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Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 6 years ago

Very very nice lovely beautiful part.. kheer scene is nice

Sangeet funtion is really superb very nice all songs are awesome.. i like song selection very much ..they beautifully described naksh journey

Naksh also imagining their life as a couple that is very nice scene.. naksh chemistry is slowly slowly increasing day by day .. naksh simple talk is awesome..now waiting for naksh performance

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
Very very nice lovely beautiful part.. kheer scene is nice
Sangeet funtion is really superb very nice all songs are awesome.. i like song selection very much ..they beautifully described naksh journey
Naksh also imagining their life as a couple that is very nice scene.. naksh chemistry is slowly slowly increasing day by day .. naksh simple talk is awesome..now waiting for naksh performance

aww how sweet just loved ur comments 😛i m soo happy that u r soo much busy phir bhi u admiring my ff nd i loved ur comments yr..

aww u liked songs aww.. haa thanku thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally... 😃haa naksh love hui na i will do update soon next part 😊

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_nakshi_

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Posted: 6 years ago

It was a part..
first part was so cute
nice idea of showing and introducing one to the other
both parts of reminding the past was just awww...
both are cutest at their parts in bachpan
ak chulbuli and nk study minded
ak the dancer wow..
naksh dance was the best in part
guess this is the first and longest part where naksh were shown together
where is the twist/??/
shaadi in a day waiting for nxt do update soon

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: _nakshi_
It was a part..
first part was so cute
nice idea of showing and introducing one to the other
both parts of reminding the past was just awww...
both are cutest at their parts in bachpan
ak chulbuli and nk study minded
ak the dancer wow..
naksh dance was the best in part
guess this is the first and longest part where naksh were shown together
where is the twist/??/
shaadi in a day waiting for nxt do update soon

it is just a comment...i m just admiring it soo much happy that finally u loved this part soo much 👏thanku thanku soo much for ur big big wali comments dinka chika🤪aww i thought ki show karu dono ki journey aww u liked dance kitna socha maine tab likha😳haa ak ki hug hui na..

ab u told ke ki naksh bond dikhao toh dikha li..

haa ak ki dance yuhuu..

guess karli maine.. twist yahi ki ak ne hug kari aur their bachapan ki intro😆i will do update soon next part

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 6 years ago

part-10

mo-are are baki sab toh thik hain par nk teri cooler pe yeh mehndi ka dag kaise.. ak said haw.. mohit nd varsha laugh..

ak-nahi woh nk ke khud ke hath lage maine kuch nhi koya..

mo-oye hoye kissne kaha ki nk ko apke hath lage haa.. ohoo mera sala sarma raha.. nk starts blushing.. kal first night ke liye bhi kuch bacha ke rakh..

ak-hattt.. she runned from there.. varsha too went..

nk-maruga tujhe main oki...

mo-hihi... khud romance farma rahe aur mujhe bola ja raha..

nk-teri bakwas khabhi na khatam hone wali hai yuuu... than dey went in hull.. all were leaving..

dj-chalte hain ab toh barat leke hi aayege hum..

vis-g intzar rahega..

gy3-kitni khush hu bata nhi sakti..

yash-ab toh mami hamare sath hi rahegi na.. mamu..

nanu - bilkul rahegi hi na kal hum aayege aur apni bahu ko le jayege hug to ak..

ras-bye bhabhi kal aayege apki dress kitni pyari hain main aaugi kal dene hmm.. bye..

ak-bye..

ras-are dada ko bhi bol do bye jaldi.. everyone laugh..

nk-g chalta hu dadi kaka... touched their leg..

dadi-chalta hu nahi aata hu beta..

nk-smile g... sees to ak.. everyone were leaving.. bye..

ak-bye... now dey leave in ss... nk was on bed.. he was feeling so much Strange..

here ak was thinking about hug...

ak-smile ek pal main kaise connection sa ho gaya.. kitna electric touch tha pata nhi nk kal kuch.. varsha was besides.. uth na varsha..

va-kya hai jaldi utna hai kal yr..

ak-mujhe kuch puchna hain tujhse..

va-kya bol..

ak-varsha teri toh love marriage thi na.. bata na meri kal shadi ho jayegi aur phir nk ke sath first night... tu janti hain na is din ko leke ladke kya sochte hai hum toh abhi ek dusare ko jante tak nhi kya hoga kahi nk..

va-laugh itna sara doubt... essa kuch nhi hota hai yr... pehle samjhega nk tujhe pyar phir yeh sab pagal kahi ki..

ak-thank god take a deep breath.. varsha sees to her..

va-par.. laugh..

ak-kya..

va-essa bhi ladke sochte hain ki kyo itna wait kare agar nk tujhpe tut pada toh..

ak-kya tut pada means..

va-kuch bhi ho sakta hai baby.. yeh ladke na jab inke dil main yeh pyar vyar ki feeling na ho toh yeh ladki par tut ke padte bhi hai..

ak-sach kya varsha nk essa lagta toh nahi hai yr par kisi ka kya keh sakte hain n. mujhe toh bhut tension ho rahi hai varsha starts laughing.

va-just joking yr..

ak-made face.. pagal bhuddu.. dara diya mujhe..

va-sshh so ja re jo hoga kal aachese dekh lena hmm.. kyo itna sochna..

ak-tu nhi samaj rahi varsha...

va-chup so ja... she slept..

ak-uff.. hmm but she was thinking about it.. nd went in sleep in morning.. nks family was busy in haldi rasam nd aks family too busy in haldi rasam..

varsha got ready to ak. ak was in yellow suit...

here nk was in yellow kurta.. rashmi sat to nk on table..

nk-lo kel lo mere sath holi.. everyone laugh..

all girl-kya bhaiya aap toh esse keh rahe jaise hum apke sath koi julm kar rahe.. yeh toh isliye hai thaki aap bhabhi se sundar lago samko..

gy-munna toh hain hi sundar..

nk-thats like my maa.. yes apka munna best hain..

mo-oye hamne koj di tere liye itni sundar ladki warna tu toh bas business hi karta rehta..

mi-yes main toh chachi ke side hi hu..

ya-aur main mamu ke side..

ras-yes hum toh 50 50 dono ke side hain better.. are sari girls chalo attack karo na..

nk-eee eee dhayan se oki..

nanu-esse kaise dhayan se.. put ubtan..

nk-yakk yr..

bm-munna raja shadi karoge toh sehna padega khas yeh rasam esse hi chalti rahe.

nk-no ways tab toh aap sab mujhe yeh haldi nd all se roj nehlaoge..

gy3-jab munna chid jata hai aur bhi maja aata hain..

ras-dada nak ko side karo aur hame enjoy karne do girl girl selfiee.. main upload karugi pics..

nk-rashmi meri sakal tak toh dikh nhi rahi..

mo-dont worry munna raja yeh sab ki aadat dalle ab bhabhi tere face pe cake ki butter cream lagayegi aur selfiee legi tujhse gussa hogi aur selfiee legi.. everyone laugh.. nk made face.. here varsha sat to ak on table..

ak-eww wats this mujhe mat lagao yeh sab..

va-oye nakre mat dikha jayada..

ak-yeh kya hai..

da-beta yeh ubtan hain jo tum palour main karati ho usse bhi aacha dekhna kitni gori dikhogi jamisaa se bhi jayada gori..

ak-woh toh main hu bhi..

rj-ohhoo dekho toh kaise bol rahi jayada chatar mat kar ab sasural jayegi tu..

ak-toh bolna band kar du no ways mera hak hain bolna..

kaki-haa meri beti aachese bol sakti hain.. now dey put haldi on aks face..

ak-nice fragrance..

dadi-kaha tha na aacha hain..

ak-varsha selfiee le na..

va-hmm yeh hui na bat apni shadi enjoy karne ki.. dey were making poses nd clicks pics..

enjoyed so much..

va-are nk g ki pics aai hai.. haww bechare ka face hi nhi dikh raha dekh ak..

ak-hehehhh.. Joker lag rahe ekdom.. yeh rashmi bhi na..

rj-huhh apne hi pati ko esse bol rahi yeh ladki..

ak-toh..

dadi-badi bahu karne do bacho ko masti..

rj-chal naha le tere sasural wale aate hi honge joda leke phir palour wali bhi aa jayegi..

va-haan ak late mat kar.. ak went to take bath.. now nk took bath nd came in room...

nk-are maa aap kya kar rahe..

mo-maa aai hain sari chize collect karne ke liye..

gy-haa rashmi aur bache gaye hai ak ko joda dene tu bhi jaldi se ready hoja.. mera munna dulha banega..

nk-kya maa..

gy-haa beta sache dilse ak ko exept karna hmm.. rasam karni hain jaldi aana ready hoke.. jija ka hak hain sale ko ready karna..

she leave..

mo-le yeh serwani pehen le.. tu nervous hain kya..

nk-pata nho yr baki sari bat majak ki hai par mujhe sach main bhut ajib lag raha ki kalse koi aur bhi hoga is room main.. pata nhi main usse khush rakh bhi pauga ya nahi.

mo-rakh apyega par agar kosish kare toh tujhe jhukna toh apdega dekh..

nk-yr agar woh galt hui toh main nhi jhuk pauga sry..

mo-par tujhe usse pyar karna hoga bhut jayada..

nk-mohit meri first priority meri work hai.. aur ak ki bat hain main kosish puri karuga ki woh khush rahe par kosish toh usse bhi karni padegi na..

mo-haa par girl sry bolti nhi so better hain sry word ko yad rakhna aur riste ko maintain karna like ek deal.. jispe tu puri kosish karta hain.. hain na.. so soche bina ek rishta bana ak ko samaj ke mere sale..

nk-tu na.. oki main dhayan rakhuga par keh nhi sakta already sab kuch. mohit helped him..

nk got ready.. here ak was in her room.. came out from bathroom nd sees to kids nanu nd rashmi..

rj-dekh teri shadi ka joda laye hai..

ak-are didi aap baitho na rashmi tum bhi.. misthi yash apke liye mere pass chocolate hain..

she gave to them..

ak-waww bhut beautiful bana ke diya hai..

nanu-thank god yeh one piece tumhe pasand aaya..

ak-mujhe na indian wear utna pasand nhi lehnga nd all so yeh laga aacha..

va-classy hai..

ras-par dada ko toh saree nd all pasand hai..

ak-woh mujhe aata hi nhi pehnna.. nk insist toh..

na-nhi mera bhai tumhe zid nhi karega i m sure..

ak got happy..

va-bas palour wali aati hi hogi..

ras-hum bhi chalte hai ab sab wait kar rahe honge..

rj-are beta yeh sagun..

ras-par..

dadi-lelo beta kuch nahi hoga shadi ka joda jo late hain na usse dete hain.. dey took..

ras-chalte h hame ready hona hai.. dada bhi ready ho gaye honge bye.. milte hai thodi der main. dey leave..

rj-ak tera sara saman niche cartoon main hain aur yeh suitcase main tera abhi pehnne ka dress nighty sab.. hmm..

va-ek kam karte hai jab tak beautician aati hain hum ready ho jate hai hmm ak.. dey went to got ready..

here rashmi nanu all got ready..

dey sat to nk on sofa..

gy-lo sab tikka kardo nk ka.. nanu rashmi all put tika on nks head..

dj-le sehra munna ka.. dey put..

gy-najar na lage kissi ki put kala tika..

mo-sach main tu toh ekdom smart lag raha yr..

nk-smile..

nanu-haye is smile pe sab fida ho jayege..

more part coming soon

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 6 years ago

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Posted: 6 years ago

in aks house rj nd varsha got ready.. dey were searching to ak..

vis-kya hua ak ki maa..

rj-g ak nhi dikh rahi.. pata nhi kaha gai..

vis-kya ak..

dadi-mujhe lagta hai woh wahi hai jaha bachapan main rehti thi yad hain jab udas hoti thi..

vis-matlb.. all went in roof... ak was crying there.. all starts crying too..

sh-papa dekho na ak ko aaj bhi ro rahi esse hi gussa hain jaise pehle hoti thi..

vis nd rj went near of ak..

rj-dil bhar aaya..

ak-i m already missing u mom nd dad.. dadu.. sab mujhe nikal rahe na.. mujhe nhi jana main nhi ready howgi kyo ladki hu main kyo shadi ho rahi..

vis-mera bacha.. hug to her apko kya lagta hai mere dil main kuch nhi hota beta aapse jayada hum sad hai par khush hai apka bhi pariwar hoga pati hoga bache honge apki beti meri mooch kichegi mera sapna..

rj-aur jab tu aayegi toh itna sara khana banugi jamisaa ko kilaugi tujhse milne aaugi.. dekh dadi mera kaki varsha sab aaye yaha tab pariwar bana ab tera pariwar bhi banega hamse behtar hain na.. kissi ki beti laye hai toh dena bhi padega.. dadi nd all came near of ak..

da-beta yeh duniya ka dastur hai beta aaj hum tujhe bhej rahe matlb yeh nhi ki tu yaha phir nhi aayegi aur jayada hak hoga tera..

kaki-haa aur pata hain jab waha jayegi toh tere pati ke bina tera man nhi lagagega tu bolegi main toh 15 ki jagah 10 din rahugi.. ak laugh a little..

ak-essa kuch nhi hoga..

sh-tu ja ab maa papa sab mujhse pyar karege mera hak hoga.

va-haa aur teri kichkich bhi kam hogi hug to ak nd starts crying i love u bhut yad aayegi teri.. everyone is crying..

ak-mujhe samjha rahe par khudko dekho shabhi..

dad-bas ab khushi rahegi vishambher barat aane wali hogi ja ak ready ho beta varsha..

va-chal... she took to ak.. everyone wiped tears..

here barat was going in full swim nd everyone dancing soo much soo much... rashmi dj nd bm all were enjoying party..

nk was watching their happiness.. nk took blessing from mandir..

now barat reached on aks door.. rj nd all were waiting...

nk stood on door..

rj-aao mere jamaisaa..

mo-nose bacha ke mere ser..

ras-haa dada nak mat katwana..

nk laugh..

va-are yeh toh sagun hota hain.. kuch nahi hoga sar jhukane se..

rj did aarti nd put tikka on nks head...

rj-yeh upar neem hai uspe sagun ki stick mar dijiye.. nk did it..

rj-chaliye ak ko bulaiye... varmala ke liye..

ak was in room.. she got ready fully..

be-haa mast lag rahi aap bas... ak stood nd sees to her.. her dress was on floor length.. she made puff from front nd mantika put on puff... long big earrings.. jewelry in hand nd bangle also.. she didnt take pallu.. not nath also.. she was looking classy dulhan.. but soo much pretty..

than varsha came..

va-haww kitni pyari lag rahi tu yr..

ak-tqq...

va-chal nk aa gya.. dar lag raha..

ak-haa thoda thoda pehli bar dulhan bani hu na.. nk ko yeh look pasand aayega na..

va-bhutt jayada yr... chal.. varsha was taking to ak in hull.. nk was on door.. everyone sees to ak nd got happy soo much..

nk didnt see.. rj covered to ak.. nk was seeing from all over but didnt watch to ak..

gy-dekho toh munna ko kitna bechain ho raha..

nk-no main nhi hu na oki..

mo-hain hain hain bechain.. everyone said yuhuuu..

rj-le chawal nk beta ko dekhna mat aur jor se fekna hmm..

ak-g.. dey went apart nd ak was swlly going near of nk... everyone were seeing to ak nk..

nk watched to ak..

ra-waww kitni mast lag rahi bhabhi..

nanu-haa..

gy-sach chand hi lag rahi..

nk-in low voice yeh ak ko lehnga nath yeh sab pasand nhi kya to mohit..

mo-oye tarif kar na.. thoda sa toh change ho ja jaise usko like hain yeh tu bhi like kar oki..

nk-hmm... ak throwed rice on nks serwani nd went away.. everyone shouted soo much...

varsha gave varmala to nk.. nd ak..

mohit nd naman all climbed to nk on hand.. ak was on floor..

ak sees to ak nd admire to nk... she got happy soo much...

nk-are mujhe utrao na..

sh-are mere behno ke bhai ak ko uthao aur upar.. dey climbing to ak on their hand..

ak-aah... laugh.. utharo niche.

nk-mujhe bhi..

mo-aur upar aur upar..

nk-are... sar jhukana aachi bat hoti hai... nk head was down

everyone - yeh toh bhagwan ram jaisa hai..

nk put varmala on nks nack nd ak put valmala on aks nack.

now nk was on door.. he was seeing to decoration than rj pulled nks nose.. everyone laughed nd nk was shocked..

nk-are..

rj-rasam hain beta aao.. he entered inside.. ak was in her room..

nk sat in table...

mo-ohoo shadi ka laddu eat laddu..

nk-kitna irritating hain yeh..

mo-haa haa ab toh bas bhabhi ki bat hongi..

ras-woh dekho bhabhi aa gai nd laugh nk turned?

thankuuu...

Precap - naksh wedding nd naksh sr..

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 6 years ago

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_nakshi_

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Posted: 6 years ago

very cute episode..
they r truely two opposite poles which are getting united...
it would be interesting how they will be after wedding...
but nk pure sanskaari and ak chulbuli modern girl...
opposite characters to the one in serial
nothinggg so much to say but a cute smooth going part..
waiting for the actual story to begin with naksh wedding
sorry that m short of comments
do update soon waiting for the opposite poles how they mingle and adjust...

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: _nakshi_
very cute episode..
they r truely two opposite poles which are getting united...
it would be interesting how they will be after wedding...
but nk pure sanskaari and ak chulbuli modern girl...
opposite characters to the one in serial
nothinggg so much to say but a cute smooth going part..
waiting for the actual story to begin with naksh wedding
sorry that m short of comments
do update soon waiting for the opposite poles how they mingle and adjust...

aww i m soo soo much happy that u liking my story fully.. .

i m admiring it that u actually understand both feeling..

haa alg tipe hain dono ki thought aur alg hi hai dono ki thinking 😛problem should happen for sure but it would be tough to write...

but i will try my best.. thankuu thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally..

😃haa aage aage i will try ki u will like every part..

i will do update soon next part

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 6 years ago

part-11

nk turned nd everyone laugh... ak was not here.. nk made face nd gave glare look to all..

nanu-how sweet mera bhai kitna bechain ho raha..

nk-essa kuch nahi hai aap log mujhe jayada tease mat kariye..

mo-toh piche mud ke kyo dekha.

nk-ab aap log nam loge toh kya hoga.. thik hain ab nhi dekhuga..

ras-yeh lo finally aa gai re...

nk-i m not at all bewakuf oki.. ab ak aaye ya nhi main nhi dekhne wala fine sees besides.. ak watched to nk.. he was shocked.. wohh.. woh..

ras-fas gye..

var-kyq hua nk g kya aaj bhi aap ak ko nhi dekhege.

nanu-essa nhi hai yeh bechara toh ak ko dekhne ke liye kitna bechain tha hamne tease kara thabhi bechare ne mana kar diya..

va-aww..

ak blushed nk too..

than vis nd dj came..

vis-lo beta cold drink lo..

dj-haa bas 10 minutes main pandit g aa jayege tab phere chalu kar denge..

nk took cold drink... everyone were busy.. ak watched to nk he also sees d same..

nk-amm...

ak-aap bhut aache lag rahe is dress main..

nk-smile tqq.. hmm bas aap yeh lehnga nd saree nhi pehnti kya..

ak-saree mujhe aati hi nhi. kyo is dress main aachi nhi lag rahi kya..

nk-aache lag rahe ho.. essa nhi bola bas puch raha tha..

ak-main.. than rashmi varsha came..

va-aao mandap main bula rahe dono ko..

ras-chalo dada ab aai apke bandne ki bari.. laugh.. now dey took to ak nd nk on mandap..

dey took warmala.. dey were infront of each..

pa-ab aap dono warmala pehnaiye ek dusare ko.

nk put warmala on aks nack nd ak put warmala on nks nack.. everyone clapping soo much..

now ak nd nk sat on table..

pandit starts reading mantra.. vis nd rj had tears gy3 nd bm were soo happy..

pa-ab aap dono apni beti ka kanyadan karne ke liye aaiye... said to rj nd vis.. dey came...

vis nd ak sees to each.. ak starts lill crying..

bm also starts crying..

gy-bas bm..

bm-apni beti ki yad aati hai esse main.. mujhe toh..

vis put haldi on aks hand.. nd gave aks hand on nks hand.. rj too join nd pandit g put water..

nk-uncle main apki beti ki care karuga..

vis-hame visvas hain beta...

rj-haa beti toh beti hain... than dey went..

pa-aap dono phere ke liye khade ho jaiye... dey starts taking phere.. nk was infront...

than somthing stone came on aks way than nk took aside it..

pa-dekha abhi se inko apni patni ki itni care hain iska matlb yahi hai ki jo bhi problem aayegi dono ek dusare ka sath denge..

ak got happy to sees to nk. everyone passed smile... now its aks turn... ak came infront of nk nd took phere..

naksh took their seat...

pa-ab bari aati hai sat vachan ki dono dhayan se sun ke isko hamesha yad rakhiyega..

dono ek dusare ke hath main hath rakhiye.. nk ak feeling lill wired..

but dey put.. ak felt it...

pa-aap mere sath sath kahiyega nk.. main tumse wada karta hu jo bhi tumhare raste main problem aayegi usse main dur karuga. nk said it nd sees to ak... ak admire to nk..

nk-tum meri patni ho aur tumhara place tumhara hoga aur koi woh jagah nhi le sakega.

tum meri ho aur tumhari har bat pe mujhe visvas hog apura.. khabhi gussa aaye bhi toh tumahari bat hi mere liye aage rahegi.

hamari santan par dono ka hak hoga..

pa-ab ak g aap bhi boliyega mere sath sath..

ak-main wada karti hu apse bhut pyar karugi apka pariwar mera hoga.. hamara rishta bhut hi pavitra hoga. aur main hamesha apki bat ko first priority dungi.. mera pyar aur apka pyra ki misale denge sab.

hamari santan ko hum dono aage badayege aur hamare gun denge.. grabbed nks hand.. dey shared a eye contract with each.

everyone starts clapping..

naksh skipped their hand..

pa-ab aap beti ki mang main sindur bhar dijiye ek chutki sindur jarur hain par jab apki mang main bhar jayega aap chah ke bhi isse mita nhi payegi.. lo beta..

nk took sindur nd filled aks mang.. ak closed her eyes... nd felt this moment.. some pinch went on aks nose..

ras-are nak pe gir gaya main poch deti hu.. than nanu stooped..

mo-yeh bhut aacha sagun hai rashmi... pyar ke sath sath jayda sindur gira means ab nk jayada mange hongi ak bhabhi ki kyo bhabhi.. ak laugh.

nk-kya.. everyone laugh..

pa-aaj se aap dono pati patni hue.. naksh sees to each.. now ak was in her room nd nk was in hull..

nk-kya kar raha hain tu..

mo-yr mere bhut dusman hai tere jutte mere liye sir dard ho raha jab se sari girl ki najar mujh par hai..

ras-aacha toh hain jiju isi bahane sale ki shadi main essh hain apki.. main aati hu aao didi..

mo-ohoo pani.. nk tu tokri dekhna isme jutte hai..

nk-tu pani pile..

than shorya came.

sh-are nk g yeh hain na meri mosi ka beta hain..

nk-hii.. than varsha took shoes mohit sees to her..

mo-oye bhabhi nk sees to varsha..

nk-dadu aap bhi..

sh-sry nk g rasam hai.. nk laugh.. mohit runned near of varsha..

va-lag jayegi uuu.. mat de di na... varsha went.. nd mohit came.

ras-jiju jute kaha hai..

mo-gye.. mujhe bewakuf bana ke le gye.

nk-tu hain hi bewakuf banane ki kya jarurat..

ko-aacha khud kalti mar li tune aur sasural walo ka sath de diya na thabhi yeh hua..

nk-aacha hua tera confidence to tuta..

mo-idea main kojuga har jagah... rshmi nanu tum dono bhi chalo.. dey went in aks room..

va-are aaiye na aap log..

ak-didi baithiye na.

nanu-nhi hum tumhe khane pe le jane aaye hai aao..

va-thik hai..

ras-dada wait kar rahe aaiye.. dey leave from there...mohit sees everywer shoes but he didnt find..

he went in hull.. nk nd ak were having dinner..

ras-mile jiju..

mo-nhi yr sab jagah dekhe yeh varsha bhabhi ussi room main thi kahi gai bhi nhi jute gaye toh kaha gye.. varsha laugh..

mo-woh jit gye..

nanu-koi bat nhi...

now naksh finished their dinner..

dj-ab bidai ki taiyari karte hai.. sari rasam ho gai hongi toh..

va-ese kaise nk g bina jhuto ke kaise jayege..

gy-are haan kiske pass hain jhute..

mo-pehle shoes show karo..

va-pehle kimat..

vis-beta yeh paise..

dadi-yeh toh hak hain inka lo beta aachese..

va-yaiee hum toh pure 10 000 lenge..

mo-baap re itne sare nhi denge hum..

ras-yeh toh cheating hai.. hain na dada..

nk-main kya..

dj-le munna tu itna kanjus hai..

va-kanjus kanjus kanjus..

ras-are yeh toh back mail karne wali bat hai.

va-thik hai baithe raho esse hi.. nhi donge toh hamari ak se paise ka kya moll..

nk-thik hai.. aapki jid hai toh fine..

va-yaiee..

mo-lelo lelo money ak bhabhi ko toh hum le ja rahe.. everyone felt sad..

sry riwaj hai..

va-meri saheli ko khush rakhna.

nk-wada..

ras-jhute hain kaha hamne har jagah koje kahi mile hi nhi..

va-jhute yahi hai..

da-kaha hai hame bhi batao..

va-ak.. he wore nks shoes.. everyone were shocked..

ras-waah dimag toh hai..

nanu-ab toh aadhe ak bhabhi ke bhi hue kyo bhabhi.. ak passed smile..

ak-mujhe varsha ne kaha tha..

mo-man gye aaj akal badi ya bhais..

more part coming soon

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than varsha cleaned d shoes..

va-mqin pehna deti hu pair aage laiye nk g.

nk-kya bhabhi bilkul nhi aap mere pairo ko hath lagaye yeh main bilkul nhi kar sakta yeh apki amanat gave money.. bas main kar lunga.. ak sees to nk.. varsha passed smile..

va-aap bhut aache hain nk g..

nk wore shoes...now

rj nd vis sat all aks things in nks car... its time for bidai ak was in her room..

da-aache se rehna beta hamara nam rohsan karna puri tarah se..

ak-dadi hug to dadi dey starts crying.. than gy3 nd bm came in room..

bm-haww ro mat beta.. wiped aks tears.. hum tere maa ki tarah hai..

gy3-g bidai ka time ho gaya.. ak held varshas hand nd she starts crying..

ak-maa... varsha main nhi jaugi mujhe bhut dar lag raha..

rj-in crying tone essa nhi bolte hain na ab nk g hi tere liye sab kuch hai aur gy3 g teri maa..

gy-beta tumhe koi kami nhi hogi waha wada aao... ak stood nd sees her room..

ak-mera room... varsha dhayan rakhna mere maa bauji tera dadi sabka... in crying tone... ak was going nd feeling so crying... dey all were in hull..

dj-chalte hain hug to vis..

vis-g sees to ak..

ak-bauji.. hug to vis... starts crying louder... bauji main kaise rahugi apke bina mujhe bhut dar lag raha i will miss u i really love u bauji..

vis-he also crying.. me too beta apna dhayan rakhna hamesha jab bhi koi problem hogi na apke papa sath honge hamesha wada hain mera... sachi raste pe chalna hmm.. aaiye. took to ak..

ak-dadu.. varsha hug to both.. mujhe nhi jana i love u all..

sh-we love u too bass.. sab waha bhut aache hai hamse bhi aache.. nk cant see to ak like this..

nk-put his hand on aks shoulder.. ak sees to him..

rj-ak... with terry eyes...

ak-mom..

rj-bas main janti hu tu aache se rahegi hain na...

kaki-sone ki chiriya aaj udd rahi dhayan rakhna beta..

aao.. dey sat to ak in car..

ak-ak held viss hand..

vis-jaldi milege chinta mat kariye hmm.. bye.. swlly swlly ak skipped vis's hand..

said bye to all nd was crying.. in ms all were crying.. ak was crying soo much in car..

nanu-bas ak hum sab hain na...

mo-haa bhabhi nk hain na apke sath oye nk..

nk-mai..

ras-dada aap plz..

nk-ak aap.. put his hand on aks shoulder... bas...

ak-sees to nk... now dey reached in ss house.. ak sees from outside.. nk took back his hand... gy3 nd rashmi took out to ak from car..

ak was on door.. ak sees this big house.. felt lill happy..

bm-chunari... wore duppata on aks head..

other ledy-wawwhh munna teri bahu toh bhut sundar hai re..

ak laugh lill..

ak-munna..

nk-aunty.. made face..

gy3 put tikka on aks head.. nd in nks head also..

finished aarti also..

gy-aao andar beta... yeh rice glass ko gira ke rangin paw se..

ak throwed rice nd put her feet on colour nd came in house..

ras-hmm ab yeh thali hai ek ek member ki thali dj bm nanu di meri aur bauji last main nk bhaiya dekhte hai kiski bajegi aur kiski nhi..

uthaiye...

ak took first thali..

nanu-maa aap safe ho everyone laugh ak too.. now its second time ak took it..

mo-lo bhai sas bahu ki toh jam gai ab dj aur bauji ki bari..

ak took thali silently..

ras-vry gud bhabhi now dada aur apki lets see two different side ki pategi ya nhi.. ak was swlly swlly taking that thali but her hand skipped a little nd all thali went on floor..

everyone kept silence... ak made sad face..

nk sees to all..

nk-koi bat nhi thali hi toh hai baj gai.. helped her...

everyone passed smile..

rb-yeh hui na bat bhai pati patni ka rishta thali jaisa hota hai par yeh dono ek dusare ki help karke isse dur kar lenge hai na.. ak passed smile to sees to nk..

gy-bahu thak gai hogi na bhut room main le chalo..

nk-haa main bhi thak gaya hu..

ras-dada main apki dress lati hu yaha oki... aap rat ko jana everyone laugh..

rashmi nd nanu took to ak in room... ak sees to room..

nanu-kaisa laga room bhabhi...

ak-its gud one but..

ras-i know boy log tipe ka hain na koi nhi ab aap apne hisab se set kar lena..

nanu-aacha nk ko toh bilkul pasand nhi ki uska koi bhi saman chede..

ras-ab sudar jayege biwi jo aa gai.. nd laugh than karishma nd gy3 came..

kar-are main bhi aa gai..

gy-haa ak thik lag raha na beta..

ak-g aunty..

kar-are bhabhi g ab maa kahiye..

ak-g au. maa..

ras-how cute...

kar-ab aap bhi change karke rest kar lijiye bhabhi..

gy-mujhe nk ke liye dress chahiye ak tum do beta...

ak-main..

gy-haa jo tum dogi wahi pehnaugi main..

ak opened cupboard nd gave kurta..

nanu-wawww aacha hai..

gy-chalo hamari pasand to milti hai..

kar-haa ak bhabhi aap bhi suit pehen lijiye ab... gy3 went... ak changed her cloth..

ak-kitni thak gai thi..

ras-aap so lijiye..

kar-haa haa phir rat ko toh nk g sone nhi denge nd laugh.. aks sitti pitti gul...

nanu-laugh dar kyo rahi itna dont worry na.. sab aacha hoga...

solo thodi der... ak took rest in nks room.. here nk also took rest..

after sometimes everyone took rest nd got ready for rasam...

ak comb her hair put mangtika nd took duppata on her head..

she was in suit..

nk was in hull..

nk-maa main kal office ja sakta hu kya..

gy-laugh shadi ke bad log bahana lagate h na jane ka par isse dekho waah re..

mo-pagal aaj teri first nyt hai aur tujhe koi chinta nhi..

nk-oyee... than ak was coming from stairs nk watched to her nd flet on ak. rashmi sat to ak besides nk..

gy-ab yeh dud ki thali main mai yeh ring dalugi aur jo isse lega uska raj chalega..

gy3 put ring inside milk.. nk nd ak were searching.. after sometime nk got ring..

nk - wohh..

ras-are waah dada aap toh jit gye.

kar-kya bhabhi apko bhi pakadni hai khud ki chalani hai.

gy-koi bat nhi next time bhi hai she again put ring... this time ak searched it nd got it.. nk made face.. ak laughed..

ak-yaiee..

nama-dekha yeh ladies ko mat mile na haregi nhi yeh.

ras-oo god yeh to tie ho gaya.

gy-ab final turn jisko milega woh jitega hmm... naksh were ready...

gy3 put ring nd naksh were searching.. ak sees to nk.. their hand touched with each...

ring was in middle so nk nd ak from grabbed to ring.. no one want to skipped it..

nanu-kuch gadbad hai dono hath bahar nikalo toh.. naksh showed their hand.. both grabbed to ring tighter.

nanu-lo yeh to ziddi nikle..

bm-haww ab kon jita..

kar-i guess bhabhi..

mo-no mera dost..

gy-ek kam kaete hai dono ko jita dete hai.. hmm.. lo nk bahu ko ring pehna do.. nk wore to ring to ak..

bm-rat hone wali hai.. room bhi decorate ho gaya hai rashmi karishma tum log bahu ko ready kar do..

dey took to ak in room.. wore heavy suit to ak... with lill makeup..

ak sees to decoration...

ras-kyo dar rahi bhabhi aap hamare dada bhut sarmile hai essa waisa kuch nhi hoga..

kar-par ziddi bhi toh hai.. rashmi aao na ek bar mere room main kam hai mujhe..

dey leave from there.. nd now ak got varshas call..

ak-hloo i was missing u..

va-kaisi hain tu man hi nhi lag raha tha tere bina ghar room sab kaisa hai..

ak-khub bada ghar hai.. room bhi aacha hai par thoda change karna hoga.. mom dad dadi sab kaise hai..

va-sab so rahe rest le rahe tera wait kar rahe ab for pagphere.. aacha ab tu ready ho gai sr ke liye..

ak-varsha..

va-kya hua dar lag raha kya..

ak-bhut jayada varsha kitna ajib hai yeh sab nk kahi jald bazi toh nhi..

va-tu chinta kyo kar rahi hai sab aacha hoga na.. pehle tu aachese smile kar hmm..

ak-kitn ajib h koi ajnabi yeh flower wala bed yakk..

va-laugh ak sab ke sath hota hai yeh.. dont worry.. tu khush reh aur enjoy kar yeh pal..

ak-koi aa raha bad main bat karti hu bye.. cut to call..

nanu came with gy3 nd bm..

yas-waww mama ka bed kitna sundar hai.. main yahi souga..

gy-pagal... are ak tumhare aur munna ke liye dinner..

put thali on table..

bm-mast decorate kar diya hai than mohit nd nk came..

nk-oo god itna decoration..

mo-oyee jayada muh mat bana.. chal andar..

ras-nana.. pehle riswat.. oki...

nk-kya natak hai yeh har jagah paise paise..

mo-mujhe pata tha yeh log magege hi lo paise..

nanu-are waah sari planning aao andar nk phir..

nk-hmm.. gy3 sat besides to nk..

bm-chalo sab hum bhi..

yas-main yahi so jau..

mo-oye chal main aaj tujhe mast si movie dikhuga waise bhi yaha sone kon wala hai kyo nk.. ak feared a little.. nk passed smile ak sees to nk..

ak-yeh has kyo raha..

ras-oki bhabhi bye..

nanu - all d best ak..

everyone went.. naksh were alone..

nk-aap khana kha lijiye mujhe bhook nhi are door kula hai band kar deta hu koi aa jayega phir.. he closed d door..

ak was shocked..

ak-yeh nk itna fast..

nk-amm kya hua ak aap thik hai na i mean dinner..

ak-woh mera pet bhara hai bas bhook nhi hai..

nk-ooh than side main rakh deta hu khana.. put aside..

aacha decorate kiya hai hut mujhe chid chid aati hai itne roses hai toh..

ak-g mujhe bhi adat nhi in sab chiz ki.. nk sat besides of ak..

nk-aur kya pasand nhi apko grabbed aks hand..

ak-nk apko yeh..

nk-kya hum pati patni hai ab.. aur jab yeh pehli rat pyar karne ko mili hai toh bat se kyo waste karna..

ak-par nk itni jaldbazi..

nk-life ek deal hai kaklo aapne yeh bol diya toh mai kaha jauga ki sr pe kuch hua hi nhi.. came close..

ak-nk i m not ready..

nk-but aap bold ho haina aur smart bhi so u know kya hota hai.. aur kalse mera office hai so aap yeh na kahe hubby ne pyar nhi kara kyo..

ak-par nk yeh sab mujhe apko janna. aur..

nk-nice lipstick i love red colour... roamed his hand on her hairs...

u r soo pretty... i really like u... he swlly swlly came near of ak.. nd put his lipe on her..

nd ak closed her eyes..

ak-amm.. waana free from his grip..

but nk was not in mood to skip to ak... he starts smooching on aks lipe.. ak was hitting to nk...

so sry for late update.. thanku for ur valuable time.

precap-ak nk went in ms for pagphere

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