~Fiction: Chand Chhupa Badal Mein ~ A New Beginning ~ Pg 33(Page 7)

Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by poojasidd123

A very interesting chapter!

Thank you. Smile
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Res. Cool
Unres. Tongue
Yeah. Yeah I'm here this early, unlike you. LOLLOLLOL
Like I say, I unres soon cuz being late or being lazy and unresing after that is a pain in the ass. Sleepy

So to start with, Zeeshan is an adorable fella sleeping in the only lecture Noor doesn't has in common with him. LOLLOL
I even loved how he smacked Noor's head who was so engrossed in reading. LOLLOL
Then his gobbling up the whole of cheese sandwich with ketchup was funnier. ROFL
So, Noor is an avid Nora Roberts Fan like us. Hehe. Wink
And then her whole going jealous over the fact that Zeeshan had complimented Alisha who was showing off. ROFL
I want to hit Zeeshan with a hathoda as to how he can be so dumb so as to not notice that soft blush on her face whenever he talks about him and her. Confused
Guys don't tend to miss such things but I'm glad he does cuz Noor has something more beautiful in store for her. Embarrassed

Zeeshan had have a difficult childhood and one can understand it from the bitterness he holds towards his mother. The way Noor consoled him and the whole flashback was so so beautifully written. ClapClap
Little Noor and Zeeshan, Their friendship, Their innocence is so beautiful. Day Dreaming
The way Noor says she has ample time and gave him her chocolate was so so beautiful. Heart
I don't blame Zeeshan for being against the ideas of marriage, kids and family but Noor's optimistic approach is refreshing balanced with his. <3
The way she fangirls about Shah and hates kjo. ROFL

I cracked up at how she poked ball point into his ear to wake him up. ROFL
Samar likes Noor. Embarrassed
It was sweet of how, he is so nervous yet gentle around her. I for one, absolutely loved their bonding over Prose and John Keats. Heart
But Zeeshan is jealous and though I somewhere understand the concept of his jealousy but asking Noor to stay away from him was a bit too much. Stern Smile
She isn't a kid to be told as to what to do and what not. Ouch

Update Real Soon. Hug
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Posted: 2 years ago
Lovely update dear
Thanks for pm
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Loved the chapter! <3 StarStar

The best part was how Noor & Zeeshan became friends in childhood days. Heart The way she innocently told him that she has ample of time and asked him to play with her was really sweet & adorable. Embarrassed
Zeeshan going bonkers in his jealousy was cute. TongueLOL

Continue soon dear. Big smile And thanks for the PM, Shano. Hug
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Posted: 2 years ago
Beautiful part Nandini
Awesome updated
Noor and Zeeshan have a great friendship
They both understand each other so well
I loved how Noor cheered Zaeshaan
His childhood was really hard
I can understand why his thoughts about love and family changed completely
Zeeshan possessive about Noor was sweet
Let's see what happens next
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon Smile
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Posted: 2 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.Smile
It was Amazing Part.Smile
Zeeshan part was so Nice.Smile
Noor and Zeeshan Bonding was so Nice.Smile
The Whole Part was so Interestingly explained.Smile
Please Update Next Part soon.Smile

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