Devakshi FF: Small Moments (Completed) - Page 54

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

Wow...I really liked the chapter...and now Dev is getting jealous of Ritwik too...But you know this Kushal is getting on my nerves...mujhe toh bilkul Daaku ki tarah lagta hai...LOL...

Cont soon and thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Samzz

Such an amazing chappy di😃

I was ofc expecting jealous dev towards rithwick and I'm not disappointed..well..he will act as a catalyst for devakshi😉

Kushal ka band to bhajney wala hi hai..😆

Please update asap di..waiting..😊

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Kitna chota sa part hai yaar mishti
Kitni jaldi khatam ho gaya
Update soon
Waiting to see ki dev aur sona iss outdoor trip pe kya kya karte hai

Originally posted by: cscs

Loved it Mishti. 😃

Possessive Dev is a treat to watch and his dialogues were superb. Kushal is gonna kicked by Dev soon. And riya and ritwick angle is too good. I am actually liking Ritwick in any FF. 😆

Pls update soon.

Originally posted by: LoveAnushka

Hayeee Kya likha hai, dono chapters...

Sorry di late comment ke liye...

I was busy i.e. why...

BUT anyways dono chapters, 10 & 11 ke liye 5-5 kissie aapko...😉

So beautifully penned down...

Dev and Sona the way they R getting closer is beautiful...😳

Kushal is fear and Ritwik is good here...

Ritiwik and Riya i.e. Ri & Ri...😆

Overall I'm so happy with all chapters...

Cont. soon...

I waiting eagerly...

Love,

Anushka

Originally posted by: Jade0001

Beautiful and Feisty Chapter

I really liked how Dev got so comfortable with Sonakshi's family but he was annoyed with Ritwick seems like slowly the battle of heart and mind will start its war but I also enjoy Dev when he is with Sonakshi there is a tinge of mischievous within him when around Sona

Gosh this cheapster Khushal already making plans to win Sonakshi back now I really want him to try something with Sona while on this trip and Dev must be the one rescuing Sonakshi from Khushal

Sonakshi in the plane all scared grabbing at Dev's hand and when she realizes she wants to let go but Dev tells her he will her hand not to let go

Originally posted by: preethik

Awesome update mishti! Keep it coming.

You write so well.

Originally posted by: Mohi99

Omg omg...gal u r taking me on a ride...please update soon...I wish they fire their current writer and CV and hire u instead...amen...superb piece of writing with every emotion captured...

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

amazing
dev getting jealous n protective is a cute combination
is trip pe kushal to jayega
waiting for more
update soon
thanks for pm