Originally posted by: Saji79
Hey May
Kya likhte ho aap , sahi mein ek dum dil ko choo jata hai. Har lafz ko kya khoob se pirote ho hum padhne wale un jazbaat ko bakhubi samaj jaate hai.
On Friday evening 6 to 8 is the timing I go back to home from office, was missing the update.
Even though the Friday Promise was not met but you have given us a long update, Thanks for that
π. Your story is going on a right pace and the progress is also very nice. I guess many of us read it multiple times, that's the addiction to this story.
Ab coming to the update. Naina's bonding with Nanu is heart warming , he tries to ease her in every situation. His assurance to her by saying "Tumhara ghar hai , tumhari pehli diwali hai ... " bahut hi accha laga. Diwali celebration preparations , KarwaChaut Vrat and Sameer gifting Naina were portrayed very nicely .Sameer longing for his wife is presented too well , his hovering around her , admiring her beauty. His desires seeing his wife are written so beautifully.
He is truly regretting his own decision to stay in separate rooms. Ab mohabbat ho gayi hai biwi se and he is missing all his firsts , thoda bura laga ,par koi nahi he will make up for it I guess .
Ishq par zor nahin hai yeh woh aatish Galib , Ke lagaey na lagey aur bujhaey na bane. π
Ab bande ko baat aage badhani hai, eagerly waiting aap kaise Sameer ki besabri aur bechaini ko dur karte ho. Naina kab samjhegi ki us ka buddhu kya kehna chah raha haiπ
Sameer,Munna and Pandit conversations are super. Pandit ki baatein , sach mein sahi bolta hai banda koi samajta nahi usko :-).
Enjoy your vacation time .
Luv
Sajida
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