Ariya ff Butterfly in the time update on pg 41

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Introduction /prologue :WEDDING BELLS
... 1...

Kolkata 
India.
A fully decorated palace with girls running here and there. The elders are immersed in the works. Somegirls are applying mehendi to their hands, while some are blushing looking at their red mehendi clot hands. Old ladies are sitting on the beds reciting their memories and stories to the children. Moving to the upstairs there are a middle aged couple who are sitting in the balcony there are dressed heavily, they looked tensed
Man : kya woh iss shadi se kush hai?
Woman : aap fikar math kariye kyu ki yeh uski faisla hai
Man : dar lag raha hai mujhe supriya. Kya wo ab shadi karna jaroori hai kya.
Woman : ji mujhe yeh sab patha nahi lekin bus hamara beti jo bhi kare mein uske saath dene ke liye hamesha rahunga.
Man : lekin...
Woman: dekhiye wo dono pyaar kiya, kuch din dono live in relation mein hai, uske baad thoda disturbance, ab sab set hogaya. dekhiye Aap aaram kijiye kal subah hi shadi hai
Man : ha ek baar uss se baath karke aatha hun.. Tum bhi aao mere saatg
Woman : ha chaliye
They move to the room of the girl. The door is opened they slowly move inside. She is in deep sleep
Woman ( whispers) : dekhiye woh so rahe hai
Man : kal subah baath karna hoga hame
They both move back tiptoed. They get back to their works.
Next morning
All the house is filled with laughter, loud music and happiness. Everyone are getting ready for the marriage. They moved to that palace a week ago for that marriage as it is the bride's wish to get married in a palace to her love of her life.
    From every frame of that house we can sense that happiness because all round what we hear is laughter, and happy words.. The teen girls are getting ready as they are going to be the bridesmaid. Even we don't have them in indian marriage but its bride who decided it.
          Moving to the upstairs, we have each and every frame of the walls are decorated with white roses. It was decided by the bride that marriage should be red themed while the Palace should have white all-over it.
Bride's room:
They are group of people who are surrounding bride who is getting ready. She wore a red long bordered lehenga with a bit transparent red pallu over it. Her hair is tied in a bun with roses complementing it. She is like a fairy with dimples adding beauty to her. Suddenly her mother came and called her
Mother : beta itni der. Baraaat aane wale hai.
Bride : ji maa
Mother takes kajal and applies to back of her ear and she leaves the place. Baraat sounds enter so all the girls advise riya to get touch up and move from there to see the groom. Bride got up went to see the groom through the window.. The groom saw her, his face was covered with flowers., but he saw bride and gave her a flying kiss.. Bride smiled at him widely and sat in front of mirror she got ready totally and sat on the bed she suddenly remembers something and move near the chair. She sits on it opens the desk she takes a pocket knife
Bride : happy wedding day riya
She says it and slits her wrist.. She leans back to the chair and closes her eyes in satisfaction
NO CHARECTER SKETCH

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part 1-  The Fairy's Someone 

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Part 2 - The Unfulfilled dreams

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Part 3 - Rejecting my boy 

          Page 7 :  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5063084?pn=7&pc=149514562

Part 4 - Girl in the city 

       Page 10 :  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5063084?pn=10

Part 5 - The guest 

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Part 6 : The return of the boy 

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5063084?pn=15&pc=149911408

Part 7 : The second chance 

      Page  18 :   https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5063084?pn=18&pc=150166191

Part 8 : jab Arjun Meets Riya 

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5063084?pn=19&pc=150547879

Part 9 :  The Bond Growing Or not 

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5063084?pn=20#150678928

Part 10 : The misunderstandings

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5063084?pn=22&pc=150705361

Part 11 : The journey 

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5063084?pn=23&pc=150729037

part 12

page 26 :

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5063084?pn=26#150803831

part 13

page 30:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5063084?pn=27&pc=150846332&pr=1

part 14

page 32:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5063084?pn=32

part 15 summary

page 35 :

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5063084?pn=35&pc=150965228

part 16

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5063084?pn=36&pc=151060188

part 17

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5063084?pn=39#151287285

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part 19

part 20

part 21

part 22

part 23

part 24

part 25


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Posted: 5 years ago
Unres wow me first riya ki shaadi ki tayaari chal rahi hai per uske father tense hai per riya ki mom unko samjhati hai riya shaadi ke liye ready ho rahi hai ghar mein charo taraf khushi ka mahaul hai baarat bhi aa gai omg yeh kya kiya riya ne kalai kaat li wt about interesting start dear eagerly waiting for further updates thanks for pm 



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Interesting prologue
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wow super update 
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riya is the bride but who is the groom 
why riya tried to do suicide? I thought she was excited for marriage 
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Awesome update
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