Hey... So Iam writing my first story ever... Do comment and tell how is it...😛
So the story starts after Punnu's exposure...
Preeta: Karan meri baat to suno... I amsorry...
Says Preeta running behind Karan
Karan: Jab mein tumse kehta tha ki Preetameri baat suno... Meri baat maano... Prithvi galat hai tumne to meri baat nahimaani aur ab mere peeche padi ho ki mein tumhari baat sunu... Tumhari baatmaanu... Tum jao yahan se mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni...
Preeta: Karan please... I am sorry...
Karan: Aise nahi... Tumhe kuch khaas karnapadega...
Says Karan faking anger...
Preeta: To kaise? I mean maine tumhe 20 baarcall kiya, 50 baar sorry messages bheje lekin tumne to reply hi nahi kiya... Abtum mujhse kya khaas chahte ho?
Karan: Ek vaada...
Preeta: Kaisa vaada?
Karan: Yeh ki tum hamesha mere saathrahogi...
Preeta gets shocked and they share aneyelock.
Sajda in background music...
Preeta breaks the eyelock.
Karan: I mean as a friend...Jab mein mushkilmein paduga tum mere saath rahogi... Aur saath hi meri har baat par vishwaasbhi karogi...
Preeta: Theek hai... Mai vaada karti hu...
Preeta holds Karan's hand promising him...They share an assuring eyelock...
Sajda in background music...
Sarla: Preeta zara idhar aana...
Preeta: Aayi maa...
Preeta smiles at Karan and turns to leave...She turns to see him... Karan gives her a wink as he does everytime beforegoing... Preeta gets shocked... Karan leaves... Preeta smiles thinking of hischildish antics...
Next Morning
Preeta goes to Luthra house where she treats Karanand Rishabh's dadi...
Dadi: Mein jaanti hu Prithvi ki vajah setujhe dukh hua hai... Par tu fikr nakar... Jo hota hai acche ke liye hota hai... Teri kismet mein zaroor kuch acchalikha hoga...
Preeta: Janti hu Dadi... Mujhe apni kismat sekoi shikayat nahi hai... Meri kismat mein job hi hai vo mujhe manzoor hai...Aaj mein agar us Prithvi se bach paayi hu to sirf karan ki vajah se...
Karan who was passing by hears theirconversation and gets happy seeing her positivity towards life... He smileslistening Preeta praising him and leaves for his practice...
Preeta leaves early due to being called byher mom.
Evening
Preeta comes crying along with Shrishti to theirroom...
Preeta: Jaldi packing kar... Humein aaj raathi nikalna hoga...
Says bringing her clothes from the cupboardand packing them...
Shrishti: Di... Kya aap sure ho?
Preeta: Ismein sure hone ki kya baat hai?Packing kar...
Shrishti starts packing and they leave theirhouse at night leaving a note... Without Sarla and Dadi coming to know...
Preeta and Shrishti keep their foot out oftheir home...
Flashback
Preeta and Shrishti put their foot first timein their home...
Flashback ends
They turn and look at the house reminiscingtheir moments with their family crying, and then leave...
Naina.. jo saanjhe khwab dekhte thhe
Naina.. bichhad ke aaj ro diye hain yoon
Naina.. jo milke raat jaagte thhe
Naina.. sehar mein palke meechte hain yoon
Naina.. jo saanjhe khwab dekhte thhe
Naina.. bichhad ke aaj ro diye hain yoon
Naina.. jo milke raat jaagte thhe
Naina.. sehar mein palke meechte hain yoon
Preeta and Shrishti starts walking outsidetheir house thinking of everything that happened crying... She also thinks ofKaran and remembers something:
Flashback
Karan: Ek vaada...
Preeta: Kaisa vaada?
Karan: Yeh ki tum hamesha mere saathrahogi...
Flashback ends
Saans hairan hai
Mann pareshaan hai
Ho rahin si kyun ruaansa ye meri jaan hai
Kyun nirasha se hain
Aas haari huyi
Kyun sawaalon ka utha sa
Dil mein toofaan hain
Naina.. thhe aasmaan ke sitaare
Naina.. grahan mein aaj toot'te hain yoon
She starts crying harder... Seeing thisShrishti who was also crying holds Preeta's hand... Both give each other anassuring smile of having each other at each's side... Shrishti remembers aboutSameer: her feelings, nok-jhoks, her crying holding his shirt when Sarla wasarrested, His giving her support when Preeta was in fire, their silly fight of.coms, his getting jealous in the Lohri function when she was talking withwaiters sweetly... She closes her eyes, cries and asks herself in her mind toforget Sameer... As now they can never be together...
They get into the taxi, crying... Shrishtirests on Preeta's shoulder thinking about her family, Luthra family andspecially Sameer while Preeta sees Mumbai for the last time... She reminiscesall her family moments, Moments with her mom, Dadi, Love from Luthra family:Rakhi, Mahesh, Dadi, Kritika, Ruchika and Respect from Rishabh. But the mostshe could remember was Karan: All their silly fights, his keeping her differentnames, his calling her Kareli, their dances, he telling her that she lookedbeautiful, their moments in the hotel trying to expose Sherlyn, he making hersmile when she was sad or crying, he fighting from goons for her and gettinginjured both at Rishabh's sangeet and from Sanju and many more... She closesher eyes... They reached the railway station walking like two lost peoplelifelessly with no emotions on their faces except tears falling from theireyes... Shrishti gets into train while Preeta sees the station rememberingtheir coming to Mumbai... She puts her foot on the train
Flashback
Preeta putting her foot first time in Mumbaion the station.
Flashback ends
Preeta in her mind: Alvida Mumbai... Itnekam samay mein humein apnane ke liye shukriya... Humne itne kam samay meinyahan itni acchi yaadein bana li hain ki ab yahan se jaana bahut mushkil ho gayahai...(Remembers every good moment in Mumbai)
Lekin humein jaana hoga... Kehte hain na ekburi yaad sabhi acchi yaadon ko bigaad deti hai... Aaj humare saath bhi yahihua...'(Remembers the bad thing happened with them)
Shrisht: Di...
Preeta wipes her tears and gets into thetrain... They leave Mumbai...
Do tell how was the story... I will updatethe next part soon...😛
And keep reading to know what happened thatPreeta and Shrishti left Mumbai...😛😉
HEY EVERYONE!
THE STORY HAS NOW BEEN SHIFTED TO WATTPAD!
THANK YOU FOR ALL THE SUPPORT EVERYONE SPECIALLY NIRAJ BHAI!
LINK:- https://www.wattpad.com/story/147276554-preeran-humdard
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