A Learning Curve - An Arshi Story on Sheetal Track - Epilogue posted - Page 17

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: eishe10

Terrific epilogue😃

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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb story dear
Love it
Keep writing

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Posted: 7 years ago
Aha such a fresh breather , even though it is a simple story I loved the way you have shown the understandign between Arnav and Khushi . Repentence does not mean saying saying it means correcting your wrongs and I loved the way both Khushi and Arnav have worked on their problems. 
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Posted: 7 years ago
Fabulous story loved it so much.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome epilogue...loved anikas first work and khushis antic never ending...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Srilathalolla

Aha such a fresh breather , even though it is a simple story I loved the way you have shown the understandign between Arnav and Khushi . Repentence does not mean saying saying it means correcting your wrongs and I loved the way both Khushi and Arnav have worked on their problems. 


Thank you so much for your precious comments... 
May aim was to write simple yet meaningful story first time... We all have to make things work, adjust and develop understanding with people we love... We don't live in perfect world but we can make it beautiful with love and understand...
Thank you again...
@Swati
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Posted: 6 years ago
Zabardast story..
😊
I read it in 2 sessions..

U started with Sheetal track n handled it so well...

Khushi's positive attitude.. how did she assert herself...

Arnav's understanding the situation n ending up encouraging Khushi ..

U wrote it beautifully..

Akash bitwa was too different here from the original show..
Even Payal was better ..

Good change for Payash...
😃

Arnav n Khushi still had insecurities but they both came winners hand in hand..

Pari,Anish n the most adorable Anika..awww

What the..😲
Laad Gov...

🤣

loved it..

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Posted: 6 years ago
Yaaay finally found your first ff can't wait to read
Btw still no index page
BM this one
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Posted: 6 years ago
Loved the story, very well written
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Posted: 6 years ago
amazing story loved it so much.