Beauty And A Dusht Danav MG - repost - Epilogue pg 127 - Page 98

full bollywood istyle climax tha yaar!







Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 5 years ago

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

full bollywood istyle climax tha yaar!

fights, dishoom dishoom and hero getting the the award of superhero!😆

aaj kal tho movies me bhi the end tak sab boring hojata hai

we don't get to see the last minute cops scene anymore🤣

oh did i forget mentioning the khoon bhari maang wala scene

writerji sach batao kya wo zaruri tha😛

and gadha tho har story me ready rehta hai chance pe dance marne k liye

anyway good to know k by the end of the tale heroine isn't an abla nari anymore... which i highly doubt she was at the beginning!

fastfarfast-kar k padliya😆

wo kya hai na comment long pending hogaya tha

do keep writing!

sab kuch pehle kar chukke hai toh zaroori tha 😆
bollywood ending tha par heroine super hero hui thi 😃
thanks for reading the ending

the last part and the epi ware a bit too fast phased i felt

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

the last part and the epi ware a bit too fast phased i felt

jyse koi train chootrahi ho😆

phir se shadi and she's already preg😲

BABAJI!!😲

matlab sab kuch pehle hi☺️

gadha kahi ka iss se na iss zada ummed bhi kya karsakte hai😡

i was expecting kuch aur from this story

i remember reading a comment from someone when u were writing this one... and even the title i thought this was some rom-com kind of thing😕

but chado it was nice to see a glimpse of jhalli geet gfter such a long time

Do keep writing!

RomCom was Chura Liya which is playing in a thread near you right now 😆
I thought you wanted to read that
but you chose to read the end of this.
BTW, She was not pregnant then, just nauseous with the smell of mushrooms and eggs; even I get that way with the smell of eggs...
Chalo at least you finished one of my stories

Originally posted by: dqno1

RomCom was Chura Liya which is playing in a thread near you right now 😆
I thought you wanted to read that
but you chose to read the end of this.
BTW, She was not pregnant then, just nauseous with the smell of mushrooms and eggs; even I get that way with the smell of eggs...
Chalo at least you finished one of my stories

Kiara are you reading this as well? 

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Kiara are you reading this as well?

No.. i'm currently reading Chura liya