Love???(updated the epilouge)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 1

As she walked inside the hall everything got stopped and everone was giving her a look. Some pitied her; some smriked at her; and some with unknown looks. She looked toward the man who was responsible for her this state. No she herself is; she is weak and anyone can make her fool. Tahts why her dad send her with herself. Did she deserved it? She asked herself but her inner voice mocked her you deserve it. You gave him chance to do that. You deserve it. She walked towards the princi's room.


He knew he did bad. He knew he shouldn't have done that but he cant loose those 50000. No you are lying; you could but you wanted viswanat iyer's daughter so that you could flaunt to whole college that your gf is the richest girl in whole college. You knew it she loved you still you played with her just because you wanted to show off. You choose money over her. At least admit god damn it. His inner voice shouted. He tried but couldnt get any word to deny it.

Ishita iyer was a nerd. No one knew her parents name. Two things she was famous for her scores and her friendship with Sagun Viswanath Iyer was all Raman heard as he entered the college. He was from middle class family. And like everyone he to wanted to be rich fast and easily. He thought he found his target. He thought to be friend of Ishita to be close with Sagun. No one knew when they both fell in love. He was forgetting his so called plan. Everything was going good untill day before yesterday; when his friends put a bet that who ever will purpose the college hottest girl aka Sagun Viswanath Iyer and she will accept will win 50000 i.e 10000 from each as they were of 6. Unknown of all their bet thing Ishita was planning to purpose Raman infront of whole college. And she did only to hear " I dont love you; Ishita. I love only Sagun. I befriended you only because of Sagun. I m so sorry I ddnt no you had feelings for me otherwise..." and he purpose Sagun with the same rose that she had forwaded him and Sagun accepted it. And she became the laughing stock.

The silience in the college was still not broken when three BMW stopped and a man came out from the middle one; Viswanat Iyer. He smiled toward Sagun and she returned it. The princi's room door opened and ishu came running into his arm. He twriled her laughing and whole college looked at them. He stopped when he felt her crying " Hey hey look at me. There is no need to cry; bacha. I know you will miss Sagun and other but I will soon send Sagun with you; baby. After all tumare protection ka sawal hai." said cupping her face. She just nodded. See you soon; "Sagun!" he said looking at Sagun and soon they left leaving a great havoc. Placing a bundle of note in Raman's hand Sagun spoke; " jisko bachane ke liye apni identity badal di; ussko yesse admi ke sath kese chod dethi. Kabhi nahi. Tumare bet ke money se jayda hai." she moved to princi's room to complete the formality. Raman looked at bundle of note with teary eyes.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey, Guz.
Though I started this as OS I m changing it into TS as many of you wanted happy ending. So here I m with a new part.
Part 1 :- above
Part 2
Last part

Epilouge
love you all;
Gia
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome os
Continue soon dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update dear Raman want to prapose
Shugun with help of Ishita continue soon as possible and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb os dear
loved it
continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#6
Congratulations for new story
Interesting
Raman is middle class boy he wanted to get rich fastly his he did friendship with ishita so he can get close to shagun thinking she is rich ishra fell in love boys bet with each other who propose shagun will get 50000 ishita decided to propose Rama raman she proposed him but Rama raman said he loves shagun he just used her to get shagun all laughed at ishita raman forwarded same rose which ishita gave him to shagun she accepted it all were shocked knowing ishita is rich shagun is just her protector apps left taking ishita shagun gave money to raman saying she was protecting ishita raman was teary
Waiting For next update
Pls continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely os gia.
So raman is a cheater Herr .
But the story shouldn't be ended here .
Want to read more .
Rsmans repentence and ishra union .
If you can add one more part .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome and lovely os dear
so Raman cheated ishu
but it seems incomplete
plz write another part to it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely os
Loved ur take
Raman cheated ishita but at last got bkt
But I want it's conclusion
Want to see Raman's repentance and love for ishita
Hope u continues
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update dear
Poor ishu felt bad for her
He is guilty and ge loves her
But it was so late when he realised her love
Please continue this one dear
Will love to see ishra union

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