AvNeil SS : 'Dus Din Ladki In.!' (Completed) - Page 23

Originally posted by: RomComFan

This Tillu though... uff... loved it... cant wait for the party and proposal ...

Originally posted by: drbeth

Take a bow both of u.👏 Thank you so much!😃

Wht an amazing turn of events!!.I could hv nevr guessed dis.I literally read it twice coz I couldnt believe wht I read fr d first tym.So pleasantly surprised.I hv a smile plastered on my face ryt nw. Awww that is so sweet of you to say that!😳

I alwys had a doubt...whn did Avni fall in love wid him.I mean c ws impressed and all...but did c realise c has fallen in love...nw my doubts r cleared😆 M glad we were able to answer all your questions!

D proposal ws a surprise too and a cute one.

D line where he says he loves her bcz of d person he is whn he is wid her...absolutely loved it.It ws just simple yet says so much more.Heart melting one. Thank you! I believe, that the simplest of words somethimes convey the deepest of meanings!

And Neil knws his wifey so well...he knew exactly hw c would react whn he says some other girl's name...yet he did it.Avni's reaction ws lovable. 😉 Yes! Smart guy that he is, he knew how Avni would react & therefore, riled her up jaanboojh key!😆

Der could nt hv been a bettr ending. Omg! Thank you!😳

Waiting fr d epilogue. Ah! So you want one! What if we gave you 2? Well, what do you think?

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Meine kaha ki aap dono kuch toh jhol karenge ! But this was unexpected 😲 I was like what , when and how ?! 😆 I know you both would have had that devilish grin of yours 😈 Mission accomplished 😆😎 Hona hi tha ye itna pakaya aap logon NE .

So all this secret admirer stuff was to fill in the distance and longing ! I was thinking he will propose for marriage but he was there celebrating his first wedding anniversary ! This guy didn't let a chance to pull her legs even after he reveled his identity in the last card . He knows how to pull words from her ! Poor girl was thinking to test him but ended up revealing their relationship publicly 😆 How can he not enjoy his wife exercising her rights !

How did they maintain it ? Hats off man ! Aap log bhi Na kitna confuse kiya . Yahan track hi alag nikla 😆 Now I can get how Neil knows the exact recipe she will love .

My poor Ali !_Dil tod diya uska 🥺 Was it Mitali behind him ?

Originally posted by: paayaal

Hey Sri,

Hope you enjoyed our final jhol!!😆😆

Develish grin??? Hawww...never!! We are certified angels!!😆

Haila...humney pakaya aap ko?? Avni ko zyada dukhi kiya humney!😆

Neil is definately the naughty one! He can't resist an opportunity to tease his dear Wifey!!😉

Ah the haq thing! It just grabs my heart everytime, just like it did Neil's!! Is it any wonder that he loves her so...the girl has no artifice...just 100% pure emotions!

Well they maintained it coz they mutually decided to build on their careers first! & if Neil wouldn't know the recipe of love who else will??😉

Well we did start out with the intention of confusing you guys so obv we are very happy that we succeeded in that!!😆

Awww...u feeling sad for noodle bhaiya?? Should we make so that Ali gets the girl?? We as a writer will def fulfill our reader's demands!😉

We've decided to give Ali an open ending so to say...the girl could be anyone, not necessarily Mitali! Ab kush?😆

Thank you once again for the immense love that you've shown this SS!😃

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Certified Angels 🤔😆

My poor heart will always ache for Ali to have someone who will love him unconditionally !💔

Go go golmal ! This song is dedicated to you both 😆🤗

Originally posted by: rilsaf

Guys pls hit me

yeh kya tha aur kese huwa

Ullu banathi hume seriously?

How is it possible?

Awesome update

Ok abi keliye res hai

Mein phirse read karke kal jaldi se unres karthi hoon.

Sry bohath head ache hore.

Res

Unres

Guys meine two time read kardi. Ab bhi phirse read karneki mann kare par tabiyath nahi maanre.

Awesome update. It was totally unexpected. 😉

Meine socha nahi yesa hoga.😛

Secret admirer badle meon secret marriage reveal hogai.😆

Mujhe pata tha tum log kuch bomb blast karogi. But yeh nahi pata tha yeh itni badi hogi. And loved it very much.😳

The proposal was so cute and romantic😳

Bichara ali voh fasgaya ismein🥺

But u guys r so clever. Ek minute keli ye laga nahi yesa hosakte.

I loved how neil proposed her. His lines r so beautiful.

Eagerly waiting for epilogue.

Continue soon guys

Awesome🤗

Originally posted by: paayaal

Hi,

Thank you so much for such an amazing comment!😃

It has almost rendered me speechless...almost!😆

But seriously, you have been too kind with your words & praise!😳

Thank you once again!😃