FF: pyaar main kabhi kabhi part 8update 24-4-17

Maggie11 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#1
Pyaar main kabhi kabhi


This story is totally different from my other stories, abhi is in negative character, I mean grey shades, I won't discuss more about characters but I have tried my best to be more expressive, but let's see can I be??? My hubby had helped me in some parts of this story or should I say I forced him to.
Well not leaving this story, incomplete like my others stories I'm posting this after I finish all parts, hope you all like it




"Congratulations mr Abhishek you have nailed it, you are true Business man" the estate broker said congratulating
"I always get want I want"abhi with arrogance
"But sir, you will get keys next week"
"Why ??? I can't wait that long, this is my dream project n I wAnt to start today itself "
"But sir, the owner of this Heritage property is getting married day after tomorrow and the reception is at this very place"
"So that is not my concern"
" sir it's request from his side, n this is reason that he is not today here to attain such important meeting, he wanted to come n personally invite you for marriage"finally finished all in one breath
"Do one thing, tell him that reception is from my side as his wedding gift, but I want key right now, I want to convert this property into five star hotel"
" but sir that will cost you too much that also for some stranger"
" money is not more important then time, for me it's now, I want now means now, inform him n I won't take no as answer ok you got it right!!"
"Ok sir I will try my best"
" I have not ask you to try, just inform him ok, I will send details about arrangements for reception tomorrow n get them with him, I may change something according to him, maybe food menu" he stood up n started walking
" ok sir, consider it to be done"

**************
Abhi returned home, n dadi open door
" someone is looking happy today, but your madam is upset n waiting for you in your bedroom, pls go fast n I will send dinner upstairs ok"
"I know how to make her happy, don't worry, the moment I will give in this news, she will be jumping in no time"
"Hope so" smiles n goes to kitchen n abhi to his room
"PARI PARI PAAARRRIII, I have good news for you, we are shifting to that heritage house you liked"n takes her in his arms
"Don't change topic, today I want to know everything about my mom, you promised on my 5th birthday, you will tell me!!"faking anger she push him n crossed her arms
" but that's tomorrow,"
"I will wait till 12'o clock, n it's only 15mins to that"
"Ok, you win, but first have dinner n then I will tell you everything ok DEAL!!!"he gives up n holds her hand n makes promise
"Ok, but don't fool me, as you can do it today but tomorrow you have to or I will not eat" still faking tantrums n tries to walk away
"Pls Pari, I promise, I will tell you everything"holds his ears
" ok, fast I'm very hungry, today it's your favourite paneer sabzi n roti, yummm!!" Runs to him n hugs
*************
At same time at Mr.Shrivastav's office
"Sir there is good news for you, mr Abhishek has signed deal n here is full payment in cash as you wanted"broker said assuring that work is done
" that's great, n you did inform about wedding?? N that he can takeover next week " Suresh was glad that it's done before his wedding
"Yes sir n he was so happy for your marriage that he wants to do reception for you as your wedding gift"
"That's so nice gesture by him but how can I accept this, I have not even met him personally"
"Sir he is like that only, very down to earth n he find happiness in others happiness, pls sir accept this, you will hurt his feels"he lies as he wants to fool suresh as he knows he has confidence in him n he his no other option
" but..."
"Sir, you have to accept it, what if he cancels this deal, its important to you, without money how will you face your Financial problems, how will you pay all debt, you don't have any other sources also" continues to convince him
" I think you are right, I need money badly to pay debt of my father n also to start my new life"
" new life??"
" yes, new life, I want to start my own business"
" if you don't mind, can I ask what kind of business" he tries to dig more information so that he can use this to his benefit
" I have done hotel management in Australia n was thinking to start my own hotel but when I came back, I got to know that dad had this habit of gambling n had lost almost everything in it sooo now whatever is left, with that I will open my restaurant"
" that's great, all the best for your new venture n I will call mr Abhishek that he can go ahead with arrangements for reception n he will fwd you details of same"he thinks to give this information to abhi
" it's ok, I will personally call him n invite him, n thanks for handing this"
" oh that's fine, it's my job, I take leave now"

***************
While abhi was about to have dinner he gets call,
"Hello mr Abhishek, I'm so touched with your gesture," very enthusiastically says
" I must thank you for accepting it, I feel honoured" tries to sound as polite as he could
"Oh pls now you are embarrassing me, see you tomorrow at wedding"he continues same tone
" sorry to say but I don't believe in marriages n I think it's better if I don't attain it, n anyway its family thing n according to me only family members should attain it, right??" Hearing word marriage he comes back to himself with attitude
" whatever you are comfortable with, but have to be there for reception "
" of course I will be there, after all I will be host n not guest right?? N anyways call it party or reception it's same thing n I love parties, any thing special you want in arrangements"
" not really but I love red roses" overwhelmed with his gesture but not knowing his actual intentions
"Ok then roses it is, see you bye"
Says n disconnects, before suresh could answer further
He turns to Pari, who already slept without having food, n he gets angry n he also goes to sleep without having food
****************

On day of reception abhi was busy in arrangements
"Hey you, what are these red roses doing here on dinning area, I want everything white n silver" shouts at decorator
" but sir, you only told that groom wishes to have" cuts him between as this reminds him of Pari going to bed without food n says
" do hell with him, I'm owner n I hate roses specially red roses ok, did you get it"
"Yes sir, no roses"
" RED ROSES"again shouts
"Ok sir"
He went at pool side n saw bee flying on lilies, n he remembered something
Flashback
"It's for you"
"For me"
"Yes you dumbo, it's your birthday so it's obviously for you"
"Flowers n that too red roses"
"You only told yesterday, when I ask what you like ?? N you said red roses, then why making faces now, that's not fair"
" oh that, actually your dad was standing behind you, "
"Why you are so afraid of dad, he is not going to eat you ok, n what you were going to say that my dad won't like"
"I like lilies, white lilies"gets tense
" what?? Why you think dad won't like lilies, he like red roses he likes that too
" actually I wanted to say yesterday that I LIIKE YOU" finally says what wanted to say at that time
" dumbo, what's new in that, I already know that n even dad knows that n that's why we are friends, right??"
" ya, you are right" gets disappointed n agrees
Flashback ends
Still looking at lilies as if he was here like he was years back to talks to himself, "in past few years, my life has turned into rollercoaster ride, look at me what I have turned into, mr perfectionist, arrogant, pure business man, just for you but where are you now?? I really hate to miss you like this"

**************

It was evening
The place was looking like heaven, everything was white n silver, decorated with lilies, pearls n silver drapes, there were flower vases on each dinning table which were spread across garden n pool side was sitting area, while guests were amazed by decor, just then bride n groom arrived, they were stunned n mesmerised by ambience
" wow, this is completely different from what I imagined, you really surprised me, I simply loved it, n these lilies are so so beautiful, you remind me of (oh god, what was I about to say,) heaven, yes this place looks live heaven " she said with tears in corner of her eyes
" all the compliments should go to new owner of this property, he himself has done the decor n this reception is host by him as our wedding gift" suresh, who himself was so over excited about everything happening in his life, all his problems were solved n was married to most beautiful girl
" seriously, I must say, he must be very romantic n deeply in love, that's why it felt like love is in the air kind of feeling, I want to meet him n thank him personally for making this so memorable moment more memorable by his touch"
Just then abhi arrived in black blazer looking hot n sexy
" is somebody talking about me"
She turns n to look who was listening to their conversation n was shocked n turns pale as if seen ghost n same was abhi' s reaction, they kept on looking at each other as if an centuries past, he straight looking into her eyes
" hey I'm ABHISHEK PREM MEHRA, owner of this magnificent property ( looking at her as if he was referring her as his property)
"Hello mr Abhishek meet PRAGYA my wife, ( he almost crushed her hand while handshake) she was just commenting that you have done such fabulous job, n that you must be having someone special in your mind while doing arrangements, that's why it's so mesmerising" feeling that he is top of this world
" well she is not completely wrong??" He said still looking at her n holding her hand tightly
" then who's that lucky girl mr Abhishek??" She takes her hand back
" YOUR WIFE!!, I was thinking about her I mean how to impress her, so that you accept my offer"he points at her,
" oh in that way, n what's offer you are talking about??" Very enthusiastically but she started feeling uncomfortable n excused herself n goes to freshen up
"When I deal with someone, I find out everything about that person, n I know you have sold this property unwillingly, n about your dream to turn this into hotel, n most important you have done hotel management from Australia, right??"
" ya, but what's offer??"surprised
" you can fulfil your dream, join me, my money n your management skills, 60-40 what say??"
" I don't have words,"
" try saying YES,"
" obviously, some idiot will deny such offer" without much thinking
" but there is one condition, you will have to stay here only"
Before suresh could answer that he sees Pragya talking to his n starts walking in their direction
"Dad did you know, who is new owner of this property" very irritatingly
"Who"
"Your friend's over pampered, Shy n obedient son n yours student come PG come informer ..."
"Who?? Abhi !!!!!"
"Yes, n from today I hate him even more"
" hate him!!! But did you ever love him"
" enough dad, we had discussed this hundred times, pls don't start over again" n she walks off
" today is your daughter's marriage n you are still stuck there, 6 years back when you caught us in your bedroom, I hope you don't want suresh to know that or do you???" He taunts her father
" you have changed in these years"he thinks to himself that abhi has become rude n have no manners
" credit goes to your daughter n i think I should payback her, ( shouts) FUGGIE"
She turns to see in direction of voice n song plays ( jab koi baat bigard jaye koi mushkil aajaye) she sees abhi singing her favourite song, n walks towards him, all old memories flashing in both of their minds n suddenly she falls, both suresh n abhi run to her, abhi reaches first n takes her in his arms, both look into each others eyes n relives moment, n as he turns he sees suresh right behind him, he ask him take care of her n tries to give her in his arm n he drops her intentionally , " I'm sorry, but she is too heavy for me to handle" smirks at her devilish
"It's all because of you.."
"What did you just said!!!"surprised n looks at both of them
"Nothing I just meant it's because he doesn't exercise so..."
"Oh that!!"his confusion gets clear
"I hope I didn't ruined your first night"he had all this intentionality first song n dropping her
"She is mine for rest of my life first night second night don't make any difference right sweetie"holds her by waist n looks at Pragya
"Can you ask for first aid first then will decide ok"she was really mad at abhi n suresh

Hope you all like it
Pls press like if you want me to pm you
Will update on every Mondays
Happy reading


[
*************


Edited by Maggie11 - 9 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

48

Views

9.5k

Users

14

Likes

149

Frequent Posters

crazyabttisha thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#2
awesome dii the first episode was so good...loved this arrogant egoistic rockstar.. he always amazes me... so abhi has one daughter.. interesting.. pari is also just like him so manipulative..she wont eat until he promises to tell abt her mom...suresh and pragya getting married.. omgeee ... so pragya is abhi's ex-lover.. story gets more interesting in the first episode itself.. abhi pragya convo was amazing.. pragya telling her dad abt abhi and abhi's counter to pragz dad " its because of ur daughter" was too good.. totally seriously waiting for ur next update to know more.. and dii pls try to post on gng stories i hv been waiting for it for long..try to post it when u r free..love u
Maggie11 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#3

Originally posted by: crazyabttisha

awesome dii the first episode was so good...loved this arrogant egoistic rockstar.. he always amazes me... so abhi has one daughter.. interesting.. pari is also just like him so manipulative..she wont eat until he promises to tell abt her mom...suresh and pragya getting married.. omgeee ... so pragya is abhi's ex-lover.. story gets more interesting in the first episode itself.. abhi pragya convo was amazing.. pragya telling her dad abt abhi and abhi's counter to pragz dad " its because of ur daughter" was too good.. totally seriously waiting for ur next update to know more.. and dii pls try to post on gng stories i hv been waiting for it for long..try to post it when u r free..love u


Ya abhi is arrogant n egoistic, but he was not same before as you can read it Pragya telling her dad that he was obedient, pampered so dynamics have changed
Pragya n suresh are married, n abhi convinced suresh to stay with him so hold on this is going to be lots of more fun n about Pari ya she is like abhi
Maggie11 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: shabeenia

Fabulous...great ya...


Thanks, n will try my best to complete my other stories
-Sri- thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#5
I love this Abhi ❤️
Yes he is arrogant yet he is soft...
And he is egoistic yet he is humble..
Awesome characterisation and I love it..
I love this and waiting for the next part..
And please do continue the other stories too.. 😊
Maggie11 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Thanks sarapriya n sri for liking it
Well I'm sorry to keep you all waiting but will have to wait for other stories to finish
Good news is this story I have already finished writing n will post every Monday so you all get to read complete story
N yes it's going to be full house or mad house, after all moving in this hotel ( home)
-Sri- thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Thank you waiting for next Monday 😊
Maggie11 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Pyaar main kabhi kabhi

Function was not over yet but abhi left for sometime to bring Pari as she was already upset, that he had not kept his promise, at least not completely, he was driving n thinking about what he said her Yesterday
Flashback
"Good morning dad, its my birthday, come on now wake up, I want to know everything, let's start with her name, dad tell me fast" she was jumping with joy all over the room n shouting on top of her voice, he gets up
"Come here ( kisses her on forehead) happy birthday n stay blessed" tries to sleep again
" dad oh pls tell me, I won't have milk or anything else" she started with emotional blackmail,he gets up again n makes her sit on his lap n hugs her, "so what you want to know,?? Her name!! What will you do after that??will you call her by name?? tries to confuse her
" no, but I want know her name, how she looked, n many more things" she gets down n again start jumping around
"Ok, but you will call her maa only right??"
"Yaa, its obvious "
" so what's in name right?? U call her maa only n about looks, she was most beautiful looking person I ever saw, she was also as pure as her appearance, she loved you more then me, you were her world, but she was getting weaker day by day, doctors couldn't do anything n one day she had to go" finally he managed to fool her,
"Dad, why she had to go to God n become star," gets very sad n hugs him
" because you can be with her for forever, ok no more questions" he was trying his best to get out of situation but he didn't know what was coming up
" dad pls one last thing, promise will not ask anything more" making the cutest face she pouts
" ok, n what's it???"
"How you n mom met!!"
He was speechless for longest time, n then after thinking he replied, "I have lot of work today, but promise when we move to our new house, I will tell all that day ok, bye cutie for now, I have to rush" he just ran to washroom before even she says ok dad, she was very upset that he didn't match up to her expectations, she wanted all answers today n didn't wanted to wait, though she didn't complain further but she face clearly shows what she felt
Flashback ends
Abhi still lost in thoughts,"Pari one day I will answer all your questions but you have to wait for correct time, at least when you are big enough understand all, God why is my life soo complicated," he reached home n straight went to Pari's room to talk to her, but was surprised she was all dressed, he was afraid that if she had dressed for party n soon he figured out she was dressed for that same Party, it was not that he didn't wanted her to meet people but she was so naughty that even if for second she was left alone then god save that person,who would be with her, she was pretty naughty n mischievous but also understanding. He made her understand that it's a reception as in wedding party, so she can be there for some time but after that straight to their new house (hotel suite) "Pari its wedding party n not like birthday parties you attend so pls no Misti n talking to strangers, you can have dinner with me there n straight to our room, ok !"
"Of course dad, n I'm not interested in such party I want to have dinner in our room, so pls can you be with me, or you want to be in that party??"
" do hell with party, I will be you my cutie, but there is little problem, we will have to stay in other room only for 2days n after that we can stay at your favourite room"
" it's ok dad, I just want to be with you n dadi, place doesn't matter, lets go"
He was so impressed, that she is soo understanding, n just like him for hating such stupid parties.
Here at reception
Suresh was explaining Pragya what abhi had to offer n he is so overwhelmed by his offer, n was excitingly telling her," Mr Mehra has given such mind blowing deal, we can stay here forever like you wished n I can start my own hotel like I dreamed, see he is like magician who makes people mesmerise by his presence"
"Yes totally, I'm mesmerised!! Excuse me, I will have to share such amazing news to bulbul"
"Ya sure, you go ahead"
She started walking fast n called bulbul
"Bulb, where are you?? You have still not reached here??"
"Just turn my tube light Di, I'm just behind you"
"Oh here you are, I have to talk to you n it's urgent "
"Di, we can talk here also"
"No, you come with me"
Drags her to their room,
"Bulbs, I need your help,"
" for what??? First night"
" no you idiot, for last night"
"What???"
Grabs backpack
"Just help me pack all this stuff, I'm going"
"Going!!! Like you left us years back"
"Enough, you don't know anything"
" first you only told dad that you want to marry this yes sir suresh, n now you want to run away, why??"
" reason is same, what was years back"
"Abhi???"
"Yes, I can't stand him, he fooled suresh to stay here forever with him at this property n partnership in this hotel"
"So ??, why you want to leave suresh??"
" he is so irritating, he can't stop for minute without taking his name, I just can't bear it"
" oh come on Di, you can bear his child n not him"
She gave her tight slap,
" you knew??"
"Of course Di, I was 15yrs n I knew that you missed your periods n you were back after year, but..."
" baby died n so my love for abhi, I hate him"
"Hate him for what?? Loving you unconditionally or allowing you make mockery for his feelings"
"Just stop it, or else "
"Else what??? You will Give me another slap??"
She Hugs bulbul,
"You know it was boy, I had named him prabhi"
"But how??"
"Still birth, he was dead before I delivered, only if I had him by my side this could not have happened"
" did he knew??"
"No"
"Then how could you except him to know??"
"He did it, baby was his, he knew we didn't used protection n don't you think he should have at least tried to know what if I'm pregnant"
"Di, pls you are over reacting, I'm sure he must be having some reason for becoming Mr India (invisible) after that day"
"I don't want to talk about this now, just help me pack now"
"No, you have to face him n clear all misunderstanding"
"I'm married n I don't want him in my life"
"I'm not asking you to backstab suresh n have affair with abhi, but at least just clear air"
" he is totally changed, he is not going to listen anymore"
She Tells her what happened in reception till now,
"Really Di, he drop you purposely, haha!!"
"It's not funny!!!"
"It is, come let's go I'm dying to meet new abhi now, lets go let's go fast"
She drags Pragya to party again
Here abhi also reached, Pari left his hand n ran towards dinning area n started looking for something she likes, n she took paneer subzi n rice n some gulab jambu, she signed abhi that lets go to room n have dinner n both carry on
Pragya n bulbul were looking for abhi, bulbul asked suresh if he knew where is abhi, to that he asked that if she knows Mr Mehra
Bulbul was scared, " no I just want to thank him for what he did, this reception, house n hotel"
"Oh that way, I think he went back home, he said he always makes point to have dinner with his family specially if he is in town,"
"So is he married???"
" actually I don't know, I have not asked him that"
" then ask him???"
"So do you want to backstab Purab?? "
" no way, I was just curious "
"Ok, so let's call it night, I'm really tired"
" tired!!! Then what about ..." Pragya interrupted
"Stop IT bulbul, live us alone for time being ok"
"Ok newly weds, I'm going with dad"
Both Pragya n suresh says bye n goes to their room
While abhi who already off to sleep with his Pari, she was in deep sleep n ask about her mother, abhi who was also sleeping, n his subconscious mind answer her, He starting telling about Pragya, but didn't took her name
Here Pragya was sitting on bed n was very nervous, suresh step in n went to freshen up, she was thinking how to explain him that she needs time to take their relationship to next level n right now she can only take him as friends n wants to start teaching from very next day as she already applied for job n got it as art teacher, she was lost in thought n didn't realise he was sitting next to her, looking at her lovingly
"Oh you came, I didn't realise" he cuts in n says, "It's ok, I just wanted to tell you something"
"No, first I want to tell"
"I think we should say together ...123
"Can we be friends first"
Both started laughing on this statement, " god I was feeling nervous for no reason, thanks suresh for making my life easy, but I need to tell you something else also, I want to join school"
"So..."
"I mean I have joined school, it will start from tomorrow itself"
She tried to read his eyes but couldn't, suddenly He shouts on top of his voice,"Pragya"
She was shocked n started thinking what wrong with him, why over reacting, " what happened??? Look I'm joining, you don't have option ok, I was just being nice n informing you"
"You useless, just get out!!!"
"Are you out of your mind, you are asking me to get out n don't have guts to look at me also"
"I'm not telling you, I'm talking to him"
"Whom??"
"This useless co co cockroach" throws his footwear n runs outside his room,
Pragya just picks up cockroach n throwaway n picks all other also, it was almost 2hours since suresh didn't turn up, so she calls him but his phone was in room only, so she calls front desk n ask them to find him n send him to his room but she was surprised to hear that he already checked in other room n maybe already sleeping there, so she went out to have look for him but soon she lost in her thoughts n was sitting near pool area, it's was around 2am when waitress came n offered her cinnamon coffee, there was a big smile on her face as if she was waiting for that only "thanks but how you know that I wanted this" the waitress just pointed at man who was standing near balcony of his room
She tries to look clearly just then he showed his cup n she came to it was abhi
He was happy that she was spending night near pool area rather sleeping with suresh
She took big seep n walked to his room in anger n knocked door
"Hellooo mrs Shrivastav you are most welcome "
She walks in n grabs his nightshirt
"What the hell, so you are one who put all those cockroaches in my room, just like I did, you are taking revenge" he grins
"Oh that's why your husband was running n shouting for help,"
"I should have known that it must be you" still angry
"Oh come on, really you think I must have done this, if I decide to spoil you night then I have many more ways to do that, you know I myself afraid of them"
"Oh yes, how I forgot that look on your face that day, after that you were running all over my house n dad even scolded you for behaving so childish, you broke his favourite vase"
Both were laughing remembering that
"Ya you were mad at me as your dad let me stay in your room, n you had to shift to his study room"
"Ya that too for 2years, you were here to complete your studies n hostel guys bullying you n you were cry baby"
" I was not cry baby, I just was not able to concentrate on my studies"
"Oh shut up, you were fattu (coward)"
"I give up, I was"
"But you have changed now"
"Come on it was long back, we were in our teens"
"Hhmmm" suddenly her face turns pale as she sees child sleeping on bed
"Whose kid is that"
"Mine"
"That means you are married!!"
He was salient,she again pulls him this time very close
"Are you married???" He pushed her in anger n said
"You are married that is enough, pls leave it's late,"
" I'm not going anywhere till you answer"
"What difference does that make??" His eyes were filled with tears n they were searching answers in her eyes
Now she was not having answers, reality was she was married n still questioning him
" I think you are right, who am I to you to ask such questions"
He pins her against wall
"I have put CCTV all around this property, n if you come an inch close to him, then ..."
She cuts in,"he is my husband n I have all right to do whatever I feel like" he doesn't waste second n crushed his lip on her, " you are mine n I can do whatever I want, do you get that"
She was shocked, " this is wrong " saying so she runs from there n he tells himself,"everything is fair in love n war"

Hope you all enjoyed reading it, as much as I writing it
Happy reading
Next part next Monday


akshayakannan thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#9
SORRY YAAR I COULDN'T COMMENT YOUR LAST PART
THIS STORY HAS A DIFFERENT PLOT AND IT IS GOOD TO READ A LOT OF FANFICS
PEOPLE ARE NOT POSTING STORIES LIKE BEFORE SO YOUR STORY IS VERY NICE TO READ
AWESOME PART
CONTINUE SOON WAITING FOR NEXT MONDAY
shabeenia thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Pragya married ah...cool...really nice...whose child was pari

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".