My PLOT to End TPK Current Track...

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My PLOT to End TPK Current Track...

Have been a silent reader, reading numerous talented creative FF writers in this forum, you guys made me glued to my mobile with your brilliant dialogues and analysis not forgetting the hot romantic Thahaan moments :-).

You have inspired me to create a plot (skeletal drama with less drama & torture) to explore the best possibility to end current TPK track. Yes, Im so frustrated with the current track as many out there.

Please bear with me as this is my first attempt, appreciate your time & any feedback.. good or bad. Here you go..

----****-----

Bihaan wins the cricket game and takes ownership of Pandey property.

Both Kabir and Thapki leaves Pandey property, to lead their separate lives.

Bihaan won the cricket match and took over the property ownership, he should be elated on his victory instead he was heart-broken to see Thapki leaving the house and from his life forever. He failed to realize, it was he who challenged Vanni to marry Kabir and he who wanted Thapki to break her relationship with his family. Though he is a complete man with wife and his family support now, why is he breaking down? Did he realise he made Thapki an orphan & once again his anger has failed to see the truth. Thapki's memories lingered in his room, unable to digest the torture he moves himself out to the guest room...

Shankar smiles victorious for breaking Thahaan's relationship, and plans to get her wife rights with Bihaan.

Both Thapki and Kabir leaves Pandey property, to lead their separate lives. They never shared any significance in their fake "marriage" relationship and their friendship shared long ago did not exist anymore.

Thapki was contented that Bihaan and Pandey family are safe from Kabir, assumes her avatar as Vanni Oberoi.

Kabir was eager to be separated from Thapki as he do not wish to emotionally hurt her again. He wanted her to stay away from Bihaan so that he can fulfill his revenge.

Little did Kabir realize Thapki hired a Private Investigator (PI) to track him! The PI reports to Thapki on Kabir's movements and about his sister Neha's condition. Thapki gets curious of Neha, as he ever mentioned she died in accident. She ask PI to investigate on Neha further, PI reports Bihaan's involvement in evacuating Neha's property, fire accident which caused the deaths of her husband and son. Thapki connects the dots and suspects Kabir true intention towards Bihaan. With the help of the PI, she gathers evidence on Neha's property fire accident and confirms the miscreant work of Kosi and Makalnal. Bihaan was manipulated to threaten the family only.

While Kabir was out of his home, Thapki enters his home, admits Neha to a private medical center. Kabir returns to his home and panics when he finds Neha missing.

Thapki calls Kabir to meet and confront his intentions toward Bihaan, Kabir refuses to disclose his revenge. Thapki shows Neha's pictures to him, Kabir reacts angry initially and then breaks-down and confesses. Thapki feels sorry for him but clarifies Bihaan's innocence with evidence and identifies the true culprits.

Kabir realizes his mistake and apologies to Thapki for his wrongdoings. Thapki assures him that she'll help to obtain the best medical treatment for his sister. Kabir in return decides to do the right thing.

Kabir meets Shankar threatens to expose her involvement in creating misunderstanding between Bihaan and Thapki.

Shankar call goons to kidnap and kill, Bihaan overhears her conversation mentioning about Thapki. He gets suspicious and decides to follow her discreetly. Both Kabir and Thapki are kidnapped at gunpoint to the hideout.

Shankar arrives to their hideout, Thapki was shocked to see her. Shankar tells her this time you will definitely die, and will not escape like you did in the car accident, you and your baby should have died together. Bihaan was within my reach to be mine, but you came back as Vanni and thought you can reveal about your pregnancy. You are so wrong I have swapped your letter to Bihaan and your pregnancy report, Vasu mom was messing around with me and her head injury was no accident, count her lucky stars she survived. Bihaan was slipping away from me and how will I let it happened, so I planned your kidnap/molestation and instigated Kabir to save you. Used the consoling pictures against both of you and broke Bihaan's trust as well. As planned, Bihaan and the family believed the pictures than you, Thapki. I trapped Bihaan emotionally and manipulated him to marry me. Thanks to you Thapki, without both of you, I would not have attained my Bihaan.

And you, Kabir you're supposed to be my accomplice, yet you are ready confess about your relationship truth with Thapki. When did you turn into a saint, smirking?

Bihaan hates the sight of both of you and do you think he's going to believe you...

Infact, I doubt there's any chance for you guys to even reveal the truth to anyone.

I entered Pandey property with Kosi ma for Bihaan only, and will do anything.. even murder .. just for his love. I have achieved what I wanted, Bihaan is married to me now and belongs me to only.

After your deaths, there'll be no hindrance for my love with Bihaan. (she looked and sounded like a psychopath)

She orders the kidnappers to finish them and starts walking away. Bihaan comes out from his hideout angrily stops Shankar and slaps her. Shankar was in shock but pretended as if she was escaping from the kidnappers. Bihaan slaps her again and made her unconscious.

Bihaan fights the kidnappers and calls police to hideout, send Shankar and her accomplices to jail.

Bihaan then releases both Thapki and Kabir. Unable to face Thapki, Bihaan walks away shattered...

At Pandey villas, Kabir apologies for his troubles and tells the truth about his relationship with Thapki and about their fake marriage. Confessed Thapki is and always has been Bihaan's wife and never divorced. Bihaan hears it and breaks down...

Thapki thanked Kabir and tells to take care of his sister, Neha.

Thapki meets Bihaan, tells they need time to emotionally heal their wounds and reflect on their life.

Bihaan recalls all his accusations against her, crumbles in guilt with no strength to stop his love from leaving him.

Thapki leaves Pandey villas with heavy heart as her relationship with them is severed and assumes as Vanni Oberoi. Thapki still loves Bihaan as they are soul mates forever.

Bihaan too leaves Pandey for soul searching.

Thapki diverts her attention on expanding her business. In memory of her unborn child and Bihaan childhood starts an ashram for destitute homes for pregnant woman and orphans.

Dhruve helps Thapki to expand community awareness about the ashram using his network connections.

Bihaan watches the show of the ashram (not aware of Thapki's connection with the ashram), recalls Thapki's confession about her pregnancy and losing their child decides to dedicate his efforts and money towards the ashram.

Call it destiny or fate, both Bihaan and Thapki meet each other in the children section of the ashram.

No words were exchanged but their eyes reflected mixed emotions ... Happiness.. Sadness .. Realization... Silently both walked away emotionally yearning for each other's love...

Unable to contain himself, Bihaan sends flowers to Thapki. He was affirmative to have Thapki back in his life and was eagerly waiting for her response.

Thapki has been yearning for Bihaans acceptance and love, receives the flowers. She walks into Pandey villas once again, enters into Bihaan's room, the room was empty.

She waits for love of her life...

Bihaan walks into his dimmed room ... pauses ... Sees a silhouette of a woman leaning against the window staring at the moon in the sky. As he approaches nearer, the moon light shines on her face...

... Thapki.. Bihaan whispers

Thapki turns around n pauses.. They both run into each other's arms.

This time there'll be no confrontations or apologies.
They only exchanged passionate love as they were ready to start a new chapter in their lives.

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Very nice
But CVS are brainless
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It was so fantastic dear... I wonder cvs reads this and follows the same...ends the track quickly without further butchering kabir's character..
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its really very awesome👏😃
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Originally posted by: RatanaMala

My PLOT to End TPK Current Track...

Have been a silent reader, reading numerous talented creative FF writers in this forum, you guys made me glued to my mobile with your brilliant dialogues and analysis not forgetting the hot romantic Thahaan moments :-).

You have inspired me to create a plot (skeletal drama with less drama & torture) to explore the best possibility to end current TPK track. Yes, Im so frustrated with the current track as many out there.

Please bear with me as this is my first attempt, appreciate your time & any feedback.. good or bad. Here you go..

----****-----

Bihaan wins the cricket game and takes ownership of Pandey property.

Both Kabir and Thapki leaves Pandey property, to lead their separate lives.

Bihaan won the cricket match and took over the property ownership, he should be elated on his victory instead he was heart-broken to see Thapki leaving the house and from his life forever. He failed to realize, it was he who challenged Vanni to marry Kabir and he who wanted Thapki to break her relationship with his family. Though he is a complete man with wife and his family support now, why is he breaking down? Did he realise he made Thapki an orphan & once again his anger has failed to see the truth. Thapki's memories lingered in his room, unable to digest the torture he moves himself out to the guest room...

Shankar smiles victorious for breaking Thahaan's relationship, and plans to get her wife rights with Bihaan.

Both Thapki and Kabir leaves Pandey property, to lead their separate lives. They never shared any significance in their fake "marriage" relationship and their friendship shared long ago did not exist anymore.

Thapki was contented that Bihaan and Pandey family are safe from Kabir, assumes her avatar as Vanni Oberoi.

Kabir was eager to be separated from Thapki as he do not wish to emotionally hurt her again. He wanted her to stay away from Bihaan so that he can fulfill his revenge.

Little did Kabir realize Thapki hired a Private Investigator (PI) to track him! The PI reports to Thapki on Kabir's movements and about his sister Neha's condition. Thapki gets curious of Neha, as he ever mentioned she died in accident. She ask PI to investigate on Neha further, PI reports Bihaan's involvement in evacuating Neha's property, fire accident which caused the deaths of her husband and son. Thapki connects the dots and suspects Kabir true intention towards Bihaan. With the help of the PI, she gathers evidence on Neha's property fire accident and confirms the miscreant work of Kosi and Makalnal. Bihaan was manipulated to threaten the family only.

While Kabir was out of his home, Thapki enters his home, admits Neha to a private medical center. Kabir returns to his home and panics when he finds Neha missing.

Thapki calls Kabir to meet and confront his intentions toward Bihaan, Kabir refuses to disclose his revenge. Thapki shows Neha's pictures to him, Kabir reacts angry initially and then breaks-down and confesses. Thapki feels sorry for him but clarifies Bihaan's innocence with evidence and identifies the true culprits.

Kabir realizes his mistake and apologies to Thapki for his wrongdoings. Thapki assures him that she'll help to obtain the best medical treatment for his sister. Kabir in return decides to do the right thing.

Kabir meets Shankar threatens to expose her involvement in creating misunderstanding between Bihaan and Thapki.

Shankar call goons to kidnap and kill, Bihaan overhears her conversation mentioning about Thapki. He gets suspicious and decides to follow her discreetly. Both Kabir and Thapki are kidnapped at gunpoint to the hideout.

Shankar arrives to their hideout, Thapki was shocked to see her. Shankar tells her this time you will definitely die, and will not escape like you did in the car accident, you and your baby should have died together. Bihaan was within my reach to be mine, but you came back as Vanni and thought you can reveal about your pregnancy. You are so wrong I have swapped your letter to Bihaan and your pregnancy report, Vasu mom was messing around with me and her head injury was no accident, count her lucky stars she survived. Bihaan was slipping away from me and how will I let it happened, so I planned your kidnap/molestation and instigated Kabir to save you. Used the consoling pictures against both of you and broke Bihaan's trust as well. As planned, Bihaan and the family believed the pictures than you, Thapki. I trapped Bihaan emotionally and manipulated him to marry me. Thanks to you Thapki, without both of you, I would not have attained my Bihaan.

And you, Kabir you're supposed to be my accomplice, yet you are ready confess about your relationship truth with Thapki. When did you turn into a saint, smirking?

Bihaan hates the sight of both of you and do you think he's going to believe you...

Infact, I doubt there's any chance for you guys to even reveal the truth to anyone.

I entered Pandey property with Kosi ma for Bihaan only, and will do anything.. even murder .. just for his love. I have achieved what I wanted, Bihaan is married to me now and belongs me to only.

After your deaths, there'll be no hindrance for my love with Bihaan. (she looked and sounded like a psychopath)

She orders the kidnappers to finish them and starts walking away. Bihaan comes out from his hideout angrily stops Shankar and slaps her. Shankar was in shock but pretended as if she was escaping from the kidnappers. Bihaan slaps her again and made her unconscious.

Bihaan fights the kidnappers and calls police to hideout, send Shankar and her accomplices to jail.

Bihaan then releases both Thapki and Kabir. Unable to face Thapki, Bihaan walks away shattered...

At Pandey villas, Kabir apologies for his troubles and tells the truth about his relationship with Thapki and about their fake marriage. Confessed Thapki is and always has been Bihaan's wife and never divorced. Bihaan hears it and breaks down...

Thapki thanked Kabir and tells to take care of his sister, Neha.

Thapki meets Bihaan, tells they need time to emotionally heal their wounds and reflect on their life.

Bihaan recalls all his accusations against her, crumbles in guilt with no strength to stop his love from leaving him.

Thapki leaves Pandey villas with heavy heart as her relationship with them is severed and assumes as Vanni Oberoi. Thapki still loves Bihaan as they are soul mates forever.

Bihaan too leaves Pandey for soul searching.

Thapki diverts her attention on expanding her business. In memory of her unborn child and Bihaan childhood starts an ashram for destitute homes for pregnant woman and orphans.

Dhruve helps Thapki to expand community awareness about the ashram using his network connections.

Bihaan watches the show of the ashram (not aware of Thapki's connection with the ashram), recalls Thapki's confession about her pregnancy and losing their child decides to dedicate his efforts and money towards the ashram.

Call it destiny or fate, both Bihaan and Thapki meet each other in the children section of the ashram.

No words were exchanged but their eyes reflected mixed emotions ... Happiness.. Sadness .. Realization... Silently both walked away emotionally yearning for each other's love...

Unable to contain himself, Bihaan sends flowers to Thapki. He was affirmative to have Thapki back in his life and was eagerly waiting for her response.

Thapki has been yearning for Bihaans acceptance and love, receives the flowers. She walks into Pandey villas once again, enters into Bihaan's room, the room was empty.

She waits for love of her life...

Bihaan walks into his dimmed room ... pauses ... Sees a silhouette of a woman leaning against the window staring at the moon in the sky. As he approaches nearer, the moon light shines on her face...

... Thapki.. Bihaan whispers

Thapki turns around n pauses.. They both run into each other's arms.

This time there'll be no confrontations or apologies.
They only exchanged passionate love as they were ready to start a new chapter in their lives.



Very well written 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow...kaash eaisa hota tho kitna achcha hota. ..Hume thoda sukoon tho milta 😛
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And we have a new entrant in the list of 'Amazingly Talented Writers of TPK Forum' 👏
that was an extremely well-written piece...loved reading it to the core 😃
You gotta write more!
Posted: 8 years ago
#9
Sorry for not knowing your name but Well done with your skeletal story 👏
That was actually a good plot to bring back ThaHaan again together... 😊
It is when we read stuff like this we feel what the hell is wrong with CVs for lage pare raho-ing to destroy the rest of Tha...Haan 😕😕 CVs are low lifes.
A suggestion, do write stories from the aspirations you received reading the stories of the forum. You've talent in you..
Edited by SewzVB - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello all, Thanks alot for liking my plot & I'm delighted to receive such positive responses.
My name is Mala and do not know (speak/write/read) Hindi. But that doesnt stop me from watching Bollywood movies, as I strive on English subtitles/WU/Google translate😛.

TPK is my first hindi drama/serial which im glued too, its a regret & torture but i cant help it. Perhaps its because of Thahaan or Manish 😳.

Thank once again for all your love and support, love you all.❤️





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