Arshi FF: Ours Arnav-Khushi: Dil se Dil tak-CH :63,pg 242(NEW) - Page 76

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: aroohiw

Hey this poem is dedicated to your story hope u like it.

Kaisa yeh aakarshan tha

Joh mere dil ko kheech raha tha

Ek pal joh anjaan tha apna lagne laga

Aisa laga dil se dil tak ki dor ho

Bina kisi bandhan jod gai ho

Iss ehassas ko kya naam doon

Jab mera dil hi sochne par majboor ho.

Joh pal bitaye unhe bhulna 

Aasan kyu nahi hai

Itni bebasi kyu hai

Kya tha hamare beech kismat kaho ya

Khud ka pagalpan

Kambakhat uljano se bhara

Kya yeh dil se dil tak ka rishta tha?

Kyu woh isaan dil se nikalta nahi

Kyu uska khayal dimag se jaata nahi

Jab bichadna hi tha toh mile hi kyu

Ae taqdeer tune khel kaisa khela 

Yeh dil se dil tak ka nata kyu joda.

Kabhi socha nahi tha zindagi mein

Yu mulaqaat hogi

Aur aise ki jab raaste alag hue toh 

Dard jaag utha.

Jhootha dilasa apne aap ko dete rahe

Ki tumse koi vaasta nahi ,

Nahi padna tumhare khayalo mein

Kyu ke woh yaadien gehri na ban jai.

Koshish hai tumse alag rahu,

Dil se dil tak ka nata na jodu

Par sochti rehti hu 

Ki kya tha hum dono ke darmiyaan 

Jo hume itna dur le chala

Iss rishte ko kya naam doon

Wao wao wao ...just superb dear .

A poem for my story, it really means a lot...what a talent you have to pen down such a beautiful  poem. Writing poetry is such a tough...lines are so beautiful for my Arshi

Thanku from bottom of my heart:).

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: CHUNNU99

Awesome update. There is no end for problems in Khushi's life. Hope she able to face the problems and come out. Hoping Manohar comes to her rescue. Continue soon.

Thanku so much:)

Hmm...she has to become strong n face it

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thanku so much :) 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: aarushh

Wonderful story yaar .. come through this story yesterday yaar can't stop reading till now...wat a story yaar...they you write is just brilliant.. unique story line of arshi...loved it..read it in one go actually...so much of misunderstanding going on yaar... can't wait to read next update yaar... come back soon with the update yaar...

Wao..thanku yar...means a lot 

Keep reading n reviewing

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Kirtuprabhas

Nice  , poor khushi , Make Arnav repent , next update soon

Thanku:)

Will try to update soo 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: surrazdan

nice one..

atleast Khushi told him clearly that she isnt the culprit..


may be Arnav will look into it.

Thanku so much..yes she told him , but still she could not take out Anjali name

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Posted: 3 years ago

:):):)..u will get to know soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Me tho aj padhke ro padi...I am feeling so bad for khushi....please god help her

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Posted: 3 years ago

please update.....it is so good 

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Posted: 3 years ago

lovely chapter.....and loved all that she said to Arnav......ab Arnav trust kare na kare, phark nahi padta........ eager to read the next chapter.....