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Okay I will give the reviews chapterwise.π³π
Chap-1: Aww, Lakshmana's love for his bhaiyya and bhabhima is so pure and selfless! He doesn't want to celebrate his birthday without bhabhima!π And his Ram bhaiyya planning a surprise for him! And he can't even lie to his brother! And oh god,he is on the verge of getting caught!πAb kya hoga? *Bites nails*
Chap-2:Lakshmana smelling something fishy, hmm he is smart.And our Urmi is equally smart as well! π Hanumanji is in a fix,trying to answer all the questions he asks.ππAnd my little munchkins angad and chandraketu want to hear how their Pa met their Urmila Maa.π³Aww,he aimed at arrow at her,you described everything so beautifully!π
Chap-3: Lakshman admiring his Mila!β€οΈAngad and chandraketu,i just want to pull their cheeks,too cute these two are!π³π³That litle fight between paa and sons is cho chweet! And so is the whole chapter,everything is adorable! β€οΈ LakshMila!!!
Chap-4:Firstly,i love the way you describe all the sisters and their respective nature. Ram finally realized its shatrughan's birthday too!! Shatrughan and lakshman's bonding!β€οΈ And the wave of amazement, shatrughan's emotional breakdown sent across the family! The little reunion and the vanishing of all worries after reuniting with lakshmila! And finally its midnight! Its time to celebrate! And also the point where Ram reveals lakshman through his eyes! Can't wait for the next part, to hear his perspective! π³Update soon!!
Apologies for being terribly late.π
With lots of love,
Rammy π€
Edited by --Elara-- - 7 years ago
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