated Arjun but told him that he should tell the organizers and not to ruffle himself.  He said I donot fear when I see something wrong and I donot like people who lie. She was impressed and asked who taught him this and he said dad says not to fear as my mom is fearless and stands for right and does not lie and does not like those who lie too.  She patted his cheek thought to give him a kiss removing her mask but by the time the race was about to start and she left him to go to the finishing line.

The race was on and Arjun came first in his event. AAyansh came running and hugged his bro...kissing him... Chakor was watching them as they stood out among the other kids...  she was reminded of Anjor but she quickly shoved her thoughts to concentrate on the next work.  She went by a car after ensuring instructing the staff that the kids should wear their masks, apron and gloves to the oncoming event which was scheduled within  few hours.

The van left with the children and Arjun was telling AAyansh how mam appreciated him when Aayansh turned back to see the car.  Chakor removed her mask and her goggles and got into the car...A quick glance of those eyes... Aayansh tried to see her through the window but Chakor went inside the car. 

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Anjor started from her house along with Alok to the venue where the drive was on.  Chakor reached the place well ahead as the kids would be coming after they have their refreshments.  They were instructed to come fully covered as the dwelling was very dirty and cleanliness drive was primarily done by the college students while the kids would shadow and assist them.

Not the dwelling was to be cleaned but few hearts too...

Chakor found Alok at the venue, there was time, she told her support staff to manage while she will come back before the start.

She ran towards Alok, who was hanging his head down with eyes tearing.  She asked

Sir, I was trying to reach you, calling your landline, please tell me who my daughter is, I will not come in front of her but please please show me.  I will not do anything that will hamper your wife's health.

Alok was silent... he walked to a place where it was very quiet... he moved away ...

Chakor saw a girl stand turning her face away... She called is i...ttt... An...jooor... Is i..ttt... y...ouu... Please please turn to me, she cried...

Anjor turned around, her eyes were red.  Chakor was shocked to see Anika... she said Anika... why are you here... I was expecting... To...

 

Yes to see your daughter... and I a..mmm Anjor, she cried... the daughter who hated you... for you left me for Raaghav... you married him...

Chakor was shocked... Anjor... Me left you for Raaghav?? What are you saying??? But I was framed??? I don't know who?  for ten years and you thought I left you?? Married Raaghav... she was shocked... How can you think of me ??

She looked at Alok... whats happening...

Anjor told her, yes I thought you left me for Raaghav.  I hated you... I did not want you back in my life at all...

But ... Please donot talk... I am wrong, I am ashamed, disgusted as small I did not understand but I did not try to understand you too after growing. 

I feel guilty, but I donot want to be forgiven, Please donot forgive me...

Chakor ran to her but Anjor... No ...Anjor said...she crossed her fingers behind... I cannot call you as mumma as I am not fit for that... I cannot come with you too as the more I see you I will feel disgusted of myself, I will want to hurt myself for hurting you.  And I cannot leave my mother Kavitha who knew nothing other than my happiness.  She may have wronged you but they treated me like their princess... Sorry I cannot come with you... if I come with you she will die...

Chakor and Alok were shocked...Chakor was completely plain faced... She wiped her tears... she turned Anjor... yes you are right... I know the pain of loosing a daughter, I know the pain of living without my daughter... I can sacrifice myself but I will not allow others to suffer what I suffered and I donot want to force you if you donot want to live with me...

She wanted to hug her but Anjor turned around and asked her to leave her.  Chakor looked at Alok and said while I cannot forgive you for what you have done to me but still I thank you for taking care of my daughter... I have nothing to live for and look forward to...Chakor got a call from her support staff stating they were waiting for her. She wiped her tears and turned back to the drive...

Mr Rathod was waiting there with a paper in his hands.  Chakor went up to him... He said Chakor I have got you a posting in Shimla in one of the prestigious schools as a PT instructor and Coach... She took the papers and smiled thank you sir, but I would like to return to AZ after this drive and thank you for helping me out.

He asked did you find your daughter... She smiled dry... I have lost my daughter... forever... The sun shined and she looked above, I lost your pearl Suraj, sorry...she cried her heart out...but wherever she is I will pray for her but I am proud of her in a way as she felt bad and worried about that mother's health who took care of her though she was wrong!

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Anjor was completely shaken, she walked towards her car... to go the drive for one last time as along with the dwelling she wanted to clean her heart too.

Alok was there.  Kavitha was standing there with eyes full of tears.  She said Anjor I am... Anjor said... please don't say sorry for I have to forgive you but I will not be able to for what you have done to me, separating from my mother for your selfishness for your obsessiveness, yet I am thankful as you have showered your love to me.

She said thank you... please come home... Anjor extended her hand to Alok who handed over her a file alongwith air tickets.

She said... am not coming with you nor going to stay here in Delhi.  For I cannot forgive myself, while she was suffering alone in jail, I was enjoying with you all.  I have decided to go away from her .. far away out of the country to live alone. 

Kavitha asked are you punishing us?  She said no I am punishing myself.  I want to be alone, go through that pain of loneliness for what I have done but only for one thing which I will try to do before leaving... She went to the temple nearby and prayed Burkiji please help me...

She got into her car and drove to the drive...

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The drive was on full swing with all going around cleaning.  Chakor was streamlining things and was having eyes on the kids as it was getting crowded and also it was becoming too dusty.  She was having the loudspeaker and was shouting them to ensure the masks are on and the gloves are not removed. 

Arjun and Aayansh were with the their school team helping the other big students and Chakor was watching them always being together and helping others.  She liked them and asked their names from the staff. Arjun and Aayansh she smiled with her goggles and mask on... Lovely kids, bless their mom who has taught them good values... she teared herself...

Chakor addressed the kids and awarded them the certificates.  Shook hands with all.  the van driver told the boys that their father was coming... They were excited waiting for him...All other kids boarded the bus to return to the dormitory.. Chakor returned back to her car, removing her goggles, with her mask still on while Raaghav got down off the car.

Dadddyyy, shouted the boys in sync running towards him... Arjun... Aayansh, my boys he shouted and both clungg on to his biceps swirling around. They hugged him and kissed him all over... They were showing him their certificates...Thank you bajrangbali my boys are safe and wow you won certificates.

Chakor turned around to see them... Hearing the boys excitement and that voice...that voice was familiar...

She was behind a tree, she saw HIM, HIM... she was happy ...eyes were tearing. This is Raaghav... My god is it he... varied emotions... she wanted to run to him, she kept her foot ... but stopped... with held herself...

The boys... Raaghav's sons... she cried with happiness... He has his family... He is happy... Hey Daak baba I am happy... to see him atlast ... I saw him... she fell down on her knees, witnessing the happy trio...

The kids hugged him and saw her.  They smiled... waved... her mask fell down while getting up... both were hugging closing their eyes... Aayansh opened and saw ...

Those eyes...

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She turned back quickly got into the car... went to her outhouse gathered her things which was just two dresses, took leave and went to the bus stop..

 

A ticket to AZ please... She was crying, cursing herself at the same time thanking God Raaghav that pure soul is happy with his family... I am happy... I donot want to come in front of him as I donot want to hamper his happiness... those kids flashed in front of her...She loved them...and smiled... he indeed got a good wife for the kids have good values... She smiled.

             

She asked the passenger, which is the bus to AZ... he said there are two buses... one to Shimla and the other one is to AZ...

 

She boarded the bus...

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Aayansh opened his eyes... hugging his daddy...

Those eyes... He crushed his brain... he shouted...

Daddy... that's Mummy... that Mummy... Those eyes... I saw her...the little one ran... clueless while a car came speeding and halted slamming the brakes...


(girls... i know we are not able to digest the lame reason of the MU of Anjor, not able to connect but somewhere in my last little corner of my heart i have the feel that she is my dude's pearl so tried to make it bit logical... please feel free to comment/share your views especially in this part.  yes she is wrong and like my dude she does not  shy to accept her mistake and not want to be forgiven. Hope I make sense)


Shall update the next soon...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumsukor

Beautiful updates
No words for it
Everything was beautiful🤗
Loved Ragkor's beautiful reunion😳
Loved the kids
Beautiful names of the twin angels
Wish something like this happened in the show

PART V and the Final Chapter

 

A ticket to AZ please... She was crying, cursing herself at the same time thanking God Raaghav that pure soul is happy with his family... I am happy... I donot want to come in front of him as I donot want to hamper his happiness... those kids flashed in front of her...She loved them...and smiled... he indeed got a good wife for the kids have good values... She smiled.

She asked the passenger, which is the bus to AZ... he said there are two buses... one to Shimla and the other one is to AZ...

She boarded the bus...

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Aayansh opened his eyes... hugging his daddy...

Those eyes... He crushed his brain... he shouted...

Daddy... that's Mummy... that Mummy... Those eyes... I saw her...the little one ran... clueless while a car came speeding and halted slamming the brakes...

 

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Aayash jumped off Raaghav and ran towards the car in which Chakor was going not realizing it was a highway with cars speeding.  He just shouted mummy mummy, daddy its mummy...

Arjun doubled up behind him and Raaghav too, not able to understand what AA was saying, he shouted AA stop, please stop,  Ar pushed him aside when a speeding car screeched slamming the brakes.  Raaghav and Arjun caught hold of Aayansh who was just hysteric, not able to control himself and due to his sudden jolt had hurt his knees, but all he was shouting was mummy those eyes, mummy... Raagahv hugged him, calmed him while his eyes was searching around, heart pounding, is it true, is it that she was here, is it AA saw her, he quickly called his branch guy in Delhi asking him to rush to the spot as Aa was bleeding and had to be taken to the hospital for first aid.

 

She got down from the car running towards the boy who literally escaped being dozed over...

She was about to raise her voice, how careless you left the boys, when she froze seeing the man holding both the guys, looking around at the same time calming the one who was going frenzy...

He looked at her, please am sorry, my boy got bit agonized, am sorry.  His branch guy sped to the scene and took the boys to the nearby nursing home... She followed him in her car.

She came to the nursing home. The boy was given sedative as he had hurt his knee and also was traumatic... Arjun was holding him hugging his dad and crying...

The branch guy, Sunil, asked Raaghav to meet the Dr. while he was with Ar and AA.

She parked the car and walked to the nursing home...Raaghav saw her...

She came to him... he said, I know its not your fault, my boy came by.  Sorry for that, but why have you come.  He will be fine.

She said Yes, it is my fault... Everything happened because of me... He could not understand... He asked her, who are you?  While his heart was still pounding, searching everywhere.

She said I am Anjor... And you are Raaghav da...un..cleee... He stood shocked, what are you telling?  How do you know me?  Don't don't play with me please? 

She said yes I am Anjor... he immediately asked her, how is your mom, how is Maidam? How are you both? Are you both fine?  Where were you both.  Innumerable questions to her he was smiling knowing she is Anjor, crying not able to see Chakor...

She said I am sorry, for I have commited sin, a sin which cannot be forgiven... I hated mom as I thought you both married and left me away? Whaat???? He asked then, where is Maidam? She said don't ask me anything, but please donot forgive me... She was here for the event.  I told her to leave me and go away as I did not want to trouble her more.  I was praying god that I should meet you. To tell you that she was away from me for ten years, framed and was behind bars for ten years.  He froze hearing this, Maidam was in jail and you were hating her. She said please please donot tell her that you met me.  I told her that I cannot come with her.  She is all alone.  But please find her... But your children ? you are???... He said just tell me where she is?  Where can I find her? Tell me he shouted unable to control himself?  She said you can get the details from the Mr Rathod.  I will find out she said..., he just went off ...

No Maidam, I will not leave you.

I will find you, you have been framed falsely??? No no how can this happen, that's why none knew about you?? God bajrangbali what is this.  Please please make me find her.

He rang to the SPOI office, told who he was and spoke to Mr. Rathod who said she wanted to go to AZ  though he offered her a PT coach post... Thank you...He cut the call before he could hear Shimla.

He went to pick the boys who were traumatized over everything.  AA was just calling out those eyes, its mummy... Ar was hugging him calming him... Daddy, will anything happen to AA... the child was worried.  Raaghav drove them... Sunil accompanied him... He said he will be alright.  Just make him sleep... We will find mummy...I Will FIND YOU FOR I CANNOT AFFORD TO LOOSE YOU AGAIN.

He drove to the bus stop, asked the people there about the AZ bus... They said that bus had started and was on the way.  He requested the ticketing office to call the driver to find where the bus was exactly. He chased the bus on its route with full speed. Tearing himself, he could go catch the bus...  He chased and went ahead to stop the bus.  I caught you Maidam, he ran to the bus, checking the bus as it was night the passengers were fast asleep...

Each and every one he saw but she was not there.  Where did she go?  No No No I cannot take this... Did she go by anyother bus or  by any other mode.  He quickly called AZ, told them that Chakor is on the way and the moment she lands there he needs to be informed immediately. He asked the villagers to be at the bus stand right through the night and watch out.  Kishore told him that he would do the same.

He was totally shaken, just could not accept.  Sunil calmed him, told him to gather himself.  He parked his car near the tree which had the bajrangbali idol... He lighted the diya, the boys came down, AA was limping.  All the three held themselves together praying for her...

Where did she go???? Mummy please where are you???

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Baisaab which bus goes to AZ... There are two, one goes to AZ the other goes to Shimla.  She boarded the bus...

Everything is over with me... Anjor ... she cried... I have nothing to look forward to or live for...I have to see how AZ is.  In what state it is now.  Who is there? The only place I have to lead my life till I breathe my last.  She had a smile thinking about those boys and about Raagahv, Raaghav, tears flowed down... I am happy that you have a family.  Daak baba please keep them happy...

She was so broken, shaken, and was lost in her thoughts that she did not realise she boarded the Shimla bus instead of the AZ bus.  With darkness, night and tiredness taking over, she slept not realizing the bus was going to the destiny which was not decided by her but by the almighty... her fate was taking her to ...

It was very cold, cool breeze was blowing when she realized it was bit sunny and felt it was not anywhere like AZ... She asked the next seat passenger, which stopping is this how far to reach AZ... AZ whaat, this bus is going to Shimla, in ten minutes you will be reaching Shimla.  She was shocked, what, Shimla, arey conductor saab but I need to go to AZ.  He said, madam this is point to point bus and anyways we have already reached Shimla so nothing can be done now.

She wondered what was happening to her... Shimla, but what will I do... she remembered the PT Coach position and had carried that letter with her.  She said bagwan whats in store for me...

The weather was cool, the nature was at its best and she saw the hilly regions, the tea plantations down the valley with those lovely yellow bougainvillea plants... She smiled looking at them, those yellow plants is so welcoming she felt... She read the name board Rishab Tea Plantations...

She got off the bus stop, went to the nearby tea shop and had some tea... It was a Sunday. She took the letter and went through the address.  Daak baba I don't know whats in store, but I will meet the school and then check about the next bus to AZ.

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He drove back with the  boys to Rishab Mansions... Girija was worried seeing that AA was hurt. 

Shyam Lal asked Raaghav to rest and being Sunday he said that he will check upon the stocks and also visits the lodges himself and asked Raaghav to take rest.

Raaghav was expecting call from AZ and also was trying to use his influence to check the vehicles which were going to AZ...

He could not find her... He was looking at the pic in his room.

Where are you?  Please Please give me some hint as to where are you.

Jai ramji and bajrangbali please throw me some light.

He just got a call from his lodge supervisor and Shyam lal attended it.

He said a lady has come to see the school principal but being Sunday the school is closed and the school security had given her the lodge address for a temporary stay.

Rishab had built few lodges around the city to help those who are homeless to spend the night there as it is very cold during the night.  The lodges are free and well maintained but no permanent dwelling was allowed. It was quite secured and was directly managed by Shyaam Lal.

That was the lineage which was maintained by Rishab the old man which was continued by Raaghav and improvised with modern facilities. He ensured that there was no one sleeping in the cold.

Chakor was there in the lodge, which had the big picture of the old man Rishab. She was in the room and she was given good tea and breakfast but was told once the school is opened she will need to leave.

Shyaam Lal on his regular visits to the lodge went and checked the inmates who had come in that day and when he read the name Chakor, he was shocked, surprised.

He asked the supervisor to show who it was and when he saw her in the room, he started to cry, the old man quickly called Raaghav and told him what he saw and asked him to come to the lodge immediately. 

He went out to see the other lodge. 

Raaghav heard the call he could not hear it completely.  The moment he heard Chakor, he just dropped everything, and rushed without telling any one anything as he just wanted to be there, be there not to loose anything...

His heart was thundering, driving past the streets. He doubled up the stairs... she was given the biggest room on the terrace in which Raaghav sometimes stays when he wants some lone time...

She was not in the room but in the terrace, looking at the nature... Her eyes was plain dry and was looking out.

He walked to the terrace his private room, where no one comes ...

His heart was thundering, is it really she... she was turning towards the open space...

He walked in slowly holding himself...

He saw her there, her back to him.  He called gathering himself... Words were not coming but with hard breadth he called out

Mai...dam... she shook herself hearing to that... she could not believe her ears... incessant tears were rolling... Who am I hearing... Is it... but how...

Maidam... He called again, scared to know if it was her or not...

She slowly turned towards him... her eyes looked at him... shocked... surprised...astonished... Raaghav... You... Here... ho...w... is  it really you...

She started to cry...

He called, cried  bajrangbali... thank you so much... you brought my Maidam in front of me...

He ran towards her... she came forward but held herself back... thinking of the boys... His family...

He held her hands... words were not coming out,  emotions and eyes expressed everything... with great difficulty she asked Raaghav how are you??? How is your life??

She could not say anything?? She smiled, I saw you in Delhi...yo...ur...those...t.wo..boys... yo...ur sons... how is your family... why did you come here leaving them... she could not see his eyes... tears were flowing way too much...they are so sweet... how is your wife... I am happy that you are happy... I had to go to AZ... but by mistake boarded the bus to Shimla... I was given a letter for the job of Coach... But I will go back to AZ as I donot want to stay here... she spoke breaking herself... She went on and said, I have lost Anjor, I have nothing now in life... she thought... that... I left her...but... I was framed... She cried...was behind bars ...for ten years... I... I...  He was full of tears... But did not interrupt, allowed her to speak out, cry herself out... as he decided to allow her to cry as from today he will not allow a drop to fall from her eyes..

She went on and on... She asked how is life... How are you?

He said, I have just started to live ... My heart has started to beat after seeing you...

 

He kept quite... listened to her...asked her to have water...

He said Maidam... Yes they are ...those ...boys...are. our sons...

She shocked... ou..r   sons... what do you mean... Raaghav... Whaat are you saying..

He held her hands... Maidam... after you left me... he narrated the whole story...how he went back, the whole house dazed... the accident... coming to Shimla...going every year to AZ in the hope to know about her... how he took the boys as his and told them her as their mother and told that she was away on work...

She was awed... Amazed... she asked, Raaghav you lived with me... You taught the boys about me... Yes, the boys are waiting for you... But...will you be their mother as I ...

She held his hands, cried her heart out... my own daughter did not understand me but the boys spoke about their mother with pride even though not being with them... they spoke about me... about mee... She cried ... how can you be so pure Raaghav...

What made you think I will be back... even after so many years.  He cried... Maidam I did not have a life once you left me... But as you always say, I had F for Faith in my love.  I thought you were with Anjor happy... I could not think of anyone... and I never went or took the boys out of Shimla too.

But ... Why didn't you marry... She slowly rested her heads on his chest. He said many wanted to but I was already married to you, I did not even think of anyone in my life as my life never had a meaning without you.

What if I had not come... I would still live with your thoughts and with our sons...

He cried...she cried...

Thank you Raaghav... but Anjor... He said what is past can never be undone... Lets look at the future... please can we sail together now... as we have two oars to sail us through.

She smiled... Hugged him hard for he hugged her back, crushing her into him... and looked at her...

But AZ... He said ... I have a good news... I have took back the lands from BPS and given it to the villagers.  I visit them once a year... I have organized co-operatives so that everything is streamlined...

She was amazed and thankful... Raaghav... I ...he just placed his fingers on her lips.  Please no more tears and thank you...

Can we go to the temple and go home please...the boys will be waiting for their mother.  She smiled, me too...

He hugged her, wiped her tears... No more tears... she smiled...hugged him more.

He said, Maidam... Raaghav will you call me Maidam in front of the kids????

Hmm then what should I call... Chakor...your Chakor.. she said...looking lovingly into his eyes...

He froze at her eyes...he cupped her cheeks, and slowly kissed her forehead... Thank you... For coming back... Thank you for becoming mine...

She said thank you for having the faith... garlanding her hands around his shoulders.

Shall we... he said... Yes she nodded... she said I love those yellow bougainvillea plants... he smiled... I planted them so that I could always feel your presence..

They drove back and he showed her the tea estates and plantations. 

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Shyam lal had told Girija about Chakor and also the boys that daddy has gone to get their mummy.

Girija was so so excited... The boys and she decorated the house with others ...in lightening speed..

Raaghav and Chakor went to the temple nearby... she gave him the sindoor which was there and asked him to adore her maang... The hands which stopped him ten years back, today made him to do the same.  His eyes full of love, filled the maang.  He said we will marry in front of the boys...she accepted with eyes filled with love.

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They walked into the Mansion...

Girija happiness knew no bounds... She though old doubled up and hugged her bitiyaaa...eyes full of tears... Girija Mausi... She looked at Raaghav thanking him...

Girija along with the boys took aarti for the couple.

the boys came running to them...

Arjun and AAyansh came running mummy... they hugged her tight...She hugged them back... saying I am sorry for I had been away from you so long...

But mummy you were always with us... Look there they showed the pic of her and Raaghav in the bedroom...

The kids never left her even for a second and she sublimed in their love...

AAyansh,  she asked how did you find me... He said... Mummy those eyes of yours... I love them... I found you with those eyes...

Raaghav said young man I told you not to flirt with my wife... she kicked him with her elbow... Full of shy...The kids were very happy that she was on their side...  I am for my sons afterwards for you... she winked at them...

 Shyam Laal organized for their wedding in their tea estate, attended by the workmen and their families as they did not want to have a lavish one...

The kids asked why are they marrying again. Raaghav said as they had been asking he thought to do the same in front of them and they were so happy holding them while they did their saath pheras.

She was introduced to the plantation employees them and was blessed by the loving hearts.

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  The final chapter

 

Yes it's a decade but love never decays...

Months rolled by... She was called by the Principal to join as their coach but to go for an initial training at Delhi.

The boys outrightly refused her to go anywhere out of Shimla and especially without them for they feared she may leave them again... After many promises and with a special permission the whole family went for her training which was for a month in Delhi.

Chakor was overwhelmed in their love and also Raagahv's love made her forget everything that she lost...

After six months...

Chakor hmmm... the boys want a sister!!!

Ssshhh chup besharam, budda hai thu !!! dad of two!!!

Budda??? Hum??? Arey Maidam...ham abibi handsometa and young hai ek dum!!! He pulled her close to him literally crushing her bones...crushing her into him... she wanted that too...

Arey Bacho  he yelled...kya daddy budda hogayi kya??? ... came running Arjun and Aayansh clinging on to his biceps on both sides and swirling... Nooo... Our daddy strongest!!! Both in unison shouted...

I can carry two more he winked at her smiling!!

She smiled shy and kicking him with her elbow... You naughty, I am forty!!

He said yes naughty though forty you are my beauty with whom only I can play dirty!!!

Raaghav it's a decade... she said

Yes! but my love for you never decayed...

He kissed on her forehead... age is a number that define the number of years we live in this world while love is infinite and never fades even if it is a decade...

Daddy mummy... good night... We are off to our rooms ran the brats...giggling...closing the doors behind...

I told you we will get a sis said Aa... giggling... how are you sure...asked Ar... dumbo daddy kissed mummy on the forehead didn't you see... Ohhh gigigigiliiing ...

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She will be mine... No she will be mine... both fought while he was going up and down the OP sweating, fretting !!

The lights went off... The Gynae came out smiling!!!! It was bit tough but she fought it... she is tired but fine...

You all can go in...

Mummyyy shouted A and A in excitement!!!! We love you... One for each!!!

Yes it was Aditi and Ananya...two beautiful roses...In One Shot!!! 😉😉

He held them preciously!!! Kissing Chakor on her forehead... With tears, and trembling voice... He said..Thank you, thank you for loving me and coming into my life...and completing my life.

She smiled...hugging the boys who were on her both sides...

She said... True it's a decade but our love never decayed...

My hands are full, twosome na na foursome and awesome...she smiled that million dollar smile...

He held her close to his heart...saying...yesss foursome... Winking...Don't underestimate the power of ... Buddaa she said smiling naughty!!!  I love you he said... I love you too... he kissed her on her forehead...

They brought the bundles of joy home...

The bungalow was decorated for the boys' birthday!!!!  They wanted to celebrate their birthday with their sis's...

No big party... Only the foursome...along with their Mausi / Shyam laal who was excited to see their grandchildren...

The boys were happy rocking the cradles...

While Mummy and Daddy were holding to each other, eyes on each other and dancing to the song... he was holding her waist and she was resting herself in his shoulders...

She smiled... slanted her head resting on his chest, fitting into him perfectly...

Life is to live,

Life is to love,

Even if it is a decade for our Love never decays!!!!

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Thank you girls for encouraging me and patiently reading my story.  Hope I could bring some solace😳😳

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The bonus chapter was beautiful🤗
Raghav & boys were crying for ear piercing😆
Loved Ragkor's conversation about the piercing of their life😭
Waiting for more beautiful stories from you