The New York Trip (Shivika SS) Chp 6 Pg 42

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Posted: 8 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: Gurveen
Brilliant update

Thank you!!😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: Seema84
First of all thanks for the update having all ur issues... now coming to the update this just incredible because wat u hav writing its not completely fictional it's quite natural among the couple... n this care n small gestures of love always work for the relationship... one request please try to update the next part soon n if possible please send me pm...

Thank YOU for understanding! I couldnt not pull it together to update, after all you guys shower me with much love and appreciation for this story!

Thats like incredible because to me, Its seems so natural to them being like this in a normal circumstance, minus all the drama and indian soap opera bckground... glad you are enjoying this😳

Am definitely trying to update soonish, and I will certainly PM you!!

Thanks again🤗

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Vaishnavi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: panjami
Wonderfull update dear... our long wait really paid well... Too happy to get this longer chapter
Really felt their bonding getting stronger... he noticed the changes in her during her periods 😛
Really loved Ur chapter yar...

Thank you! Awww sorry you had to wait so long, but I am thrilled you think it was worth it😳 So sweet of you!

Their bonding definitely is growing, in fact it has grown but its only now as they are away from everyone, they are literally forced to see how much theyhave grown, and act on it😳

Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed! Will try to update very soon!

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Vaishnavi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: sparshitha
Aww shivay is so caring.. update soon..

He definitely is one hell of a caring and adorable husband right😳😳 Thanks for reading and commenting! I will 😉

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Vaishnavi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: komalll
I just casually opened to read the first three parts again , only to see u updated the fourth one.
And man this was sooo freakin goooddd.
Shivaay is like husband goals in every sense in this part.
How i wish this shivaay for myself 😆
I love the way u have shown their progress right from the begining.
Both of them are aware of the love and sexual proximity but there has been no confession.
Waiting for that and for all the surprises u have in store for us.
Eagerly waiting for the update.
And hey thanku for the PM.
It is comendable how u are writing the story . A real good job at that.

All excited because I see a long comment, read your comment and now I am just beyond happy!

Sooo glad you enjoyed it this much like wow!

I know right, He is simply too much of a yummy adorable caring man!

I did try to show it being gradual, however from here, its sort of if they are face to face with it now, completely aware of as you said, the love and sexual proximity,... so this trip, a lot of it is gonna be acted upon😳

Will def try to update soon!

No problemo about the PM!

And thanks again for all the love!

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Vaishnavi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: lamz325
I read all of the chapters in one go! this was simply amazing! I love how aware Shivaay is of Anika. the thing with the pads and the way he comforted her had me grinning to myself like a fool! I loved it!

Awww😳 So sweet a comment! I was grinning writing it too! Hes too cute 😆 Thanks for reading and commenting!!

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Vaishnavi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: vriddhi
hey!!
it's amazing... fab... really yaar...
marvellous!!
phenomenal!!.
I was literally smiling whole time while reading it... i was so so happy after reading this..
u r an amazing writer... do continue soon..
eagerly waiting for another update... plz do it soon... I just love their progress... their bonding... and the way they know each other so well.. fabulous!!

Thank you!!!! For reading and leaving me such a sweet comment!!!

So cute! Glad to have brought a smile to your face!!

Thats a huge compliment, means a lot! I will def continue this soonish, theyre growing into a really adorable couple😳 Glad youre enjoying this!!

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Vaishnavi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: LyssaPie
wow such a beautiful chapter

Thank you so much!!!🤗

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Vaishnavi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: Staysh
Just superb
After reading your story, I cant read anything else because everything seems so ... And your story is just amazunggg
Loved it. And I hope you dont take sooo long to update the next part. Because in 3 months you have just written 4 parts. But they are loong and I love loong updates😆

Thats truly a very big compliment!! THank soo much for reading and for commenting, and the immense love! Sorry for such spaced out updates😭 But I will try to be more frequent from now on, also you know I give long updates, so hopefully that can compensate as well🤗 Thank you! Big hug!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#200

Loved it 👏 u see, im very new to india forums but just luved it that much that it made me reply. Man, u're great!! And please do PM me the updates... please...!!

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