Ariya ff Butterfly in the time update on pg 41 - Page 16

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Posted: 4 years ago

Just prologue itself made everything intresting... 

It sounds quite mysterious 

Good going 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 1

Arjun back of Riya

Sakshi's charecter is well written 

Hope it doesn't turn into a vamp

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Posted: 4 years ago

Really it's intresting to watch the flow of the story.

Its fast paced.

Hope you continue it soon.

Update soon

Take care

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hey bhagwan!Aur kitna dil todna hai. 

Sakshi ka dil toda even arjun's heart is on the way to face that rejection.

Super update. 

Update soon actually i am very into this story i am waiting eagerly for each and every update 

Thx for pm

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: GOLD3009

Nice part dear

Loved it

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon πŸ™‚

Thank you dear... 

Its very nice listening to good words πŸ€—

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

I am very glad u liked it... 

Follow it.. It won't disappoint u ❀️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

nice

update soon

thnx for pm

Ty dear πŸ™πŸ»πŸ˜ŠπŸ€—

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

Awesome update


Love it..


Ye kya Riya ne saf sad bol Diya ki Sam se usaki shadi hone Wali he..lekin Arjun ne Kuch lightly Nahi liya..?


Arjun KO ye toh Nahi laga ke Riya Zoot bol rahi he..?


Shit..na Jane kitne Dil aur tutege..?


Poor Sakshi..n Sam also going to be hurt in all this..


Please continue soon


Thanks for pm

"As the wiser said the road is full of surprises and we have to wait to taste one" 

Ty so much.. 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: KaziRume

Nice story. The prologue was very intriguing.

Arjun was madly in love with Riya and she accepted his love after much time.The acceptance scene was cute. Arjun has so patience.Like Ariya moments in the flashbacks.But why sudden break-up? People also stay in long distance relationship.She should let him go for study.There was nothing wrong.

Sam wins Riya's love after much difficulty.Though I think she is not in love but compromising.There was a little smile in her after talking with Arjun in last chapter.

I was expecting a banter between the two after meeting all these years. Per koi na...

Arjun didn't take Riya's word seriously. It'll be heart wrenching when he'll know the truth.

Feeling sad for Sakshi and Sam.Both of their love is unconditional, though Sakshi's love is more.Sakshi should have move on.Please get her a nice guy.

Thanks for PM.

Update soon.

Just a good word can lit up ones mood

But u did it more ... Thalia to ur patience.. 

People say good people are always destined to meet the good ones 

Update will be soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: SamhithaWRIER

Really good one continue soon

Thanks dearπŸ–€