Originally posted by: _Dimples_
Awesome shreya
You should write moreThis was their first touch cum kissBeautifully written..Samaina and library's a better love story than twilight ๐Loved itThank you for the pm
Originally posted by: _Dimples_
Awesome shreya
You should write moreThis was their first touch cum kissBeautifully written..Samaina and library's a better love story than twilight ๐Loved itThank you for the pm
Originally posted by: Samaina_1990
Wow Shreya! I was thinking from a long time if you too write...I couls see it in your comments...n I was proven right :)
Thank you so much for a trip down the memory lane here...the familiar behenji n fights...the shoe stealing incident...Since the slap precap recently, all I could think of was an angry Sameer n an irate Naina...what if after both slap each other n their frustations are vented out, Sam isn't able to take it anymorwe, pulls her to himself n kisses her straight on her lips, oblivious to the gang watching them...I know, too far-fetched a romance for our innocent show, but then no tax on imagining hehe...so when I started reading this, especially an angry Sameer n Naina, n then Sameer tripping over her, you can imagine what exactly would I've thought...hehe...so yeah tad bit disappointed, but I know you'll come up with an OS on a proper kiss too someday hehe...I really liked how Sameer's lips accidentally touched her neck n he felt it...the emotions reflecting in both the eyes were the same...the behenji and Salman are in love...I would actually like to read this as a story on what happens next...you can explore the back story too if you want...only if you find the idea worthwhile!Loved this piece n interested to read more Samaina stuff from you dear! ๐คLove,Sur
Originally posted by: Mayashika
Thank you so much Muskan!๐I am glad that this OS could be worth your excitement..!Well, I was hibernating๐ now when I am back, I hope I get many more ideas to write more..I have always written drabbles that too in first person narration so this was little hard but I am planning to continue the third person narration only as it gives the writer the freedom to express anythING about the story..
Though looking forward to college romance, school is aakhon aakhon mei romance is still my fav! U picked the perfect situation to start the 2-sided fire!
Originally posted by: suhaaniladki
It was so good it almost reminsiced school day memories you wrote a story based on initial episodes liked it very much ... I wish u could add more to it may be make it 2 shot
Originally posted by: Anjali33
Hayee Shreya, you write so exceptionally well
Why is your first SamAina story so late?? Plzz keep writing more on our lovely couple
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