#pyar bhari takrar ff#. naksh ff part-43/38(Page 6)

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Posted: 2018-01-20T22:32:20Z
Originally posted by nakshkidiwani


Originally posted by Pragati-naksh


once again lovely lovely part.. ye part read karke aisa laga ki tu modi ji k safai abhiyan ka prachar kr rhi h LOL like naksh meeting and their lunch with each other.. phone convo scene is also nice and uske bad sabka nk ko tease krna LOL every scene is beautiful.. ak waiting for nk and he didn't came she was in dilemma.. waiting to see how their story unfolds Smiledo wrote next part soon

aww i m soo happy that u r connecting with my ff soo much gud feeling yr..
i never thought ki is tipe ka kuch likhu thoda ups down aayegi but haa main apna best karugi.. aww nice laga.. i updated next part read nd tellWink
modi g ko nhi dikhaugi abLOL
m also happy that u liked my comments.. modi ji ko aur dikha bhi di to no problem isi bahane thodi samaj sewa bhi ho jayegi LOLROFL
Posted: 2018-01-20T22:32:45Z
next part is on page 5Edited by nakshkidiwani - 2018-01-20T22:32:50Z
Posted: 2018-01-20T22:36:21Z
Originally posted by Pragati-naksh


Originally posted by nakshkidiwani


Originally posted by Pragati-naksh


once again lovely lovely part.. ye part read karke aisa laga ki tu modi ji k safai abhiyan ka prachar kr rhi h LOL like naksh meeting and their lunch with each other.. phone convo scene is also nice and uske bad sabka nk ko tease krna LOL every scene is beautiful.. ak waiting for nk and he didn't came she was in dilemma.. waiting to see how their story unfolds Smiledo wrote next part soon

aww i m soo happy that u r connecting with my ff soo much gud feeling yr..

i never thought ki is tipe ka kuch likhu thoda ups down aayegi but haa main apna best karugi.. aww nice laga.. i updated next part read nd tellWink
modi g ko nhi dikhaugi abLOL
m also happy that u liked my comments.. modi ji ko aur dikha bhi di to no problem isi bahane thodi samaj sewa bhi ho jayegi LOLROFL
ek comment ki kimat tum kya janoLOLWink.. 
samaj sewa toh esse bhi kar rahi hu na main.. 
par tune kitna sikha ROFLkitchen main cup rakha kyaLOL
 
Posted: 2018-01-21T08:25:48Z
It was a good part...
actually to comment more i have no words
since its clear both are different in their choices
it takes time to build their bond 
with growing parts we have more to express
this part loved ak chulbuli nature
her way of expressing story to nk and nk expressions hahahah
nk and ak trying to adjust for each other
as said staying together with oppsite ends is difficult
As of now shopping is done and now waiting for aage
do update soon
Posted: 2018-01-22T23:56:27Z
Originally posted by _nakshi_


It was a good part...
actually to comment more i have no words
since its clear both are different in their choices
it takes time to build their bond 
with growing parts we have more to express
this part loved ak chulbuli nature
her way of expressing story to nk and nk expressions hahahah
nk and ak trying to adjust for each other
as said staying together with oppsite ends is difficult
As of now shopping is done and now waiting for aage
do update soon
aww m just Day Dreaminglike this part soo much yr.. 
aww u waana say much more aww.. it is like really a gud feeling.. thanku thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally.. 
yes aks fear is true i waana show ki different sade ki feeling kaisi hoti hai.. 
u r ryt it is vry early to say anything swlly swlly main try karugi justify karne ki story.. aur jo i waana show woh tumhe pasand aaye prinyu bas Winki will try to update next part soon Embarrassed
Posted: 2018-01-22T23:56:42Z
part-6
now dey returned back... nk was working in his room.. suddenly aks smile came on his mind nd he passed smile.. 
gy3 sees nks happiness.. she laugh.. 
gy-munna.. he didnt heard.. munna.. 
nk-are haa ooh sry.. kya kaha apne.. 
gy-khana lai hu tere liye kha le.. 
nk-hmm.. he starts eating.. 
gy-waise tu bhut jayada excited hai na.. 
nk-haa bhut jayada mera dream pura hoga.. 
gy-mera bhi teri smile dekh ke pata chalta hai.. 
nk-haa har maa ko khushi hoti hai bete ki khushi main yeh deal bas ho jaye. 
gy-kya kon si deal. 
nk-are wahi deal u know na meri Chaina wali deal.. u know maa maine online bat ki unse aur agar mujhe unki call aa gai than 1 week waha jake meri dream project puri ho jayegi.. 
gy-beta teri shadi main ak ki bat kar rahi thi ki tu kitna khush hai ab tu ek week bahar jayega phir teri.. 
nk-but shadi toh mere aane ke bad rasam chalu hogi na.. 
gy-par beta.. 
nk-maa mera dream hai yeh aap batao agar yeh step ak mere sath nhi chalegi than kaise hoga.. main itna toh usse le sakta hu yahi hamari life hogi na.. 
gy-par aaj kal girls jayada time chahti h hubby ka.. 
nk-par maa mera time ke sath family aur ak ko aage badane ke liye hi yeh sab kar raha hu.. hardwork usse samjhna hoga. 
gy-thik h teri zid main bol dungi fine.. suddenly nk got a call.. 
here ak was busy in Facebook.. she was laughing.. 
varsha sees to ak.. 
va-madam apka milk le lijiye kisse bat ho rahi nk g se.. 
ak-nope meri frd se.. bas band kar hi rahi thi.. kya hua.. 
va-kya abhi hasi aur abhi nervous tu kyo.. 
ak-pata nhi varsha aaj na nk aur main na means told about game.. 
kitna ajib laga jab usne mujhe touch kiya like maine boys se frdship kari hai but hug bhi kari nk ke sath ek pal essa laga kissi anjan ke sath hu bas bhag jau yaha se.. 
varsha laugh-yeh ehsas har kisi ko hota hai thoda ajib lagta hai actually bhut ajib.. par jab ek dusare ko janne lag jao na sab thik ho jata hai aur woh tumhe touch karega toh juba main na hoke bhi haa rahega essa hota hai pyar ehsas jajbat. abhi nk ek kuli book hai jab tu unhe pasand karegi na toh unka touch sabse pyara hoga.. 
ak-chii varsha kitna ajib lag raha.. 
va-pagal yeh jo ek week hai isse g bhar ke jan le bas.. 
ak-varsha bat jayada hai aur mere hone wale pati ke pass time kam.. waise woh aacha hai par paheli sa hai.. 
va-aacha hai na roj ek nai paheli kulegi.. 
ak-pata nhi kya hai kya nhi agar kuch karte nhi toh rokte nhi aur respect karte hai yeh aacha hai.. 

va-ek gud news du kal tera sagun leke aa rahe tere sasural wale.. 
ak-omgg yeh rasam nd all.. 
va-isme ladka bhi aata hai ek aur moka hoga tujhe nk g ko samjhne ka.. 
ak-datt pagal.. 
va-aacha g tere nk g haa.. 
here in nks room misthi came near of nk.. she was crying.. 
nk-kya hua.. 
mi-main game kel rahi thi aur meri mummy ne data aur bhaga diya.. 
nk-aww.. 
mi-main apke main kel lu. 
nk-jayada  der nhi bas two times.. 
mi-promise... misthi took cell phone... nd nks whatsup was on.. misthi sees aks pic.. 
chachi.. smile.. she type by mistake gudnyt dear msg nd close d whatsup nd starts playing game.. 
ak nd varsha were laughing.. 
suddenly ak got a msg.. 
varsha took it.. 
ak-chod na kiska hain.. 
va-waww nk g ka gn dear.. waww ha dear nd all.. 
ak-watt nk ne dear.. she sees it.. her heart skipped a little.. 
par nk ne.. i cant believe.. 
va-ab sari umar anjan toh nhi reh sakte na soo bat aage badani chahiye na.. tu bhi kar.. 
ak-nk.. she said gudnyt dear.. nhi gudnyt bas.. gudnyt sweet dreams take care she send.. 
misthi was playing game.. 
nk Mobile rang but nk didnt see.. 
mi-chachu apki phone kitni bhajti hai.. 
nk-haa beta mera phone over data use ho raha show me... he didn't watch msg nd delete all msges from whatsup.. 
nk-ho gya na ab go.. 
mi-bye kal hum chachi ke ghar ja rahe.. 
nk-tum aur tumhari chachi.. 
mi-she is soo sweet kissed to nk.. tc.. 
nk-smile.. 
now in morning everyone got ready nd went in aks house.. rashmi misthi yash.. dey sat in hull.. ak nd varsha were in room.. 
ak-main aachi lag rahi na.. 
v-dont worry nk g fida toh hai hi aur jayada fida ho jayege kahi kiss na karde.. 
ak-varsha hit to her.. gandi gandi bat mat kar.. 
va-ohoo madam g touch karke aai toh kuch nhi main bolu toh haa u r soo bold na.. 
ak-toh ek bar main hi chii.. thoda kitna ajib lagta hai yeh sab.. 
va-chal dekhte hai kon kon aaya hai maybe sab aa gaye.. ak nd varsha went in hull.. 
ak was seeing to gy3 rashmi nd kids.. but didnt find to nk.. 
va-sees to ak.. nk g kaha hai.. 
mi-chachu nhi aaye packing kar rahe.. 
ak-packing.. 
gy-are aao beta.. she hug to rashmi nd gy3.. khub khush raho.. 
ak-g tqq.. 
rj-jamaisaa nhi aaye.. 
gy-woh kya hua na nk ne na apply kiya tha ek deal chaina main toh usse ek call aaya hai deal ka.. 
va-yeh toh bhut aachi bat hai hum bhi badai dete h na aa jayege toh aacha hoga.. 
ra-woh dada na rat ko na ek week ke liye ja rahe hai.. everyone were shocked.. ak broke lill.. 
va-par shadi.. 
gy-woh aa jayega kam yeh sab toh laga rehta hai sari umar hai ek dusare ko janne ki pehchanne ki.. 
rj-haa aur rasam suru hone se pehle toh aa hi jayege na.. 
va-haa.. sees aks angry face.. 
ra-kya hua bhabhi.. 
ak-woh actually main na room main apna phone bhool aai rashmi apko mujhe ek dress dikhani thi main leke aati hu. 
ras-oki.. gy3 sees her face.. ak went in room nd throwed pillow.. than varsha came.. 
va-ak i know u felt bad but kya kar sakte hai.. 
ak-varsha kam kam y.. main kya life time ajnabi rahugi.. 
va-no ek week kya sari life hai tu sath de na samaj.. 
ak-mujhe nhi samjhna mujhe yeh shadi karni hi nhi.. bas.. 
varsha was shocked.. 
va-par tu.. suddenly she sees to gy3.. aunty aap.. 
gy-haa main.. ak wipe her anger.. 
ak-kuch cahiye tha apko.. 
gy-haa.. meri bahu ki smile.. ak was silent.. bura laga na.. 
ak-woh.. aunty.. 
gy-maa janti hu gussa aa raha rashmi woh toh tehelka macha deti... 
ak-kam kya shadi se jaruri hai.. 
gy-nhi hai.. bilkul nhi.. par jindagi chalne ke liye toh hai na.. 
ak-matlb.. 
gy-beta ek bar apne nhi nk ke side dekh ke socho.. woh dream hai uska sapna jo tumhare luck ke karan mila hai.. socho woh sara credit tumhe jayega hain na.. 
ak nooded yes.. 
ak-bad main bhi ho sakta hia na.. 
gy-usne kosish kari beta par kya fayda mila haa.. fayda yeh deal ho gai na nk ko award milega chaina main bhi uska nam hoga yeh dream hai uska ki usko apne nam pe kuch mile thabhi ja raha shadi woh kal tumhe sochke smile kar raha tha.. 
beta bat karna important nhi pyar karna important hai mera nk tumhe bhut khush rakhega bas usko samjho ussi ki tarah hmm.. 
va-haa ak tujhe unka sath dena hai hmm.. gy3 went.. 
ak-but still unko bhi mera sath dena hai hain na.. 
va-main tujhe nhi samjha sakti.. 
ak-mat samjha.. kuch bhi.. 
suddenly ak got a call.. 
ak-nk.. nhi uthaugi.. 
va-sun le na.. 
ak-no.. 
va-uff.. she attended it nd put it on aks ear.. 
ak-tu from anger.. 
nk-hloo.. 
ak-hmm.. 
nk-hloo r u drr.. 
ak-no.. 
nk-hloo ak. 
va-bat kar na.. 
ak-haa ak bol rahi.. 
nk-oo god thank god apne gussa nhi kari... ak made face.. 
ak-watt.. 
nk-hloo i m sry.. 
more parts coming soon
Edited by nakshkidiwani - 2018-01-26T11:30:59Z
Posted: 2018-01-22T23:57:01Z
ak-its ok.. 
nk-r u upset.. 
ak-i m soo happy soo much happy.. 
nk-ak i thought aap mujhe samjhegi.. ak yeh mera dream deal hai mera award winning wala deal.. u know maine bachachan se socha tha ki kuch karuga than bade hoke bhi maine kai bar apply kari online but mujhe response nhi mila abhi mujhe call aaya suddenly.. nd i was soo happy.. sayad aap mere liye bhut lucky ho.. 
ak-main lucky.. really.. 
nk-haa u soo lucky.. agar mujhe abhi nhi jana hota toh khabhi toh jata aur yeh aur aaxha h ki hame time mil gaya rasam se pehle aane ka.. yeh jo first step hai apne mere sath mera hath pakad ke chalne ki jo himat dikhai hai sayad koi aur girl hoti toh isse nhi kar pati sayad shadi tod bhi sakti thi.. ak felt it.. but aap alg ho apne mera sath diya.. trust se bada kuch nhi.. 
ak-apko mujhpe trust hai.. 
nk-aaj aacha laga bhut aacha sunke ki aap mere liye bhut happy hai.. 
ak-i m really happy apne mujhe call bhi kiya.. 
nk-main ek week sayad apse bat nhi kar pau par apko tqq bolke essa lagega mano ek week bat kar li.. 
ak-aap apna kam aachese kariyega.. yaha sab thik hai.. 
nk-kehte hai shadi main har ek step ek sath milke chalna hota hai par sayad kuch log yeh bat samaj nhi pate hai par khafi kuch samaj main aa jata hai jab yeh rishta judta hai. 
ak-haa sayad main bhi nhi janti kya hota hai kya nhi par main apki khushi mehsus kar sakti hu aap aachese jaiyega.. 
nk-tqq mera sath dene ke liye.. 
ak-is rishte main tqq nhi hota aunty ne mujhe kitne pyar se samjhaya. 
nk-haa pyar se bhi maa hai na mujhe woh bgut samjhati hai bhut.. 
ak-aacha laga apki bond dekh ke.. 
nk-aap bhi essi hi bond kar lijiye are aap enjoy kariye sabke sath main bas tqq kehna chahta tha ki apne mujhe samjha.. 
ak-tqq nhi aap care kariyega.. 
nk-aap bhi bye.. 
a-bye cut to cell phone.. 
va-thank god anger utar gya.. 
ak-i m confused varsha main gussa is liye nhi thi bas time kam hai aur main nk ko samaj hi nhi pa rahi.. kam bhi hai main lucky bhi hu aur mujhse expect bhi karte hai.. main is rishte ko nibha paugi na.. 
va-dont worry dear.. kal rat ka msg nd aaj ka phone.. unke liye tu important hai thabhi tujhe call kiya jane se pehle hain na.. eat ka msg.. tu na bas unka sath deti ja aage god pe chod de.. logo ko salo lag jate hai phir bhi ek dusare ko samaj nhi pate kya kare kya nhi.. tu toh kitni lucky hai ki teri sas tujhe samjhane aai hmm.. yeh unka dream hai isme sath degi na nk tujhe bhut pyar denge really.. 
ak-i think main jayada anger main aa gai hai na.. 
va-yes thats like my ak.. chal niche sagun lene hmm... 
than ak went in hull... 
ras-ohoo bhabhi kisse bat ho rahi thi bhaiya se khub data na.. 
ak laugh.. 
gy-bas dono samaj gye ek dusare ko bhut badi bat hai.. 
ra-hmm bhabhi apki chize... dey gave to her.. 
gy-bas esse hi nk ka sath dena. 
ak-g aunty g. 
ra-aunty.. 
dadi-woh aadat nhi na isko.. 
rj-ho jayegi dheere dheere.. 
gy-haa maa hu main.. 
ya-mami aap keloge nhi hamare sath.. 
ak-are main toh batana hi bhool gye aao mere sath.. games hai see.. she starts playing with kids.. 
ra-waww itna pyar kids se apne bacho ko samalane main dikat nhi hogi inko.. 
varsha went near of ak.. 
ak-kya hua.. 
va-teri baby plan ho rahi. 
ak-wat i m kid khud.. 
va-aacha toh baby nhi karoge.. 
ak-no ways pehle ek dusare ko pehchan toh le phir karege. 
va-wattt. this girl kya hoga.. than all leave from aks house. 
now nk was taking blessing from all.. 
ra-dada apke liye maine mast dance socha hai jaldi aana.. 
nk-watt aa jauga kam hai dance nd all.. 
dj-kyo na karega.. 
nk-kya dj aap bhi. 
dj-haa chal tere sasural wale bhi avege. chal.. 
than dey were on airport nk gy3 nd dj were here.. 
than vis shorya nd varsha came.. 
nk-are he touched vis feet nd hug to shorya.. 
sh-all d best.. 
vis-bas hame proud hai appe.. 
va-hmm ek surprise hai apke liye.. woh dekhiye mera all d best.. pointed outside her finger.. nk sees to ak.. 
nk-are.. 
ak-namashe.. 
gy-hmm nk ko drop karne aai ho. 
ak-woh... 
dj-abhi 10 minutes hai hum chalte hai yeh dono bat kar le.. 
all leave.. 
ak-hii.. 
nk-hii.. aap u mean apna khayal rakhiyega dont be tensed.. 
ak-all d best apne dream ko hakikat banake aaiyega.. 
nk-sure... 
ak-kya kuch du apko.. 
nk-kya sees here nd der.. 
ak-dont worry... she gave a pendent to nk.. 
nk-yeh kya hai.. 
ak-yeh bachpan se mera lucky charm raha hai.. apko deke main apke luck ki kamna karugi. rakhege na.. 
nk-smile nd take it... ek minute.. he wore it on his chain.. dil ke pass hai ehsas aur luck bhi.. 
ak-thats so sweet... all d best.. than flight announced.. 
nk-i m going.. bye... 
ak-bye.. nk was going ak thinking khas main keh pati i will miss u nk.. 
nk-khas main keh pata aap mere bina khush rehne ki aur enjoy karne ki aadat dalti ek week... 
sry sry for being late. 
precap-nk returned nd sangit taiyari also... 
Edited by nakshkidiwani - 2018-01-27T10:12:44Z
Posted: 2018-01-24T11:07:11Z
wow what a nakshilicious part.. totally loved it Big smilenaksh have very long conversation with each other first time.. they got to know each other .. though they have different choices but they behaved maturally which I liked mostSmile
all scenes are nice i liked ak's prank..nk is jealousLOLi like stair scene also while climbing stairs their self thinking about each other was very nice you wrote so beautifullyEmbarrassed like ak playing video games with kids and enjoying.. precap is also nice do update soon

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