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I was on vacation & a lot had hapnd in our show . Kuch rang pyar ke aise bhi hav literaly changed to kuch rang nafrat ke aise bhi, for the time being. I'm nt a writer but i wud luv to c these things hapns in this show. Waise bhi ,sochne me kya problem hai ? 😳

Dev sat in his cabin. "Dr. Sonakshi Bejoy Bose" echoed in his mind. He felt some kind of uneasiness. Y shud i care ? Muche farq kyun pad reha hai ? It's Mrs. Dixit for u ..sona used to correct him wenever he addresses her as Ms. Bose after marriage , Dev recalled. A fade smile flashed thru his face. "Admit it Dev...it's all u'r fault ..admit it ". Sonakshi screamed. Suddenly all those memories which hapnd after their happy simla trip flashed thru his mind. He didn want to think of those unpleasant incidents which hapnd almost 7 yrs ago. Seven long years ! Sighed Dev. " U complete me sonakshi. Wen u r with me, i can face all problems. Jab tum muchse door jaati ho toh aisa lagta hai ki mein jee nahi paungaa. " Ringing of his phone took him bak to reality . Hello Dev Dixit speaking, he answered.

Bigchaa ..golu jumped with joy . Arrey mera swt heart ,goluuu. Dev embraced him in his arms. Sab teek hai naa, golu ? Bigcha ko bol. Sab teek hai bigcha, bas ek nayi girl aayi hai , meri class me . Toh ? dev looked @ golu with a question. I didn like her. She acts very smart & she has the guts to challenge me as well, bigcha. Golu explained. Dev smiled & assured him. U don worry golu , mera cutiepie. Bigcha hai naa tere saath. Hum milkar sab problems bhagayenge.. lekin ab cricket khele ? Dev was the only one who always find time to talk , caress n play with golu.

Hai friends, I'm introducing Dr Sonakshi Bose to our mother's watzap group. Please , welcome her everyone. She's the proud mom of Ms Suhana Bose who joined our school recently ,messaged asmi's mom. Elena chkd her phone & she cudn believe @ all. Sonaaa !! After all these long seven yrs, elena had never tried to b in touch with sona or anyone in her family. She knew from dev that sona is in town . Suhana's mom !! Sona hav a daughter . Ohh God !Wat all wreck hav u done? cried elena. I've to tell that to dev bhai, aftterall it's bhai's right to know the truth. But...elena was dragged to those flashbacks..all those horrendous happenings .. dev-sona separation.. tume apne ghar se saare rishte naathe thodni padegi..lekin mommy ..vicky, tu chup reh ...uss din se aaj tak elena ne vaisa hi kii ..she alienated herself from bose family. dev jiju se dev bhai ban gaya.. a tear escaped her eyes . Elena thought , 'now i got sona's number, i can can call her but nt today'.

U like the house , sohaa ?? Yes Dr. Bose..i luvd it. It's really beautiful, mumma...soha hugged her mom tightly. Sona kissed her forehead .Soha betaa , u know , this house was built by u'r dadu. It was his pride &result of his hardship & hardwork . I've done some changes during renovation but this is our old sweet home , sohaa . Let's wait for dida aur dadu, tab aur maza aayegaa, kyun, Ms. bose ? Bilkul sahi, dr. bose. Sona remembered vicky's harsh words. " iss ghar pehla aap ka dha, ab hamara ho gaya hai..ab niklo yaha se..dev bhai ke maa ke upar agar kuch bhi baat aa jaata hai toh voh duniya ke bade villain ban jaata hai " Mummaa..idhar aao naa ...haan sohaa. Sona's face lit with self confidence n determination.

Vicky was thinking about dev bhai's words. If u make sona to leave that place, i'll giv u my whole company. I can't believe bhai as a whole but still if i make sona out of that office, i'll surely get some benefit , for sure. Vicky thought while taking another peg of whiskey. U started it early, asked elena . I'm really happy today, elena . u know , dev bhai offered me his entire company if i exclude sonakshi from his sold portion of the office. i need to do something ...by hook or by crook.. vicky was under the influence of alcohol. U know elena , i had done this before too..i had separated bhai n sona. I told her n family that it was dev bhai who bought their house in order to throw them outside. i convinced them that dev bhai will do anything for his maa against everyone. I told sona that dev bhai signed the prenup papers even b4 their marriage. Elena, tum jaante ho, kisne mera saath diya yeh sab karne ke liye ? meri mummy . Pata hai hum kaise yaha ..dixit mansion ..yeh shandaar ishwari nivas me aayaa ? u;ve any idea ? It was all mummy's plan. She burned our house & told everyone that it caught fire, achanak se . Hai naa badiyaa master plan ? Elena, v can go any extent.. he slipped to his sleep leaving a dumbstruck elena. Elena stood there for a while , thinking about vicky's words. She cudn believe her ears & she felt ashamed as she chose such a wicked man as her life partner .

Bigchaaa ..screamed golu. Aap mere school me muche ghar le jaane aaya aaj ? i'm sooo haappyy . Dev lifted golu & kissed him. Soha was seeing all these a lil far away. Golu pointed towards soha...that's the girl i was talking bout, bigcha ..suhana . Dev turned bak to c her. Golu, she looks as a nice girl . Anyway, lemme talk to her, i'll ask her y she's troubling u..is that okay ? Alright bigchaa..i'll go the other side n watch. Dev beckoned soha. She hesitated. Dev walked towards her ..hello betaa..aap ka naam ? My mom said to me that it's nt a good idea to talk to strangers. I'm nt a stranger ..i'm golu's bigchaa . ab toh apna parichay de doh.. I'm suhana bose. Dev was taken aback by hearing that . "I'm dr sonakshi bose , nutritionist" echoed sona's words . Kya huwa uncle ? soha's words woke him up from his thoughts. Nothing beta ..aap ki mummy ka naam, if u don mind ? Dr Sonakshi bose. Dev cudn believe wat he heard now. Sonakshi is having a daughter. is she married someone else & she moved on in her life ?? How can she forget me so easily ? till now i cudn do that however i tried that i've moved on in my life. I've created a happy bubble that i'm enjoying life with the way i wanted, hanging around with girl friends but i never ever stopped luving my sona.. My sona ..dev..u lost her..lost her forever .His conscious yelled. Uncle, r u okay ? soha asked. haan beta..i'm all good. Aap ke papa ka naam ? Mr. Dev Dixit. Dev felt as if he has fallen to a deep pit , his world came crashing down. He controlled his emotions & said bye to soha, his daughter suhanaa.

Dev sat in his bed , trying to pacify himself. He again felt so lonely in his palatial mansion full of his dear n near ones . Betaa, tu kab aaya ? kuch der pehle maa..please muche akela chod doh kuch samay ke liye.. Dev, tu ab muchse baat bhi nahi karegaa ? Ab kya kehna baaki hai, maa ? kyaa bacha he abhi ? Kya huwa dev, tum kuch pareshan leg rehe ho? Muche pata hai ..yeh sab Sonakshi ki vajai se hai..voh tumari life barba...bas karo maa, bas karo ..u always tried to find faults with sonakshi. tu ne kyaa payaa , maa ? tu ne sirf khoya hai, maa. tune apne bete ko khoyaa. ab aur kya chahta hai tu ? u know wat maa ? i always thought u as my bhagwan. I thought my bhagwan won't do anything wrong. but i was wrong , maa. My God, my maa never cared for my feelings. I've only chose sonakshi for me against u'r wishes. U'r all other wishes..i've fulfilled everything. U wanted to giv vicky a manager position , citing all those ehsan bhashan & i did. Now u can c the result in front of u'r eyes. U never trusted sona. She saved riya's life by breaking ayan's rishta. She tried her level best to save neha's married life but nobody trusted sona, nt even me. Mami ,neha all taunted sonakshi with their harsh words but u never said anything. Even i was nt able to defend her always.Sonakshi was ready to go thru all those infertility treatments even though she knew it wud b very painful for her . But still u r trying to find faults with sona. U know y maa ? u never accepted her as u'r dil. U tolerated her jst bcoz i married her. Dev's wife but nt as ishwari's bahu. If u've accepted her as a bahu, u never tricked me to sign in those prenup papers. I told u that i was nt believing in those stuffs stiil u fooled me to sign in those papers knowing that if a divorce happen, then sona & our kids will nt hav the right to get anything from me. How cud u do that ,maa ? U've done all these n still u find faults with sonakshi ? I accidentally slapped baba , only for u maa..it was a terrible mistake..i shudn hav done that ..maafi ke bhi laayak nahi mein. That fateful day, wen sona came to meet me, i was drunk. U asked me to choose bet u & sona, i chose sona...i wanted to live my life with luv of my life but u'r prenup papers made evrything gone for a toss. She didn believed me & to prove that she was nt after my money, she signed those papers n left . I too told some nasty things to her under the influence of alcohol & i got the prize..i lost my wife..my life..everything

Dev bhai, can i come in ? Elene, come naa ..hum aise hi baat kar rehe dhe.. i need to talk to u both. Tell, elena. Elena told everything to them wat vicky told last day. Hey bhagwaann !! Mamaji overheard this & everyone got upset . Radhaaaraaani !! Mommy , papa itna chillatha kyun hai? vicky asked gkb. Mamaji confronted Gkb n vicky. Tumhari itni himmat radharani ki tumne hamare ghar ko aag lagayi? How dare u ? Then u came to poison my sister's life ? u did that RR but nt anymore. I'm going to throw u both outside..nikal jao yaha se.. Jijii..aap kuch bolo naa ? muchse galati huyi hai, mein maanti hu..maaf karo jijii. dev betaa, mamijji ko bachavo mamaji se. Aage se hum aisa kuch nahi karegaa ..hume maaf karo. Bas ! radharani bas ! ab chup chap yaha se nikal jao. Mamaji yelled.

Ek mnt, papa..elena intervened. Dev bhai..aapki ek beti hai . Kyaa? Everyone looked surprisingly esp ishwari maa. Muche pata chal gaya hai, elena. Kal me golu ko lene school gaya toh vaha usse mili.. Suhanaa..meri bachhi . Ishwari cudn believe this ..Dev..muche maaf karo. Wat u said about me is absolutely right. But beta, i was so insecured. I thought sona will take u away from me. Bhabhi too instigated me..i'm realising that dev..wat i did to sona & her family is unpardonable. Please dev, gimme a chance to rectify all these. Nahii maa, ab sab kuch toh muche hi karnaa padegaa. Sonakshi ko manaane ke pehle muche baba aur maa ko manaana padegaa. Teek hai betaa. Bhaiya, aap bhabhi aur vicky ko ek chance aur doh bhaiyaa..mere liye, please.. Ishwarii, itnaa sab kuch huwaa fir bhi ..nahii pehle muche aur kuch karna padegaa ..i'll help dev this time.

Maa, baba..ghar kaisa lagaa ? Arreyy betaa, tune batayaa nahii ki tune apne hi ghar kharid kar renovate kiya hai. Ab aur kya chahiye hume..i'm so proud of u , my girl. Sona too was happy that she was able to giv back her baba's pride , their sweet home.Soha told them bout her meeting with golu's bigcha. She said to them that golu's bigcha is a nice man. I luv that uncle. He's very nice. Sona interfered, beta,no need to talk to strangers, okay ? ..ok mummaa soha made faces.
Bijoy n asha was in the sitting in the hall , bell rang. Bijoy opened the door . Dev !!?? How dare u come to my house dev ? Bijoy sahab, namaskar..mamaji entered into the house followed by ishwari, elena, vicky n gkb. Dev stood outside the door . Ishwari explained everything to them ..about her insecurities, gkb's instigations, vicky's wickedness , dev's mistakes & begged to pardon her n dev. Mamaji made gkb n vicky to beg pardon from them too. Dev..betaa come inside ..bijoy said. Dev rushed to him, placed his head on his feet & cried..baba, please muche maaf kar doh..meine jo kiyaa, voh maafi ke laayak nahii..phir bhi muche ek chance aur doh.. aap, apne dil me muche ek baar phir jagah doh..please babaaa.. Dev, betaa..muche tumse ab koi shikayaten nahii hai.. bache galtiya karte hai, maa baap ka farz hai unhe ache raste pe laanaa..i'm happy that u've realised u'r mistakes. But i can't help u with sona. Babaa, sonakshi ko mein manaungaa , muche baz aap sab ka ashirwad chahiye . Dev felt a calm serene feeling after a big gap of long seven years. Betaa dev, now u 've to deal with nt one but 2 Ms . boses.

Meanwhile elena called sona. " Eliii ", wer u got my number? I got this from our mother's watzap chat. Long time elena, hru ? Sona, tum muche maaf kardo, please ..situation was such that i was nt able to contact u b4. It's okay, elena. Elena told sona everything. Elena told her that dev was never @ fault. It was all planned by vicky n gkb. Elena informed her that masho had forgave jiju too. But sona said that she needed some time as she was nt alone this time but her daughter too with her.
Sona picked soha from the school & was walking towards her car. She was busy attending a call, soha pulled her saying golu's bigchaa . She cut her call. dev was never @ fault ...elena's words came to her mind. who was @ fault then ? dev too was walking towards them. long 7 years ..who took that away from them ? But nt anymore. dev was determined. hi uncle , soha greeted him. Soha , do u know this uncle's name ? No , mummaa.. He's Mr. Dev Dixit , sona said. My dad , u mean this is dev dixit ? Haan soha, mein tumhara uncle nahii, tumhara papa hai, beta. He hugged her tightly n kissed her. Sonakshii, tumne muche maaf kiyaa ? itni azaani se ? Maaf toh meine kiyaa, elena said to me evrything. No point in arguing for unwanted things. V almost lost our 7 years , i don want to loose any further. Aww !! that was a good decision Ms, Bose. Dev kissed sona n hugged her too , holding his daughter in other hand. Papa, now i'm Ms. Bose, that's Dr. Bose. No soha dear. That's Mrs. Dixit now...n for ever n ever n ever ...❤️


P.S. i jst typed wat all came to my mind. This Cvs will make everyone writers 😆 v need to vent our frustration somehow . I know, there r excellent writers, so no comparison as 'm no way near or hardly wrote anything like this b4.

Btw, this reloaded kuch rang gives opportunity for the actors to show something different. But main thing missing is devakshi magical scenes. Luvd their tashans but again luv to c old devakshi bak.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww nice direction ,I hope we get ur version of devaskshi pstchup but with added Tasman n emotional scenes.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful OS dear...
Never thought of mother's grp playing role...thanks for drawing attention...
Also loved Soha telling Dev his father's name...
Keep writing...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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thank u guys..but seriously, i can never consider myself as a writer . 😃 But wen looking into the show as a whole so far, i cudn digest the fact that dev had slapped sona's baba accidentally but still i like the character dev with all his flaws. So i want such an apology from dev for raising hands against a father figure even if it's hapnd accidentally.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb os..
Beautifully written..finally all is well...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank u so much dears 😃 yeahh , all's well hre unlike the show .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was awesome
Just loved it
Wish they could sort out their differences in real life too with so much of ease and forgiveness
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Khas serial wali dev main itna akal hotha.. Tho kitna acha hotha.. Tq.. Atleast os main tho realisation huva... Great os

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