Devakshi FF: Small Moments (Completed)

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Samzz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#511

Such an amazing chappy di😃

I was ofc expecting jealous dev towards rithwick and I'm not disappointed..well..he will act as a catalyst for devakshi😉

Kushal ka band to bhajney wala hi hai..😆

Please update asap di..waiting..😊

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#512

Kitna chota sa part hai yaar mishti
Kitni jaldi khatam ho gaya
Update soon
Waiting to see ki dev aur sona iss outdoor trip pe kya kya karte hai

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cscs

@cscs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#513

Loved it Mishti. 😃

Possessive Dev is a treat to watch and his dialogues were superb. Kushal is gonna kicked by Dev soon. And riya and ritwick angle is too good. I am actually liking Ritwick in any FF. 😆

Pls update soon.

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Anushka

@LoveAnushka

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Posted: 8 years ago

#514

Hayeee Kya likha hai, dono chapters...

Sorry di late comment ke liye...

I was busy i.e. why...

BUT anyways dono chapters, 10 & 11 ke liye 5-5 kissie aapko...😉

So beautifully penned down...

Dev and Sona the way they R getting closer is beautiful...😳

Kushal is fear and Ritwik is good here...

Ritiwik and Riya i.e. Ri & Ri...😆

Overall I'm so happy with all chapters...

Cont. soon...

I waiting eagerly...

Love,

Anushka

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Shaun

@Jade0001

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Posted: 8 years ago

#515

Beautiful and Feisty Chapter

I really liked how Dev got so comfortable with Sonakshi's family but he was annoyed with Ritwick seems like slowly the battle of heart and mind will start its war but I also enjoy Dev when he is with Sonakshi there is a tinge of mischievous within him when around Sona

Gosh this cheapster Khushal already making plans to win Sonakshi back now I really want him to try something with Sona while on this trip and Dev must be the one rescuing Sonakshi from Khushal

Sonakshi in the plane all scared grabbing at Dev's hand and when she realizes she wants to let go but Dev tells her he will her hand not to let go

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preethik

@preethik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#516

Awesome update mishti! Keep it coming.

You write so well.

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Mohi99

@Mohi99

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Posted: 8 years ago

#517

Omg omg...gal u r taking me on a ride...please update soon...I wish they fire their current writer and CV and hire u instead...amen...superb piece of writing with every emotion captured...

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Mohi99

@Mohi99

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Posted: 8 years ago

#518

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#519

amazing
dev getting jealous n protective is a cute combination
is trip pe kushal to jayega
waiting for more
update soon
thanks for pm

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simplesweety1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#520

One Word That Can Describe This Chapter Is ; Wow! Wow! Wow! Seriously Yaa! You're An Awsm Writer! This Chapter Was Marvellous Like Any Other Chapter Written By You! And Muje Na Lagta Hai Ki Muje Telepathy Pata Hai! 😆 Coz You Know, Muje Pehle Hi Shak Thha Ki Dev'll Be Jealous Seeing Ritwik And Sona's Bonding! And Dusri Baat That Riya - Ritwik Ka Kuchh Na Kuchh Chakar Toh Chalega! Lagta Hai Mereme Aapka Dimaag Padhne Ke Shakti Aa Gayi Hai Lol! Jokes Apart, I'm Loving Your FF And The Possessive Avatar Of Our Very Own Mr Aubhodro! Hehe! And Phirse, Sona Ki Outfit Batane Ka Koi Plan! 😆

The Moment I Loved The Most From The FF Is When Dev Stopped Sona From Taking Her Hand Back! Haaayyye! Just Love Shaheer Yaar! I Imagine Everything Na, Toh Aur Bhi Maza Aata Hai Padhne Mein! Oh! Comment Kaafi Lamba Hogaya! Sorry! Hehe! Just Update Soon Man! I'm Loving Your FF A Lot! 😆

P.S: Aakhir Isse FF Mein Convert Karaane Mein Ka Idea Bhi Toh Mene Diya Na! 😆

Edited by simplesweety1 - 8 years ago