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Posted: 6 years ago
OMG OMG OMG Wat a twist at the last...
Lietrally daraadiya ak ko aur hum sabko..
aise shock dene ki idea kaha se aati hain tujhe...
Baaki sab everything is too cute
just adorable...
every thing u showed clearly and nicelyyy...
Finally shaadi is done...
and thaali pe bhi twist uffo
game pe bhi twist
aajkal twist raani ban gayi ho
hmmm waiting for next do unfold everytghing soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
firstly big big sry for late comment.. all parts are amazing.. every rasam is nice
i like every scenes.. ak ka terrace pr jakar rona ki mai shadi nhi krungi very touchy family scene.. mehandi rasam is also beautiful.. nk irritated with mehndi but put it and after that naksh scene so beautiful
. juta churai rasam is also funny.. ak's bidai is very emotional me too feel like cry.. thali rasam is nice nk supports ak.. then anguthi rasam is also superb both win.. now naksh sr ak's fear is right.. last scene i think is ak's dream.. wanna waiting for next part now do update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: _nakshi_

OMG OMG OMG Wat a twist at the last...
Lietrally daraadiya ak ko aur hum sabko..
aise shock dene ki idea kaha se aati hain tujhe...
Baaki sab everything is too cute
just adorable...
every thing u showed clearly and nicelyyy...
Finally shaadi is done...
and thaali pe bhi twist uffo
game pe bhi twist
aajkal twist raani ban gayi ho
hmmm waiting for next do unfold everytghing soon

omg omg omg teri omg ke liye hi i tried to put twist because i want ur big wali comments i m reading it like this .. 
aww i m soo soo much happy that u liked my ff aww... ur feared.. 
dont worry na u knwed all 😃idea toh bas aa gai mujhe.. 
thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally aww aww i m just admiring ur comments. 
ab aur jayada jimedari bad gai meri 😳haa twist pe twist hi😆
twist rani pe aur bhi jayada jimedari aai na.. 
i will do update soon next part 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

firstly big big sry for late comment.. all parts are amazing.. every rasam is nice
i like every scenes.. ak ka terrace pr jakar rona ki mai shadi nhi krungi very touchy family scene.. mehandi rasam is also beautiful.. nk irritated with mehndi but put it and after that naksh scene so beautiful
. juta churai rasam is also funny.. ak's bidai is very emotional me too feel like cry.. thali rasam is nice nk supports ak.. then anguthi rasam is also superb both win.. now naksh sr ak's fear is right.. last scene i think is ak's dream.. wanna waiting for next part now do update soon

oo god mujhe laga tum pata nhi yaha ho bhi ya nhi.. 
thank god ur late comments aai but waww i m just admiring it so happy to read it ⭐️aww u liked that small cute scenes. maine toh bas try kiya hai.. 
aww every scene bhut socha fir likha maine.. 
aww haa nk is so dif na.. thanku thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally 😃
aww u felt cry aww.. 
haa ab next part main pata chalega that yeh sr kaisi hain. main kya bata sakti hu abhi se😳maybe nk essa hi ho. 
i will do update soon next part 
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Posted: 6 years ago
part-12
ak-nk...plz she shouted nd throwed to nk on floor nd closed her eyes.. 
after somtimes... bhabhi bhabhi.. ak opened her eyes.. 
ras-wat happened to u bhabhi.. 
ak-woh main woh.. 
kar-haa haa nk bhaiya ke khayalo main khoi hui ho kyo.. 
ak-woh nk yaha.. 
nanu-dont worry abhi thoda time hain woh bechara khud hi dara sehma hoga nd laugh... ak was tensed.. 
nk was walking in hull.. mohit was watching her nervousness.. 
mo-kya hua yr.. 
nk-bhut tension ho rahi.. 
mo-oye tu mard hai dar kyo raha haa.. ser ki tarah ja aur jit le apna pyar nd laugh.. 
nk-gave glare look to mohit.. saram karle kuch.. yr its not easy yeh arrange marriage hain agar kuch bhi galt kiya na ak ko pata nhi kaisa feel hoga yr.. chii.. aur yeh bhut jaldi jaldi ho raha na.. 
mo-dekh nk baith yaha... dekh ek bat bolta hu yeh ladkiyo ki na na main hi haa hoti hai esse toh tu ak ke karib aa hi nhi payega khabhi dekh thoda aage badna hoga tujhe hi phir ak bhabhi sath degi tera hmm.. tension mat le yeh first nyt isiliye hoti hai thaki ek dusare ko janne ka moka mile samjha bhuddu... than gy3 nd bm came..
gy-are munna chal bahu tera wait kar rahi.. 
nk-maa kya aap log munna munna karte rehte hai.. thoda sa toh ak ke samne woh has rahi thi.. 
bm-laugh ohoo dekho toh sar g ko kitna  jayada badal gaya abhi se.. nk beta chal ab thik hai na.. 
aa.. dey were taking to nk in room.. ak was on bed... 
bm-le aaja room main.. 
nan-na bhai mere risat do thabhi entry milegi.. 
nk-kya khudke room main jane ke liye bhi hame riswat deni padegi kya.. 
gy-haa bhai riwaj toh hai.. 
ras-chalo dada ke dost aap do mere jija g.. 
kar-haa jija g aap do hame plz.. 
mo-mujhe pata tha tum log mangogi nk main gujar chuka hu in sabse.. lo yeh big wali gift.. gave a big box.. 
nanu-waww mohit aapne laya yeh.. 
ras-waww so sweet jiju.. aa jao ander dadu.. all d best bhabhi.. sees to ak.. ak was red.. kitni lal ho rahi bhabhi jabse.. 
gy-sshh.. nk came inside felt soo much different.. 
nk-apna room lag hi nhi raha pehle wala mujhe toh.. 
bm-chalo sab... everyone leave.. gy3 nd bm were only there.. 
gy-are waah mast saja diya hai munna yeh khana hai aur dud pi lena dono.. ak mouth was open.. like dream its happen.. 
bm nd gy3 leave.. 
nk sat on bed.. ak was silent.. 
nk-ufff... itna stress... yeh door.. phir sab gus jayege band kar deta hu... he went to close to door.. 
ak was seeing to nk.. 
ak-yeh to dream ke jaise door close kar raha.. nk sat on bed.. 
nk-apko bhuk hai toh kha lijiye ak g.. 
ak-nhi woh sam ko hi khaya tha maine aap kha lijiye.. 
nk-nhi main bhi nhi khauga... bas.. put aside plate.. 
waise yeh decoration mujhe pasand nhi sab jagah flowers nd all.. 
ak-hmm.. she was fearing soo much everything is happening like dream.. swlly swlly nk was coming near of ak... ak was feeling cry... nk was just coming on aks side.. ak closed her eyes... after some time she felt that nk is not doing anything.. she opened her eyes.. 
nk-yeh pillow... aap i mean aap thik hain na.. aap chahe toh ghar pe bat kar lijiye sabki yad aa rahi hogi na.. 
ak-ak starts crying.. woh.. 
nk-aap ro kyo rahi.. ii mm ss.. sry.. kuch galt kiya kuch galt kaha.. dekhiye main apko mila dunga sabse plz dont cryyy plz... 
ak-nhi meri ek problem hai.. 
nk-kya.. i will manage.. 
ak-yahi ki main kisi aur ke sath bed share nhi karti. 
nk-kya.. rona kyo shadi hui toh.. 
ak-main change karugi aadat woh mujhe na full bed pe na fudakne ki problem hai aur bathroom bhi.. 
nk-kya.. 
ak-mere bathroom main koi gusse toh mujhe bhut chid aati h.. 
nk-itni problem aur itni badi badi.. main joke sunnane main thoda sa weak hu par aap smile kar lijiye kyoki yeh koi big issue nhi hai.. hum manage kar lenge.. 
ak-actually mujhe dar lag raha new new ghar.. 
nk-ooh thank god.. ak sees to nk.. means mujhe na lag raha tha ki aap dari hogi mere liye itna new hain toh apke liye toh kitna jayada new hain.. 
abhi hum shadi ke riste main bhand gye hai par yeh sr nd all pehle janle aap adjust karlijiye.. phir.. abhi main khud nhi janta kya karu kya nhi filhal toh apka rest lena better hain... 
ak sees to nk nd stooped crying.. 
ak-aap.. 
nk-haa ak g main change karke aata hu aap bhi kar lijiye hmm.. comfortable rahiye hmm.. 
he went in bathroom..bathroom was in nks room.. 
ak was feeling soo much happy... she sat near of mirror.. 
ak-haww aaj tak kisi ladke ko itna deeply toh nahi jana par agar nk jaise ladke se mera jivan hai toh i m feeling so lucky as of now ak took her night suit.. nk came out in t shirt nd lower.. 
nk-hiii mera ho gaya. maine bathroom ganda nhi kiya aap use kar sakti hai.. 
ak-sshhh.. laugh... woh esse hi muh se nikal gaya.. 
main aati hu.. she went in bathroom.. 
nk-kya hal kiya hai mere room ka uff.. 
cell phone mera work sab kuch pending pada hai.. mails check karta hu.. he laid on bed nd start checking mails.. 
ak wore crafry nd t shirt.. she wore bangle so much on hand nd sindur made poni high.. 
mehndi was so much dark on her hand nd on her feet also.. 
ak-sees to nk.. he was busy... aap.. nind aati hogi apko.. 
nk-hmm woh. sees to ak.. she was looking hot.. her pink lips... nk watching a little to ak.. but not showing.. 
woh aap so lijiye.. 
ak-kya main idar side main solu mujhe na us side nind nhi aayegi.. 
nk-sure... he went in other side... kitna kam... dey sees to blanket... 
woh.. 
a-ooh are ab majburi kya kare aap bhi le lijiye isi main.. plz agar mere hath ya pair lage rat ko toh advance main sry... 
nk-laugh aapko zuzu karate bhi aate hai.. 
ak-nhi mere hath pair nind main idar udar chale jate h pata hi nhi chalta na.. 
nk-hmm... he starts checking his mails.. ak opened her hair nd was putting lotion.. 
nk watching to ak nd felt this smell.. ak didnt notice that nk is watching to her.. 
ak-sees to nk that he is watching to her.. 
nk-woh aap so lijiye.. esee kule hairs.. 
ak-mujhe aadat hai aap cell phone.. 
nk-bas use kar liya.. 
ak-lights off kardu.. 
she switched off to power... nk took blanket ak too.. 
ak-turned her face oo god main kaise adjust karugi yeh blanket kitna chota hai.. 
nk-main khud is blanket main aa nahi raha hu aur ak kaise aayegi.. somehow dey adjust it.. 
in midnight ak turned her face nd swlly swlly coming near of nk... it was cold also.. 
nk was not getting sleep properly... 
ak held nks t-shirt.. nks sleep broke.. 
he sees to ak.. 
nk-yeh ak in low voice.. 
ak-ammm... 
ak swlly swlly hug to nk.. she grabbed nks leg from her leg.. 
nd starts moving it.. 
nk was just numb.. men feeling.. 
he was melting.. 
nk-akkk.. oo god.. oo god... ak... he put aside aks leg.. admire aks face which was so close of nk.. 
he sees her smile.. 
he can feel her breath.. 
nk-sote hue kitni sundar lagti hain na.. 
after sometimes dey got proper sleep.. 
more part coming soon... 
Edited by nakshkidiwani - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
in morning... ak nk were in hugging position.. nk hands were on aks back.. 
nk sleep broke.. lill.. he noticed that ak grabbed to nk tighter vry much.. 
nk-ak... 
ak-varsha sone dena mujhe abhi toh main thoda sa hi soi hu.. plzz.. sone dena mujhe.. 
nk-ak.. lill shout voice. ak opened her eyes nd sees to nk.. dey were so close of each. aks lipe touched to nks nack.. 
ak-woh skipped to nk.. sry.. sat on bed.. 
nk-koi bat nhi ho jata hai.. suddenly their door bell ringing so much.. woh main dekhta hu... nk went to opened to door.. nanu nd rashmi were on door.. 
ras-gud morning dada.. 
nk-aa gai tang karne haa. 
nanu-tu kya kar raha tha haan.. oye hoye lipstick nd all.. touched nks nack.. 
ak-haww.. 
nk-are kuch nhi hai aap log ko moka mil gya.. 
ras-vry gud morning bhabhi..
ak-gud moring rashmi.. 
ras-hum yeh kehne aaye the ki aap log ready ho jao breakfast ke liye nai bahu tulsi puja karegi aur phir aapko dada ke sath pagphere ke liye bhi jana hai na.. 
ak-kya ghar.. 
nanu-haa alg khushi hoti hai na.. jaldi aa jao hm... dey leave from there... 
ak-waww maja aayega main naha lu pehle.. 
nk-naaha lijiye main bhi laptop main check kar leta hu apna stock... ak went in bathroom nd took bath.. nk was working in laptop... ak came out in crap top nd lehnga.. 
nk-ho gaya apka.. 
ak-haa ho gya aap bhi naha lijiye.. 
nk-hmm he took towel nd went in bathroom.. 
ak-n... itni hadbad main the.. sees bed nd nks pic.. waise aap cute bhut ho dekha nhi itna cute kisi ko.. 
she comb her hair nd wore jewelry also.. put sindur also. 
ak opened cupboard... 
ak-haa nk ke liye dress nikal deti hu.. she choose one shirt nd jeans for nk nd put to it on bed.. 
nk came out from bathroom... 
ak was getting ready... suddenly nks phone starts ringing soo much.. nk attanded it.. 
nk-hloo hmm... thik hai karlo haa i will join office kalse for sure.. i checked mail also.. hmm.. ak didnt watching to nk but nk took shirt nd starts wearing it from cupboard... 
nk wore his cloth nd talking in phone.. ak turned nd sees to nk.. 
ak-mera diya hua nhi pehna... 
nk cut d cell phone.. 
nk- turned... are yeh bed pe kisne rakha.. 
ak-woh maine rakha socha aap dekhege toh pehen lenge. 
nk-are actually mujhe habit nhi na main esse hi aata hu aur khud dress leke ready ho jata hu na.. sorry.. 
ak-koi bat nhi mujhe bhi aadat nhi dheere dhere hogi.. main niche jati hu aap.. 
nk-bas main bhi ho gya ready sath chalte hai dono.. nk comb his hair nd naksh went in stairs.. all family got happy to sees to both.. 
ak-namaste maa... 
gy3 nd bm hug to ak.. 
gy-gud morning meri bahu.. 
dj - khub kush reh.. nk touched dj bm nd gy3 leg.. jita reh beta.. 
ras-dada bade chamak rahe aaj toh.. 
yash-mami aane ka asar hain... 
misti-are waah chachi aap kitni beautiful ho mujhe bhi esse hi ready karna.. 
ak-bilkul pakka daily. 
bm-le beta tulsi main pani dede tera pehla din hain na... hmm aa.. beta munna tu bhi aa.. ak laugh. nk made face.. 
gy-kyo muh bana raha.. 
ras-munna maa.. 
nanu-koi bat nahi bhabhi ko ab aadat ho gai hain sab chizo ki.. 
bm-lo pani do beta... ak gave water on tulsi tree nd brunt diya... 
gy-kitna aacha din hai na... aao nasta ban gaya hai.. munna tere fav aalu ke parate banaye hai aa bahu kha le.. 
now dey sat on table... ak nk were besides.. 
ak-bhut aacha hai.. 
nk-waww maa mujhe dona.. 
gy-ab teri bahu aa gyi usse mang woh degi main kyo du.. 
nk-maa aap bhi.. 
ak-lijiye gave paratha too nk.. 
nk-thankuu.. 
than mohit came.. 
mo-ooh mere bina breakfast.. aur kaise ho batao mujhe... 
nk-tu na baith yaha... than dey were having breakfast.. 
mo-aaj main bhi jauga sweetheart apne taiyari karli na puri.. 
ak-itni jaldi didi aap toh ruk jao.. 
nanu-nhi ak phir aaugi abhi mom ko bhi kam hai.. 
mo-jarur rahege bahbhi as of now bhut kam pending hai so jana hoga.. ab jaldi se baby ka jalwa karao aayege.. 
nk-datt.. 
ak - kya.. 
everyone laughs.. 
mo-waise naye logo ko tease karne main maja bhut aata hain.. 
dey finished breakfast.. mohit nd nanu were leaving.. 
ak hug to nanu nd gave sweet chocolate to yash.. 
yas-tqq mami.. 
mo-chalte hai.. hug to nk... khayal rakhna itni pyari bhabhi ka.. 
nk-jarur.. 
nanu-tum bhi ak... chalte hain.. dey leave.. 
dj-ab tum log bhi nikal jao hmm waha sab intjar karte honge.. 
nk-g bauji main kalse kam par ja sakta hu na.. ak sees to nk.. 
bm-munna abhi toh ja beta tu bahu ke pass hmm.. 
nk-g.. 
ak-chalti hu.. 
gy-chalti hu nahi aati hu keh hmm.. 
ak-g... aati hu.. dey leave from there.. naksh were in car.. nk was silent.. 
ak-aap bhut jayada kam ke liye utsuk rehte hain kya.. 
nk-mera pesion hai work.. i loved it.. bhut din hue na.. 
ak-hmm manti hu aap nick name bhut cute hai.. munna.. laugh.. 
nk-thabhi aap bar bar has rahi thi thabhi ajib sa laga. par koi nahi aap bhi munni hui phir.. 
ak-ak aacha lagta hain.. 
nk-hmm munni bhi laugh mujhe bhi kuch mil jayega tease karne ko.. 
ak-haa aacha hain na.. i m so excited sab kya kar rahe honge na.. 
nk-i think apka wait.. 
ak-haa maa toh bhut jayada meri mom dad bhi.. varsha toh hug karegi turant.. 
itni badal jati hai na life ek hi din main. pata bhi nhi chalta hai.. chalega.. 
nk-dont worry sabki change hoti hain phir habit main aa bhi jati hai haina.. 
ak-hmm bas thodi der aur.. 
nk can see her excitement.. 
dey reached in ms house... no one were waiting.. 
ak sees all over.. 
ak-koi nhi hai na dol na koi.. 
nk-dont worry kisi ko pata nhi hoga.. 
ak - aacha jab main gum ke aati thi 6 baje ki train ho toh bhi sab bahar rehte hai aaj toh.. 
sab bhul gye mujhe.. main bhi nhi jaugi andar batugi bhi nhi karne do wait.. 
nk-yeh thik nhi na... plz.. 
ak-no no waysss... 
now?? 
so sry for late update.. 
precap-ak shared her feelings with varsha nd ms family attacked on nk... 
Edited by nakshkidiwani - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
for me its fully enjoyable part.. super amazing part
i told na its ak's dream but i like her fear
what you wrote yr ak ko bed pr fudkane ki aadat h🤣i laughing like hell the word you used 🤣mai has has k pagal ho gyi 🤣 nk was like apko judo karate bhi aate h 😆mrng scene is nice naksh ka sath me puja.. then table scene is also nice g3 is so mature in ur ff.. car scene is wonderful munna munni scene is so cute.. now waiting for nk's khatirdari in ms
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Posted: 6 years ago
Itni daraawani dream omg 😆
aaj kal akal bohot use karne lagi ho logon ko buddu banaane mein
a cute sweet and intersting part it was...
Finally shaadi ki rituals almost finished with this part and naksh ki asli agnipariksha shuru hone jaa rahi hain
waiting for it eagerly
nk  slowly slowly is falling for ak...
Family bonding was nice
munna ka munni lol
Do update soon next part mrs ak ji wants grand welcome
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

for me its fully enjoyable part.. super amazing part
i told na its ak's dream but i like her fear
what you wrote yr ak ko bed pr fudkane ki aadat h🤣i laughing like hell the word you used 🤣mai has has k pagal ho gyi 🤣 nk was like apko judo karate bhi aate h 😆mrng scene is nice naksh ka sath me puja.. then table scene is also nice g3 is so mature in ur ff.. car scene is wonderful munna munni scene is so cute.. now waiting for nk's khatirdari in ms

aww i m soo soo much happy nd just admiring it ... tujhe esse haste dekh mujhe hi bhut hasi qa rahi.. woh toh esse hi likh di main haha bhut smart ho gai hai tu essa mat bol nonveg bat ho jayegi 🤣... abhi aur has le phir.. 
thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally.. mujhe toh hasi aa rahi aur likhne se jayada padene pe😆nk nd ak dono ki jid hai naa. 
haa i will do update soon next part 
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: _nakshi_

Itni daraawani dream omg 😆
aaj kal akal bohot use karne lagi ho logon ko buddu banaane mein
a cute sweet and intersting part it was...
Finally shaadi ki rituals almost finished with this part and naksh ki asli agnipariksha shuru hone jaa rahi hain
waiting for it eagerly
nk  slowly slowly is falling for ak...
Family bonding was nice
munna ka munni lol
Do update soon next part mrs ak ji wants grand welcome

awww i m just admiring it ur comments valuable comments hain meri ... 
mere andar brain hain nhi but tere sath rehke thodi si smart ho gai hu 😆yaiee dara di tujhe maja aaya dhinka chika 🤣😆haa shadi finish ho gai ab hogi thodi jhadap aur thodi natak pyar.. 
thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally... 
aww i m soo happy that u liking my ff i willl def try ki aachi tarah likhu. 
i will do update soon next part 😳