~Fiction: Chand Chhupa Badal Mein ~ A New Beginning ~ Pg 33 - Page 9

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

chik

@chik

Senior Member

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

Thanks for the PM Shanaya..Thanks for suggesting,,
.Nice story and beautifully written..Nandini...you both are very talented writers...

Quote

357118

Inactive

Posted: 6 years ago

Part 1:

@Shano- 🤗

First of all super sorry for being super duper late hun

Now I have to commend you on your attention to detail 👏👏, you have such a fab style of writing hun 😳

I love the song you chose for Noor, it suits her personality 👏👏

Noor getting authoritative and jealous on random fan-girling is adorable 😆

Quote

357118

Inactive

Posted: 6 years ago

Shanocim 🤗

First of all super sorry for being so late 😳😳, I just had a few exams lined up but now I'm free as a bird 😃

______________

Part 2:

The first para and all about the sleeping beauties in the lectures is so relate-able, its brought me back to my college days when we all used yawn all day long 😆

Ahh Zee decoding all women in a single line, lol. Its is true though, and Noor blushing away coz she madly in love with him 😳

That "Bada Slow Antenna..." line cracked me so bad lmao 🤣. He deserved another smacking for that 😆😆

So Zee has Mommy issues? Is this why he's a little (if not a lot) dominating?

Noor having a little tea party with Elizabeth Bennett 😳😳. She's soo cute! Remembering the first moment Zee walked into her life.

Little Zee and Noor's convo is so endearing, Zee acting like a strong kid while Noor telling him that its to be sad and even scared. Zee trusting her with harsh realities of his life. Noor has always been such a cutiepatootie, sitting down next to him saying she has all the time in the world for him 😳😳. Its such a sweet beginning for the two

Sometimes, we as adults, act super selfish. We destroy the worlds of these tiny humans. I'm not saying that divorcing someone is wrong, coz sometimes its the only option. But I hate seeing the children suffer.

Zee's attitude towards his Mum, reminds me soo much of Kerim and Farhattein Ilgaz's relationship 😳. They leave their kids behind without giving it a second thought and then beg for forgiveness like all those years of pain can be wiped out with an apology.

Zee going all red with jealousy while seeing Noor get cosy and smiley with Samar, I'm still not sure if he loves her or its just a little possessiveness coz she's the only female who holds importance in his life. And he's so dominating man! Or maybe he's right about Samar 😲

I won't judge until I've read all the parts 😃

Quote

904129

Hibernated

Posted: 6 years ago

Unresd My Spot On Page 11. <3

Quote

pcnsb

@pcnsb

Goldie

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: sharda_123
Awesome update dear
Thanks for pm

Thank you so much. ❤️

Stay tuned..

Quote

pcnsb

@pcnsb

Goldie

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: LOVE.GOLD
Loved it Nandini
Quite emotional and beautiful update
I really feel for Noor she is suffering a lot
Zeeshan is using all his Rights on her without giving her any right
Samar correctly pointed that in such friendship or relationship she will be ultimately sufferer
Zeeshan created a huge scene seeing Noir and Samar hand in hand for sure he has feelings for her 😳
Even Noor confessed her feelings in spur of anger and impulse making Zeeshan realize reality
Zeeshan was stunned for a while and even Noor was absolutely clueless about his reaction ... Let's see how all this change their relationship 😊
Waiting to read more
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊

Thank you so much for this lovely comment Goldie. ❤️

I'm so glad you loved the update. 😳

Yes, Zeeshan is trying to control Noor's life just because he's her best friend and he thinks it as a right thing to do. But he doesn't knows that it might just ruin their friendship.

But like said, no one's perfect!

Everybody learns from their own mistakes.

We'll have to see what twists and turns Zeeshan's possessiveness and Noor's innocence would bring in their lives. 😊

Stay tuned.

Nandini

Quote

pcnsb

@pcnsb

Goldie

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Awesome

Thank you so much!! 😳

Quote

pcnsb

@pcnsb

Goldie

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: akriti154
Beautiful update
zee is so possessive fr her
aamar was right in pointing things out
noor confessed taking him by a surprise
n is even avoiding him bt he's feeling empty without her
continue soon
thnxx 4 pm

Thank you so much for your lovely comment Akriti. 😳

Yes, Zee is very possessive of her but how much is that justified, I can't comment. 😕

Someone had to make Noor face the reality, so why not Samar!

Noor confessed and that kind of was needed for Zeeshan to look deeper into his heart for what he feels for her. Is it just friendship?

Stay tuned..

Nandini

Quote

pcnsb

@pcnsb

Goldie

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: chik
Thanks for the PM Shanaya..Thanks for suggesting,,
.Nice story and beautifully written..Nandini...you both are very talented writers...

Thank you so much dear! 😳

I'm glad you're loving the story. Hope you'll love it even more in future. 😊

Stay tuned..

Quote

357118

Inactive

Posted: 6 years ago

Part 3:

The best thing about your FFs Shano is your Female Protagonists are real women, no-nonsense, no-make-up-real women. 😳

You incorporated The Bachelor in your FF 😆😆, Noor's reaction is exactly how we both felt while watching the glimpses of it 😆😆

Poor Samar is on the receiving end of Noor's ignorance! I really wish she'd just talk to him 😳. I didn't really like the way she shrugged him off 😭. But then she felt so bad about it. Zeeshan deserves a nice kick on his bum for making her go all cold-turkey on Samar

Also he's so dominating!

Noor and Ahmed's convo about Zee and her defending him 😳So Ahmed has decided on his would-be-Bahu and the son is still clueless about it 😆

I like how Ahmed said that Zee needs to get his crap together and realise his feelings for her, coz she won't sit her entire life waiting for him. 👏

Zee may be a dominating jack-ass but I absolutely love his banters with Noor, they are way too adorable 😳😆

The marriage convo ending in absolute awkwardness 😆😆

Absolutely in love with your writing skills Shanocim 🤗

Quote

1 ... 7 8 9 10 11 ... 25

Fawad Khan

Maya Ali

topics	author	replies	views	reply
♡ Fan-Fiction Book Cover Shop #25 ♡ [Note Pg 20] Grey-licious 201 11140	Grey-licious	201	11140	5 hours ago LadyWhistledown >
New Fanfiction with historical fiction as genre NostalgiaLove 185 1442	NostalgiaLove	185	1442	3 days ago coderlady >
📘📙Fan Fiction Recommendations📙📘 Mod note: P2 LizzieBennet 25 9617	LizzieBennet	25	9617	3 months ago BrhannadaArmour >
Fan fiction that imitates the style of the original (e.g. Mahābhārata) BrhannadaArmour 2 510	BrhannadaArmour	2	510	5 months ago BrhannadaArmour >
Love is all you need (original fiction) LizzieBennet 803 19549	LizzieBennet	803	19549	6 months ago Anjani9 >

~Fiction: Chand Chhupa Badal Mein ~ A New Beginning ~ Pg 33 - Page 9

Related Topics