Originally posted by: sharja84
Loved the update.. loved their conversations.. loved their care for the other... Loved your take on showcasing Sameer's jealousy... Please update the next part soon..
Originally posted by: sharja84
Loved the update.. loved their conversations.. loved their care for the other... Loved your take on showcasing Sameer's jealousy... Please update the next part soon..
Originally posted by: Mayashika
Part 23
Time has passed but their love hasn't decreased, it's still there, deep down. ❤️It seems like he has put all the anger and the complaints he had towards his personal life, he had concentrated it to his professional life and that did reap good results. His aggression was directed at a good thing and I am happy that he didn't fall into a deep pit of sorrow and failure.It was so adorable to see a nervous and a fumbling Sameer and it hurts, Sur Di, to see Naina in so much anguish. Kaash ye doori mit jaaye!I am also glad that his family is around, however his relation is with them, I am contended when I learn that he isn't alone. My heart always is scared for him because Sameer is so impulsive.Also, Sameer was really nice, he had good intentions and genuinely cared for Naina and Diya and kept his bitter feelings aside.
Originally posted by: Mayashika
Part 24
Amazingly written! 😃He doesn't want to mess up her life and that has my heart! He still loves her so much! How can my poor heart handle this?I am happy they have started working together and especially liked where he was reminded of Naina's honesty in her work by linking it to a memory. He still remembers those, well, some memories are too special to forget!I really liked her asking about Nanu's death and comforting him; even if it's for a moment!They are transported to the right college days, it's hard to stay indifferent when you know the person a little too much. I can really feel the pain they might have been going through!
Will you be updating today 😊
Originally posted by: Mayashika
Part 25
I loved this update so much especially the part where they acted out the scene where the girl is pregnant and it became so real for Naina. I don't know why but it brought out a lot of emotions inside me and maybe, I won't write much on this chapter. But, as a writer, you were very successful as it affected me more than it should have!The reference of the book was nice; I am yet to read Paradise and soon, I will join the gang! 😃Her wishing him on his birthday and the later him receiving a surprise was heartwarming too! I really hope Diya is Sameer's daughter only then, I can properly wish for a happy ending. It's a reader's selfish wish.This chapter was really good, Sur Di! Invoked many emotions inside me!
Short yet an extremely fulfilling update
When Sameer was doing a comparison study of his and Diya's hair and wishing he fathered the kid, I really wanted his thoughts to continue in that direction despite his fear of being slapped by Naina
And when Naina was elated seeing the new bond between her kid and the kid's father and was tempted to tell Sameer about Diya, you beautifully put a comma there giving her distrust on him and for all right reasons. I am all the more curious to knows to who is gonna let the cat out of the bag!!!
The auto scene and the initial park scene was described so well, I could imagine a grumpy pouting Randeep sitting in those poses
The oscillation between feeling bad for Naina and Sameer and back to Naina, what a wonderful story teller
Loved loved loved Sameer's memory of Rakesh especially the one when he didn't send money to Naina because she didn't top. I think I am going to go back and read the story from the beginning once again.
Listening to the father-daughter discussion, Naina's heart swelled with joy, just hoping the same to happen but along with joy, pride too and very soon.
I didn't get one thing though- why did Naina say, A's trust would be shattered? Does he not know she works for Sameer ? Cheeky me but I would like to think it as she has started lying to protect Sameer, again
Sona
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