Devakshi FF: Small Moments (Completed)

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WeRockTheWorld

@WeRockTheWorld

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#501

Oh I am loving this so much ...I liked the possessive Dev ...wow ...now he thinks he has to compete with Mr. Ritwick...I hope Kushal doesnt mess with her...poor girl...

please update the next chapter soon...eagerly waiting for your next update ...

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Shahrica

@Shahrica

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#502

Awesome update... Lovely chapter...jst hooked to your fanfiction... Plz update next part soon... Eagerly waiting for the next one...

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Erina

@Erinasingh69

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Posted: 8 years ago

#503

Awsum chap 👏 mishti but kya yaar jb acha vala part aaya to tune khatam kr diya 🥱 vry bad yaar nd tujhe nhi lgta chap tora chota tha 😉 chalo koi nhi but next tym tora bada chap likhna ok 😆 😛 post soon waiting for next chap ...

With a cute hug 🤗nd love 😳

Eri

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Sharica

@Sharica

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#504

Awww!!!! Such a cuttie chapter...🤗 to you..

Dev getting Jealous😃

Waiting for their lovely trip...protective Dev is always a treat to read about...

Lagta hain Kushal ki bahot dhulai hone waali hain😆

looking forward for lovely moments between Devakshi❤️

Thank you so much for not making us wait for long

Needless to say...waiting for next update

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cancerian87

@cancerian87

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#505

Wow what a beautiful part mishti 👏

It was written really beautifullbeautifully from son's home to airport to aeroplane everything is amazing 👍🏼

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randomramblings

@randomramblings

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#506

the chapter is wonderful. hmmm.. Dev consider Ritwick as an opponent,but he will have a big suprise when he turns out to be an ally.

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Kamal kulshreshta

@srilotus

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#507

Awesome chap.

thanks for the pm.😃

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AnanyaGhosh

@AnanyaGhosh

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#508

O my... Itna possessive dev hai.. Itna cute hai... I just love him

And kushal ka patta kato... Bohut ho gaya...

And do update soon...

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Sonali Mahajan

@Cutiepie.sona

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#509

Very beautiful chapter...👏👏...Do u know the best part of reading it..?? It is ur way of demonstrating things... I've never even noticed my heartbeats so deeply than I'm getting to know abt sona's heartbeats😆😆...

Dev is becoming protective and a li'l bit possessive of sona...Cool...if he's seeing Ritwik has his competion along with Kushal...it will lead him in getting more closer to Sona...

The way u r showing Kushal as a villanious character...I doubt what made sona fall for him...Kushal seems to me as a mysterious guy...what is soo that makes sona feels scared of him..??😕😕

Apart from dev-sona's growing love for each other...kushal's character is also exciting me...let's see what 's there in store 4 us in the next part😉😉

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.FlyingClouds.

@.FlyingClouds.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#510

Wow...I really liked the chapter...and now Dev is getting jealous of Ritwik too...But you know this Kushal is getting on my nerves...mujhe toh bilkul Daaku ki tarah lagta hai...LOL...

Cont soon and thanks for pm

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