AvNeil ff: The only meaning of my life-Neel very very imp note 16/4/18 - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
It's really beautiful dear please continue waiting for your next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
wow wonderful start.So it's Avni's drea.waiting for ur update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It really good... Neel ka reaction to hik becoming dad was so good... It actually was shocking in last to read that this was a dream and not sure if a reality
But their happiness was pure bliss...
Update soon further...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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So this is the second part. Next time I will try to be a bit quick with updates.
Thanks for reading. Silent readers a request to you please hit the like button if you like it and suggestions for the story are welcome.

2 DAYS LATER...
Neela came back from New York. She tried to contact Avni but she didn't pick up. The phone kept on ringing. She took a taxi and reached her home. She rang the bell and knocked the door several times but no one responded. Neela thought that Avni would be busy in the office so Neela drove there. Tension grew as Avni had not come to office since last 3 days. Neela sat on the bench worrying about what she should do. Kia came and handed a cup of cold coffee to Neela. She recognised her as Avni's best friend. Kia told that Avni had talked to her 2 days back. She sounded cheerful as she had learned to prepare Neel' s favourite chocolate truffle cake. After this Kia introduced Neel as Avni's boyfriend since last three years. All this long conversation had consumed around 45 mins. Neela tried to call once again. This time Avni picked up. "Maa...Maa ghar ... bachao...Mera ...Ba..."and her voice faded. They both shot up and drove back to Avni's home. They somehow managed to break the door. Neela looked around calling out Avni. Kia found the rotten cake in the kitchen . They rushed to Avni's room. The room looked like a fierce battle had been fought there.Kia pointed in the direction of the broken glass which had some blood spots on and around it. Bed was untidy,pillows and blanket were scattered on the floor. Curtain rod was half broken making curtains look like a mop. A beautifuly wrapped gift lay on one bedside. AvNeil 's picture were all over the bed. Avni was lying on the bathroom floor with the phone at a little distance from her. The smell in the bathroom clearly meant that she would have vomited before fainting. Neela carefully picked up Avni in her lap while Kia sent for ambulance. Avni looked as lifeless as a person who had been directly stabbed in heart. The wound incurable and painful.Avni's face was pale and weak. "Baccha aankhein kholo"Neela whispered in Avni's ear. She kissed her and tried to give her hope. As soon as the ambulance came Avni was taken to hospital.

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TBC

So finally second part is over. Will wait for ur views.
Third will be uploaded soon.
Edited by sugar_candy15 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nahi...
Kya hua avni ko...
Please update sooonn...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: ...SA...

Nahi...

Kya hua avni ko...
Please update sooonn...


Avni theek ho jaayegi.
Dont worry.
Baaki sab suspense hai ki avni ke saath aisa kya hua ki uski ye haalat ho gyi.
Pillu is on the way.😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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So. Avni is pregnant and henceshe is vomiting and all but where is neil and what happened to him...assuming from last update he is dead ... Happy for pillu on the way but what about tillu😆
Cant wait to see the mystery unfold...
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Hybrid_Freak

So. Avni is pregnant and henceshe is vomiting and all but where is neil and what happened to him...assuming from last update he is dead ... Happy for pillu on the way but what about tillu😆

Cant wait to see the mystery unfold...
Update soon


U will have to read further to know about tillu.
And yes pillu aa raha hai...
Thanks for reading😆
Edited by sugar_candy15 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Arrest, kya huwa Tilli Ko. Kaha hai Tillu?😭
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: avneil2

Arrest, kya huwa Tilli Ko. Kaha hai Tillu?😭

Update soon

Dont worry tillu aa raha hai...

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