Originally posted by: RangnRia
Is baar kaan pakad kar sorry Di for the late response.
Chapter 30 ka note is on page 136.
Now coming to chapter 31...
Di aap sach mein yeh story kisi production house ko bhejo...Aap sach mein mallika-e-ishq ho...
Sameer trying to find ways to be with his wife even if it means just sitting and watching her paint diyas or an annoying trip to bazaar instead of any big shop even though he is not used to the crowds.Of course he realised that biwi was not actually interested in his tips while painting the Diyas.Banda smart ban raha hai Di.Kya idea nikala bazaar se nikalne ke liye.A big salute to your eye for nuances..Aise laga jaise main khud Diwali preparation kar rahi hun.Aakash Kandil is a marathi term Di and I realised why you used it while reading your note at the end.
Kya Marwaris bhi Karwa Chauth karte hain?As far as I know they celebrate vat savitri like in Maharashtra.Anyways for the romance it brought into the story,I am all up for it.
Nanu choking on his food...Personal chand...Kya tha woh Di...
One thing I noticed in this story is koi kisiko kuch nahi keh raha,Muna ne Nanu ko kuch nahi bataya...Nanu chah kar bhi apni bahu ko upar jaane nahi keh rahe rather Munna se salaah lerahe hain,Munna Sameer se Nanu ke saath hui conversation ke bare mein nahi keh raha...God yeh sab kab sort hoga.Lesson learnt:Communication,rather correct communication is hugely important.
His retort itna time liya toh parlour-wali ko bula leti was dil-le-lo.He wanted his wife to look her best,rather the best,Husband wanting his wife to be dressed according to him...Wow Di!!!Maza aagaya
Sameer ka ring pehnana ,asking her dusron ka chhodon tumhe pasand aaya? and then regretting the lost firsts.I so felt like giving him a assuring hug.Bechara jab bolna janta nahi tha toh woh paas thi auur ab bolna chah raha hai toh woh kuch samajh hi nahi rahi,
The chokker clamp hopefully works as a catalyst..hopefully.Ab shayad Naina ke soye armaan jag jayen.I was wondering what if she blurts out the talwar-mayaan explanation in front of Sameer and the consequencesπ
As per Sameer,romance toh hota rahega,but woh usse upar wale kamre mein kaise le jaye??Bechara Mummy bhi nahi aarahi,nanu bhi kuch nahi keh rahe.Ek idea aaya hai Di.Sameer ko puri bottle chadha do,taki nashe mein apne dil ki baat bolde banda,warna bechara shayad kabhi nahi bol payeha aur yeh gadhi jaan bujkar nasamajh bani rahegi.
Ab toh usse upar wale kamre mein bhijwa do Di.
Jumme ka cycle break ho ya nahi,but aapki story hamesha mere Jumme ka Chumma hi rahegi
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