Originally posted by: suadvani
Wonderfully written! Assuming Diya has diabetes or something like that? .. I cannot wait for the truth to come out! love this story :)
Originally posted by: suadvani
Wonderfully written! Assuming Diya has diabetes or something like that? .. I cannot wait for the truth to come out! love this story :)
Originally posted by: Yudkhfan
Wow.. what a wonderful update..ππ
Their memories and time spent together is their purpose of living..She remembered his birthday.. the love she has for him even after all the pain she has endured because of him..Didnt quiet understand as to why she snatched the chocolate away from Diya..it cant be just the stranger reason..hopefully you will enlighten us soon..ππPlease update soon..
Was going through breakup parts...
You had written Sammers pain in detail...there are some hints / confusions about Naina,Did Taiji/Preethi everyone knew about Naina's pregnancy and they lied ??eager to read what Naina had to go through till date and why no chocolates to Diya ..Update soon...
Originally posted by: SixteenAgain
Hi Sur, Such a beautifully balanced update!
You have effortlessly bridged the gap between the past and present.Thanks so much May! I always look forward to your reviews- for they give me another insight- another dimension into what I myself wrote! π€
The other thing that I really enjoyed was how you have been bringing in the reference to other books that is provide a great insight in the thinking process of the characters. And considering both Naina and Sameer are arts students and now working in the same industry, it feels right.
That's true...being in the same field in college- literature and working in the same domain...they need to thoroughly into books...when I was reading Paradise, it felt kind of uncanny as to how it seemed to on similar lines to this story I was writing (I knew of the separation in EU by then)...so I felt it deserved a mention here! π
That bit of acting or role play from their college days.. the line between real and acting was very blurred.. was he truly acting when he spoke about the abortion? It didn't feel like that... at least not to me. And she yet hoped that in real life he would have been Matt. And she went to tell him...
Aaah! That's the thing- we don't know if Sameer meant it or was he just enacting out a role...for sure, the play was frivolous...but would Sameer's reaction had been the same when the thing had struck them for real...and Naina somehow tried to convince that Sameer might indeed accept her- might have been wishful thinking on her part. But whatever be the fact, she felt she must confide it in him. But what happened next is still shrouded in mystery! π³
Diya had to be Sameer's daughter! Because otherwise there would be no chance of them getting back together. If she went on to marry someone else and bear that man's child, the past would truly become just the past. Something to be remembered once in a while or on some especially romantic rainy days, but still just the past. Naina would never consider breaking her child's true family for her own love of a boy regardless of how deep it ran.
Very well said...that had to happen...for Naina is not that selfish...she loves Sameer beyond her heart and soul...yet she loves Diya even more...and would sacrifice her own happiness, her love for her well being...so that she can have a family that is perfect!
Sameer Diya meet was so heartwarming! He calling her Beta... Naina and readers dono ke dil Ki dhadkan teej! But Sameer's reaction to Naina nor allowing Diya to accept the chocolate spoke volumes. If this angered him so much... I am truly quacking in my boots thinking how he will feel and the anger when he finds out that he has been deprived of his right as a father for so many years.
Glad you liked the first meet of the father-daughter duo! π³ Yes, and Sameer's anger is justified...let's see how he would react once he finds out what had transpired five years back.
Sameer noticing her financial struggles but not remarking on them had my heart!Dil ka to komal hai hi bechara...π³
His birthday and her keenness to wish him was so endearing! But, I also liked that his sister and the rest of his family also made an effort. That peace he was feeling at the end was too good. I loved the older Deepika and the role she has played in his life.
Ab pyaar to hai hi..chupaye na chupe to wish karna to banta hi hai! π And then I thought Sameer ko bhi thoda sukoon mile...π³ I wanted to show Deepika as a bit old here...so that she could understand Sameer's predicament and what it felt like to love someone probably!
Little worried for Diya... but I will not speculate and will wait for you to reveal more in that area.
β€οΈ I would reveal that soon May! π³
Sur, I love this story more and more with each update! Thank you so much for this gem dear!
Thank you so much May! Your encouragement means a lot to me! π€I hope I can keep you intrigued with this story till the end!
Big hug!
MayHey May!My delayed response in bold. πLots of love,Sur
Originally posted by: sweta2005
Will you be updating now waiting
Originally posted by: sakina.hozefa
Hey
U won't Bel my craziness of some stories, I stalk up reading comments too.Matlab aap Arvind ko negative ker doge, according to Ur replies.Waise to mjhe luv triangle Pasand nai per agar samaina ko milane k lie arvind ko marna parega to bhi chalegaπ.Diya n choc saga... Kuch samjh nai aa raha.Plz uodatu jaldi dijiye. Intezaar kerna mushkil he
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